Abhigya FF: WOH HUMSAFAR THA last ch pg 76dt 9.4.16

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Mysterious7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#511

Awesome chapter. Loved the flow and the descriptive of the fic. Literally visualized this story. Felt like I have been watching a show. Their thoughts here, loved it. Also yaayyy she finally said the three words. Now is he going to say it too?! Shall I get excited already?! 😛 😆...

Thank you for this beautiful read, Rose 😊...

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reshma4875

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Posted: 10 years ago

#512

nice yaar...eagerly waiting pragyas delivery...i just hate shalini she needs only money n power...poor abhi n pragya...

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RianaMehra

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Posted: 10 years ago

#513

Omg u nailed it.love the story can wait to read the next part.Pls continue soon.to curious to know what will happen next

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akshaya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#514

Omg omg
It's awesome yaar
I loved it

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shrutigaur37

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Posted: 10 years ago

#515

it was indeed a beautiful n amazing update..
n. finally we got d most a awaited confession of pragya
eagerly waiting to see Abhi's reaction

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-haleemzz-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#516

the ending was so beautiful

you write so stunningly

it was just perfect

finally pragya confessed will abhi

it was amazing

do continue soon

thanks for the pm

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anamika.viji

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Posted: 10 years ago

#517

Beautiful chapter ,rose :)

Aww!! Finally pragya told him whts in her heart !! Now waiting to know abhi's reaction to tht !!

Thanks for the pm :)

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Kat

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Posted: 10 years ago

#518

I just read all 31 chapters in one sitting and I have to say this story is amazing! Really well done.

There were so many chapters where your writing, especially how you described Abhi's and Pragya's interactions and feelings, literally made my heart hurt. When they went trough heartbreak, not only they were hurting, I was too, so so bad. I had lumps in my throat numerous times, I cried so bad when Pragya started pushing Abhi away... when I was done with the 31st chapter I had to let everything sink in before I could function again.
When you can make your readers feel like that, for them to emotionally get invested in a story that much, that for me is a sign of excellent writing! I can't wait for what's still to come! Please keep up your wonderful work! 👏

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dreamtoshine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#519

Captivating chapter Rose.. Your style makes me visualise the scene as if I am in there watching it while it happens.. Remarkable!!

I always look forward for your updates and this time I am really happy that Pragya voiced her feelings to him..

Hope you write many more fictions.. And i get a chance to read all of them..

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Rose

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Posted: 10 years ago

#520

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Abhi entwined his fingers with pragya's and lay back again

She turned her head and glanced at him, his eyes were shut. Her world started and ended on him. Her heart belonged to him and her mind was occupied with only his thoughts. There was not a single moment when she didn't think about him. Even though in these past nine months they hardly spent time together but he was always in her heart and mind and this was how it would be in the future as well. A single night spent with him, slowly and steadily transformed her completely. He tingled emotions which she had buried deep within her. His love changed a self centered, money minded pragya into a sensitive and caring mother. The innocent and vulnerable pragya that loved to dream, started breathing again because of him. He brought the old pragya back in her life and now she didn't wish to let go. She didn't wish to let go off him and their love. She tightened her grip around his hand as though that would stop the clock from ticking, as though her firm hold would not let her separate from him.

He sensed her anxiety and rolled over to her side. His intense gaze was boring into hers. He wished he could somehow dispel this fear of losing him that shadowed her face. Today he was living only because of and for her. She was the one who gave him a new life, a reason to live and someone to love. And today she was losing hope. He brought their entwined to his lips and kissed her fingers. They would be like this...together...forever. She brought her hand up along with the end of her sari to wipe the drops of sweat on his forehead. He blinked his eyes slowly and gave himself to her soft touch. The end of the sari slipped from her hand as it came down his face and her palm rested gently against the side of his face, letting him lean his head slightly into her hand.

He saw moonlight reflected off her perfectly sculpted face. And that seemed the only light illuminating the place. A tear drop trickled from her eye, the drop so clear so radiant yet full of darkness and sadness. He brushed it with his thumb and leaned over to press his lips against her temple. Rolling on his back he pulled her over as she rested her face against his shoulder and closed her exhausted eyes when his arms came around to hold her firmly

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