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anu14

@anu14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#261

Alright girls! NiYam convo coming up soon. All I request you is to be a little open minded with Swayam's reasonings. You may not agree with them, but the way I see it, there's a least an explanation for why he did what her did.

You have no idea how much I had to rack my brain to come up with an explanation for why Swayam supported Rey during his break up with Taani. At the end of it though, I was myself convinced.

You all may accept it with a pinch of salt (which I'm hoping fervently) or not find it agreeable at all. Whatever may be the verdict, I am at your mercy at the moment.

I just hope my take on things doesn't irritate the hell outta you all and force you to quit the story mid-way.

Anxiously awaiting the fate of D3H,

Aashi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#262

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raddhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#263

Swayam you don't look as taani bro
You look more like BFF agree taani
Never share her things with you but
Did you share your things with taani
Have you told taani abt you & sharon no never then how you except her share things with you I don't know if it's taarey stry or KR stry u r making me confuse

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Aiman

@princess_tara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#264

Sorry but I do not agree with this

First in Rey's life his first priority was always his dance and his friends

He always took Taani for granted

But for Taani her first priority was Rey

She was ready to do anything for Rey until fake break up

And about swayam

Don't start with him

He was always in his Sharon land

And another reason Taani didn't share anything with him because she didn't want to come between Rey's and his friendship

And about third person interference

Well again it was always Rey who disclosed his personal problems in front of gang

Not Taani and if there is any mistake of Taani that is she trust Rey with her feelings more then she should

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Anshika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#265

Sabse pehle toh.. YAY! Like Ho Gaya .. 😃 Like ho gaya! 😃 And I'm the first one to like it! On time, I guess! *Does a Happy dance* 😃 😃

Coming to the update - BANG ON! 👏 👏 Didn't I say, only Swayam is the sensible, calm n composed one out of the whole D3 Team? His perspectives are simple and straight to the point and I'm just SO glad that you continued it! 👏 👏

Niyati not just blamed but kind of accused Rey for his n Taani's break-up which isn't right at all. It's an old proverb - Taali kabhi ek haath se nai bajti so, both are equally responsible for whatever happened . Plus, Niyati knows Rey from Taani's PoV n the moment she will keep aside Taani's PoV of Rey n look out for how he actually is, Niyati is going to regret her words bigtime. At least, that is what I feel as a reader.

A Superb update and waiting for a SwaRon update, EAGERLY!

Thank you, Dii for the update! 😊 😊

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lechu10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#266

nice update
i am totally agree with princess tara ..we can't blame taani because she suffered lot for making relationship sucessful :(
thanks for the pm

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anu14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#267

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Shifa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#268

Nice Update & Sneakpeek,
Thanks for the PM. 😊

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rashmi.p

@rashmi.p

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Posted: 9 years ago

#269

What to say abt update...I don't agree completely with swayam.ya whatever lines he said abt a relationship is true.but here he was more like bff than brother.he was always there for Rey but when taani needed him the most he was not there.and yes oly Rey is not at fault taani to has faults in it and that is she used to think abt Rey all the time.and I think when we love someone truly we Have that person oly on our mind 24*7.is it that big fault and her one more fault is giving up on Rey and getting engaged with vishesh on the name reys passion.without life there no meaning for passion and without love there is no meaning for life.being his love of life how she thought it will make him happy I dnt know.just my thought.😊

And if I keep all these thoughts and say update was nice I mean all the lines there conversation was written very well.thanks for the update..I think this one is my first ever big comment.waiting for next part.tc

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KJLuv

@KJLuv

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Posted: 9 years ago

#270

Hi thanks for accepting my buddy request.

First off I want to tell you that u r a great writer and its really hard to believe that its your first story. You definitely know how to use your words.I came across this ff by chance and have been a silent reader. You are doing a great job at writing this and have loved all the parts immensely.👏

Coming to the last update about Niyam convo.. well I partly agree with swayam what he said about the relationship stuff and that Niyati is wrng to judge Rey and blame him entirely for the breakup. As Anshika7 said Swayam was the most level headed guy in entire D3 team.

But he can't blame taani for not sharing everything with him.. he did the same thing. And about him getting to abt TaaRey from outsiders , i think the blame lies on the gang too. I mean come on!! Rey and Taani had just started their relationship and they did want to tell him first, but before that the gang had to interfere. And that's another thing abt TaaRey relationship i didn't like in D3; whenever it came to them the entire world had to interfere. Even when swayam came to confront them, taani wasn't there but sharon... Blame the CV's!!

Taani and Rey both were wrong. Taani always tried to use shortcuts/ to solve problems. She knew Rey loved dance and even then she did force him to not participate in NDC. And Rey could talk to sharon abt his relationshp problems but not Taani!!

All i am saying is Taani wanted to be a housewife and i dnt think there's anything wrong in that. Rey was all she had and she trusted him the most, she didn't hv any friends in st. Louis. By staging fake breakup plan, he broke Taani's trust; And breaking someone's trust is sometimes more painful than breaking one's heart. Love cannot live where there is no trust!! Thats the way i preceived their breakup.

TaaRey was a very realistic love story. In D3 i was hoping tht the CV's would highlight the fact that it isn't necessary for two ppl to b in d same profession to be together!! They were polar opposites and yet they love each other..

I am hoping this story will do them justice.. fingers crossed. 😊

No offence to anyone!! n thanks for the PM