~Aise Rab Se Na Kisi Ne Tujhe Maanga Hoga~ An Ishra OS - Page 9

Originally posted by: maanvir

I am still sad that u didnt tell me about this OS...

And it makes me sadder that I am probably the last to read this...

Then I am the saddest because it was such a beautiful OS and I cant help but comment on it...

Behna tu na...

Originally posted by: maanvir

Behna...

Pehle toh jhappi paa le🤗

Dekh na tu mujhe naraz rehne bhi nahi deti...

Socha tha ke thodi der naraz hi rahungi...Kuch nahi kahungi...

But tu hai hi aisi ke mai chahun bhi to zyada der tujhse naraz nahi reh sakti...

Aur ye OS padhne ke baad to BILKUL bhi nahi...

awww🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Behna mai kya kahun...

This OS was like KISI SHAYAR KI GHAZAL...JO DE ROOH KO SUKOON KE PAL

Literally it was a healer...a source of peace...

Beautiful...Serene...

thank you so much 😳...feels so nice to firstly have a comment from you and then usmein bhi itni saari taareef

Lik I said in the last update of CKPC here too i felt it wasnt IshRa...

It was my Bahuriya & MUNNA😉 ☺️☺️☺️☺️

Each line of the OS reminded me of our chat conversations from the day u shared the news...

The poster against the bed

The baby bump☺️

The stool stunt😡

The emotional atyachar

The baby wish🤣 (100😉🤣)

The untimely sleep🥱

The last seen😆 (U cant live without whatsapp...Can u?) i can try to live

The biwiwala love 👍🏼

The retarded couple🤪

The impatient wait😳

Everything just screamed of u & him...

Yaad hai tu aksar kehti thi ke di aap bhi mere sath in sab cheezon ko feel karogi...

And I did behna...thru our chats and now thru dis...

Its an amazing feeling...

Tu bhi kya yaar...Subah subah rula deti hai...

Love u behna...always & forever...

See I have gone blank now...kya kya socha tha ke likhna hai n all...

Emotional karke chod diya tune toh...ab mujhe kuch samajh nahi araha hai ke kya kahun...

Kyunki dil me is waqt aise feelings hain jo lafzon se kabhi bayaan nahi kiye jaa sakte...

Bas tu samajh jaa...samjhegi I am sure...

LOVE U MORE is all I can say🤗🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Pata nahi ab mera ye kehne ka haq hai ya nahi...phir bhi i want to say

Kyunki Tu Dhadkan Mai ❤️

Originally posted by: pcnsb

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Unres..

Manu di aap kyu upset ho rahe ho.. Khush ho jao kyunki last main hu..

OS main pehle padh chuki thi lekin detailed comment dena tha isliye comment nahi kiya... Socha tasalli se comment karungi.. Aur phir bhool gayi..!

Isliye kaan pakkad kar sorry...

hehhe its ok 😊😊

Now coming to the os..

Naam dekhkar laga it is going to be a romantic one.. Magar yeh toh kuch aur he nikla.. Par bahout khub nikla..! aww thank you 😳😳😳

Song.. I couldn't even dream of using this song for this theme.. Kaise sochte ho yaar ?! dimag se 😛😛

Such a brilliant piece of writing..! The way you present human emotions is just extraordinary.. One can actually feel the restlessness of to-be parents to hold their little one in their arms.. !

I'm short of words describe the beauty of this story..! Dialogues kahan se lati ho yaar?!

arre arre itni taareef...itna bhi kuch khaas nahi tha yaar...jyada hi taareef kar di tumne...phir bhi thanks a lot really

My favorite lines..

And so each day, each night they would do nothing but weave infinite dreams, knit tons of hopes and sew a beautiful future of togetherness.

Kyunki mera yahi toh kaam hai...isi liye hi toh main bani hoon...aapko beintehaa pyaar karne ke liye...har saans ke saath aapka naam japne ke liye...aapka aks banke rehne ke liye,

hum use isi park mein laayenge...pehle apni godi mein...phir use yahin baithna sikhayenge...phir uski nanhi nanhi ungliyaan pakadke use chalna sikhaayenge...phir woh apne chote chote kadmon se pure park mein ghuma karegi...main uske peeche peeche bhaagunga...aur tum baithke dekhogi humen aur hasogi bhi...phir main use god mein uthake tumhare paas le aaunga...phir tum hum dono ko gale se laga logi...bas aise hi humari zindagi chalti jaayegi...yahi chota sa sapna hai mera aur jaanta hoon tumhara bhi

They walked back towards their home holding hand in hand like a unique couple having a kind of love people never witnessed between any other couple.

For the dreams, someone would not dare to see, they fulfilled with their togetherness and for the struggle one would fear to fight, they battled it strongly and gained a shining victory.

And you say.. My writings have poetic touch !

Thanks for the PM

Nandini

you are most welcome dear...thanks a lot for this lovely comment...really thank you very much

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

such a beautiful os
n my fev song
loved it

Originally posted by: ...Forever...

lovely OS