KUCH BATEEIN ANKAHEEN chapter 12 pg 17 updated 26.4.16 AGAIN! - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Nice update.. Army of cupids!!👏😊
Too much suspense! 😕
What happened between MaNan?😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi dears..

So here comes the suspense revelation of Manan's separation. I wanted to get it over and done so that I could start with the cupids. I'm sorry that I can't reply to all your messages because my exams are near and my mom's gonna kill me if she finds out that I'm doing this. Kya kare main nahin sudhroongi. Sigh.

Anyways thank you so much for your support and leave your comments

Enjoy...

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CHAPTER 6


Days passed in a blur. Manik and Nandini never met after their chance encounter at the hospital.Manik was getting restless day by day. His heart couldn't tolerate that fact that she was so close to him and yet so far. Nandini's condition wasn't any different. It was now a routine for her to cry herself to sleep. Navya and Arohi were trying their level best to cheer her up. Navya had come to meet nandini as soon as she heard about her return. After giving Nandini an earful she had finally given in to her best friend's puppy dog eyes. Navya filled her on everything she had missed in the past few years - Dhruv& Aliya, Alya's pregnancy, herself and Cabir, her son Ayush, Mukthi and her NGO works...she purposefuly left Manik out of it.

It was four days since Nandini's return. At night Arohi yet again heard her muffled sobs. All these days she had pretended not to hear giving her her privacy but she couldn't take it anymore.

"Di?" she asked in a soft voice.

Nandini quickly wiped her tears and replied in a strangled voice. "Hmmm?"

"Aap teeek ho?"

" Haan haan main teek hoon. Bas kisi ki yaad aa rahi thi" Nandini said not meeting her eyes.

"Di, Maa kehthi hain ki dukh baantne se woh kam ho jaata hain. Aap meri behen ho na. behenein toh aapne saari dukh dard aur secrets ek dusre se share karthe hain. Aap bhi apni problems mere saath share kar sakthi hain. Agar aap mujhe apni behen maanthi hain toh." Arohi said knowing very well that she had hit a soft spot.

Nandini felt guilty. She didn't want to hurt her. In the past few she had come to mean a lot to her. " kaisi baatein kar rahi hain tu. Ofcourse you are my sister."

" toh phir bataayiye na"

Nandini felt herself getting emotionaly blackmailed into saying things that she had kept bottled up inside her. She gave a deep sigh. Arohi's determined eyes told her that there was no way of this. So, woh bataane lagi, her love story of how the firefly fell in love with the star. Arohi already knew most of it from her diary. She made a mental note of everything she had missed.

Nandini felt herself in a trance. She was reliving her past, all her inhibitions flew out of the window when all the emotions began clouding her brain.

"Phir woh din aaya..." she stopped abruptly. Arohi was all ears, she gently nudged her to continue.

Nandini closed her eyes. All the events of that dreadful day began flashing through her mind.

5 years back

12th November

Mumbai

Aiyappa! This guy will be the death of me. Arae maafi maagne ka yeh bhi koi thareeka hain? He actually kidnapped me for crying out loud. Isse toh main aaj chodungi nahin.' Nandini thought puffing up her face and glaring at Manik. Not that she wasn't finding his antics cute, but she'd rather die than accept it.

Manik gave her his signature smirk that would make any girl's heart melt. Nandu...aaj toh main tumhe manaker hi rahunga. Let's see how long you can resist my charms' he thought.

Nandini heard a music playing somewhere nearby. Before she could make out what was going on she felt herself being pulled into his arms. She glared at him and pushed him away only to be twirled back into his arms. She felt his divine voice fill her senses.

Tu ne duayen suni...

Dil ki sada yeh suni...

Tujh se mein mangu aur kya...

Tujh bin adhura hoon mein...

Tere sang pura hoon mein'...

kartha hoon tera shukriyaa..

Nandini felt herself drown in his eyes. He was holding her close with his hands around her waist and hers on his shoulders...

Kaise kahooon...kaise kahoon..

Kaise kahoon lamhe mujhe choo rahe hain.

Eisa lage hain inme tera hi toh ehsaas hain

Kaise kahoon dil mein nayi aahateenn hain

Aisa laga hain inmein tera hi toh ehsas hain

Manik and nandi stood swaying with the song, all the steps forgotten. They were in their own little heaven. All purposes lost...

Tum mile toh mere dil gaya

Tum mile toh sab kuch mil gaya

Tum mile toh logon se kya vaastha...

Tum mile..toh jaadu chaa gaya...

Tum mile toh jeen aagaya...

Tum mile...toh maine paya hain khuda...

Nandini felt her heart beat faster. She let go a shuddering breath she had no idea that she was holding. Manik was totally lost in her. His hands tightened around her waist. Nandini's hands slowly wrapped itself around his neck. She closed her eyes when she felt him leaning towards her. Everything was perfect at that moment but...

Nandini felt him lean on her a bit too much. Before she could understand what was going on, Manik fell unconscious. He was also running a high fever. Nandini tried desperately to wake him up fighting her tears and her building hysteria. She somehow pulled herself up and managed to get him to the hospital.

The rest of fab 5 soon arrived. Everyone were worried sick. Nandini was desperately praying to her Aiyappa, tears flowing down her cheeks endlessly.Just then the doctor came.

"Dekhiye. Manik's condition kafi critical hain. The infection from his wound has spread to his brain. As fast as possible you have to take him to a better hospital."

" But this the best hospital in Mumbai where else are we supposed to take him?" cabir asked worried.

" Dr. Sinha, who is an expert neurologist is working at hearbeat hospital at Delhi. You've to take him there within the next 6 hrs. we can hold him up till then"

Everyone were worried. How were they supposed to take manik to delhi in such a short time? Cabir had asked Nyonica for help but she had rudely cut the call saying that she had an important meeting.

Nandini couldn't take it anymore. She promised herself that she would never let anything happen to him. chahe mujhe kuch bhi karna pade.' She left the hospital with fierce determination in her eyes.

Few minutes later she found herself barging into Nyonica's chamber. Nyonica glared at her irritated at her interruption.

" Excuse me. I'm a bit busy right now" she said in a frosty polite voice. She said pointing to a person with whom she was discussing about a contract.

Nandini sneered at her. "Yeah I'm sure it's more important than your son's life"

Nyonica didn't want her potential client to get a bad impression of her.so she faked concern and excused herself to talk with nandini.

"How dare you insult me like that ?!" Nyonica burst at her once they were alone.

"aapse fight karne keliye mere pas wakth nahi hain." Nandini said. " you've to help manik. He is at the hospital. He is dying" nandini's voice broke at the end.

Nyonica watched her with her cold calculating eyes. " And why should I do that?"

" because he is your SON" nandini spat in disgust.

"hmm...not good enough." Nyonika said with a sneer. Nandini couldn't believe someone could be so cold and heartless. She was becoming more and more desperate with every passing second.

" pls...please. I'll do anything. Pls just get him to Delhi. Please main kuch bhi karne keliye taiyyar hoon." She said breaking down completely.

"Now that's what I call a deal" Nyonica said smirking evily.

Nyonica had then made her promise that she would leave Manik forever in exchange for his life. She even made arrangments to get her to London. She warned her that if she ever try to get back together with Manik, she had her own ways to stop her. Nyonica wanted Nandini out of his life. She knew that if Nandini left manik would be broken and easier to control.

Nandini felt numb. Destiny had twisted her fate up cruelly. Only thing that kept her going was that Manik was safe.

Pyaar bhi kitni ajeeb cheez hain. Jithna hum uss se dur bhago utna woh pas aajatha hain. Lekin jab pas aana chaho toh duriyaan bada dethi hain.

...

Arohi's eyes were filled with tears when she heard her story. That night Arohi took a decision she was going to bring back manan together no matter what. Next morning after a relentless search she found out the phone no of Malhothra mansion.

Arohi was fiercly loyal and protective of her loved ones. So she took a bold step praying to her ramji.

She dialed the number and heard the bell ringing, her nervousness increasing with every passing second.

" Hello" A female voice answered from the other end.

" Hello. Ji, kya main Mr.Manik Malhothra se baat kar sakthi hoon?" she asked

hai Ramji, yeh main kya kar rahin hoon. Mara pura bharosa aap par hain. Pls koi gadbad mat hone dena' she prayed in her mind.

Ab Ramji kya khel khelne wala hain in sab ke beech... woh toh hum aage dekhenge...

Jab hum kisi cheez ko dil se chaho toh puure kaynath hamain uuse milane ki koshish main lag jathi hain. Toh phir Arohi ke sache dil se maangi dua kaisi adhuri rah sakthi hain?

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Yeah...I copied the last line from om shanthi om. How was it ? do comment guys..

Edited by crystalfairy95 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Emotional update...i hope...k to bring Manik and nandani together fab4 Navya will help arohi...i really wish ...i hope jaldi he sat misunderstanding created by neyonika khatam Ho jaye...plz update next part soon waiting eagerly for next update take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34



hai nice update, as expected Manan ki seperation mein nyonika ka haath hai. ab all cupids ko milne ki waiting hai. waiting for next update



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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Awesome ...
I think arohi will speak to manik's sister and all d cupids will join to unite Manan...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Beautiful update yaar and emotional update too...
That nyonika na I just hate her...
But plz make clear the mu btw mannan soon..can't see them like this...
Update next part soon plz ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
amazing update...
i wanted to read more but stopped it in a cliff hanger..
pls update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
nice update
let's see what aarohi can do ? 😊
thanks for the pm
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Hey!
Beautiful update & nicely depicted emotions

Update soon
Thanks for the PM
Tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
U R TOO GOOD AWSM FABULOUS MARVELOUS...
MAINE AVI AVI SAB PART READ KIYA...
IT'S SUPERB...CONCEPT IS AWSM...
PLZ MANAN KI MISUNDERSTANDING JALDI SA CLEAR KAR DOE...
AROHI IS A CUTE CHARACTER...
I HOPE ALL CUPID MANAN KO EK7A KARNAE MAE SUCCESS HO JAYA JALD SA JALD...
NEXT PART PLZ ASAP

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