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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

Geet realised who soni is

but maan refuse her. ...

dammit you made me cry for khushi confession

arnav game backfired

Did I? Really?
I made you cry? Awesome! Made me feel like a great writer!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww sooo sweeettt

I just loved the update

I am not getting words to describe how I feel reading it

It's sooo awesome amazing and heart warming
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Posted: 9 years ago
Heyaa.. I loved ur surprise update :) khushi and ASr's reception was superb.. and Maan was gng to leave on the same day.. he left frm there and geet bechari was heartbroken.. she expected that he will change his decision bt he didnt do that stubborn kahika!
hailaa Geet had locked herself in the room and was telling ki she will end her life.. hmm i guess this a plan 😉 and dev called maan and maan immediately came to shantivan... and he knocked the door and went inside and everyone locked the door frm outside...waah kyastp uthaya.. sahi hen..
so anjalishyaam everyone were involved hailla.. bt hw cum anajli and shyaam knew that maaneet love each other..??

so finally after lot of manfoying maan finally told I love u to Geet and accpeted that she is soni..

cmng to khushi and ASR hmm so ASR wanted to take revenge.,. yaha khushi itni excited thi and ASR aakeso gaya lol.. he wanted her to manofoy him and khushi started dancing on jhalla walla.. wow that was a superb update,.. really loved it😊😆 ASR thought ki wo kuch aur karegi mananeko bt he never thought she will seduce him😆😆

finally the day arrived .. Maaneet ki shaadi ho gayi and maan finally accpeted that geet is his soni... I couldn't attend the reception bt koi nai moi loved the update.. superb.. hahahaacha kia belan and jhaddo deke 😆

waiting for the next part.. update soon stay blessed take care😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
WOW!! superb update dear...loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
sorry yaar by mistake I posted it 2 days earlier!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: heart882

No problem dear! I loved it! Thank you!🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago


CHAPTER 86. RAB KA SHUKRAANA

Geet looked up shyly and then looked down. It was the night of her wedding. All the rituals were done. Annie and NT had just made Geet sit in the middle of the bed, helped her adjust her duppatta and ghagra to make her look picture perfect all the while teasing her about her big night and then left her alone. Geet took in a sharp breath. This was the moment, the moment Maan would make her his. She looked up curiously wondering when Maan will enter the room and then shyly looked down. She was unable to stop shying and blushing. Just the thought of Maan entering the room had her feeling goose bumps all over and her heart pounding like a fast running train. She took in a deep breath trying to calm her heart beats when the door opened. Her eyes widened. Maan! She raised her eyes slowly and there he was, standing by the door, looking at her with such a tender expression on his face that Geet could not look away. His eyes entranced her and she was so lost in them that she could not even blink. The spell broke when Maan moved towards her. Geet felt her cheeks burn and she looked down shyly. Why wasn't her heart calming? Why was it beating so fast?

Geet looked up and was stunned to find Maan standing in front of her. She looked down again as Maan sat in front of her. She sensed him stare at her but she could not look up. Her mind willed her to look up, to look at her husband, her Maan but she could not.

"Mujhe nahi pata tha ki meri Geet itni sharmeeli hai!", Maan commented but Geet remained shy and kept her head down.

"Geet! Kuch toh bolo!", he whispered but Geet refused to speak. Her thudding heart and her shaking hands did not allow her to look up or speak.

"Tum meri Geet nahi ho!", Maan spoke suddenly and Geet was shocked.

Maan was looking somewhere else in thought, "Meri Geet toh badi bindaas thi!", then he looked disappointedly, "Tum toh bahut sharmaati ho!"

Geet finally spoke up, "Woh Geet Raizada thi, Maan ki deewani, ASR ki behen!"

"Aur ab?", Maan asked as he leaned forward.

Geet looked up finally and looked at Maan, "Ab aapke saamne Geet Maan Khurana hai! Aapki patni!"

Geet could see that her words had touched him. Both looked at each other for while and then suddenly Maan stood up from the bed.

Geet looked at him confused just as Maan raised his hand in front of him, "Would Mrs. Khurana like to dance with her husband?"

Geet looked surprised and Maan explained, "I want to have my first dance with you as husband and wife!"

Geet's eyes filled with tears and she smiled softly. Her throat was clogged due to emotions so she could only nod. She raised her hand and placed it in his hand. She got up from the bed and Maan pulled out his mobile with his other hand and played a song. As the music started, Maan grabbed Geet's hand and placed it on his shoulder. Geet took in sharp breath when his hand then sneaked around her waist. She watched with wide eyes as his other hand grasped hers. The song started and they started to sway in their place.

Tu Hai Ab Jo Baahon Mein

Karaar Hai

Rab Ka Shukrana

Saanson Mein Hai Nasha

Khumaar Hai

Rab Ka Shukrana

Maan placed a kiss on her forehead and her eyes fluttered shut.

Tu Hi Ab Mera Deen Hai

Imaan Hai

Rab Ka Shukrana

Mera Kalma Hai Tu

Azaan Hai

Rab Ka Shukrana

He moved his hand upwards from her waist and Geet opened her eyes in surprise.

Rab Ka...

Shukrana

His hands moved to her head and he unpinned her duppatta letting it flutter down.

Tu Mila Toh Sab Mila

Geet felt her shyness overtake and she pushed him away.

Ab Kisi Se Kya Gila

She turned around and he grabbed her hand from behind.

Tujhmein Simtun

Aa Main Bikhrun

Teri Baahon Mein...

He pulled her close and placed a kiss on her neck making her close her eyes.

Tu Mila Toh Sab Mila

Ab Kisi Se Kya Gila

He removed one of her earrings gently making her take in a sharp breath.

Tujhmein Simtun

Aa Main Bikhrun

Teri Baahon Mein

Fanaa Ho Jaaun Main

He hugged her from behind making her heart beat faster.

Tu Hi Ab Duniya Meri

Jahaan Hai

Rab Ka Shukrana

Khaabon Ki Khayaalon Ki

Udaan Hai

Rab Ka Shukrana

He slowly removed her kamarband making her blush as his fingers danced on her skin.

Tu Hi Ab Mera Deen Hai

Imaan Hai

Rab Ka Shukrana

Mera Kalma Hai Tu

Azaan Hai

Rab Ka Shukrana

He turned her around slowly and then dipped her down making her open her eyes in surprise. His hands sneaked across her neck and she grabbed his hand.

Sab Se Ho Jaaun Pare

He pulled her up and she turned around letting him see the hook to her neck piece.

Jo Ishaara Tu Kare

Maan smiled as he unhooked the jewelry and she pulled her necklace away.

Ab Toh Rehna

Geet stiffened when his fingers fluttered along her bare back.

Hai Tujhi Mein

She turned around and looked at him just as his hand removed her other earrings.

Gumshuda Hoon Main...

She shyly looked down. His cupped her face and pulled her closer.

Sab Se Ho Jaaun Pare

Jo Ishaara Tu Kare

He leaned forward the kiss her and at last moment she looked away making his kiss land on her cheek.

Ab Toh Rehna

Hai Tujhi Mein

Gumshuda Hoon Main

O Teri Baahon Mein

She bashfully looked at him and he snaked his hands around her.

Jazbon Ka Ab Toh Naya

Bayaan Hai

Rab Ka Shukrana

They smiled as they danced to the song softly.

Naya Rutba Nayi

Shaan Hai

Rab Ka Shukrana

His hand rose to remove her maangteeka and then his hands slipped back and let her hair out of its bun.

Tu Hi Ab Mera Deen Hai

Imaan Hai

Rab Ka Shukrana

Her hands, which were on his chest, moved to his neck and she let her fingers card through his hair.

Mera Kalma Hai Tu

Azaan Hai Tu

Rab Ka Shukrana

Before she knew it, he lifted her in his arms bridal style and walked to their marital bed.

Rab Ka...

She shyly looked down as he placed her on the bed.

Rab Ka...

He leaned towards her and made Geet his.

Rab Ka... Shukrana

SONG DETAILS:

Song is from Jannat 2 (2012) and the version I chose for this update is the one sung by Mohit Chauhan.

So did you like the chapter?

Please review!

BTW, no complaints about the size of the update! Its my birthday!

Thank you, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update as usual ...
always love your choice of song...
ps...2 min to go...
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happy birthday again...
as per ist...im again to 1st wish and 1st comment...
party toh banti hai...
one more cake for you...
Edited by lively-piia - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update dear...
Ur just awesome
Also again a very happy birthday to u hope all your dreams and wishes come true!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome chapters 82, 83, 84, 85, 86...thanks for the PM

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