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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Awesome update ritu👏

Thanks shibu
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: poornima_15

awesome part ... sab shi hogya .. and bike me shopping so romantics 😆 😊 update soon

Thanks poornima
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vishruthaLN

Lovely update!

The starting scene was really nice as it showed the comfort level they both share though they know eachother only for a few hours!
The difference in the expression of KN on seeing Kabir's house, i.e Nisha being awestruck and Kabir in a dilemma was nicely shown!
Also it was good to see Nisha understanding his dilemma and silently reassuring him.
The family scene, Kabir -Arjun scene and Vasu's introduction of Nisha and the leg-pulling session of Kabir 😆 were lovely!
Nisha wanting to go shopping with Kabir in a bike instead of car was really very nice!
Also its nice to see their blooming friendship and them getting to know eachother other as friends without any romantic feeling yet! 👍🏼
Do continue soon and if possible please pm me when you next update 😊

thank you so much dear
for this wonderful comment
glad you liked the scenes
thank you so much
I will surely pm you the next time
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved it
Please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow Rituuu my dear..🤗 Such a sweet and lovely update..😃😃😃

Kabir Nishu bonding is so cute..

Viraj bhi na ...sadu🤢 he does not even talk with Nishu..😆 Dekhna tum Viraj..Kabir hi ye dulhaniya le jaayega😉 hain na Rituuu..😛

I loved the way Kabir said, Abhi tak haan nahin kaha Nishu ne😆 Hone waali bhabhi hain sunke usse bura laga hoga..😉

Anyways I liked his Dad, Arjun...he loves his son a lot na..😳

The way Nishu asked Kabir to take her out on shopping was so nice..They make a great pair already⭐️

Love
Naina 😳




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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shreya52

Loved it
Please update soon

thanks shreya
srry for late update
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Wow Rituuu my dear..🤗 Such a sweet and lovely update..😃😃😃

Kabir Nishu bonding is so cute..

Viraj bhi na ...sadu🤢 he does not even talk with Nishu..😆 Dekhna tum Viraj..Kabir hi ye dulhaniya le jaayega😉 hain na Rituuu..😛

I loved the way Kabir said, Abhi tak haan nahin kaha Nishu ne😆 Hone waali bhabhi hain sunke usse bura laga hoga..😉

Anyways I liked his Dad, Arjun...he loves his son a lot na..😳

The way Nishu asked Kabir to take her out on shopping was so nice..They make a great pair already⭐️

Love
Naina 😳




thanks naina
I love ur comments dear
glad you are liking the story and nibir bonding too
dulhania toh kabir hi leke jaega
par I will also give a insight into viraj
thanks once again
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww lovely ritzz
Nibir bike 😳
So cute yaar
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: star.angel

Awww lovely ritzz

Nibir bike 😳
So cute yaar

thanks star
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Posted: 9 years ago

CHAPTER 7

Kabir was riding the bike and Nisha was continuously talking abt each and everything and Kabir was listening to it without complains. After time Kabir finally spoke

"arre woh sab chod yeh bataki dairy mein aisa kya likha hai k padhne se mana kiya hmm"

"kabirrr yaarr kisiki bhi personal dairy nhi padhte and maine uss mein woh events ikhe hain jo mujhe khushi dete hain and woh bhi jinse maine koi sabak liya ho toh basically mere sare extremely happy moments and extremely sad ones too."

"ohhh phir toh padhna hi padega"

"Kabir dekh maar khaega phir"

Kabir and Nisha both giggled and their talks continued until they reached their destination, a mall. Nisha was trying tops for her but was confused between two. She kept putting them over and over to see which one looks better than the other. Kabir was standing near her busy with his phone but was silently laughing at her innocence and childness. Finally Nisha saw kabir's smile from the mirror and confronted him.

"hass kya raha hai yaar make yourself useful help me"

"hmm ok madam"

Kabir came near her and selected another top for her a baby pink colour and gave it to her.

"yeh le tujhpe yeh better lagega"

"ok nice choice mein isse try kar ke aati hun"

Nisha went to trial room and came out wearing the top, Kabir looked at her smiled and gestured through his hands that it was perfect for her. After that Nisha selected few kurtis for dolly and one pieces for kriti.

It was 2 in the afternoon and Nisha was feeling hungry

"Kabir bhuk lagi hai kuch khan eke liye chale"

"tu delhi first time aayi hai na"

"haan"

"chal phir aaj mein tujhe delhi ki sari chats and famous street food khilata hun"

"sure mujhe chatpata khana bahut pasand hai"

They had a nice street food day with aloo chat, sev puri, bhel puri, kuchori, dahi bhala and not to forget a golgappa competition.

"Kabir aaj toh maza aagaya kya lunch tha yaar par thoda zyada hogaya nhi"

"haan sab teri wajah se golgappa competition mein haar maan leti toh aisa thodi hota"

"accha phir tune kyun nhi haar mani"

"becoz Kabir never loses"

"oh hello tie hua hai"

"haan haan whatever"

They reached their bike, Kabir started it and asked Nisha to sit.

"Kabir hum kaha jaa rhe hain"

"obvio ghar"

"nhi na"

"arre toh phir"

"hmm kahi bhi par ghar gyi toh bore ho jaaungi"

"chalo thik hai jaisi aapki wish"

"thank you"

She happily sat on the bike and Kabir could not stop admiring the child in her. Kabir started the bike and after few minutes of silence Nisha out of impatience and curiousity asked

"Kabir where are we going"

"wait na"

Kabir stopped his bike in front of India Gate and Nisha frowned seeing it.

"Kabir mujhe momuments abhi nhi dekhne hain"

"haan toh maine kab kaha ki momuments dekh"

"toh phir India Gate kyu"

"kyunki hmm boating karne jaa rahe hain"

"boating idhar??"

"yup chal aajaya"

They brought their tickets and sat on the boat and begin their ride.

"mujhe pata hi nhi tha ki idhar boating bhi hai"

"madam yeh mera sehar hai toh thoda trust kar lo samjhi" said Kabir slashing water on Nisha

"Kabir nhi Kabir stop" said Nisha irritated by his continuous slashing but latter she too joined him and their ride continued with both slashing water on each other. When thye stopped both were half wet. They had a lot of fun their talking, walking in the grass bare foot, eating ice creams and candyfloss and fighting like children for it. Nisha finished her candyfloss quickly and now wanted kabir's but he denied but al last he had to share it with her. Finally after a day full of masti they started for home.

Nisha was very tried and slept keeping her head on kabir's shoulder and held him tightly by waist to not to fall. After reaching home Kabir woke Nisha up and removed the shopping bags and entered the house. It was little late when they arrived and others were having dinner by then. Kabir had to hear a little scolding but Nisha saved him saying she insisted on staying out for a little longer. None said anything after that and insisted them to join for dinner but two were fully filled and retired to their respective rooms for a good night sleep bidding the others same.

The others continued with their dinner and Vasundra insisted viraj to start talking to her and asked him to take her for lunch tomorrow to know each other better.

Sometime in the middle of the night Nisha woke up feeling thirsty , she found the jug empty and went towards the kitchen area to have water. She was going back to her room when she heard a familiar sound, "Guitar Kabir" she concluded and went towards the source of the sound. She reached the garden and saw Kabir sitting on the bench with his guitar playing a tune. His back was facing her. She went and sat next to him on the bench, his eyes were closed he was in his musical world. He was playing the guitar and then finally started singing the song...

Har pal meriyaan yadaan
Yadaan vich ae tun
Dil di gal main dassa
Te dassa fir kinnu

Nisha was very happy to hear this song from him as it was on of her fav too

Har pal meriyaan yadaan
Yadaan vich ae tun
Dil di gal main dassa
Te dassa fir kinnu

Kabir was in his musical world still unaware of nisha's presence

Teri meri, meri teri ik jind'di
Ik jind'di what to do
Jhoomu main naachu main gaaun ke likhun
Tere liye main kya karun

He stopped singing suddenly when he saw Nisha. Nisha understood it , smiled at him and started singing the next part herself

Dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein aana
Dheere dheere se dil ko churana (churana..
)

Nisha sang while indicating him through her eyes to resume the guitar and singing too. He smiled and did the same, they both sang together..


Tumse pyaar hume hai kitna jaane jaana
Tumse mil kar tumko hai batana

Kabir sang alone and Both were swaying in the flow of the music left and right

Sham wahi, kaam wahi
Tere bina o sanam
Neend nahi, chain nahi
Tere bina o sanam (x2)

Kabir sang the lyrics swaying and his eyes to Nisha and Nisha smiling and nodding at him

Teri meri, meri teri ik jind'di
Ik jind'di what to do?

Kabir sang making all the facial expression as par lyrics and Nisha pulled his cheeks


Jhoomu main nachu main gaaun ke likhun
Tere liye main kya karun

They sang together smiling and enjoying each other's company and song too

Dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein aana
Dheere dheere se dil ko churana (churana..)
Tumse pyaar hume hai kitna jaane jaana
Tumse milkar tumko hai batana (x2)

Kabir sang alone with all his cute antics still on and Nisha enjoying it

Sota hoon kabhi rota hoon
Tere bina o sanam
Paa kar sab kuch khota hoon
Tere bina o sanam (x2)

They sang together and Nisha even pulled Kabir for dance.kabir kept the guitar and joined her in dancing

Teri meri meri teri ik jind'di
Ik jind'di what to do?
Jhoomu main naachun gaaun ke likhun
Tere liye main kya karun

They were smileing and singing and dancing with arms around each other

Dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein aana
Dheere dheere se dil ko churana (churana..)
Tumse pyaar humein hai kitna jaan-e-jaana
Tumse mil kar tumko hai batana

Tumse mil kar tumko hai batana
Tumse mil kar tumko hai batana...

They stopped singing but kept moving lost in each other's eyes. Hearing a plane pass over them they broke their trance and moved away from each other smiling at each other.

"Kabir tu kitna accha gata hai"

"thanks waise tub hi kaam nhi hai, you really have a very sweet voice Nisha"

"thanks"

Nisha bend and picked the guitar and tried playing it but failed miserably. Kabir laughed at her, she frowned and he said srry and took the guitar from her and showed her how to play. He gave it gave to her but she failed. He taught her 4-5 times but each time she failed. So Kabir now asked her to hold the guitar while he came from behind, held her hand in his and moved her hands on the strings, he chin was resting on her shoulder,breath on her neck and arms somewhere encircling her. Nisha felt awkward at first but then it vanished Kabir taught her patiently. At last she tried it herself and was a little successful from last trials. Kabir clapped for her and she did a bend thanking him and both smiled .

"chal aaj ke liye itna kafi hai baki baad mein sikhlena abhi neend aa rahi hai"

"hmm toh good night"

"good night"

They left for their rooms. Nisha entered her room and penned everything in her dairy smiling all the while and slept with a beautiful smile on her face.

Kabir reached his room and started caressing his guitar which he only enjoyed playing especially today with Nisha. His thoughts wandered to her and thinking how come she understands him better than anyone he slept.

Edited by mishrialways - 9 years ago

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