what is the fault in this????

my humble request to you that describe weak, senseless, boring points about stories given below :


1.Ek hassin safar...
2.One more playfull kiss..
3.An hour throughout with nauc...
4.Omg shot... (no stories allowed)

5.Nisha kya sachmuch main ek ladki hai!!!!!..


.Give suggestions to improve it, if you have find...

Spruha your stories are awesome but please described further more because short one feels like incomplete


Please update nisha kya sachmuch mai ladki hai soon 😃

5... nisha kya sach much larki hai

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Spruha your stories are awesome but please described further more because short one feels like incomplete


Please update nisha kya sachmuch mai ladki hai soon 😃

I will try to update soon... thanks...

Originally posted by: Zamiahurain002

5... nisha kya sach much larki hai

will try to update soon... thanks...

Hi dear

Originally posted by: mishrialways

Hi dear

I would suggest ki thoda aur describe karo cheezo ko

and prologue ho sake toh diya karo taki readers ko story kaisi hogi idea ho

Waiting for update of playfull kiss and nisha kya sach muuch mein ladki hai

okkk... I will keep in mind... thanks for your opinion...
will try to update..

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Aap ki story Thoda descriptive hona chahiye😊

And plzz update Onemore playfull kiss.. And Nishakya sachmuch main ek ladki hai

<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" size="2">Waiting for your updates...</font>

<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" size="2">Sorry for late reply😳</font>

thanks... for your opinion... no need to sorry... and will try to update...