*(New update Ch12) SaGa Fanfic: Along came love ( page 13)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello everyone!

I have decide to continue on with the fanfic, as some of you guys had asked me to.
The fanfic is a mixture, of angst, fluff, drams, romance. Basically a little bit of everything. I dont know how long it will be yet, but the minimum number of chapters will be 10. it could be a long fanfic too. I am not sure yet.

The title of the fic, is inspired by the movie "Along came Polly", which stars Ben stiller and Jennifer Aniston. Its an aweesome movie, if you are a hopeless romantic, just like me. I was actually watching it the other day, and it gave me the idea for this ff. Its nothing like the movie though.

Some notes before you start reading my awesome fiction:

-I dont own any of the characters, although the story is the artwork of my imagination.
-Anything in italics is the character's thoughts.

-If you read the prologue you kinda know hat the story will look like. If you havent, then I will be nice and post it along with the first chapter.

-Again, I write this every time; but I am not a good writer, so if you dont like the fic, then PLEASE DO TELL ME. You can PM me, and tell me what you didnt like, or you can comment and suggest some stuff.
**But if you do like it, which I hope you do, then PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE comment. You will make me the happiest person on this planet. I love compliments. No just kidding 😆
-But on a serious note leave a comment, and like the post, pretty please 😛

I am sure you are bored with my blabbering so i will just get on with it.

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PROLOGUE


After 5 years the Chaturvedi family would finally be complete. Their 2 sons were coming back and to celebrate their arrival the entire house was being decorated.

The family was overjoyed at the prospect of seeing Pulkit and Sagar. Niranjan had decided to send his two sons abroad 12 years ago, to educate them.

Delectable feast was being prepared in the kitchen and Madhvi in particular was preparing all the food herself. "Madhvi" called Amma ji. "Ji Ammaji?". "Bahu, make sure that the kheer doesn't contain too much sugar, otherwise that girl will create a huge scene ". "Ji Ammaji I will be careful" Madhvi replied with a smile on her face.

She walked towards the kitchen, and as she was walking a voice caused her to stop dead in her tracks. She stood still. She had waited years and years to hear that voice. "Sagar" she said. " Mummy" .Madhvi turned around and saw her son Sagar standing in front of her. Her eyes glistened with tears as she took in his face. He had grown up so much. Memories of Sagar's first steps flashed through her mind. "Mummy" said Sagar. "How are you?" . "Sagar you are here . You don't know, how many years I have waited for this moment". Sagar lovingly hugged his mother.

"Ma" called another voice. Madhvi broke the hug, and saw her older son Pulkit standing behind Sagar. " Oh so all the affection is only reserved for Sagar, nothing for me then? " said Pulkit jokingly. " Aww, come here" Madhvi said, as she pulled him into a endearing hug.

The trio of mother and sons then walked towards the dining area, where Pulkit and Sagar were treated to exquisite food. After the family was done eating, Sagar took his mother to a side and asked " Ma, where is she?" " You are going to have to look very hard. Her anger hasn't boiled down yet" replied Madhvi

In another room, Gangaa was seated on her bed with a stern expression on her face. Remembering those moments filled her with anger and disappointment. She heard a knock on the door and a voice calling her name "Gangaa". She recognized it, in an instant and settled on the decision that she would not open door. She had decided that she would never go back to being the old Gangaa and she wasn't about to let her resolve melt by inviting the owner of the voice into her life again.

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CHAPTER 1
"NIGHTMARES"

The dreams had been haunting her. Every night she would wake up with sweat running down her forehead, and tears threatening to run down her face. This night was no different. She could feel that wretched moment in her sleep, she could feel everything slipping away. A soft moan escaped her lips, and she woke up with a start. Huffing and puffing, she came to the realization that it was just a dream. Thank God. She gathered all her strength, and got up from her bed. The feeling of suffocation was driving her mad, so she opened the window of her room. The night was chilly, and the soft breeze helped her calm down.

She wrapped her arms around herself, and tried hard to concentrate on the view in front of her. It was 4 am, and Ammaji would wake up any minute for her prayer.. To avoid any questions, she decided to get some water and compose herself before she woke up. Gangaa , then headed towards the kitchen. She poured water for herself, and her mind again drifted towards the dream. She wanted to tell someone, to cry, to let it all out but she couldn't. That's not who she was.

Tears started to roll down her cheeks, but Gangaa reminded herself of her Bappas words. "It is the nature of Gangaa to flow" . She could not fall weak, specially now that he was back. It had been 6 months since Sagar and Pulkit arrived. Gangaa had yet to talk to Sagar properly. Her mind and the egotistic part of her wouldn't permit her to forget everything easily. She remembered the day Sagar had arrived. He had grown up so much in 5 years. For a few moments she had forgotten everything. She had lowered her defences once more. No Gangaa, you cannot do this. Its wrong, she thought to herself.

She was drawn out of her trance as she heard clatter of feet. Startled she put the glass down, and proceeded towards her room. When she reached her room, she saw Ammaji had already woken up. Damn it. Now she is going to ask me questions. What excuse am I supposed to give her if she asks me why am I awake at this time?. "Did the sun rise in the west today?" Ammaji whispered to herself. Gangaa busied herself with making her bed, so she would not have to face Ammaji's queries. Just as she started to relax, Ammaji posed the question "Why are you awake at this time, and why weren't you in the room when I woke up? Where did you go?

Gangaa stood there, speechless. She didn't know what to say, and she hated lying. But this time she had no choice. She could not tell anyone what was going on in her life. "Uhh... Umm.. Ammaji, I was feeling thirsty so I went to the kitchen to get water" Gangaa quickly lied. " Why would you go to the kitchen when there is water in the jug" Ammaji asked. " Uhh... " before Gangaa could say anything, Sagar entered the room. Saved by the bell , more like saved by Sagar.


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Sorry if it was really bad, but i tried my best. I love Saga too much, so i keep on writing even if i suck. I will try that the story gets better, and so does my writing.


If you liked then click the like button (literally takes 1 second) please please comment, or leave me a message. I swear it will make my day. 😛 If you want me to continue then do let me know please.

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Chapter index

Prologue- page 1

Chapter 1- page 1

Chapter 2 -page 1

Chapter 3 -page 2

Chapter 4- page 4

Chapter 5- page 5

Chapter 6- page 6

Chapter 7- page 6

Chapter 8- Page 7

Chapter 9- Page 7

Chapter 10 - Page 9

Chapter 11- page 11

Chapter 12-page 13




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Posted: 9 years ago
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Finally a ff on saga...and what an interesting one at that...lovely work...waiting for next update now...am curious to know what had happened 5 yrs back to make ganga angry and keep flowing...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

Finally a ff on saga...and what an interesting one at that...lovely work...waiting for next update now...am curious to know what had happened 5 yrs back to make ganga angry and keep flowing...


Thank you so much for this lovely comment. Really appreciate it! Ahah even I don't know yet what happened 5 years ago, 😆but I will think of something interesting.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful dear
Nice update
Pls cont soonish :) :) :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Misnomer

Beautiful dear

Nice update
Pls cont soonish :) :) :)


Thank you so much😛
Aha and yes I will be posting another update tomorrow! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys I am back with another update! I know I am fast. Kidding, I actually had a little help from a friend of mine who helped me edit this chapter. Hence the very fast update. Guys let me know if you like it, and if you want me to continue. I am not sure if am writing good, and if people are liking it, or even reading it. So if you read it and like it, then leave a like or comment. If you dont then still leave a comment telling me what I should fix. 😛 Thanks Navu for helping me out <3

Alright as for the chapter, here it is :

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CHAPTER 2

Sagar is surprised to see Ammaji and Gangaa awake. " Sagar, what are you doing here. Aren't you supposed to be sleeping?" Ammaji asks him. " I can ask you the same thing too" Sagar replies. Sagar tries to catch Gangaa's eye, however she goes to the ink temple in the room and lights the lamp for Ammaji's morning prayer. " We are widows Sagar, what will we do by sleeping until late hours?" Ammaji explain to him. However, Sagar was busy watching Gangaa. He tried to go up to her to talk, but she left the room.


He ran after her, and caught up to her. He stops her by blocking her way, and pulls her close to himself. Gangaa tries to escape from his grip, but her futile attempt only resulted in him pushing her even closer to himself. " I know that you are still very angry,and upset. I also know that I have hurt you a lot, but I am here because I want to set everything right" he said in a firm voice. Gangaa struggled against him, and the more she tried, the more his grip tightened around her waist. " Gangaa stop. I want to talk to you, and today I will not let you leave unless and until you hear me out". Gangaa could tell Sagar was very serious, however she wouldn't back down either.


If he decided on talking to her, she also had her mind set on ignoring him. " Madhvi Ma" Gangaa said in an effort to distract him.. In an instant Sagar let her go, but before he could realize it was just a diversion, Gangaa had vanished from his line of sight. I will talk to you Gangaa, no matter what. Try as hard as you want, but you will not be able to ignore me any longer.

A distraught Gangaa was walking towards the balcony of the house. Gangaa you cannot do this to yourself. You have to control your emotions. You are not the same Gangaa anymore. You cannot do this to him either.

Later that morning , the preparations began for Yash's wedding, who was Sagar and Pulkit's cousin. The wedding was to be held with pomp and show, and everyone as busy with the preparations. Sagar and Pulkit had taken it upon themselves to prepare for all the functions. Sagar was yelling at someone on the phone which caught the attention of everyone. "Sagar what happened?" Pulkit asked worriedly. " Nothing bhaiya, it's the stupid caterer". Sagar replied with a hint of agitation in his voice.

Just then, Gangaa entered the house with a friend of hers. "Gangaa where did you go so early in the morning, without informing anyone?" Madhvi asked. "Madhvi Ma, I had gone to meet my friend Supriya here" Gangaa said as she introduced the girl next to her to the family. "Namaste" Supriya greeted. "Madhvi Ma, is it ok if Supriya also attends all the functions of Yash's wedding as well?" Gangaa asked hoping Madhvi would say yes. " Dear, you don't need to ask me, she can stay here as long as she wants" Madhvi happily obliged to Gangaa's request.

Pulkit could not take his eyes off Supriya. I have never seen such a beautiful yet simple woman in my entire life. Gangaa noticed this and an idea hit her. "Pulkit bhaiya, why don't you show Supriya around the house?" Gangaa asked him with a goofy grin plastered on her face. "uhh.. What... what did you say Gangaa?"

"I said.. Can you show Supriya around the house. I would have given her the grand tour, but I have some work that I need to do" she cleverly lied. "uhh... umm (throat clears). Yea sure" Pulkit replied nervously. He was so nervous that his palms started sweating. "Umm.. Shall we go" he asked Supriya awkardly. She nodded. Gangaa watched them with a mischievous smile. However as soon as she saw Sagar her smile vanished, and it was replaced by a stone cold look.

Before Sagar could even catch her eye, she left. Gangaa I promise you, I will make everything right. I know you wont believe me, but soon I will.

The storm of emotions that was growing inside of Sagar had reached its apex. He had to do something.

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I know you guys are all wondering what in the world is going on! Secrets, secrets, and secrets. So keep reading to find out what these secrets are. Ciao!

P.S- All suggestions, comments, criticism is welcome with wide open arms. If you want to throw tomatoes at me, I am ready! 🤗And don't forget to comment and leave a like 😊


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely
I cannt wait anymore 🤪
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update...
Read both chaps on one go...
Firstly about Chap 1...
Ganga was crying...guessing why so... Eagerly waiting when the suspense will open...
And Sagar the saviour... 😳
I am happy that in your ff too he doesn't miss any chance to save Ganga 😆
Chap 2...
Yash 's wedding...🤣
Seems he is decent at least in your ff... 😊 😃
Pusu was really cute...
Mads was really good... 😃
And Sagar holding ganga... And she ignoring him... 😳
Damn good... 😳
...
The story is going really well...
Eager to read the next part..
Do continue... 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Out of the topic...
Mihika is it you...???
Are you here...
Remember me...
Your beti from K khandaan...
Really happy to see you over here... 😳 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: wayback

Lovely update...
Read both chaps on one go...
Firstly about Chap 1...
Ganga was crying...guessing why so... Eagerly waiting when the suspense will open...
And Sagar the saviour... 😳
I am happy that in your ff too he doesn't miss any chance to save Ganga 😆
Chap 2...
Yash 's wedding...🤣
Seems he is decent at least in your ff... 😊 😃
Pusu was really cute...
Mads was really good... 😃
And Sagar holding ganga... And she ignoring him... 😳
Damn good... 😳
...
The story is going really well...
Eager to read the next part..
Do continue... 😳


Thank you so much! Yea Yash is getting married. I don't want any villains in my SaGa world.I just want them. I will be posting another update soon! And thanks again 😊

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