Jal Jal ke dhuan ho gaye hum ... Lakskmila vs Sira OS cmpltd - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Omg that was super funny...
Poor lakshman
Continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
wow wow and just simply wow girl😉
fabulously written n i just loved it😃
such a funny part it was😆
and yeah in the second one do add in some romantic lakshmila scenes😳
waiting...😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
awesome update. that was too hilarious.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
So good :)
I loved it.
Update ASAP.
I want LakshMila :P
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Part 2


Urmila was (again) at the banks of river fighting back tears,,,, trying hard not to cry

She gathered all her courage and turned to leave the place when she saw lakshman running towards her.

She turned her face away in anger


L - r...rajkumari... aap ...

U - pehle shvaas le lijiye

Yahan kyun aaye hain aap? "she asked rolling her eyes

L - mujhe aapko kuchh batana hai... dekhiye...

U - mujhe pata hai (she said cutting his words) ke aapko ye vivaah sweekar nahi hai

L - aapko bhi nahi hai na, yahi to mai bhaiya or bhabhi ko samjha raha thha

U - aapne didi se bhi keh diya

L - haan aise kaise kar sakti hain aap vivaah

U - aise kaise, aap kehna kya chahtey hain, humare mithila me vivaah aise hi hote hain

L - ye kaisi vikshipt si parampra hai aapke mithila ki

U - dekhiye aapko mujhse vivaah nahi karna thha to aapne mana kar diya, ab aapko koi adhikar nahi h humare mithila ke bare me kuchh bhi bolne ka

L - kintu ye galat hai urmila

U - kya galat hai, aap kuchh bhi Karen kuchh bhi kahein sab sahi, koi aur kahe to galat

L - kintu bina us vyakti se bhent kiye aap vivaah ke liye sweekriti kaise de sakti hain

U - de sakti hu, mai jo chahu vo kar sakti hu, mai unhe dekhu na dekhu isse aap..,,,,,,,

Ye kya keh rahe hain aap? (She asked in an irritating tone) bina dekhe, bina bhaint kiye... mujhe kuchh samajh nahi aa raha


Lakshman was angry that urmila is fighting with him for a third person


L - ab aapko samajh kyu aaega, kadachit bhaiya theek keh rahe thhe, aapko bhi ve rajkumar pasand hain jinka vivaah prastav aapke liye aaya hai,jis prakaar sab prasann hain, bhabhi prasann hain ke vahi aapke upyukt hain aapka bhi yahi manna hai...mai,,, mai vyarth hi chintit ho raha thha ke aap prasann nahi rahengi unke sath..

(He chocked back a sob, horror flying through his mind,what if she gets married to someone else...)

On the other hand urmila got the most painfull shock of her life,,,,,

(mera vivaah prastaav aaya hai, sab prasann hain, pitaji ne bhi sweekriti de di, didi bhi prasann hainn,,,, ye kya ho raha hai mere jeevan me shiv ji, mere hriday mein to keval dashrath nandan laskhman baste hain... ab kisior ko apna var kaise sweekar kar sakti hoon mai, kintu pitaji ne to mera vivaah,,,...,,,she stopped her line of thoughts when she saw lakshman all broken... she can see his anger, disappointment and tears in his eyes...)

U - aap kyun bata rahe hain mujhe ye sab, vo jaise bhi hain mujhe sweekar hain, jo mere pitaji ne or sita didi ne mere liye nirnay liya hai vo sahi hi hoga,,,, aapko vyarth chintit hone ki aavashyakta nahi hai rajkumar

L - agar itni hi prasann hain aap, to fir ye ashru kyu... (her asked staring at her)

U - prasannata vyakt kar rahe hain ye ashru,,,,,bahot bhagyashali hoon mai, sab mujhse bahot prem karte hain, yadi mera smasth parivaar prasann hai to mujhe aur kya chahiye

Lakshman couldn't control his anger any more, he turned towards urmila pulling her closer against him"sabki khushiyan,aur aapki?,, aapke jeevan ka itna bada nirnay koi kaise le sakta hai?, aap kaise sabki sweekriti ko apna bhagya maan sakti hain, kaise"...as he pulled her closer to him, he could feel her fast gasps restless breathes


He cupped her face causing her breaths come in short gasps, she could feel his hot breaths on her face, she tried to shrug out from his hands, but he only tightened the grip he pressed his hard urmila was going crazy with the close proximity.


Padh sakta hoon mai aapki aankhen... nahi hain aap prasann

U - kyu rajkumar,,, kyu padh rahe hain aap in aankho ko, mujhe mere haal pe chhode dijiye, job hi ho raha hai hone dijiye

L - Mila... kyu nahi samajh rahi ho tum...nahi dekh pa raha mai tumhari aankho me ashru ...kaise dekh sakta hoon mai tumhein is halat mein... tumhare jeevan mein koi dukh aaye kaise sehen karunga main...'


The words echoed in her head... in that moment she wanted everything to stop ,,, she wanted to spend her whole life standing in front of him, looking deep into his intense she could see herself in them... trapped deep inside she could feel her defences melting away...

she knows that he really loves her But what now,,, she is getting married to someone else and her family have already approved the alliance ... she cant ditch her family for the sake of her love,,, she can't let her father down... no she have to be strong... and she jerked him away with the one thought that now,,, she only belongs to the man whom her sita didi has chosen for her

U - laut jaiye yahan se, aapki in vyarth baton ka koi aadhar nahi hai ab, jo bhi hai mujhe sweekar hai

Lakshman knew that she is not happy with the proposal,,,, that she loves him he has seen in her eyes,,, he was determined to do something as he is the one who made the MESS... he will not let urmila suffer because of his stupidity

S - kya sweekar hai tumhein urmila (she asked placing the portrait there)

L - kuchh nahi bhabhi,,,

U - vivaah... mujhe ye vivaah ka prastaav sweekar hai (she said blocking lakshman on his way to sita)

Ram flashed a grin looking at lakshman out of the corner of his eyes

S - mai janti hu urmila (she said cupping her cheek) aur vo tumhein bahot prasann bhi rakhenge,,, aisi mujhe anubhooti ho rahi hai

Urmila was not looking at the portrait, when sita turned her face towards it... and her eyes popped out of her head

R - lakshman... koi samasya (he whispered in his ear)

S - kya hua urmila... maine sahi kaha na...(she asked giving her a wide smile)

U - kintu didi ye to...

R - usika chitra hai urmila jo tumhein priye hai,,, or jise tum priye ho (he said with serene expression on his face)

Lakshman rolled his eyes and blew some air out of his pursed lips

S - dekhiye na laskhman bhaiya, kitne sunder dikhtey hain

L - mujhe to khar (donkey) jaisa prateet hota hai

S - kyaaa... (quickly controlling her laughter) bhaiya aisa mat kahiye mujhe bahot priye hain ye

L - (forcing a smile)adbhut... jab sabko ye itna hi priye hai toh mai kya kar raha hoon yahan... chala jata hoon na mai yahan se

Arre sita maharishi vishwamitra ji ne bulaya hai hume, chaliye vilamb ho gaya hai,,,,(he said giving her a sign to leave them both as now urmila know what she has to do)

Lakshman tum urmila ko mehal pahocha dena... surakshit,,, is chitra ke saath (they both left smiling)

L - ise to mai jal me pravaahit kar dunga (he said frowning)

U - kya kaha aapne

L - urmila tum sach me is ajeeb se dikhne vale praani se vivaah karna chahti ho... (he asked taking a step towards her)

U - ajeeb sa dikhne vala praani... (with a disgusting look) haan... aapko kya farak padta hai... aap to...

L - farak padta hai,,, kyu ki mai tumse prem karta hoon MILA (he said holding her waist, pulling her closer, looking deep into her eyes) aur tum kisi aur se vivaah nahi kar sakti

Urmila looses her sense when she heard him confessing his love for her

U - ye prem kahan gaya thha jab aapne vivaah ka prastav asweekar kiya thha

L - sab bahot jaldi ho gaya thha mai samajh hi nahi paya... or maine (he stopped when she shushed her putting a finger on his lips)

Urmila covered the little distance between them and whispered in his ears... " mujhe bhi prem ho gaya hai,,, is khar jaise prateet hone wale praani se"

He looked around huffing and puffing... got shocked as well as overjoyed to see himself on the portrait

"Ye to..."😳

He slapped his hand to his forehead,scratched the back of his neck with a sheepish smile crossing his lips,... Biting his lip He chuckled and smiled widely when he realised the fact that The most naughty person of the royal family of ayodhya is actually tricked by his bhaiya, bhaabhi and his... would be wife... 😉😆


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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
imma first
wow so beautifully written zubi😳
loved the whole thing😳
do write more dear😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Awww...super cute.
Omg I wish it could happen in the show. Bt nvr mind aapne adbhut likha h. Plz keep writing.

I want more stories written by u, bcz u write every scene vry nicely.

Actually Nicely is vry small word, my heart wanna say more than it bt no words👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
This is fantastic ...!
I loved it totally ...
OMG ...Such a cute scene you wrote Zuby..
I was laughing ...feeling their love all at a time.
What to say ? Shorten of words ...
You wrote a brilliant one.
I am excited to read your further works

Love,
Sruthi

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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Super cute
I was laughing like crazy 🤣
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
So cute
Aakhir khar ko akkal aa hi gayi.
Loved the update

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