Jal Jal ke dhuan ho gaye hum ... Lakskmila vs Sira OS cmpltd - Page 3

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Mili

@LakshMila

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Posted: 9 years ago

Superb Zubiii!""""

Omg hilarious it was,"mujhe to toh khar jaisa prateet hota haii "

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The closeness...awww

Please do one more...

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chandanagimsy

@chandanagimsy

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Posted: 9 years ago

Aww this is so cute...amazing..loved lakshman jealousy... Hope u write other os like this

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 9 years ago

Amazing superb..
Love it...
Fab work zubi..
Waiting for more lakshmila work...

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saishree

@Saishree97

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Posted: 9 years ago

amazing story dear

it was so cute!!! loved it!!!

hilarious one..

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Danceegirl92

@Danceegirl92

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ms.dhingra
Awww...super cute.
Omg I wish it could happen in the show. Bt nvr mind aapne adbhut likha h. Plz keep writing.

I want more stories written by u, bcz u write every scene vry nicely.

Actually Nicely is vry small word, my heart wanna say more than it bt no words👏

completely agree...totally a fan of yours...love your lakshmila stories can't wait for more on your new ff...please continue writing!!!!

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Riya

@Riya_16

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awww...such a cute story...and very nicely written indeed...

Thank you very much for posting the second part too...

Plzzz write more👏

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