MANEET FF - AGAR TUM SAATH HO (CHAP 10 - PG 67)(27/06) - Page 30

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rice

read all the parts in one go, superb story and your style is simply fabulous. Please no MU between them. Let them discover their love in cutest way. please update soon!!!!!!! waiting...waiting...waiting



Thanks a lot ..!! Means a lot 😳 Will let them discover their love ☺️

Updating soon 😃
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Hey guys, I am back again. For once I have kept my promise and here I am back with my update. Not sure if I have done justice with their conversation so just heated up the update. So kids kindly stay away though I have made it readable. I can't write crude and make it not so pleasurable readers. Excuse me for that. So all I want is your lovely comments and this time more of them 😳. Hope you guys wouldn't disappoint me. After this update there is going to be romance, insecurities and many more. Even pregnancy coming up and some tragedy as well. It's all in your hands. Here we go with the update

Will be sending out PMs soon 😃

Chapter 9

She stared in to his eyes which spoke nothing but the truth. Much to her surprise the eyes had a very unique shine. What was it she thought? Something that she hasn't seen since the time she knew him. It expressed thousands of emotions yet the kind of emotion that spilled today was chilling. The more she looked at it the more she felt like drowning. She composed her drumming heart and turned herself showing her back to him. He was happy the last couple of minutes when he felt her lost in him and now she was back to square one. A sudden fear ran through his body. A nervous Maan placed his hand on her shoulders and felt her body shiver feverish. He got up from his place and stood before her only to find tears running down her rosy cheeks scaring him more. He kneeled before her and locked his hands with hers till he felt her relaxing in his hold. He made her sip water and sat down near her expecting her to open up when she threw her entire body weight over him and cuddled to his chest crying harder. He ran his hands over her long wavy tresses and shushed her which once again helped her.

"Maan.. Maan" she called out his name sobbing as wiped her face and cupped them.

"Shhh.. We will talk later for now relax and it really pains to see you cry" he said as soft and loving as he could.

"No Maan. Let me please. When we said yes to one another I wasn't sure what was ahead of me. But somewhere I knew my trust on the god above would never let me down. And then on our first night"

And her cheeks flushed when she recalled their first conversation which made him smile

"All you wanted was time and even I felt the urge to learn more about you so was indeed happy but somewhere I was disappointed. Knowingly or unknowingly things that kept happening between us drew me closer to you that made me realize the kind of space you are giving. Then came the night you came home sloshed and many things happened that night"

She felt a lump formed in her throat which she quickly swallowed with another sip of water and continued while he felt something amiss in her words

"Later on that night when you said please make me yours I lost to you completely. I belonged to you entirely. In every sense I was yours since then. I do not know when did I start realizing but I did start loving you not knowing when will I be at the receiving end"

She couldn't continue any further while he flashed one of his best ever smile which heated his cheeks and she cuddled more to his chest.

He moved her soon and stared at her fearing the impossible

"Geet as much as you relieved me please tell me the truth. Don't keep me in the dark. Every sense yours which means did we you know.. I mean did I almost Ra.."

When she closed his mouth with her palm and closed her eyes letting those tears flow down her face. He hated himself for pushing her to the edge and he wanted to punish himself for putting her through all the torture. He knew mere apology wasn't enough. How was he going to make it up? Like she understood what he was going through, she offered him water from the same glass and ran her fingers through his curly hair and said

"I never reminded you to feel bad. Agree it should have been a special moment but whatever happened, happened for the good. It was then you said please make me yours. I lost myself to that innocence of yours Maan. Never ever feel bad. I really love you Maan. I really do. Let's forget whatever happened and start afresh. Just me and you. There will be no place for Sameera or any third person. The more you wilt in guilt the more it is going to kill me. I want a happy future. A happy family for us. Hang in there for us. It is not going to be possible with me all alone. Will you promise me?"

"You know you are my angel. An angel which your god has sent just for me. I wouldn't part or share you with anyone. I am not sure if I can forgive myself for this but will try for you. I promise. I love you Geet. Do you" said Maan with his eyes welled up.

She wiped those tears that were about run down his face and spoke between her tears

"I have always and will always love you Maan"

Suddenly he felt time pause around him. He for once forgot all his guilt and melted in her doe shaped orbs which emitted nothing but love. He silently promised himself that he would not let any danger reach her. He would cherish her like never before. He cupped her face once again and she felt his lips press over hers for the first time. Blissful like it felt and her hands held his neck for support and her thumb caressing his cheeks. He for sure wanted it to be a gently press on her lips. All of a sudden new emotions surged through both their bodies. He nibbled sucked bit her lips and she was no less. Her tongue and lips created a havoc over his lips and demanded an entry in to his mouth. Both moaned and spelt "I LOVE YOU" once again. She yanked his hair while his hands got busy exploring her exposed back. They parted for breath but soon he dropped kisses all over her face and dipped further in to her neck and assaulted her nape making her moan his name and loud clear. Desire to feel one another kept increasing and he soon unzipped her kurti down and stared at her with an urge to make her his all over again. He was completely bowled when her hands roamed over his chest trying to unbutton his chest. Her semi bare body looked so delectable. She looked like a seductress without doing anything. Her innocence was creating a havoc to his senses. He gazed at her heaving chest and graced his fingertips gently over her chest. She flinched not in disgust but in pleasure. He withdrew his hand to see her reaction only when she pulled his hands towards her blushing. He chuckled silently and pushed her slowly pinning her to bed. The piece of clothing that covered her chest was off in the next few minutes. His stubble that pricked her chest as he played with her mounds aroused her. She dropped wet sloppy kisses on his shoulder and held on to him like she would melt any second. He once again captured her lips when she felt the sudden urge to feel him closer. He let her do whatever she wanted to. She ripped the clip of his belt and unzipped his trouser. She felt his arousal throbbing on her lower abdomen. His kisses weren't doing any good to her when she felt him once again drawing patterns over her hardened nipples making her arch and stick closer to him. Like it was the next thing to do he freed her off her pyjama and stroked her thighs. He dropped kisses all over her body while she cursed him for making it so sinfully pleasurable. He once again shushed her mouth that almost cursed him with his lips and removed the barrier that separated the two of them and entered in to her. He still couldn't remember that night for which he would curse himself but the way he fit inside her like a perfect jigsaw thrilled him. She was the master today and he let her take control. It was a while after he came out panting for breath and hugged her once again saying how much he loved her. He opened his mouth to apologize but received a hard punch on his stomach. He kissed her forehead in return and thanked her for being there with him after all this.


To be continued ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful and a very romantic update!!
Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg sooo emotional sooo romantic.. Finally all MU's gone just Maaneet left.. Omg
I hope sam is not planning a big revenge.. Superb yaar.. Cont soon hun
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous update. They sorted out everything and confessed their love. very well written.👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful updates
They confessed the feelings

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Posted: 9 years ago
superb hot update didnt expect it maan is super fast fallen for geet deeply its good that she told him about that night now there is no secret between them both confessed their heart out lovely update thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update
Maaneet confess their love

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey di you amazed me wid this update aur sabse acha laga jab geet confessed to maan abt tht night aur di maan felt guilty but was glad ke geet did not let him feel tht way as she let him know ke tht was the most beautiful night aur moment for both of them as they loved each other tht night aur di abhi they confessed there love for each other aur made love ek baar phir wid the beautiful confession of this beautiful feeling called love 😳 eagerly waiting to read the next update now di 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Lovely maaneet moment
Waiting for next update

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