It Should've Been Me.... AR One-shot

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Samreen

@friskysam

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Posted: 18 years ago

#11

superbly written shreyasi 👏 😃

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Sareeta

@sareeta

Sparkler

Posted: 18 years ago

#12

Splendid!

There was a beautiful undertone of hope of a something new , of expectation of something new and beautiful in life, as one let go of something, that they believed was the most beautiful thing that had happened...

I loved the way , the contrast was brought into the story line... and the line at the end was a clincher!

Brilliant! Absolutely loved it!

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Krithika

@maha_prakrti

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Posted: 18 years ago

#13

Too good... Brilliant.... Nice dialogs... AR for sure... Lekin they broke up, how sad 😕

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srkm

@srkm

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#14

Brilliant!!! as usual shrey...
Reminded me of some many books n movies...last part of salaam namaste, a hindi movie...if u hv seen it?!
but it was great!..n practical...
thanks for a nice read!

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Eloquent

@Eloquent

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#15

nice one shot shreyasi!

haha...I'm supposedly un-emotional too! 😆 😆 😉

last line took the cake! (tht too cheese cake :-p)

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premdewaani

@premdewaani

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#16

that was superb Shreyasi... very well writter.. I can only imagine AR in this story.. looking forward to the next part.. plz continue..

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Poisonivy

@Poisonivy

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#17

It was simply superb....lov ur style of writing ..its absolutely expressive and jus captivates u completly...and i guess da only couple i can imagine in dis situation is AR..it sumhow feels ryt on dem..

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kanak1309

@kanak1309

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#18

Hey Shreyu,
Kothae chhile madam?

I've missed you sooo much dear 🤗

Btw, as usual, wonderful piece of work .... it has a tone of sadness but the way u've churned the dialogs is too good 👏

Keep up the great work ... and yeah, do come more oftem yaar 😳 😳

PS: zara wo Armaan is straight wala FF link mujhe PM karna to .... I really wanna read it 😳

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