NeiRa story- His first friend :)[COMPLETED] - Page 10

Originally posted by: imagine43

This was indeed a beautiful story of friendship and love, Each given equal importance and described with equal sweetness. I was dying for them to fall in love, and when they did, it was nothing less than a dream.

Your writing is full of innocence, freshness and surprises. It doesnt let the mind wander, while reading and keeps the reader glued to the mood.

Thanks Harini for this warm piece.

Lastly.. Kiss kyun nahi karvaya yaar?

Wow such lovely words :) Thanks a lot for the compliment imagine, it truly means a lot to me !🤗😳 I am so glad you read this and found it good ! Thanks again :)

Haha about the kiss, well just that I didn't want them to feel embarassed after their first kiss, when they realise that they are not alone but are surrounded by their friends and many others. I wanted it to be private, a moment they will cherish forever 😳 probably during their first date or something.. And when I was writing the last part, I thought a hug would be okay considering that it was a theme park., sorry for disappointing you :(

Originally posted by: MansurKhan56

Harini... Just read both the updates... One word... Beautiful...👏

This story was so different... Lovely and cute... loved every bit of it specially Nachi Baba's confession😆

Imagine is right... Kiss kyu nahi kar vaya... ... But Yeah thank you for such a lovely story😳

Thanks Harini for writing such a beautiful story of Nachiket and Ragini from a different angle altogether.

Originally posted by: -harini-

Wow such lovely words :) Thanks a lot for the compliment imagine, it truly means a lot to me !🤗😳 I am so glad you read this and found it good ! Thanks again :)

Haha about the kiss, well just that I didn't want them to feel embarassed after their first kiss, when they realise that they are not alone but are surrounded by their friends and many others. I wanted it to be private, a moment they will cherish forever 😳 probably during their first date or something.. And when I was writing the last part, I thought a hug would be okay considering that it was a theme park., sorry for disappointing you :(

Originally posted by: poetic

Thanks Harini for writing such a beautiful story of Nachiket and Ragini from a different angle altogether.

This was just so sweet and warm and lovely. ❤️

Hope you write another one on NR pretty soon.

Originally posted by: imagine43

I wasn't disappointed..This story is beautiful and complete as is. Its just the greedy me. :D.

Sorry... I'm late...

Beautifulll harini... you are a very good writer... I just loved every part of this story... Thank u sooo much for writing this one... Keep writing more.. .. Lots of love and a biggg huggg... 🤗

Originally posted by: sushmaArshi

Sorry... I'm late...

Beautifulll harini... you are a very good writer... I just loved every part of this story... Thank u sooo much for writing this one... Keep writing more.. .. Lots of love and a biggg huggg... 🤗

Sushma!! Long time :)
And absolutely no problem about the late comment. It means a lot that you took time to read the update and leave a lovely comment behind :) Thankyou so much and I am very happy that you liked this story !:)
Loads of love and a very big hug to you too 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: TEEjaaa

i love neira

We do too 😃
Thanks for reading :)