Tu Mera Humsafar SwaSan FF Thread02 LAST PART on Pagr 140 - Page 38

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Posted: 9 years ago
Goldie...
I read all 3 updates in a go...very very emotional updates,feeling really bad for swasan..happy that family support with swara,but want Sanskar to recover soon...and he can take care of his pregnant wife...

Love,
Simi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Arey yaar Goldie...Tune toh hr update mein muje rula rhi ho..😭😭
Mein bhut emotional hun yaar..Itna mat rulao dear...😭😭😭

Update ws so emotional n scaring...
Lvd it so much...Thnks so much dear 4 d pm...
Vry sry 4 late commenting...Stuck wid wrk...

Unressed ma commnt 4 last update on pg No:50
Do hv a luk on dat also dear...😛😛😛

Cumin 2 latest update., it was damn fantastic..U nailed it dear..
Such an emotional updte u portrayed well...suprb👏👏
Sanskaar cn feel swara's pain.Bt becahara s helpless 2 avoid her pain..
Lvd d mornin talks of swara 2 sanskaar..She s missin him hell lot..
Poor swasan...Feelin bad 4 dem...😭😭😭
Swara wearin modern dress...Sanskaar evn in coma also hell possessive 4 swara..
HE s angry on wearin swara dat dress...
Lvd d way swara understnd sanskaar's inner turmoil n explined d reason...
Both understand each other vry perfectly...
Sanskaar is cryi inside for nt able 2 protect his princess frm all evil eyes...

Raj!!!😡😡😡 How Shameless he is??? Feelin 2 kill him..
Itna sb kuch krne ke baad bhi swara ke saamne aake uske saath misbhve krne ki koshish kr rha he..So much guts...😡😡😡
Lvd d way swara handled him..Voh thappad zarooori tha..
I lvd it..👏👏👏Goldie yaar tune acha hi kiya...
My assumption got rite..He s d same raj who played vid ragini's dignity...
Ab toh usko double punishment milna chahiye...
Raj threatenes swara..Swara s afraid on losing her dignity n her baby..
Lvd d bond of swara n naina..Dat was fabulous...
Jo responsibility sanskaar ne use diya tha ,Naina handlin it well...
D way she assured swara was commendable...Lvd it..

Swara fainted...Dat was shck...Swara s dat much feared on raj's arrival...
Baby started kickin at earlier stage...Feelin vry scred 4 swara...
Hope swara will b fine...Sansakkr s shckd on knwin swara'a condition...
Awesum update dear...It was fabulous...
Do continue dear..Waitin 4 nxt update...



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Posted: 9 years ago
read last 2 part together
awesome update dear
emotional yaar 😭
swasan 🥺
i want happy SwaSan yaar 😉
Edited by Nithya.G - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Goldie i am waiting 😃

me too.. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Me too in waitin mode...
Update soon goldie..😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Goldie this is cheating aaj bhi no updates 😭
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Thnk U Guyz fr the Immense Love n Support fr this Trck.I never thot ki inwud get such an Amzing Response fr this Trck..M Really Happy wid Responses..Thnks Alot..N Guyz Plzz Have Patience I knw mny of u r waiting fr Our Hero ko Entry..Dnt Worry I Assure U ki Sanskaar will Come Bak in a Heroic Entry..So Plzz Calm Down n Enjoy the Trck..Anywyz Stopping My Bak Bak n Strting Nxt Part . Hope U will Like this Part too.Do Leave ur Comments in the Comment Box Below :).

Sorry fr Delay..was Bzy...So cud nt Post..M really Sorry fr Naking u all Wait..

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Recap : Raj Misbehaving wid Swara n Swara Unconscious..

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Tu Mera Humsafar


Part 53


SwaSan Room

30 Mins Later

Time Flows n Everyone Present in SwaSan's Room were Tensed n Restless n Pacing Here n There as Swara was nt Gaining Conscious n Doctor b4 Leaving had Alrdy Told if Swara did nt Gain Her Senses in 2 Hour den It wud be Dangerous fr both Swara n Her Baby.

~~~~~~~FlashBack~~~~~~~

Doctor : i m really Sorry to say DP Ji ki agr Swara ko agle 2 Ghante main Hosh nhi aaya toh it cud be Dangerous fr both Swara n Her Baby..She myt even Loose Her Second Baby n this Shock cn be Dangerous fr Swara too..So try anything n Make Her Conscious.I cud have Stayed here bt i have some imp wrk so cnt Stay here bt haa i m Leaving My Nurse Here..she will take Care of Swara in My Absence..( Takes a Sadful Sigh ) i knw DP Ji..its nt easy n Correct tym fr ur Family to be Happy n to make a Enjoyable Environment in ur House bt Swara needs a Happy Environment..She needs to Refresh Herself..i knw ki Mrs Maheshwari is Missing Her Husband ryt nw wich any Wife wud do..its Obivious..so in Absence of Her Husband it's Responsibility of U all to take care of Her,to make her Happy,to make her feel Protected n all other things wich makes her Feel better..Divert Her Mind frm Tension n Stress.Take Her fr Outing so dat she cn Take Some Fresh Air n feel better.anwyz..m Leaving nw..u all Plzz Take Care of Mrs Maheshwari..n Inform Me if she did nt Gain Conscious in 1 Hour..Try n Make Her Conscious in 2 Hours somehow..I have Prescribed some Medicines fr Mrs Maheshwari make sure she takes dem on Tym to Tym..

Hearing this Everyone including Lifeless Sanskaar was Really Tensed n Worried abt Swara.They all were only thinking hw to bring Swara in Her Senses.

~~~~~FlashBack Ends~~~~~

PRESENT

AP : ( Crying ) Y is this Happening wid Our Childern only ?? Y cnt Swara and Sanskaar Live Happily ?? Wenever they get a Reason to Live Happily something or other Happens wid them ..Y ?? Itne tym k baad toh they got such a Big n Good News bt dat also came wid a Big Sorrow News.. ( Teary Eyes )

Nurse : Suniye.we r running out of tym n Mrs Maheshwari is in Very Critical Condition..we need to bring Her in Senses asap..N One More thing Only 1 Person cn Stay Here in Room.if u all stay here Both the Patients myt feel Suffocation..So U Plzz Go Out n Only One Person cn Stay in Room wid them..

AP,Sujata n Shomi : ME..I will Stay..

Hearing all the Three Mothers Replying to Together Sanskaar had a Tears of Pride in His Eyes n Thnkd God fr Such a Wonderful n Caring Mothers.While others Stared eachother wid Confusion n seeing Others Confusion All the Three Mothers Decided wid Mutual Concern..

AP : Sharmistha Ji..u Stay here wid ur Daughter..Swara needs Her Maa ryt nw..

Sujata : ( Smiles ) Yes Sharmistha Ji..Jiji is ryt..Swara needs u da Most .u cn only Make Her Understand n U cn only Encourage Her to Fyt Further..

Shomi : Thnk U Annapurna n Sujata Ji..Thnk U soo Much ( Teary Eyes ).

AP : Its Ok Sharmistha Ji.. ( Wipes Her Tears ) Accha..we r leaving..u take care of Swara..

After Leaving Shomi wid Swara everyone.Left fr their Respective Rooms n had Only One Prayer in Mind reharding the Health of both their Children i.e Swara n Sanskaar.As soon as Everyone Left Shomi went Near Sanskaar n Sat Beside Him n Had a Talk wid Lifeless Sanskaar.

Shomi : ( Teary Eyes ) Beta.. ( Caresses His Hairs ) i knw u r also feeling Bad n Pain seeing Ur Princess in such State..i knw u myt be Cursing Urself fr nt Protecting Her Today..u r feeling Unlucky coz u r nt able to feel ur Baby..bt Beta..dnt Curse urself fr all this..yeh sab jo hua usme its nt ur Fault..haa bas Meri Beti hi Kismat main Shayad Khushiyaam kam Tym k liye hoti hai. ( Teary Eyes ) shayad She Deserves only Sadness in Life..frm Childhood i gave seen My Shona Suffering frm Many Prblms..First Her Own Dadi Treated Her as a Stranger den Laksh Betrayed Her drn She got Forcefully got Married to U den Her Kidnapping,Her Rape Attempt by Vikram n wat all She did nt Suffer n all these Prblms had Broken My Shona alot bt Sanskaar Post ur Accident i have seen My Old?Scary n Weak Shona Turning into a Bold n Stronger Shona..n u kne its all because of U.Coz of ur Dream Project..Yes Beta..Ur Love n Ur Support Made Her Storng to Fyt agnst dat Raj..u knw Raj is da Same Person who Cheated Ragini Few Yrs Ago..dat Day i Saw My One Daughter Broken into Pieces..n Today agn My Other Daughter is agn Broken into Pieces n dat too coz of Same Person dat Raj..Jaha tak i knw My Shona..She is Worried Only abt Ur Dream Project n abt Her Baby,abt Ur's n Her Child more dan Her Dignity..Coz for Her U r Imp n the Matters wich r Related to U is Like a Precious Stone to Her..n thinking abt Ur Project n ur both Baby Swara has Made her Condition like this..She Needs U Beta..plzz try to Recover Soon Beta..She is Missing U alot..i knw She talks to U everytym..n she tells u her Heart Out..coz She Only Trusts U Beta in this World..She needs u da Most..hum san jitna bhi kare its nt Enough fr Her.coz She needs ur Love,ur Affection Ur Support More ryt nw..sje feels Secure n Protective wid U..Plzz Beta..Try to Respond n try to Come bak Soon nt fr anyone of Us bt Come Bak fr Ur Princess n Ur Child..Plzz Sanskaar..they need u ..

Saying this Wipes Her Tears n went Near Swara n Sat Brides Her n Strts Talking to Her.Sanskaar who Heard Shomi was Feeling Even More Helpless n Tears agn Strtd Flowing frm His Eyes wich was Noticed by Shomi n had a Smile on Her Face.

Shomi : ( Monologue ) Sanskaar i knw My Words Has Effected U n ur Heart..n i also knw u will also B Bak soon..coz u cnt see ur Princess in Pain fr Long..Bas Come Bak Soon.. ( Wipes Her Tears ) ( To Swara ) Shona..i knw tum sun rahi ho. ( Caresses Her Hairs ) Shona tum itni jaldi Haar nhi maan sakti Beta..dekho Sanskaar tumhara wait karrah hai..kehraha hai ki uski Princess itni Weak nhi hosakti..Shona u have to Fyt fr U,fr Ur Sanskaar n most Importantly ( Touched Swara's Belly ) fr Ur Baby..fr Ur n Sanskaar's Child..He needs U n His Father Both.hw cn u become Weak soo Easily Swara..U Promised Sanskaar na ki U will Fyt till End so nw hw cn u become soo Weak nw..u cnt Shona..Ur Sanskaar Needs U Shona..U cn only bring Ur Sanskaar Bak..N No One else cn bring Him Bak except U..utho Swara..u cnt give up soo easily..dekho Sanskaar is Cursing Himself fr ur Condition..Plzz utho..Samjhao Sanskaar ko He is ny in Fault..U Chngd Urself Completely fr Sanskaar n Made His Dream Project Possible n nw u r only 1 Month Away frm Ur Goal..so hw cn U Loose n Give Up soo Easily..Plzz Be Strong..U r nt My Old Shona ( Cups Her Face ) U r Sanskaar Maheshwari's Wife Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari..Samjhi n Sanskaar ki Wife cnt Loose Hope soo Easily ..u need to Fyt Bak n Give Raj a Good Fyt fr Urself n fr Ragini n Most Importantly Fr Ur Sanskaar. .( Kisses Her Forhead ) Get Well Soon Shona..Get Well Soon ( Teary Eyes ). .

After having a Talk wid Swara n Sanskaar Shomi was abt to Leavethr Room bt as soon as Shomi was abt to Leave bt She Felt a Hold on Her Wrist n a Weak Voice.

Swara : ( Semi Unconciousness ) MMAA..( Tries to Gets Up )

Shomi Hearing Swara's Voice Turns Bak n Tears of Hapiness Strtd Flowing frm Her Eyes n Hugs Swara Tightly Lovingly..

Shomi : Shonaa.tu uth gayi Beta..Aaram se Beta... ( Hugs Swara Tightly ) Tu theek toh hai na Shona..

Swara : ( Smiles n Brks da Hug ) Haa Maa..m fyn..Ur Daughter n ( Touches Her Belly ) Ur Naathin is also Fyn..U were Ryt I cnt Loose n Give Up soo Easily.. ( Sees Sanskaar ) i will Fyt till End..I will Make Sanskaar's Project a Complete One..n will nLet anyone Harm Me nor Our Child..m nt Old Swara m New n A Bold Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari who cn Fyt Bak.( Hugs Shomi ) Thnks Maa ( Kisses Her )

Shomi : ( Smiles ) Ur Welcome Beta..accha u take Rest..i will Go nw..

Swara : ( Smiles ) Accha Maa..

Shomi Leaves SwaSan Room n Swara sees Sanskaar n Lies on His Chest n Strts Talking to Him wid Teary Eyes.

Swara : ( Teary Eyes ) Sanskaar seems like u r Enjoing seeing Me in Such State..tabhi toh dekho u still Sleeping Peacefully n nt even Responding a bit..I Hate U Sanskaar.. ( Teary Eyes ) I Srsly Hate U..Plzz Come Bak Soon..i cnt Stay widout any Longer Sanskaar..I need U.. ( Cries Miserably )

As Swara was Talking to Sanskaar while Crying Miserably Sanskaar Feels Her Tears on His Chest n Cries too In Heart n Keeps on Cursing n Fumes on Himself on Tears agn Strts Flowing frm His Eyes.Swara who was Crying on His Chest Feels Hairs Wet n Wakes Up sees Sanskaar's Eyes wich was Wet Both Had a Passionate bt a Painful Eyelock fr Some Tym n were Lost in Eachother's Eyes wich was Fully Filled wid Pain n Sorrow.

Ab hai saamne
Ishe chhuu loon zara
Marr jaaun ya jee loon zaraaa
Khushiyaan choom loon
Yaa ro loon zara (indicine.com)
Marr jaaun ya jee loon zaraa

Hoo abhi mujh mein kahin
Baaki thodi si hai zindagi

As Both were having a Painful Eye Lock Swara's Phon Rings n Hearing Her Phone Ring She Wipes Her Tears n Composed Herself n Picks Up da Phone Immediately as it was frm a Unknown Number.

Swara : ( Composed Herself) Hello..

Unknown Person : ( Smiles Evilly ) Hello Swara Darling ..Hw r u ?? Hwz ur Health? ?

Swara Hearing da Unknown Person's Voice got Shocked n Fumed in Anger.

Swara : ( Angry ) Hw Dare U RAJ ?? hw dare u to Call me agn after Facing Such a Big Insult Today ?? Dnt u have Shame ??

Sanskaar Hearing Raj's Name Fumes in Anger n His Eyes Becoming Red n a Restless n a Fear full Feelings Strtd Taking in His Heart.As Swara was Talking on Phone She sees Laksh Passing By n Calls Him n Laksh Seeing Swara in Tension Enters SwaSan Room in Tension n Swara Keeps da Phone on Speaker Forgetting Sanskaar is in Room Listening ..

Swara : ( Fear ) Laksh..Laksh..

Laksh : ( Enters da Room ) Haa Swara..wat happened ??

Swara : ( Scared ) Woh..Rraa..

Laksh : Understood ) Raj ka Phone. .ryt ?? Do one thing..Keep Phone on Speaker..n dnt let Him knw ki m Around U..ok ?

Swara : ( Fears ) Ookk.

Swara Keeps da Phone on Speaker n Strts Talking wid Raj Whereas SanLak Listens to Raj's n Swara's Conversation wich Made both of the Worried fr Swara Especially Sanskaar.

Raj : ( Laughs Evilly ) No Swara..i dnt have Shame..agr Sharam hoti toh i wud I have Called U..infact i wud have Nt Returned in ur Life only after Betraying Ragini..btw Hw is she ?? Is she Fyn ?? N She myt be da Same na or is she has become More Hooo... ( Intreprupted )

Hearing Raj Talking abt Ragini Laksh Was Out of Control n was abt to Scream on Raj bt Swara Held His Hands n Stopped Him frm Doing a Big Mistake n Continued Her Talkinh widRaj.

Swara : ( Angry ) Shut Up Raj..hw cn a Person be soo Shamless like U ?? First u Betrayed Ragini n den Played wid Her Dignity n den Harmed My Husband n Misbehaved Wid Me n Attacked Me n even tried to Force Me fr a Physical Relationship..Hw Cheap U r Raj ??..Srsly..I Feel Ashamed on Myself thinking dat U were Once My Frnd..Chi..

Raj : ( Smiles Evilly ) Bt i feel Lucky Swara..i feel Lucky n Proud ki i was Ur Frnd Yrs Ago..infact i wished Ki dat Tym Instead of Ragini U cud n there wid Me On My Bbbee.. ( Call Ends )

Swara who was Hearing all these was Heart Broken n Feeling Disgusted n Fell on Bed in a Thud n Cuts da Call n Strtd Weeping Miserably.Whereas Sanskaar who saw n Listened to the Raj n Swara's Conversation was Fuming in Anger n Gripped da Bedsheet n Strtd Moving His Fingers n Responded fr the First Tym Wich was Unnoticed by Swara n Laksh.Seeing His Princess in Such State Sanskaar Lifted n Moved His Hands Slowly Towards Swara Indicating He is Alwyz there wid Her Entire Life bt Soon His Hands Fell on Bed due to Sudden Movement n Stress.

Main Khoya Toh Dhoondne Aaiyo
Chupke Se Ik Khwaab Mein Jaaiyo
Honthon Ki Sadh Se Mujhe Bulaiyo
Yahin Hoon Main
Yahin Hoon Main
Kahin Na Gaya Tujhe Chhod Ke Main
Yahin Hoon Main
Yahin Hoon Main

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Precap : Not Yet Decided.

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Guyz i hope u liked this Part..I feel like its too Messy n Boring..Sorry if u all felt like that as I jst Wrote in Hurry..Do Leave ur Comments in the Comment Box Below :). .

#Goldie
Edited by Goldie93 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res!!!!

Unressin...


I knw i was vry late...Vry vry sry dear 4 late unressing..
Hell stucked vid work dear..
Wow!!!!!! Awesum update dear...
Such an emotional one...
Swasan is in so much in bad state...
Swara might lose her second baby also...OMG!!!
Feelin vry vry bad 4 swasan..Swasan s gng through a vry bad phase...
Lvd d way all 3 mothers bcme ready 2 stay vid swara.
Sharmishta speakin 2 sanskaar was so fantastic...
Poor sanskaar chahkar bhi kuch nhi kr paa rhe he...
Finally swara got consious...Thnk god...
Mothr daughter talks was ssuprb..Swara s sharin her pain 2 sharmi...
Swasan cryin was so sad...So emotional...
Rula diya tune...
Dat shamel ess bas***d Raj called Swara...Acha hua laksh ne react nhi kiya..
Itn himmat usko?? Swara s vry much shattered on Raj's Phone...
Itna sb kuch hone ke baad bhi raj s not leavin ragini also...
Isko bhut hard punishment milna chahiye...
Sach mein use maarn ka mannn kr rha he...Sanskaar tryin 2 wake u.
No one noticin his efforts...Hope he will b bck soon...
U r awesum dear...Penned it perfectly..
Thnks so much dear 4 d pm...
Do continue n waitin 4 nxt update...
Edited by Sreeja_babu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Raj is such a disgusting person
Hope sanskar gets well soon
Loved sharmista convo with swasan
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hope sanskar will get soon and gave reply to Raj.
Waiting for your next update

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