Though I am too much late to read both of the OS, and to even more to wish the birthday girl her belated happy birthday,š still I wish my whole hearted happy birthday (very belated) to Deepu di...š
Coming to the Os-es...
Shagun's os:
Your imagination power is very strong Shagun, and this this the first criteria of writing a science-fiction when you have the knowledge and ability to marge a little bit of scientific logics with that. š As always, the way you have described the gradual process of time traveling, is perfect!āļøš
What to say about the story. It was like a dream to me also. When I visit any of the historical monuments, my heart wants to witness that particular era in own eyes that the monument had been witnessing for eras after eras... And when our Jodha and Akbar is related with it, the wish increases 4 times.š³Time travel is the most awesome and adventurous journey among all journeys. God knows when the time machine will come out from the science fictions to the real world.š
If you have really dreamt this, I can imagine it was the best dream you had.šš³
Thank u for sending link...š
Swara's os:
It was an amazing lovestory swara, like a fairytale.š³your beautiful touch of literature has made this even more beautiful. The story reminded me the story of 'As u like it', if you are inspired from that then I will applaud you for this wonderful interpretation of it on the plot of Indian History, and if this is your own imagination then hats off!!!ššš
Jalal is perfect as always as an honest lover; Sukanya is sweetie; but Jodha stole the whole story... And Badal gave sixer to even Jodha, with his wit and smartness...š³
Your style of writing is too good..š³
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