my first (Chakor-Aditya)chatya os:love or friendship? -creationschhavi

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hello friens...,i am creationschhavi😳
making this topic from my friend account here...
so hope u will like my os(its for all udaan fans and its my first os...so pls...give feedback if u really like it)

ChAtya OS:love or friendship?

Chakor and aditya are in a park Actually they are having a mini party in park

They are sitting on the grass having fun together

Chakor:aditya hume bohot tej bhook lag rahi hai She says by placing her hands on her stomach Aditya:bolo phir kya khaogi daal chawal ya aur kuchh Chakor :ee ...aur kachu nahin mila lane ko tumhe

Aditya smiles and says :achchha hume to laga tumhe ye bohot pasand ayega

Chakor:uffo...bijli dabba ...tu apni dost ko ee khilayega party mein Adi:haan ...kyon ii me koi problem hai ka

Chakor :problem...to. .. She was about to say suddenly adi makes her eat burger bite...

Chakor hits adi ... chakor sees him intensely... And then smiles mmm...bohot tasty hai..maja aa gava ...

Adi tumne humko jhoot bola dal chawal ke...adi makes her eat next bite of burger cutting her talk in btw he continues saying...

hum tuko... Surprise dena chavat the...samjhi buddhu...

Chakor :hum...sab..sama... He again cuts her talk in btw and makes her eat next bite of burger Chakor sees him intensely even more this time... He completes her byte ...this time she doesnt say anything and comes closer towards burger herself and then adi says:chakoriya e tu... Then chakor makes him eat burger byte...

Ab bolo kaisa laga ...burger... Adi..sees her intensedly he finishes his bite and then both give intensed looks to each other and then starts laughing... Adi stands up and runs towards the tree

Adi:himmat hai to pakad ke dikhaao

Chakor runs behind him.. And takes round of trees right left with him to catch him...then finally adi gets caught by chakor

Chakor:pakad liya... Pakad liya Aditya smiles seeing her happily jumping... He stops her from jumping and hugs her

Chakor:adi ...tum...e

Adi:hum tumko bohot miss karenge chakor...

Humko ragini se shaadi nahin karni

Chakor:par adi wo tumse bohot pyaar karat hai Tum uske saath bahut khush rahoge He starts going and chakor holds his hand...

Chakor:kyon nahin karni shaadi...aakhir usme kami kya hai. ..

adi:usme koi kami nahin hai par ... Chakor:to phir ...kya problem hai Adi :problem ye hai ki hum oo ragini se nahin...he holds her shoulders and says tumse pyaar karat hain chakoriya

...

chakor gets shocked

Chakor:kya..?

Chakor gets lost after listening to his words...

aditya try to change his mood and plays chutki in front of chakor

Aditya :he... Chakor comes in her senses haan... Adi:kya hua ...sach maan baithi naa...hum to tu ko buddhu banavat rahe aur tu ban bhi gayi He tries to hide his feelings from her

Adi:Humari dosti ko kisi ki bhi nazar nahin lagegi kabhi.. .pyaar ki bhi nahin chakor..

Chakor:sachchi na ...tum sach kah rahe ho naa... Aditya says muchchi and croses his finders behind as he knows its a lie ...

Chakor hugs adi tightly Chakor:tumne to humko dara hi diya tha adi Ek pal ke liye to humko aisa laga ki humne apne bijli dabba ko kho hi diya. ...

Chakor says chalo ab chalte hain 5 bajne wale hain

Adi:ek min chakor.. .ruko Aaj is tree ped par hum apni dosti ke akshar likhenge ye kahani na kabhi khatam hui thi... Chakor:aur ..naa kabhi hoegi... Adi:correct

Aditya writes chakor name on the tree and with on the same tree chakor writes aditya name with her...

Both hifi ... And remember all their friendship moments

Janam janam song plays in back ground

and both stares each other with full of love in their eyes ...😊❤️


(aditya is saying in chakor language only(he tries to )...as he loves her gaaon ki language...u know naa...😆)even in 18 feb 2016 after leap when they meet adi taked in her language...😉⭐️

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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice read ..
yep aditya will hide his true feelings
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks a lot for liking and commenting ...here...@sneha ,@smiles...⭐️
its my first os ever and i am glad u liked my os...😳😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I luved ur os. N u know wat i luved d scene between chakor n aadi. Spcly wen aadi was trying to mimic chakor's accent. That was too funny spcly d way he said deee deee tumra dimag to nahi phir gaya h and also tum apna shaaping kara. Lol.
So i luved that part in d os as well. I want aadi n chakor to talk like that for a couple of scenes so that we get sum light moments to watch.
N plz its a request wenever u write any os between aadi n chakor den give sum bhojpuri dialigues to aadi d way u av given.

Ps. I should nt say this on this particular topic bt sum of d ppl on this forum av a problem wid varun i mean wid his acting.
To be honest i feel all of dem r pretty good n varun is definitely doing a good job.
So i wonder is it only me who finds varun good or others r more into shipping d other pairs so they don't want to give aaditya/varun his due credit. I mean a reporter is nt sumone we look down upon. D media is above d stars n politicians bt here aadi's being a reporter has become a bashing pt.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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aditya as a kid had the potential to become someone big .. like his dad ishwar
so seeing him as a reporter seems like a let down to his character..
maybe in future episode we will see more of his talents ..

VJ got more supporters in this forum ... so they focusing more on suraj ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: smiles_uk

aditya as a kid had the potential to become someone big .. like his dad ishwar

so seeing him as a reporter seems like a let down to his character..
maybe in future episode we will see more of his talents ..

VJ got more supporters in this forum ... so they focusing more on suraj ..

Yaa i do understand that bt aadi becoming a reporter makes more sense to me.
A. Because despite of his father's big reputation n name he was killed.
B. Being a reporter will help him reveal kamalnarayan's deeds.

Bt my main qstn wasn't jst abt aadi being a reporter. I m surprised d way varun has been criticized for his acting.
Varun is nt my fav actor i started following him bcoz of anupriya my fav actress n initially i did nt like him bt in udaan he is doing a gud job. Bt all i get to hear over here is he is a side kick n a supporting actor. He is just ok. Blah blah. N that's y i really want to know is it only me who finds varun gud.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: snehaHCAPK

i agree with u totally sneha ...in bhagyalakshmi...i watched a bit of it...he was ok types...but here he is too good specially when he speak chakoriya language ...he is too cute as aditya ...he is doing his best ...and me too not liking it that people say him as a side kick or he is not a good actor etc ...first of all i think aditya and suraj are main lead adi will be paired opposite chakor as per the article says he will stand by her right so i think it chatya and then suraj also a negative hero so he will be paired with imli who already love him...but suraj is faking love for her to let her work for him...and he is attracted to smart chakor ...i want chatya friwndship to turn into love as someone has said ...pyaar dosti hai ...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: snehaHCAPK

Yaa i do understand that bt aadi becoming a reporter makes more sense to me.
A. Because despite of his father's big reputation n name he was killed.
B. Being a reporter will help him reveal kamalnarayan's deeds.

Bt my main qstn wasn't jst abt aadi being a reporter. I m surprised d way varun has been criticized for his acting.
Varun is nt my fav actor i started following him bcoz of anupriya my fav actress n initially i did nt like him bt in udaan he is doing a gud job. Bt all i get to hear over here is he is a side kick n a supporting actor. He is just ok. Blah blah. N that's y i really want to know is it only me who finds varun gud.


i only no VJ from shastri sisters .. i dont no the other actors or which dramas they appeared in ... but i like varun .. i think hes doing fine job as aditya ... i enjoy his scenes with chakor .. just give it time ... ppl are hyper about VJ at moment ... once others start coming more into the seriel mayb there views will change ...

imli .. i cant get used to her new appearance ..lol
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: snehaHCAPK

I luved ur os. N u know wat i luved d scene between chakor n aadi. Spcly wen aadi was trying to mimic chakor's accent. That was too funny spcly d way he said deee deee tumra dimag to nahi phir gaya h and also tum apna shaaping kara. Lol.
So i luved that part in d os as well. I want aadi n chakor to talk like that for a couple of scenes so that we get sum light moments to watch.
N plz its a request wenever u write any os between aadi n chakor den give sum bhojpuri dialigues to aadi d way u av given.

Ps. I should nt say this on this particular topic bt sum of d ppl on this forum av a problem wid varun i mean wid his acting.
To be honest i feel all of dem r pretty good n varun is definitely doing a good job.
So i wonder is it only me who finds varun good or others r more into shipping d other pairs so they don't want to give aaditya/varun his due credit. I mean a reporter is nt sumone we look down upon. D media is above d stars n politicians bt here aadi's being a reporter has become a bashing pt.

thx dear...me too love that chatya scene alot specially chatya baraf ka gola scene their hifi their hug too cute and lovely ...varun and meera acted best in it ... and dear i will try to meet up to ur expectations next time...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys one more thing who owns that aaditya chakor fanpage on fb.
D creations n d vms are beautiful. Can i use those creations in my siggi. Plz tell me who that person is i will request her. I m asking here bcoz i m new to this forum.

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