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mananneetu

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello everyone...how r u all doing..?? 😊

Some of might know me ..I had written a fs on man an.and this is my second story on man an..

Hmm...the concept is quite old fashioned and u guys might have already read it on forums too...BT I so wanted to write Smith like this...on manan..so I m gonna write it down..!!actually I had already written it BT it gt deleted due to network problems..so I again have to write it ..!!!

So it will take a bit time BT I will try to complete it till night...!!

😛

I know kitna kam bolt I hun main..anyways I m gonna start writing it...wish me luck...😉

So guys ..I have completed it..I know thoda lamba hogaya...pl read pg 1&2 fr full update...nd really sorry if u guys guys bored...

And yeah as i had promised I wanna dedicate it to my best friend Monica and my IF friend REEt0041 ..it was them who encouraged me to try writing something..so than guys...

And one more thing..plz guys os hain..toh comment jaroor karna..last time there was so less comments on my Fs..

Here is the link to my previous work...do read it once if u have time...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/129634913

Enough of my blaberring

Enjoy the update

Bye

Lots of love

Nitu. 😳

Edited by mananneetu - 9 years ago

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mananneetu

@mananneetu

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Posted: 9 years ago

~LOVE IS TRUST ~😳

PART A

Its valentine s today... the day of love..trust ..care ..!!

Love...something that I never believed on..trust ..that I never had on anyone...care was Smth that no one did fr me...relationship was always a give and take philosophy fr me... me...!!

Its because of my so called mom Who ditched me and my dad fr wealth and pelf...she ran away with someone when I WaS just ten...I always craved fr love...my dad had always Ben busy in his work that he almost forgot he has a child too who needs love...anyways a s the time flew I made myself clear that love doesn't exist... no relationship can last long...and gradually I changed into an arrogant nd rude person..hmm..everyone thought so..BT I knew somewhere deep down in my heart that I still wanted someone to love me..trust me..care fr me...!!

And yeah. ...I did found someone..I The Manik Malhotra...feel like a fool today when I remember that I thought women r always cheater...they can only use others ...true love is just a theory...just good fr movies to entertain a group of people...BT now I feel true love does exist... in fact I have experienced it...she changed me...she gave me that love care and trust that I was craving fr...she made me a human from that arrogant monster... and I just Love her...

And today I m gonnna propose her fr a marriage. Yes I m finaaly gonna for it today...I wanna live all my life with her...I want that my morning start by looking her beautiful face..I want to enjoy my day talking to her..listening to her blabering..I wanna end my day and sleep peacefully in her arms..cuddling her..I want to have a family with her..!!

I just hope she likes everything ...y m I getting so nervous year. Well I know she us gonna say yes.BT still I m nervous...she has really changed me..(then he takes his phone out and msg someone)

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mananneetu

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Posted: 9 years ago

Part B~

A beautiful girl was sitting on a swing of her terrace and was in her deep thoughts...cold breeze was moving her long silky hair in air...her long dupatta was also constantly moving In air with the wind...her earings were shining like a star..her bangles were making a beautiful sound...the weather was so peaceful..so romantic...she had a constant smile on her face and she was just looking on the sky..and thinking how her life changed ...

Her trance got broken when she heard her mobile buzz...when she opened her inbox her smile grew wider..

My Nandini..

I know u r having a wonderful time in your terrace..

Thinking about someone especial...😉

BT can u plz go to your room and open the wardrobe..

I have got smth fr u...

Urs and only urs..

Manik

Nandini smiled more and went towards her room.

When she opened her wardrobe she found a gift ..and she just kept staring at it lovingly when she once again got a msg

I know the gift wrapper is nice. BT I m sure u would like the gift inside it more..so plz stop staring at it..and open it..

(Nadini smiled thinking how well he knows her)

She opened it and found a beautiful red sarre..and she was so happy to see it. ..she just loved it.

And once again her mobile buzzed..

I just hope u like it Jaan..

(Nandu blushed reading Jaan)

U know I love ur blush BT plz save it fr me...

Now go to or dressing table...

And get ready...I will be there to pick u up after an hour.

Love u

Madly and deeply

Just can't wait to see u..touch u. ..kiss u Madly..and make u moan my name..(nandu turned scarLet)

Arey phirse blush..I said name save it fr the time when I m there..

Go get ready..

Urs monster..

Nandu smiled and went towards her dressing where she found a beautiful jewellery box...and when she opened it. She was beyond happy..it was a necklace...and then there was a bracelet..where manan was craved in beautiful way which made her eyes turn moist...

She sat on one edge of her bed..and once again she was lost in her past memory...!!

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Dhingli44

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Posted: 9 years ago

Look who's back 😉 Aaiye Padhariye..mate 😆
Kya correct time pe log in kiya maine.1st comment thok diya. 😛
Kisne kaha clich hai..
Every story has it's different superbness.(I doubt that's a word) 😆
This was amazing.
Agar clich hoti story toh Manik wo letter padhke gussa hokar darkness mein phir n blah blah.
But you gave sucha beautiful turn to it.
I love the way you described manana roothna.
I loved that little fella 😆
You described him also so soo adorably.
It was relatable for me..coz for me too Love is Trust more than anything.
Loved it.
Keep updating.
Be amazing!
😊

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mananneetu

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Posted: 9 years ago

PART C

Nandini p.o.v

I just can't believe that its happening in my life...I just can't believe I m getting so much of love from someone..I can't believe its the same manik that I had met few months back...!!

The arrogant and rude manik malhotra..who never believed in love and relationships... who never respected women...BT today he is deeply in love with me. And respects women like anything...

He says I changed him...my love made him a human from a monster...I made him trust me...BT the truth is that it was him who have made my life so beautiful..it is he who has made me feel that I m the most lucky person..from the time my parents died I was left alone .I craved fr love. And when I metanik..I could see the same crave in his eyes too...!! I could sense that he was alone and he needed someone..and today I feel lucky that I could be that person who could heal his wounds...who could give him love ...

And now I just can't imagine my life without him..he is my life..my soul..my everything...I love him..and I can go to any extent to keep him happy. ...now we r not just manik and Nandini...we have turned into Manan...

Out lives r connected...our breaths r connected...our souls r connected...I just hope main usko humesha khush rakh saku...I just wanna give him all the happiness.

Nandini trance got broken by the doorbell...

She went towards it and opened the door to find a delivery boy with a letter fr her...when she opened it. She got shocked..her breath choked..her eyes became moist..and next second she fell on her knees crying hard...sobbing like a child..!"

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mananneetu

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Posted: 9 years ago

PART D

Manik was hell excited..he was behaving like a child who had his results today..that mixed feeling of nervousness...excitement..hope..the same was with manik too.. he was all ready and looking dashing like always...he was just busy looking at his watch ..she was getting so restless...and finally it was the time...manik quickly got his car and went to Nandini home..

Manik reached her home and opened her door by the spate key that she herself had given him...he directly went towards her room and opened it slowly like a thief as he wanted this urpraie her BT he himself got surprised on finding the room empty...he went inside and knocked the washroom door BT on not getting reply he opened it but no one was there...!!!

He just don't know y but he felt his heart stop...he ran downstairs and searched her every possible places but couldn't find her..he called her BT no response. ...he was feeling afraid. He don't know what to do...where she might have gone. He was sure she wouldn't go any where till it was imp...cause It was their date ..he returned to her room ...when he found his gifts placed on a side table...he went there and he saw a letter placed there ..he sat on the bed and started reading the letter..

Hmm..I just don't know how to say it to u manik...

I wanna confess something today..

Actually I wanna say sorry to u..I m really very sorry manik...

I never loved u...yes its the truth..

I was always after ur money..BT as the time passed I came to realize that I was doing wrong with u..

U have a puts heart and I don't want to hurt u...

Plz forgive me

I m going away from or life...but plz never loose hope from your life...don't turn to that monster once again..

Plz don't punish yourself fr my deeds...

It was me who betrayed u..and I m sure u will find someone better than me..

Nandini

After reading the letter manik was numb...he was not reacting at all..his eyes were blood red due to constant falling of tears..but not a single expression made its way on his face..

It was blank...no one could guess what's going on in his mind.. after what felt like eternity he stood up..put that letter in his jacket and went towards his car...!!

After few mins drive he reached his destination..It was a hill side..it had got a great view..so peaceful weather...

He walked IN a tortoise speed..when he saw someone sitting at the edge of the hill..his heart said IG was her. Taking baby steps he reached there and kept his hand on hers shoulder...

Nandu p.o.v.

I was sitting on the edge of the hill..its Manila fav spot..he said this place gibes him peace..I was thinking how my life took a u turn when I felt a familiar touch on mys shoulder and I got freeze knowing that it was him...and then tears made their away from my eyes...I couldn't gather courage to look back at him..I just couldn't face him..not at least this time...!!

So I preferred looking straight not looking back at him when I felt him sit beside me...And then silent took over us...BT his silence was speaking with me...I could feel what he was feeling.

I could hear all his unasked questions...but I kept quite letting my tears flow frm my eyes when I heard him saying "Nandini"