Dil Se -Fan Fiction: Part 3 - Pg 1 :ADDED

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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok so i am goign to write a little fanfic i hoep you guys like it here it is
kakul jain : a young 22 year old sucessful CEO of mehta and sons where she is really apprecited and loved by everybody in the office.
priya: kakuls scared sectary
neha(jennifer Winget): kakuls best friend

our hero is ankur narayan: aditya
he is a secret admiere who loves kakul he wirte her letters and belive that one day when she would wirte a letter back to him then she is in love with him.

so here goes the first part
kauls sectery priya: can i come in ms jain
kakul: yes but dint i tell you not to bother me i am working on some new ideas for the meeting today.
priya: soory mam but you know the letter
priya was really nerves she thought kakul was gong to fire her for diturbing her
kakul: the letter oh ok
a faint smile came onher face
but soon she went back to her stern face kakul is know to be really prfessional and does not mixx much with people except for neha her best friend
priya is a little suprise but then she does know that these letter tend to make kakul a little happy.
priya went out to do her wwork keeping the letter on the table
kakul kept on staring at the letter which on top was written were some beautiful poetry but kakul did not touch it well as usuall she wanted neha to read it
driving back home kakul remembered the sweet poetry wriiten in those previous letters and that kind of made her blush but then she back to her way and was thinking why is she behaving like this she reminded her self about the goals she has in life and falling in love would be a hurdle for her.
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this is it for now will write more if you guys like this first part give your true opinion😃
love*TOOBA*
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second part
kakul stopped her car infront of her house thinking and lost deep in her thoughts she opened the door with the letter in her hand she walked in her beautifuly decorated house but still was so empty only neha and kakul lived there because of the horrible acidnet that took kakuls apne and left her alone so she asked the closet person in her life to come live with her.

kakul put her bag on the table and crashed on the sofa tired from a hard day at work she closed her eyes trying to make some sense of her life.

Neha: kookoo wake up
neha woke up kakul who she called kookoo with so much love
kakul: oh you came
Neha: whats wrong really tired?
kaku: yeah
kakul became happy agin seeing her sisiter like friend
Kakul: guess what the letter came again
neha:oh ho so this is why madam is so lost cause of her achik awara yaar why dont you tell him to show you his face rather then dropping these letters at your office
kakul: naina you are saying like i know him
nwha: i am sure you want me to read this now dont you
kakul looked at her with a slight smile and neha was laughing at her beautiful smile
kaul went into he room to change she entered the room to be suprised by a room filled of roses which kakul loves
kakul was sooo suprised that she screamed calling neha
neha came running as suprised as kakul
this was not the first time that someone has done this for kaul earlier too some one left poetry written in flowers on her living room floor
kakul knew that it was him who was a strager but still so close
neha: wow wow wow amazing your lover boy really knows how to love you and cheer you up
kakul could not get how he knows when she is sad and verytime she is he does something to cheer her up
kakuls cell rang she picked it up
on the phone: thera chehra pa anso acha nahin lagta hamain
lata ha asa gaisa rai tum leqin dokh huwa hamain
the the line got cut kakul so happy and for the first time felt what true love is
she went out side to see neha enjoying her food and looking at her with mischievous eye
neha ; so what did he say must be something romantic man i wish i had somebody like him and i think you are starting to love him too
kakuls expressions changed from happy to a little sad
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PART THREE
kakul went into her room and remember the first time she received the letter about two months ago at that time she was extremely sad because of the death of her parents.
she use to read this letter and be happy for some minutes but the thought of this being a joke came to her mind and she changed her mind about believing these letters.
but over these two month she has been more and more convinced about that the person does love her but the secret that she hold close to heart stops her from getting close to any body she knew that if she gets in to a relationship and the secret reveals she would be left alone to face the pain.
it was hard for kakul to trust any body she always was really close to her mom and when she lost her she completely lost the will to live and her trust on this world was also lost. when her parents died she was left shattered but no one was there for her except for neha who helped her get back and face the world. now kakul is strong woman but this secret was something that she could not even tell neha .
kakul woke up feeling really happy she wore a beautiful green dress she was haapy but did not know why she came out of her room neha was on the didning table
neha: wow looking reaaly cute what's up ji
kakul blushed
neha: and blushing too something is realy up
kakul: omg nehu you are just too much i was just feeling nice so thought lets dress up
neha: i know this is because of the letter why dont you write him back he has always wanted you to do that and you know that he is always around you.
kakul: you know neha i cant do that
kakul was geeting late so she said bye to neha and left for her office
outsidee a black car waiting for kakul to leave as usaull but kakul did not notice it like alwys.
as kakul left from there the window of the car roled down to see a handsome young man looking for her until she diapered in the distance.
Aditya: izhara muhabat kar chuka ha hum ab bas tumhara jayab ki rah dekhta hain.
honk honk
move your car man
aditya: oh i am sorry
aditya drives on to his destination
Aditya: people think i am crazy but what to do if i dont see you in the morning my day just goes really bad said adi talking to kakuls pic
adi parked his car infront of a mansion like house
adi went into a room and in were pictures of akkul every where around you see there is kakul and only kakul.
Mom: adi come breakfast is getting cold adi rushed out locking the room cause he did wanted any body to lay an eye on his kakul.
mom: kya beeta you go for joging in the moring so early but still come late what do you do itni lambi joging karta ho.
adi smiling: mom fit rehna ka liya karna parta ha
mom: your secetery called you have a meeting today
adi's face lit up
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why well you would have to read the next part to know that
ok so enjoy
love*TOOBA*


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tumhari? thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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no body liked it thats why no replys
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Posted: 17 years ago
#3
oooh...love it...continue...this section needs ffs...to make it lively!! make sure to continue tooba! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Finally! I had clicked about 3 times on this FF but never had a time to read it! Problems kept on accuoring!.

Anyways: Good storyline! OMG! Kakul and a stern one! U must be joking and if this is a joke than... 🤣 Its a good one! 😆 A good joke!

Anyways...I think she fell in love with Sam and than he ditched her and now she doesnt believe in love..which she obviously is cursing herself in the show for but crying instead... 😆

Great job! 👏 👏

Do continue.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Tooba, I won't keep up with GES but I'll definitely keep up with your fanfic!! It's awesome! Please continue!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok then i will surely write cause we really need something like this to take off our mind from GES which is crazy these days
tumhari? thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok so added the second part i hope you guys like it
tumhari? thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i really want to read you guys comment so plz do coment
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG! I read it and I loved it! Di! I absolutly love it! every single detail is in its palce! Its awsome! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh thnxx i hope this helps the forums become more active

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