Ishra ts-kabhi naa kehna alvida pt 5 on pg 123 updt on Apr 29 - Page 27

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anisha960

awesome update
emotional also
basically ramn n ishita loves each other
but raman is being arrogant as he wants high status
he wants ishita to be proud of him
but ishita just want raman only
budhu raman ishita want ur love not money
so finally she opted for divorce
but raman fears hearing divorce
he was so scared of loosing her
pyaar toh krta hai bahut
loved their emotional talk
thnx fr pm
continue soon
kaan pakad kr sorry fr late comment



Thanks Anu
Glad u loved it
Yes Raman loves her too much but indulge himself in earning money
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Originally posted by: Rkchinju

Wow!!! Wow!!! Wow!!!

This is brilliant story👏
Really loved it!!!!😳
update soon!!



Thanks roshani
Glad u like it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Author's note-before updating this part,I wanna thank u guys,first for 130+ likes in its first part,90+ likes in teaser and 50+ pages in one update.that's pretty much.love u all.guys for loving this story so much.and don't forget to hit like button to make it much bigger then the previous one.hope u guys understood. Here is the next part.

PART 2

Raman was looking at her unconscious figure and was lost in his thoughts when Dr said- congrats Mr bhalla.ur wife is pregnant.

Raman look at him expressionlessly trying to understand what he told.

Raman- sorry,what u say.

Dr- I said that mrs bhalla is six weeks pregnant. U guys r going to be parents soon.

Raman smiled and said- what,she is pregnant. My wife ,my ishu is pregnant. We r going to be parents. Thanks doc ,thanks a lot.he said hugging him.

Dr- relax Mr bhalla. I know u r very much happy listening to the news but I wanna talk something very serious to u.

Raman- is everything OK with her doc.he asked worriedly.

Dr- sir please settle down.

Raman sat on the chair .

Doc-u should now stop ur wife.

Raman- I didn't get u doc.from what I should stop her.

Doc- u should stop ur wife to take sleeping pills.it's not good for her and ur baby.

Raman- ishita take sleeping pills.

Doc-u don't about this.

Raman nodded in negative.

Doc- then I can know why she was taking those pills.she has been taking pills from last six months.when she came to me six months ago,she was in very bad state,her face was so pale and she looks almost like a dead one.she wasn't eating,nor sleeping.her eyes were puffy like she was crying continuously. I don't have any other option then prescribing sleeping pills.coz she didn't slept a wink from past many days.I don't know why she was like this but she was in very bad state.

Raman was shocked to hear all this.his ishita,his jaan was in so much pain but he don't know about anything.is he really that much lost in making money that he completely ignored her.

Raman- how is she doctor. Nothing will happen to her naa.

Doc- now she is just sleeping. But how she will be further that depends on u Mr bhalla. U have to give ur wife,ur love,ur care and foremost ur time.she craves for it badly.I don't know u know or not but I suggest her to visit a psychiatrist also coz she was falling in depression. She went also and all the time she was talking just about u and how u use to love her and pamper her.she miss u badly sir.it would be great if u can spend some quality time with her. She badly needs u.and if she continue to take those pills then it will be hazardous for her and the baby.

Raman- no doc, don't tell this about her.I love her so much.can't think of my life without her.I know I have done so many mistakes but not anymore. I will rectify my every mistake. Because I want her back in my life.safe and sound.just tell me once that she is OK and nothing will happen to my jaan.he said almost crying.

Doc- please stop this Mr bhalla. Ur wife will be perfectly alright.just give her some time.

Raman- she is not my wife doc but my life.and I have my all time for her.my every heartbeat is just for her.I will not let anything happen to her.

Doc- then take care of ur life.and make sure she didn't take those pills again.those r killing her from inside.

Raman- I will take care of that doc.thanks a ton for informing.

Doc- I think I should go now.

Raman- thanks once again doctor.

Doc- my pleasure.enjoy the good news with ur wife.

Raman smiled ,doc went out of his cabin.Raman sat down on the chair trying to observe the information he got about her that to from their doctor.tears made their way down his cheek which he was controlling since long.he remembered the incident in early days of their marriage.

Flashback

It was the raining heavily since two days and his house was leaking from many places.

Raman- where will u sleep jaan.the roof is leaking .our bed is wet.

Ishita set their bed in the corner of the room where it was all dry.

Ishita- here we will sleep Raman.she said laying down.

Raman saw her laying on the floor and said- I am so sorry jaan.I couldn't give u a shelter,a bed and a peaceful sleep.u have to sleep on the floor.the girl who never put her feet on the floor is sleeping on the floor just because of me.

Ishita called him and make him lay down.she kept her head on his chest and said- I don't know about bed and shelter.but only u can give me a peaceful sleep.u know how.

Raman- how.

Ishita- by wounding ur arms around me.she said circling his arms around herself.

Raman smiled and said- I love u jaan.

Ishita- but I love u more.

Raman- then I love u most.he said kissing her forehead.she close her eyes feeling his touch. He patted her and soon she was sleeping peacefully hugging him tight.

Flashback end

Raman hold his head with his hand and started thinking-what I have done.shame on u Raman.ur jaan was in so much pain but all u care about money and ur false pride.how could u do this.u ignored her so much that u don't know that she take sleeping pills.and today also when she came to u saying that all she want is ur love.u hurt her again.u did too bad to her.u don't deserves to be forgiven. She said that she will never come back to that house coz its not her home.yes she is so true.I was her home,her solace but I ignored her. My baby was in so much pain but I couldn't see coz I was blinded by money.tears were in his eyes.he was crying continuously.

Raman get up from his place and went to the couch where she was sleeping. He sat beside her and caressed her face lovingly.

Ishita- Raman,she said in her sleep.

He cried seeing this.she knows his touch even in her sleep and he don't know how vulnerable he made her.

Raman hugged her sleeping figure tight and said crying- yes jaan.Raman ur Raman,ur loving husband babu.I have come back .now never ever go leaving my baby again.he kissed her face numerous time and crying hugging her.he wait for her hugging him back but she didn't coz she was sleeping. He picked her in his arms and took her out of his cabin.

Everyone was seeing him with shocked expression coz they never saw their boss picking his wife like this.he was almost in tears.

Raman- cancel all my meetings for the day.

Secretary- but sir ,ur five meeting r lined up back to back.

Raman- don't u understand the meaning of cancel all my meetings.just do it now. And if not possible tell mihir to attend the meeting.saying so he came out scooping her in his arms.he placed her gently in the car and drive towards their home.

Soon they were in front of their big mansion.he came out of the car and scoop her in his arms.he took her inside the house.all the help were shocked to see Raman in home at this hour and he came with ishita in his arms.all were pleasantly surprised seeing them.

Raman took her to their room and placed her on the bed.he covered her fully with the quilt and was about to go when his eyes fell on the big portrait of them above their bed.she was pulling him closer and kissing his cheek while he was busy in covered her for safeguarding her from the sun.it was the pic of their first anniversary when he took her for a safari.she was wearing a pink top with black pants and laughing wholeheartedly.

He remember how she told him.

Ishita- only u have power to turn my every sorrow into happiness and my every happiness into sorrow.I love u so much Raman.saying so she kissed his dimples.

Raman smiled and said- sorry jaan,I turned ur every happiness into sorrow.but not anymore,now I will become ur old Raman.loving and caring.I will love u alot and this new happiness of our life will brighten our life.he said caressing her tummy.after that he went from the room.

She wake up after some hours to see herself all alone in their room.she look around to find him thinking he brought her there but to her disappointment he was nowhere.

Ishita eyes filled instantly.

Ishita- Raman,u send me home but didn't came with me.u still don't care that ur wife need u and can die someday waiting for u.she his her face in between her legs and started crying,when she felt him touching her shoulder.she raised her head to look at him.he smiled at her and wiped her tears.

Raman- they r not allowed in my wife's beautiful eyes.

Ishita was looking at him as it is her dream coming true.before she can react he picked her and took her outside the room.

He took her to the room next to their bedroom.and make her sit comfortably on the chair.she look around and saw the whole room was decorated by flowers and balloons.a big CONGRATS was written in the mid.

Ishita- what's this Raman.

Raman took her hand in his hand and said kissing it- congratulations to the would be mumma. Someone is about to come.he said caressing her tummy.

Her eyes instantly filled hearing his words.

Ishita touch her tummy and said- baby,our baby.hamara bachcha Raman.she said smiling between her tears.

Raman nodded ,his eyes were also filled.

Raman- hamara bachcha jaan.( our baby) saying so he hugged her tight.she hugged him back and said- hamara baby aane wala hai( our baby is about to come)

Raman- yes and now everything will be fine.

Ishita broke the hug and said- what do u mean by this.

Raman kneel down infront of her and said- I am so sorry jaan.I know I have done a huge mistake but now I want everything to be fine between us.I want to be ur old Raman,who loves u and cares for u unconditionally. I want to pamper u.and everything what we ever wanted to do together.but please don't go leaving me alone.don't divorce me jaan.give me a chance to proof that I am ur Raman.who loves only u unconditionally. He said kissing her hand again.she closed her eyes to feel his love. A tear escape her eyes which he hold and said- told u naa ,don't come in my jaan's eyes.

Ishita- u r doing this for ur baby naa.

Raman smiled and said- yes I am doing this for my baby.

Ishita eyes filled instantly.

Ishita- jhooth hi keh diya hota ki mere liye kiya( wish u have lied that u did it for me)

Raman- I can't jaan.I did this for my baby.but not this one,he said touching her tummy,but for my this baby,he said cupping her face.

Ishita look at him trying to observe his words.

Raman- u know when u faint in my arms,I was near dead,thinking that what u thought come true.I lost u forever.but much to my relief doc said that my baby is pregnant. I was on nine clouds hearing this that we r going to be parents but next moment I was dumped on the ground badly.

Raman- I came to know my jaan,my ishu is taking sleeping pills to have a piece of mind.I am such a horrible husband that my baby was going on the way of self destruction and I didn't have any idea.I ignored u ,hurt u and I deserves to be punished.punish me jaan but don't kill me by going away from me.ur Raman is not that strong that he can survive without his ishu.give me one chance to rectify my mistake.please jaan please.just once.

Ishita hugged him tight and cried- aap bhool gaye the mujhe .mujhe anath kar diya tha aapne.koi nahi tha mere paas.bilkul akeli ho gayi thi main aapke bina.kyun kiya Raman aisa apni jaan ke saath apni ishu ke saath.(u forgot me Raman.I was feeling like an orphan.noone was there for me.I was so alone without u.why u did so to ur ishu).

Raman hugged her back and said- I am sorry baby.I am so sorry.

Ishita- I will not forgive u so easily.u made me cry.she complained like a kid.

Raman smiled between his tears and said- then don't forgive me.let this arrogant rkb manofy his jaan.just give him a chance to prove himself a loving and caring husband again.let this rude and ruthless rkb become ur Raman all over again.he said joining their foreheads.

Ishita- don't say anything to him.whether he is rkb or Raman.he is mine and I will not manofy so easily.I will throw lots of tantrums.

Raman kissed her forehead, she close her eyes feeling it.

Raman- I am ready to bear all ur tantrums.after all u r my queen.

Ishita- phir se kariye naa.( do it again)

Raman- what.

Ishita- kiss me naa again.

Raman smiled and sit on the chair and make her sit on his lap comfortably. He kissed her forehead again,then her eyes ,then her nose ,then her cheeks.tears were flowing from her eyes.he kissed her tears.he was about to kiss her lips but stop in mid and said- I have written something for u.

Ishita- what.

Raman cleared his throat and said- gaur farmayiyega,

Tumhe chot pahuchane ke khayal se bhi
Meri saanson ka dhadkan se nata tut jaata hai
Lekin phir sochta hoon
Tum rootho toh sahi
taki duniya ko bata doon
Ki meri biwi ko manane ka
Har tareeka mujhe aata hai.(its the confession made by Raman to ishita in yhm,not mine,but I love the dialogue, so included. No offence)

Ishita smiled and said- aap bahut bure hai Raman(u r too bad Raman)

Raman hugged her and said- and u r my jaan.can I kiss my baby now.

Ishita blushed and nodded in yes.he bend and kissed her tummy.she make a face and said- u don't love me.I am going.

Raman- oh my baby wants a kiss.banda at yr service ma'am.saying so he claimed her lips in a soul searing kiss.

That's all for now.will wait for ur responses.
Edited by cutieruhi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice. But i cannot see the full update
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look like nice updat, bt full part not disply..
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omg...that was an amazing update...
Now they are together...but ushu ne jaldi maaf kar diya yar...thoda or time lena tha na...koi nahii he also died realising how much she is suffering...

depression😲😲...she was too alone...I agree he did all things for her but making her so lonely...

NOw finally they will be happy...I so loved the update...

ab next part soon...
update asap di...i cant wait na...u know how impatient i am..😆

lovely update!!!!
Edited by --abha-- - 10 years ago
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excellent update di
mind blowing

poor ishu😭😭😭
bcoz of raman's ignorance
went into depression

thanks that raman came to know in time
and she is pregnant👏👏👏

raman is feeling guilty

fb scenes are lovely as usual

everyone are shoched seeing raman's new but old avatar

ishita is cute
she have to make him pamper a lot

thanks for pm
please update soon di
Edited by detha - 10 years ago
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Updated next part on page 52.have a look.
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Posted: 10 years ago
so cute! i feel so sad for ishu but am excited to see how raman brings happiness in her life again!
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Wow
Amazing update! Di

Loved it! So much

Ishita depression mein chali gayi thi...
😲 sleeping pills leti thi. ..aur raman ko kuch nahin pata tha

Raman ishita k liye sab kiya par business bana ne k chakkar mein ishita ko aakela chodh diya. ..uss paya bhi nshin tha ...

Uss ki jaan kitni aakeli hai. ...par koi nahin der aaye durust aaye. .
Raman ab pehle wala raman banna chahta hai. ..


He took her to the room next to their bedroom.and make her sit comfortably on the chair.she look around and saw the whole room was decorated by flowers and balloons.a big CONGRATS was written in the mid.

Ishita- what's this Raman.

Raman took her hand in his hand and said kissing it- congratulations to the would be mumma. Someone is about to come.he said caressing her tummy.

Her eyes instantly filled hearing his words.

Ishita touch her tummy and said- baby,our baby.hamara bachcha Raman.she said smiling between her tears.

Raman nodded ,his eyes were also filled.

Raman- hamara bachcha jaan.( our baby) saying so he hugged her tight.she hugged him back and said- hamara baby aane wala hai( our baby is about to come)

Ishita ne raman ko maaf bhi kiya aur nahin bhi...

Tumhe chot pahuchane ke ehsaas se
Meri saanson ka dhadkan se nata tut jaata hai
Lekin phir sochta hoon
Tum rootho toh sahi
taki duniya ko bata doon
Ki meri biwi ko manane ka
Har tareeka mujhe aata hai.


Haye I just love these lines. ...raman kumar se. .shayar kumar bangaya tha. . 😳

Ab raman ko do do baby ko sambhal na pade ga...
Waiting for the next part

Continue soon ..


Edited by asma18 - 10 years ago

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