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Spruha1

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Posted: 9 years ago

my humble request to you that describe weak, senseless, boring points about stories given below :

1.Ek hassin safar...
2.One more playfull kiss..
3.An hour throughout with nauc...
4.Omg shot... (no stories allowed)

5.Nisha kya sachmuch main ek ladki hai!!!!!..

.Give suggestions to improve it, if you have find...

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sujay kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

Spruha your stories are awesome but please described further more because short one feels like incomplete

Please update nisha kya sachmuch mai ladki hai soon 😃

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neha_zamia500

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Posted: 9 years ago

5... nisha kya sach much larki hai

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Spruha1

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sujoyricky
Spruha your stories are awesome but please described further more because short one feels like incomplete

Please update nisha kya sachmuch mai ladki hai soon 😃

I will try to update soon... thanks...

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Spruha1

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Zamiahurain002
5... nisha kya sach much larki hai

will try to update soon... thanks...

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mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi dear

I would suggest ki thoda aur describe karo cheezo ko

and prologue ho sake toh diya karo taki readers ko story kaisi hogi idea ho

Waiting for update of playfull kiss and nisha kya sach muuch mein ladki hai

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Spruha1

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mishrialways
Hi dear
I would suggest ki thoda aur describe karo cheezo ko
and prologue ho sake toh diya karo taki readers ko story kaisi hogi idea ho

Waiting for update of playfull kiss and nisha kya sach muuch mein ladki hai

okkk... I will keep in mind... thanks for your opinion...
will try to update..

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Anmol

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Posted: 9 years ago

Aap ki story Thoda descriptive hona chahiye 😊

And plzz update One more playfull kiss.. And Nisha kya sachmuch main ek ladki hai

Waiting for your updates...

Sorry for late reply 😳

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Spruha1

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Anmol333
Aap ki story Thoda descriptive hona chahiye😊
And plzz update Onemore playfull kiss.. And Nishakya sachmuch main ek ladki hai
<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" size="2">Waiting for your updates...</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" size="2">Sorry for late reply😳</font>

thanks... for your opinion... no need to sorry... and will try to update...

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