MANAN OS~ LOVE IS TRUST~

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sweetheart999

@sweetheart999

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Liked the os plz update the next part soon

Thanks for the pm

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mananneetu

@mananneetu

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

PART E

I turned to see manik looking at me...and the way he was looking at me made my heart skip a bit..his eyes were moist but he had a constant smile on his face which confused me...on the first place I wasn't expecting him here...and right now he is smiling at me...and this is not what I had thought...

I thought after reading the letter he would never ever see my face...I thought he would find me but only to blast at me fr cheating him..but here he is looking at me so lovingly and I just can't understand what's happening...my thoughts came to a halt when I saw him coming closer to me and the next second even before I can react I felt his lips on mine...and I was taken aback...he was kissing me pouring all his love fr me..and feeling that love and passion he has fr me..i felt my eyes turning teary...he slightly bit my lower lip as if wanting me to respond and I did so..after all even I can't control my emotion when he is around.

Then the next I heard him whispering smth in my ear...hr said " u know Nandini..u still can't lie to me !! U r really bad at it "!"

Hearing this I became shocked and I looked at him with wide eyes...and he slightly chuckled looking at my expressions and I was now more and more shocked...like seriously... I had just said him that I have betrayed him and here instead of being angry at me he is kissing me...laughing at my expressions...!!😲

Manik slightly pulled me towards him by my arm and said in a husky voice.."bolo nandu..y u lied to me.."

Nandu kept quite and once again manik broke the silence.."bolo Jaan ..I m waiting.."

Listening jaan from his mouth..tearsade their way from her eyes and she turned away to hide her tears and said in a cold tone."manik I m not lying...whatever I have wriiten is the truth..just believe me..and go away from my life..!"

Manik jerked nandu closer and shouted in a loud voice "NANDINI...its the last time I m asking u...I said I wanna hear truth .not that crap...did u get it..I said the truth.."

Nandu started sobbing when she heard him shout at her ...manik looked at her tears and he controlling himself made her face him ..he lovingly kissed all her tears and said in a calm voice " Jaan..when I say that I love you..I mean it..and u only said na LOVE IS TRUST...so here I m in front of u saying that I trust u...and I know all that moments we spent together was not fake...Jo pyaar tumne mujhe diya hain...who sachha pyaar chain..tumne mujhe USS darkness she nikala chain Nandini..tumne mujhe jina sikhaya hain...and mujhe yeh maaloom hain ke fake love kabhi kisiko who peace nahi desakta Which I feel with u...agar aaj main tumhari inn Balaton pein yakeen karke ..tumko distrust marks challa jata toh yrh prove hojata me I don't lobe u truly...so plz mujhe batao me y u did all these..please .u know u can share it with me.."

Nandu tightly hugged him after hearing him...and started crying out loud...manik hugged her even more tightly and caressed her hair to soothe her when she spoke in a small tone.

"Manik mujhe stomach cancer hain...mujhe nahi pata main kitne din jee sakti hun.. I have to go manik..main tum he koi khusi nahi desakti... Dr ne kaha hain ki I might never be able to have children...manik ab mein tumhare liye perfect nahi hun..plz let me go.."

Manik instantly broke the hug and kissed her madly..the kiss was not just a kiss.it was his way of saying that he is not going to leave her alone...he is with her always .no matter what the situation is...!! He loves her and he is always going to love her ..it doesn't matter that she can be a mother or not..it doesn't matter that she will be with him all his life..what mattes is that the time till they r alive they have to be ttogether.. and somewhere manik was sure he will not let anything happen to Nandini...

Nandini could feel what he was trying to say through the kiss and even she conveyed through the kiss that " she is so grateful to him that he loves her and trusts her like anything...she is so glad that he won't leave her alone..she is determined that she won't go anywhere leaving her manik alone in the darkness..she is gonna fight...fight fr him..fight fr his love..his trust...!!

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mananneetu

@mananneetu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

PART F

After five years. ...,

There was a girl who wAs sitting at the edge of the swimming pool of the big lavish house with her legs dipped inside the pool...when she felt someone sitting behind her and then she felt his hands around her belly...she slowly spoke

" manik...u remember aaj kya hain.."

Manik kissed her bare shoulder and said seductivelY.."Happy valentines day nandini "

Nandini smiled and turned a bit and kissed his forehead and said " Manik aaj duniya me liye valentines day hoga...lekina aaj mere liye its the day when I got a new life. ..a new birth ...as ur wife...tumne five years pehle aaj hi me din mujhe yeh ehsaas dilaya that ke love is trust... and u trusted me...u married me the same day..and look at me...I m still alive ..and is only because of u .or love. And ur trust .."

Manik smiled and hugged her tightly and whispered " our love Nandini...our love and our trust.."

Manik broke the hug and was about to kiss her lips when he felt someone push him and both manan fell on the pool...nandu tightly hugged manik whereas manik was looking here and there fr searching who did it when they heard " dadda..main yaha hoon.."

Manan looked back and saw their life..their Jaan..their son...laughing at them...

Manan smiled and went out of the pool and that cute little soul started running with his smaal foot steps...laughing and giggling all the time..and in next second he was in Maniks arms..and manik started tickling him.."acha..champ aap Banat naughty ho rage ho..mumma ko batau.."

Nandu" beta idhar aayo...tum bahat badmash hogaye ho..come here...

That poor soul made an innocent face and said sorry..to which both manan felt like aww..nd they instantly kissed him madly and both said together "we love u "

To which that naughty soul replied " I love u both more and more "

********* T h e E ND *********

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Manancrazy_95

@Manancrazy_95

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Aww
Soo beautiful
Amazing love story

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shruti1997

@shruti1997

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Awesome
So beautiful
Loved it

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shaan...

@shaan...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Awesome os...

Luved it...

Take care...

Stay blessed...

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hs77

@hs77

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

really beautiful os
from the initial description of how manik was before
to the time where manik sent gifts for her for the valentine proposal
and then the news of her cancer
i couldnt make guess till the end what was written in the letter
loved the happy ending
keep writing

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Tasniya09

@Tasniya09

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Wonderful os.
Chotu monster such a cute pie...

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reet0143

@reet0143

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

thanks for the pm baby...

and really thanku thanku thanku thanku so much for this...

this was the best surprise that i got...u dedicated it to me...aww thanku doll...love u ...

and coming to the update...kya likhti ho yaar tum...masha allah...👏👏

tareef karu kya uski jisne ye update likha hai...heheh😆😆😆...lekin karni to banti hai

tum kahi pe bhi koi bhi point nahi chodti...

it was a again a full package of emotions...love, manik ki teasing, nandu ki blushing, emotional ...and happy ending

loved it

mujhe tumhari ek baat bhut achi lagti hai writing mein k tum har chij ka discription bhut ache se deti ho that k read out karte waqt vo picture hamare mind mein banni start ho jati hai...

like tumne nandu ke baare mein describe kiya,,,,...A beautiful girl was sitting on a swing of her terrace and was in her deep thoughts...cold breeze was moving her long silky hair in air...her long dupatta was also constantly moving In air with the wind...her earings were shining like a star..her bangles were making a beautiful sound...the weather was so peaceful..so romantic...she had a constant smile on her face and she was just looking on the sky..and thinking how her life changed ...i really liked this part...

and the way u penned about the emotions...amazing...itna acha concept and tumne bhut hi beautifully describe kiya isko...ek proper meaning diya story ko...u have proved uour point in the story very well...hats off to u for that,,,,👏👏

manik and nandu itna pyar karte hai ek dusre se k they can go to any extent for each other's happiness

and manik ke hote hue nandu ko kuch ho bhi nahi sakta tha

finally they are married and having a cute and naughty junior manik...

loved it to the core

kehna to bhut kuch chahti thi but words hi kam pad jate hai,,,,,,,

lots of hugs and kisses to u doll...

stay happy and blessd

and sorry for the late comment ...

Love

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