P.P.S. - I thought of telling you this over WhatsApp but then thought, why not here? It's about the updates so it should be mentioned here only. Hai na?
I wanted to say this from a while but in the excitement of the updates, just forgot to mention. Sometimes I really, like really doubt if it's your first ever story or your first attempt at writing because you do it like a pro! Sacchi! The dialogues are what that hold a readers' attention because through dialogues, a reader feels more connected to the story n the characters and your dialogues' are just too good and OFC, 100% original! Today's dialogue of Niyati about pleasing the world will only end up destroying your dreams was just superb and it reflects so much about Niyati's character n what she has been through in the past. Telling all that just through a dialogue is not that easy Dii but you did it and you did it perfectly. We can picture each character n the scene play out so well because we already have their faces stuck in our brain n when we read about Rey, Swayam, Sharon, Kriya n others, the actors who played these characters', their face comes in mind BUT when we read about Niyati, a character that you created , we get a face that us an imaginary face which is created in our brains because you sketched this character so nicely. Her personality, her tone, her way of talking, her reaction to the situations -- We can connect to Niyati because of your amazing writing.
*Bear Huggie!* Keep Writing n Stay Blessed! ❤️
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