MiHar OS - Beauty in the Breakdown - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG. Just OMG.

I love you Ash, but you already know that don't you.

Your comments are one of those rare ones I always wait for with bated breath and then when they come, I never really know how to respond. But Imma try this time, because it's only fair that I do.

I am so happy you liked the title, I was a little afraid it was going to be a cliched one. And I hate cliched but then it came to me and nothing else measured up and so it was this. The summary on the other hand, as happens with most of my writing, was accidental. Heh.

I had been thinking for a while, about why an unsuspecting little thing like her could affect him like that and then this happened. And if this gave you dark thoughts, well mission accomplished. I can't wait to read where that road leads. 😉

Also, as for her dad, I think he is liberal but practical. Which is why she is allowed to dress and live the way she wants but he wants what's best for her future thus he wants her to have a secure assured future. That's why her hesitation with dance.

You know a lot of times I don't see my writing the way you do, even though I wrote it - like I never picked on the flame and moth thing until you pointed it out. So thank you so much for that.

Your comments and reviews are the highlight of everything I write nowadays. I hope you write more for me to comment and fangirl on soon too!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asha_Tacker

Yo Girl! Much love to u!

Seriously dude, d way ur description of Mikahil's feelings upon Baby is indefinitely awesome!
D comparision of both is pretty precise & perfect! That's what made the story so much relatable to my heart. I loved it. Probably the first one i read & it is d best one.


Much love to you too! 😳

I'm so glad I could unravel Mikhail's mystery a little and that it resonated with you. I love taking characters like his and giving them a vulnerability they don't usually show so clearly.

Your comment made me blush and grin and thank you so much for that! Hoping to read something from your end too! 😉


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow!!! Its amazing...wonderful...loved it!!! Pls do write more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was just SO good!
You have described his feelings amazingly!
Seriously loved it! ❤️
Please do write more!
Would love to read your stories😃

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