SwaSan OS : Love At First Sight

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Guys !!!
I am glad that you all guys liked Chapter 1 of my new SwaSan SS : We Found Love and while there is still time left with me to upload Chapter 2, I decided to write an OS.

Hope you like it ...


LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT

He was sitting in his car, with a frown on his face, waiting for the red light to turn green, obviously he was getting late to reach his office and this red light wasn't helping either.

His eyes roaming here and there watching people around him some happy, some running late, some frustrated.

That's when he saw HER.

She was standing there with a bunch of balloons in her hand and children were surrounding her. She had a sweet smile on her face, she was playing with those kids and also giving them balloons.

Her eyes sparkling with joy as she saw the kids hoping around her with happy smiles on their faces. Her smile, her eyes, her laugh seem to have casted a spell on him.

The sudden honk of the car behind his car broke his trance and he reluctantly started his car and moved towards his office.

Throughout the day his mind was on that girl, her smile, her eyes, her laugh, her innocence, just HER.

He knew that he was in love with Her at first sight.

In the evening when he went home his house was all decorated and his mom told him that his dad had organised this party due to a huge contract completion.

He got ready, walked downstairs, was meeting the guests and that's when he saw Her... Again.

She was standing with his mom, dad, badi maa and bade papa.

His mom called him.

"Hi, I m Sanskar.", he said even before his mom could introduce her to him.

" Hi, I m Swara.", she said in her melodious voice.

They shook hands.

Sparks flew inside both of them as their hands came in contact.

The party got over and she went her home. Both of them felt empty.

A week later, He met Her again.

She was sitting in a caf enjoying a chocolate ice cream.

He approached her. She smiled. He too smiled.

They both talked for a while, exchanged numbers and it was then that they became the best of friends.

But both of them loved the other, the only thing that kept them waiting was the Right Moment.

And the Right Moment came...

She was in the park enjoying and playing with kids when he came towards her.

"Can we talk ?", he asked her.

" Sure. ", she answered.

But before they could take a step ahead, it started raining. The water droplets started falling and almost as if on instinct forgetting everything they started dancing in the rain.

His hands on her waist and hers on his shoulders.

Sparks flew inside them. Both felt complete.

" I Love You Swara.", Sanskar said pulling her close to him.

"I Love You Too Sanskar.", Swara said shortening the already short gap between them.

" I loved you at the very first sight.", he confessed, pulling her even more close, and kissing her gently on the lips.

She too kissed him back with equal love. They both broke the kiss after what felt like an eternity.

Both hugged each other tightly and danced romantically in the rain.


So, this was it.
Hope you guys liked it.
This was my first attempt at writing an OS.
Please comment if you guys like it and let me know your views.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cute os !!!! 😳
Do write more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Annei123

Cute os !!!! 😳

Do write more


Thanks for replying...
I will be writing more...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Itna chota tha
But short yet sweet ❤️
Their journey in few words
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhaakshu

Itna chota tha

But short yet sweet ❤️
Their journey in few words

Thank you...
I m glad u liked it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Such a sweet romantic OS Sanskar ko love at first sight☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful, Romantic and Sweet OS.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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chooo cute
cant believe i am reading this now ...
it was adorable loved it

haiii ... how ironic this was written on my birthday
which is irrelevant but still

Edited by Miss-swasan - 9 years ago

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