SS-HIS DEMEANOUR-NOTE ON PG 11

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys!i am abby( pen name😉).Like all of u here i am also a fan of ishra.But was shy to post a comment.After reading all you guys SS and FF,I decided to pen my thoughts too!I request you to give my SS a chance!Thank u!
PROLOGUE
"All these materialistic things cannot make up for your presence"Ishita screeched,her nose flaring and clutching the new expensive phone he has given her.Raman coolly looked at her as if he is least concerned of the turmoil she's going through.When she received no reply,she continued"You are always away on business trips and when you come during weekend,u are cooped inside the study.Dont u care about me?"her last sentence coming about broken.She saw some emotions finally flickering on the face of the devilishly handsome man.He slowly walked towards her,she staggered back a bit unable to hide the nervouness due to him being so close.He bent down to her tiny 5 foot 1 frame and looked into her bloodshot eyes."You are nothing but another responsibility forced upon me by my father.You should be content with what you get miss iyer as I am least interested in courting an ugly weak duckling like you."his voice coming out cold and firm.He walked away leaving a pale and motionless Ishita staring his retreating form.

How was it guys???
INDEX

1]CHAPTER 1-PG 4
2]CHAPTER 2-PG 6
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ye-hai-mohabbatein/4574365/ss-his-demeanour-note-on-pg-11?pn=6
3]CHAPTER 3-PG 8
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Nithya83 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting prologue dear.
Don't give up. Please continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anoos123

interesting prologue..

plz continue soon..

thank u so.much!it means a lot😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nits83

Interesting prologue dear.

Don't give up. Please continue

tysm dear.i will!🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi abby

welcome to forum dear

congrats for your first wonderful story dear

amazing prologue dear

different from yhm

moreover i love it so much dear

i am 100% sure that it is going to be amazing ever dear

continue soon dear

cant wait more dear

eagerly waiting for update dear

please pm me when you update dear



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting dear 😊
Continue soon 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: maduragymhasium

hi abby

welcome to forum dear

congrats for your first wonderful story dear

amazing prologue dear

different from yhm

moreover i love it so much dear

i am 100% sure that it is going to be amazing ever dear

continue soon dear

cant wait more dear

eagerly waiting for update dear

please pm me when you update dear



thank u so much for this lovely comment.its extremely encouraging😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanjana_IshRa

Interesting dear 😊
Continue soon 😛

sure fear, i will.thank u😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start 😊
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

Nice start 😊
Update soon

thank u soo much😃

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