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Posted: 9 years ago

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Heyaa kalpana.. i was having exams and den annual day was dere in our cls i was busy.. finally gt tym. to read...

ur b'day is on 16th right 😉 so us din dis ss will also end.. :(
coming to the ss.. I loved each and every parts...

coming to chapter 1: ohh a gal was hanging on the railing and everyone were only watching.. aise hi hota he humesha sab log sirf dekhte he either due to shock ya fir pata nai! and a guy saved her haayee.. so sweet of him... chalo kisine bachaya.. so uss gal kelie wo uska prince charming ho gaya wowww...

and in another city a guy was driving in a great speed and thok dia... and the gal started ranting lol and guy ne suna hi nai 😆😆 ohh so that gal beacme her dream gal waah..

chapter 2: ohh so dadima as usual maan ke piche he to get married and as usual maan is denying.. uff chokre kab sudhroge tum?😆 hmm..so geet's marr is fixed and khushi is gng to HP :)
acha so maan is also gng to hoshiarpur to c d gal..and Arnav hd somework so he also wanted to go to one city.. sorry forgt the name! bt wo hoshiarpur pohoch gaya wow😆 he went to handa haveli to ask the directions par rajji thought he is maan and sabko bula lia..and ASR ko protest karne ka chance nai mila... and jab geet and khushi came arnav saw khushi and jhoot bol dia ki he is maan😆😆😆 dream gal ke lie kya kya kar raha he apni naam hi badal dia..

Chapter 3 : ASR called maan andexplained everything and asked him to help... and maan finally told yes lol.. akhir khaar ek hi toh dost he😉


chapter 4 : so khsuhi decides to help geet and Maan to ASR.. by diverting their mind wow cool :)

Chapter 5 : hmm so dey all went to mela.. as per plan khushi diverted Maan' i.e ASR's mind and Arnav' ie Maan diverted Geet's mind and ASR toh khush ho gayajab Khushi saamne se aa gayi lol.. bt ssly heasked her so much questions 😆 and khushi ke lie sardard ban gaya asr
and Maan tried to talk to Geet bt Geet toh sharam ke maare thoda sa jawab dia😆 n maan thought ki she is typical village gal...

Chapter 6: ohoh. daakus mele mein.. wat the! chalo acha hain isi bahane bachane ka and thoda sa concern dikhaya sab ne 😉 I loved hw Geet ran like she was gng to loose hope bt Prince charming sochke she gt up rand ran.. she fell in the lake... n Maan recued her yipee.. bt she was grining and maan thought ki she is a mad gal...

ASR gt hurt while stopping the arrow.. and they both ran.. loved Khushi's lil concern bt sabse best I loved her answer tie se baand deti aapke haath ko 😆

Chapter 7 : hmm so Maan doesn't like Geet and Khushi doesn't like ASR.. so ASRgt to knw gals r gng to terrace and dey to o went after arnav blackmailed maan hehe..
yaha pr b arnav ne itna baat kia ki khushi pakk gayi.. and geet nejawab nai dia and maan aur usse dislike kar raha hain...

bt yeah MSK and Khushi's reactions r natural like we also react in a similar way.. and Geet and ASR ka b samajh sakti hun apne crush ko dekhte hi ya toh zyaada bolte he ya toh bilkul b nai...

chapter 8 : so maan was doing his taichi and geet saw him.. lol..and she heard asr and maan's convo.. poor dil tut gaya uska.. and khushi gt concerened seeing geet crying and geet told everything,,hailashe has decided to marry msk' i mean arnav..hmm so ASR overheard Geet and Khushi's convo also..he thought khushi likes him bt she told geet never to marry ASR..
hmm so both are heartbroken...feeling bad for them..

i wish asr and geet team up to woo their partners and maan ko asli geet ke behavior dikh jaaye and khushi ko b business tycoon ASR ka behaviour dikh jaaye 😉

btw one doubt : hw maan and khushi didn't recognise asr and geet.. I mean Maan had saved Geet right so hw didn't he remember that this was d same gal whose life he hd saved.. and ASR's car hit Khushi's scootyand khushi scolded him so hw come she didnt recognise that this was the same person whom she had scolded..??

waiting for the next update... take care stay blessed..

Oh my! Glad you liked the story so much!
About your question, Maan does not remember Geet or Khushi does not remember Arnav is because in real life we dont remember the person we saved or crashed into. Especially after months. Because over the time our memory fades. You see once you meet someone for the first time, they slowly start fading from your brain unless you remember them on daily basis. And Khushi and Maan have no reason to remember Arnav and Geet again and again. But on the other hand, Geet is smitten by Maan and remembers him daily and same is with Arnav.

BTW, that is why we do revision again and again. So that the matter does not fade from our memory.
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CHAPTER 9. RESENTINGLY YOURS

"Arre! Yeh Geet aur Maan' nahi aaye neeche khaana khaane ke liye?", Rano wondered as she served Khushi, Maan and her husband. Khushi glared at Maan who was focused on eating and did not notice her glare. "Khushi puttar? Geet kahaa hai?", Rano asked Khushi. Khushi smiled uneasily. Ab inhein kaise bataayein ki humaare saamne jo insaan baitha hai usne inki bachchi ka dil toda hai?

"Use sardard hai! Isliye aaraam kar rahi hai! Jab uthegi toh hum use khaana khilaa denge!", Khushi replied.

Rano smiled, "Achcha theek hai beta!" Then she turned towards Maan, " Arnav' bete! Aapne bataaya nahi ki Maan' bete kyun neeche nahi aaye?"

"Use office se phone aagaya tha! Office ke kaam se busy hai!", Maan replied. It was the excuse Arnav gave Maan when Maan called Arnav for lunch. But Maan knew something else was going on. Arnav looked too sad to be alright. And since yesterday he was not loosing a single chance to get a glimpse of Khushi. So why this sudden need to stay behind then? No! Something else is wrong. But Maan was a reserved person who did not poke into others' lives till it was necessary. So he planned to wait till Arnav opened up to him or if Maan's intervention was needed. Till then, Maan pretended that Arnav's every excuse has been bought by him.

It was in the tea time when Geet and Arnav finally decided to come out of their room. Maan noticed Arnav's dull face but remained silent. Khushi noticed the redness of Geet's eyes but said nothing except giving her silent comfort by squeezing her hand once Geet sat down beside her.

"Ma! Main soch rahi thi ki main aur Khushi mandir ho aayein?", Geet mumbled out her request.

Khushi frowned at Geet's request but did not comment.

"Puttar! Mandir? Nahi puttar! Aise kaise hum dono ladkiyon ko bhejein ? Kal jo hua uske baad? Nahi puttar! Tu rehne de!", Rano spoke.

"Haan! Puttar!", her father spoke, "Teri Ma ne aur maine toh soch liya hai ki kuch dino mein tujhe Dilli bhej denge! Yahaan rahi toh pata nahi woh Daaku kab tujhe utha le jaayein! Wahaan chain ki saans toh le sakegi!"

"Par Pappaji...", Geet trailed off in distress. She wanted to get out of the house. She needed distraction. She needed something to forget that the man she liked crushed her heart brutally.

"Auntyji! Uncleji! Ek kaam karte hain! Main aur Arnav' saath chale jaate hain! Kuch hua toh hum sambhaal lenge!", Arnav replied and Maan looked at him in shock. Subah toh yeh sad tha? Ab kyun jaana chaahta hai? Aur yeh toh Bhagwan pe vishwas bhi nahi karta! Yeh kyun mandir jaa raha hai?

Arnav looked at Geet's father as her father looked at Rano with worry. Arnav only wanted to get out of the house. And if he can do that while letting the girls go to some other place then he did not mind it. As long as he got out of the house and away from the memory of Khushi saying harsh words about him he would be alright.

After talking to each other, Rano and Mohinder allowed them to leave for the Mandir. Fifteen minutes later, all four walked out of the Handa Haveli. All four were quiet and pensive as they wondered about the eventful mornings and their friend's brooding natures.

In half hour they were at the Mandir which was at the center of the village near the market. Soon Geet and Khushi were done with their pooja and both girls descended the stairs where Maan and Arnav waited for them.

Just then Khushi squealed, "Geet! Chudiyaan! Chalo lete hain!"

Geet smiled uneasily, "Rehne do Khushi! Mujhe nahi lene!"

Khushi pouted. She wanted her best friend to cheer up, "Chalo na! Mazaa aayega!"

Geet bit her lip and then nodded, "Theek hai!"

As they reached the boys, Khushi announced her wish to visit the bangle stalls. The men folk agreed to come with them and all four set to the stalls. As Khushi stopped at the first stall, Geet lost in her thoughts walked a little ahead and started to blankly look around.

Few minutes passed with Khushi looking at the bangles with Arnav and Maan standing nearby and Geet wandering around when they heard the distinctive sound of hoofs. Maan and Arnav's eyes widened as they looked at each other in shock. Not again! Both thought worriedly. None of the sellers or the buyers of the market had yet to hear the hooves' coming towards them but both the men knew that the situation would change in split seconds. They had only few seconds before being either trampled and pushed around by the crowd or coming face to face with one of the sword wielding Daakus.

Maan and Arnav looked around towards the girls and were shocked to notice that while Khushi was still in their line of sight Geet was nowhere to be seen.

"Geet!", both whispered in alarm. Maan took charge, "I will find her!"

"I will take Khushi!", Arnav ordered and both men split.

Khushi was about to pick up another set of bangles to try on when someone grabbed her arm and held it in a tight grip. Khushi turned around and saw it was Arnav. She opened her mouth to lash at him for holding her like that when she heard the distinctive noise of hooves. Her eyes widened just as unrest began in the market. People had noticed it too. Arnav dragged Khushi and a scared Khushi allowed him to knowing that he was taking her to safety.

Geet was wandering around listlessly when people around her started to run. She came out of her thoughts and looked around in confusion. That is when she heard it; the noise of horses coming near. Suddenly, someone grabbed her from behind and turned her around. She opened her mouth to scream only to feel a hand close on her mouth. Her eyes widened as she took in Arnav' standing in front of her. She felt her fear vanish. He would save her, she knew that. He dragged her away and she followed him.

As the couples tried to make their way out of the now running in panic crowd, they went separate ways. But the couples managed to find themselves in the wilderness surrounding the village. As Maan and Geet took a break from their running, Maan mumbled as he continued to look at the way they came, "Yeh Daaku aaj phir se aagaye!"

"Haan! Ajeeb hai! Aise yeh baar baar nahi aate! Achanak se aate hain aur phir kuch mahino tak gaayab rehte hain! Isliye koi unhein aaj tak pakad nahi paaya!", Geet replied while looking towards the area they came from.

Maan looked at her in shock. She actually speaks! Wow! Kal tak toh haklaaye baghair kuch bol nahi paa rahi thi! Aaj ise kya hua? Geet did not notice the appraising glance Maan gave her. Her eyes remained looking around in panic. That is when they heard the horse hooves' again.

"They are coming this way!", Maan commented in alarm. He turned towards Geet and grabbed her hand. Looking into her eyes, he ordered, "Run!" They started to run through the wilderness still hearing the hooves' following them. They could not see them yet but they were sure that due to the speed of the horses the horses will soon come into their view. And if they did not find a place to hide, the Daakus will catch up with them soon.

"Yeh kahaan aagaye hum log? Hey Devi Maiyya! Humein toh bahut darr lag raha hai? Upar se Geet aur Arnavji' se bhi alag hogaye! Pata nahi, woh dono theek hain ki nahi?", Khushi mumbled as they stopped running to take a breather. Arnav had his eyes stationed on the path they came from as he concentrated on what his hearing senses were telling him. He was trying to discern if the Daakus had actually followed them or not.

Khushi continued to mumble, "Hey Devi Maiyya! Agar dono ek doosre saath nahi hai toh? Humaari Geet ka kya hoga? Woh gunde toh use le jaaenge! Hey Devi Mai..."

"SHUT UP!", Arnav roared as he glared at her. Khushi jumped in surprise. Seeing his pleasant nature for last two days, this angry avatar was a shock to her.

"Main yahaan sunne ki koshish kar raha hoon ki whether we are being followed or not! And you are distracting me! So kindly shut up and let me focus!", Arnav spat and tried to focus.

Khushi felt tears well up in her eyes. He never spoke to her like this! She sniffed. Just then Arnav spoke, "We have to get away from here! Uncleji bata rahe the ki woh log Jungle mein rehte hain! In a way, we are in their domain! Better get away from all this wilderness!"

Arnav grabbed Khushi's hand and started to walk away. Khushi stared at him, shocked at his serious avatar. Where has the sweet guy gone? She wondered as she followed him.

As they ran the wilderness ended abruptly and they reached the road. As Maan and Geet ran hand in hand, they came across a truck parked in front of them, facing other side, with the owner on the road talking in the phone, "Achcha heeriye! Main phone rakh raha hun! Phir Amritsar bhi toh pahunchna hai!", the man mumbled into the phone. Maan and Geet looked at each other, both having the same idea. They ran to the truck and without the knowledge of the driver, they started to climb into it. Maan helped Geet first and got in himself just as the driver started the truck.

Just as the truck started to move, both were shocked to see Arnav and Khushi emerge from the Jungle. Both spotted Maan and Geet and started to run towards them just as Maan and Geet leaned over the truck to pull them in. Arnav climbed in just as the truck caught speed. And all three grabbed Khushi's hand and pulled her in just as the truck drove off in full speed. They were safe!

How is that twist people?

Did not expect it right?

Funnily neither did I when I was about to write this update!

Next up, Dilli chalein?

Good comments are welcome, bad comments unwelcome till February ends!

Thank you, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved chapter 9 👏
Next up, road trip, eager for the next part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow superb updates loved them both (part 8-9) can't wait for next part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chalo that reality check was needed for bith geet and arnav.. Hopefully now they all will get their love.. Oooh mujhe bhi dilli jaana hai.. Cool
Yaar.. Cont soon hun
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful update dear OMG dacu came again thanks god they all safe now
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update. Why these dakus are so much behind Geet and Khushi. Are they really daku or someone else. Now all four are moving to Amritsar.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update
Devi maiya ab kya hoga 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update dear ...
maan n khusi ke samne geet n arnav ki ek new side aaya toh dono shocked n surprised ho gaye ...
firse yea daku aagaye ...
but thnk god all r safe n yea kya ? truck pe chadd gaye sab ke sab ? Delhi jaa rehe hai kya ?
can't wait for next chpt ...continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
again unexpected danger.the guys saved d girls n in truck.will the truck lead them 2 delhi?

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