~THE MOMENT I SAW U~ MANAN FS last part (MANAN.LOVE FR ETERNITY) pg 52

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys...!! first of all giving my short intro..myself neetu/...!! 😊
i m great manan fan like u all nd i m one of regular readers of this forum..bt this is the first time i m trying to write smth on them...cause i m sad that kyy is ending..so i m trying to make myself happy by writing this...!! enough of my blaberring nd here is the prologue::

**PROLOGUE**


It was almost midnight when a couple was sitting in the seashore...The girl was sitting between his legs nd had her head rested on his well built chest with her eyes closed...

whereas the man had kept his hands on her belly nd she had kept her hands above his hand and caressing it with her thumb..

the girl was enjoying the cool breeze whereas the man was inhaling the beautiful scent of her black silky hair keeping his head on crook of her neck and plceing wet kisses time to time. nd she was lost in his touches..!!

slowly he turned her around to face him nd looked at her with love filled eyes ..She polietly asked "Aise kya dekh rahe ho Manii !!?" In answe he first kissed ker forehead and then pecked her lips and lovingly said "Yehi ki meri jaan meri Nandu kitni khoobsurat hain..!!" and again pecked her lips..Nandu jst looked her nd there blushing hard..

Then he again made her sit like before nd lovingly wishpered in her ears "YOU KNOW JAAN THE MOMENT I SAW YOU..."

guys i know its nt that gud..bt phir bhi if u liked then like nd comment..

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Kuushi thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely start...looking forward for the first chapter.. Please continue soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kuushi

Lovely start...looking forward for the first chapter.. Please continue soon :)


thank you for ur comment.. 😊
i will try to update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: veenu

Interesting Continue Soon


thank you.. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is really a interesting one
Will really love to read
Continue soon

Love you
Ekuuu
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello everyone... 😊 this is my 1st try and responses are not so good..bt phir bhi i will continue nd wrap it up soon...this is the small character sketch...so that u can understand about the characters... 😛 here i go with the characters...!!

**CHARACTER SKETCH**
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MANIK MALHOTRA:: The business tycoon of the country...despite he is just 26 ,he has well established his name in the country...he is insanely famous as the member nd founder of fab 5..!
He is like very rude and arrogant for all the other people in the world bt a true angel for his parents and friends...he do believes in love bt he never accept it infront of his family..he is secretly waiting fr the right girl (jo usko jaldi hi milsakti hain!😛 )
recently he is searching fr a good secretary who can control the monster .!! as his old secretary is in leave fr a month...(do u think he can find one??)

NANDINI MURTHY:: a bubbly beautiful girl..speaks a lot...she cant keep anything in heart..she jst says whatever she is feeling..She is from an orphanage...the caretaker of her orphanage whom she calls amms is more than a mother to her...she loves her amms a lot nd all the kids of the orphanage...she is 23 years old nd is studying hard to become a scientist...!!
recently she is searching a job for herself..as well as she is hell irritated by her best friend navya's continous talk about fab 5..she has never seen them bt heard them..nd she instantly felt a connection with the lead singer (guess who?) 😛

fab 5 is same as in the show...(dhrulya is in relation )

chapter coming soon..!!
plz do like nd comment..

nd guys dont get confused..the character sketch i gave is for 2 years back..as my chapters will be in flashback..two years before the prologue!!

**INDEX**

prologue+character sketch
note+promo
CHAPTER 1 PART A

PART B

PART C

PART 2 A, B

PART C
PART D (TRIP TO HER HEART)

CHAPTER 3 (THE BLISSFUL CONFESSION)

THE LAST PART (MANAN.LOVE FR ETERNITY)
Edited by mananneetu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: manan_eku

This is really a interesting one
Will really love to read
Continue soon

Love you
Ekuuu


thank you... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's very interesting
loved the prologue and CS very much
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sounds really very interesting
Prologue and cs are awsm
Update the chapter soon...
Please pm me

Keep writing
N Stay Blessed 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wohoo...seems good!
Update the next one soon.
N pls PM me😉

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