Sequences.. SwaRon VruShan two shot series

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Aneesha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Finally you updated. Loved this part.

Thanks for the pm

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Shreya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Firstly thank you so much for updating.I was awaiting a PM from you and finally the wait is over. :) This was so well written!.. The beginning parts reminded me of Ranbir and Deepika in Tamasha.! However picturizing this on Swaron was a bliss.

There is freshness in the characters and I'm loving the crackling chemistry created between the two strangers already!(Okay more than just strangers!)

I can't wait to read ahead..Wish you wouldn't have stopped.

That hug...in all other cases it would have seemed a little weird as they had met for the first time just a few hours back but I could connect it very well here ,the strong attraction between them could be felt to that extent. No words were needed,both knew they wanted to spend that time together, and well the place being Paris is like a cherry on top.

Please please post next part soon!

And ya, maybe a little before time I'm saying this but wish you a happy new year!..This update was a pleasant surprise on the last day of 2015.Love your work! Keep it up!

Love,

Shreya