The RiVanya Diaries OS {Rivanya as kids}

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A huge palace in Panchner has been decorated today on the ocassion of their prince 4th birthday😃. A dinner is arranged for everyone and anyone.Guests have started arriving and Maharaj Sangram Singh and his wife are busy talking to the guests.

PRINCE ROOM:

Few servants are rushing here and there to get Prince Ritik ready for his party.He has everything in his life but no friends to play with much.As he is the Prince,kids are too fearful to play with him after all what will king do if he gets hurt playing games with other kids??So noone likes to talk or play with him.So no friends,No fun and No birthday presents🥺.

SHIV MANDIR

Naag and naagin were rushing to help Raja with preparations and hence left their 4 year old mischievous daughter,Shivanya alone with gurudev.

Naagin : Shivanya,Aj Raj Kumar ka janamdin hai,hum wahi ja rahe hai.Apna khayal rakhna,kahi bahar mat Jana aur gurudev ko pareshan mat karna😊

Shivanya : Theek hai mumma.😃..[in mind]Haveli..wow...bahut badi hogi wo Haveli.Ek baar to dekhni hi padegi..me chupke se waha jaungi,Haveli dekhungi aur wapis aa jaungi,kisiko kuch pata nahi chalega

Who knew what curosity can do to do a child 😆

PANCHNER HAVELI

Shivanya arrived at the Haveli and was mesmerized with the grand palace and its beauty.

On the Other HandRitik blew away all the candles .His Mom asked him to make a wish

Ritik: Pleej bhagwan ji,kash mera bhi koi friend hota Jo meko gift deta(in mind)[/i]

She arrived at the main hall where the Prince was cutting cake but she couldn't see his face but what she saw...brought a smile on her face😃...She was brimming with excitement.

Shivanya : OMG...CHOCOLATE CAKE❤️😃

Ritik opened his eyes and saw a small girl who was pretty.No,No...Not just pretty,very pretty and beautiful.After Cake cutting ,he left the hall in search of that girl and came saw her being scolded by someone whom he guessed as his parents.

She had tears in her big eyes😭.Ritik couldn't see her crying and started towards her to hear better.

Naagin : Mene mana Kia tha na yaha ane se?? Fir kyu ayi tum yahan???

Shivanya : Sholly mumma.Par wo Haveli dekhni thi muje aur muje bhi choclate cake khana hai😆

Naagin : Shivanya..chup chap ghar wapis jao...shukar hai mandir pass me hai..jaldi isse pehle koi dekhe,jao yaha se..yahan humare bahut dushman hai.

Naag and naagin went inside while Shivanya sat there crying.

An idea strikes Ritik.He went in the kitchen and asked a servant to pack some of the Chocolate cake for the girl.He went back running but before he could talk to her or share with her,his bday cake,He Stopped.and was dumbstruck😲

Shivanya knew she had to go back home..so she saw here and there and converted into a snake.Little did she knew somebody saw her changing.

Ritik followed the golden snake aka his mystery girl/friend😆 to a shiv mandir where she again converted into a girl.

Shivanya turned around and saw a boy with a box with him.She already had a bad night and then this guy was following her?? An ichadhari naagin??

Shivanya became angry and put her hands on her waist in angry mode .

Shivanya :😡 Kon Ho tum???yaha kya kar rahe Ho??

Ritik : M...Main wo...t..tum

Shivanya : Kya wo Tum laga rkha hai ??? Tum mera picha kar rahe the na??*shakki expression in anger mode*😆tumhe pata nahi hai mere maa baba kon hai?? Agar mene tumhare bare me unhe bataya na to tum to Gaye kam se ...huh

Ritik :😲me Tumhara picha nahi kar raha tha..wo to mene tumhe rote hue dekha to me ye cake lane Gaya tha tumhare liye par tum naagin banke chali Ayi islie...

Shivanya *eyes getting huge hearing cake name* : Kya bola Tumne??? 😃Tum mere liye chocolate cake laye Ho???😲

Ritik :(*smiling ) haan...par

Shivanya : Par kya???

Ritik : Me tumhe cake tabhi dunga jab tum mujse dosti karogi*blushing*

Shivanya : Ok...ab cake do.
(snatches away the cake ryt from his hands)🤣

Ritik : Hehe tumhe choclate cake bahut pasand hai??

Shivanya : Han bahut bahut jyada...😃

Ritik : To fir me tumhare liye Roz cake launga😆

Shivanya : Tum mere liye roz cake laoge???*getting excited*

Ritik : Han agar tum muje apna naam bataogi to😆...

Shivanya : Mera naam Shivanya hai aur tumhara??

Ritik : Main Ritik Hu..wo aj mera hi birthday tha😃

Shivanya : Acha ...😲 janamdin ka jashan tumhare liye tha??😲
Iska matbal tum raj Kumar Ho?????😲

Ritik : Han...tum mujse dosti to nahi todogi na???

Shivanya : Agar tum muje Roz chocolate cake khilaoge to nahi😆

Ritik : Pakka promise...ek baat bolu shivanya???

Shivanya : Ab to hum dost hai na? Bolo bolo

Ritik : Tum bahut khoobsurat Ho shivanya*blushing*

Shivanya (cutely) : Par tum bilkul bhi sundar nahi Ho

Ritik: 😲

Shivanya ends up laughing and soon ritik joins her too...

Shivanya : Ab muje Jana hoga,Varna ma baba pareshan honge agar unhe pata chala Ki me ghar nahi pahuchi Hu to

Ritik : Kal yahi mile???*sounding hopeful*

Shivanya : Hmm kal sham KO"?? Hum yahan khoob masti karenge😆..

Ritik : Shivanya...

Shivanya : Haan

Ritik : Tum bahut achi Ho
He kisses her on the cheek and run🤣

Shivanya: 😲Ritik 😡🤣

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HaymurS thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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p.s-wanna dedicate this to all the lovely ppl who liked my first OS and encouraged me to write more...THANK YOU... Do share how was it.
This is just purely rivanya cuteness overloaded🤣.don't know Shivanya parents name so naag/naagin likha ...hope u all like it😃
Not sure about continuing it.But gave it a shot.
Edited by Kit_Kat - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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so cute this OS...Producer please keep writing more...🤗

uff Gurudev idhar bhi...
khair royally ignoring him as if he never existed/ I dint read any stuff as these😆

first thing Shivu comes to Haveli and notices Chocolate cake poor Ritik... shivanya ka love of chocolate cake over him...sach mein bechara...bachpan se bechare ko bechara-pan ka saya tha🤣

and that dialogue "tum bahut khubsurat ho..." sounded so cute...
i could imagine how Chhotu Ritik might have said it, given that i totally went awwieee with the grown Ritik's confession
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Sanchu--

so cute this OS...Producer please keep writing more...🤗
shukariya fangirl😆
BR][DIV]uff Gurudevidhar bhi...
khair royally ignoring him as if he never existed/ I dint read any stuff as these😆...arey bechara ka ek dialogue bhi,nahi likha mene,,,,he was just a babysitter🤣
[DIV]first thing Shivu comes to Haveli and notices Chocolate cakepoor Ritik... shivanya ka love of chocolate cake over him...sach mein bechara...bachpan se bechare ko bechara-pan ka saya tha🤣 hahah Shiva loved choco cake more
[DIV]and that dialogue "tum bahut khubsurat ho..." sounded so cute...
i could imagine how Chhotu Ritik might have said it, given that i totally went awwieee with the grown Ritik's confession


😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww... This OS is a perfect blend of love & innocence.
Just how beautifully written!
Well done ekta version 2.0 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priyanshi_

Awww... This OS is a perfect blend of love & innocence.
Just how beautifully written!
Well done ekta version 2.0 😆


Thanku thanku...
Chutku rivanya r cutie pies
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Cutest os of cutest kids Rivanya.Its very very Beautiful.😊
Kudos to u talented gal.Keep writing more.Loved it,👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: PaYa_Rivanya

Cutest os of cutest kids Rivanya.Its very very Beautiful.😊

Kudos to u talented gal.Keep writing more.Loved it,👏

thanku paya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kit_Kat

A huge palace in Panchner has been decorated today on the ocassion of their prince 4th birthday😃. A dinner is arranged for everyone and anyone.Guests have started arriving and Maharaj Sangram Singh and his wife are busy talking to the guests.

4 years old Rittik😳❤️..suchh cutiepie.
PRINCE ROOM:

Few servants are rushing here and there to get Prince Ritik ready for his party.He has everything in his life but no friends to play with much.As he is the Prince,kids are too fearful to play with him after all what will king do if he gets hurt playing games with other kids??So noone likes to talk or play with him.So no friends,No fun and No birthday presents🥺.

Aww! poor prince Ritik. He must get some friends to play.😭

SHIV MANDIR

Naag and naagin were rushing to help Raja with preparations and hence left their 4 year old mischievous daughter,Shivanya alone with gurudev.
wow...Gurudev is present here. I hope he won't ask Shiv to learn how to bring naagmani back from enemies.😡🤢

Naagin : Shivanya,Aj Raj Kumar ka janamdin hai,hum wahi ja rahe hai.Apna khayal rakhna,kahi bahar mat Jana aur gurudev ko pareshan mat karna😊
But come on she should go there too😭
Shivanya : Theek hai mumma.😃..[in mind]Haveli..wow...bahut badi hogi wo Haveli.Ek baar to dekhni hi padegi..me chupke se waha jaungi,Haveli dekhungi aur wapis aa jaungi,kisiko kuch pata nahi chalega
Aley mera Shiivvuuu...boht intelligent hai.😆
Who knew what curosity can do to do a child 😆
Yeah...by now I got a fair idea😉

PANCHNER HAVELI

Shivanya arrived at the Haveli and was mesmerized with the grand palace and its beauty.

On the Other HandRitik blew away all the candles .His Mom asked him to make a wish

Ritik: Pleej bhagwan ji,kash mera bhi koi friend hota Jo meko gift deta(in mind)[/i]

She arrived at the main hall where the Prince was cutting cake but she couldn't see his face but what she saw...brought a smile on her face😃...She was brimming with excitement.

Shivanya : OMG...CHOCOLATE CAKE❤️😃

Hey Shivjiaap humesha kuch naa kuch aur de dete ho😆..poor Ritik, being prince doesn't get to befriend with anyone. So he wishes for a friend who would play with him and give him gift. And Here this girl...😆IS IN LOVE WITH CHOCOLATE CAKE.🤣 What gift will she give him??😆

Ritik opened his eyes and saw a small girl who was pretty.No,No...Not just pretty,very pretty and beautiful.After Cake cutting ,he left the hall in search of that girl and came saw her being scolded by someone whom he guessed as his parents.
Arey Ritik finds Shivanya pretty here too😉😛. I thought there would be teasing too😛
She had tears in her big eyes😭.Ritik couldn't see her crying and started towards her to hear better.
Ouch! Getting caught by Momma and Papa..😲
Naagin : Mene mana Kia tha na yaha ane se?? Fir kyu ayi tum yahan???

Shivanya : Sholly mumma.Par wo Haveli dekhni thi muje aur muje bhi choclate cake khana hai😆

Naagin : Shivanya..chup chap ghar wapis jao...shukar hai mandir pass me hai..jaldi isse pehle koi dekhe,jao yaha se..yahan humare bahut dushman hai.

Naag and naagin went inside while Shivanya sat there crying.

Aww poor girl...just comes here to see the palace and eat some chocolate cake😳...now she's crying.😭

An idea strikes Ritik.He went in the kitchen and asked a servant to pack some of the Chocolate cake for the girl.He went back running but before he could talk to her or share with her,his bday cake,He Stopped.and was dumbstruck😲

Wow this cute, little all gentlemanly prince has impressed me. He packs some chocolate cakes to share with the pretty girl😳😛

Shivanya knew she had to go back home..so she saw here and there and converted into a snake.Little did she knew somebody saw her changing.
And he saw the shifting...well well😆

Ritik followed the golden snake aka his mystery girl/friend😆 to a shiv mandir where she again converted into a girl.
So Ritik's golden snake aka girl/friend...I hope as adults he remembers something like this.

Shivanya turned around and saw a boy with a box with him.She already had a bad night and then this guy was following her?? An ichadhari naagin??
Ekkks???😲Shiv knows she's a ichchadhaari Naagin?😆 if yes then definitely she is having the worst night..😆😉
Shivanya became angry and put her hands on her waist in angry mode .
Little Shivanya in anger...😳Sweet❤️

Shivanya :😡 Kon Ho tum???yaha kya kar rahe Ho??

Ritik : M...Main wo...t..tum

Shivanya : Kya wo Tum laga rkha hai ??? Tum mera picha kar rahe the na??*shakki expression in anger mode*😆tumhe pata nahi hai mere maa baba kon hai?? Agar mene tumhare bare me unhe bataya na to tum to Gaye kam se ...huh

Ritik :😲me Tumhara picha nahi kar raha tha..wo to mene tumhe rote hue dekha to me ye cake lane Gaya tha tumhare liye par tum naagin banke chali Ayi islie...

Shivanya *eyes getting huge hearing cake name* : Kya bola Tumne??? 😃Tum mere liye chocolate cake laye Ho???😲

Ritik :(*smiling ) haan...par

Shivanya : Par kya???

Ritik : Me tumhe cake tabhi dunga jab tum mujse dosti karogi*blushing*

Shivanya : Ok...ab cake do.
(snatches away the cake ryt from his hands)🤣

Wowie...from angry to doubtful to smiling.😆I love as Rittik says: Tum naagin banke chali ayi🤣and wow..SO easy to please Shivu😛Chocolate cake.😆

Ritik : Hehe tumhe choclate cake bahut pasand hai??

Shivanya : Han bahut bahut jyada...😃

Ritik : To fir me tumhare liye Roz cake launga😆

Shivanya : Tum mere liye roz cake laoge???*getting excited*

Okay okay...now stop being all excited. Sesha ya Gurudev aa gaye toh😲

Ritik : Han agar tum muje apna naam bataogi to😆...

Shivanya : Mera naam Shivanya hai aur tumhara??

Ritik : Main Ritik Hu..wo aj mera hi birthday tha😃
And Their names is Shivanya and Ritik😳

Shivanya : Acha ...😲 janamdin ka jashan tumhare liye tha??😲
Iska matbal tum raj Kumar Ho?????😲

Ritik : Han...tum mujse dosti to nahi todogi na???

Shivanya : Agar tum muje Roz chocolate cake khilaoge to nahi😆

Hey Shivji 😆kaisa vardaan dia aapne? Yeh ladki dosti chocolate cake ke badle karti hai.🤣matlab agar Ritik jisdin chocolate cake nahin layega usdin Shivanya dosti tod degi??😆

Ritik : Pakka promise...ek baat bolu shivanya???

Shivanya : Ab to hum dost hai na? Bolo bolo

Ritik : Tum bahut khoobsurat Ho shivanya*blushing*

Shivanya (cutely) : Par tum bilkul bhi sundar nahi Ho

Ritik: 😲

Shivanya ends up laughing and soon ritik joins her too...

Wow Ritik all shy and blushing??😳I thought he would tease Shivu..but here table has turned.👏

Shivanya : Ab muje Jana hoga,Varna ma baba pareshan honge agar unhe pata chala Ki me ghar nahi pahuchi Hu to

Ritik : Kal yahi mile???*sounding hopeful*

Shivanya : Hmm kal sham KO"?? Hum yahan khoob masti karenge😆..

Ritik : Shivanya...

Shivanya : Haan

Ritik : Tum bahut achi Ho
He kisses her on the cheek and run🤣

Shivanya: 😲Ritik 😡🤣

Yeh Ritik bachpan mien kitna sharp tha...kiss toh kar paya.😃😉



I want more and more annd more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Love this Rivanya's cute childhood. They are just chhooo chhweet!!!

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