Ishra os-aa ke bhar lo baajuyon mein updt on Feb 12,hug day special

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As its hug day today,and one of my sweet friend want an os from me on ishra on a song suggested by her,so here it is.

But first let me wish all my friends

A VERY HAPPY HUG DAY

Oops did I forgot something, yes her name.she is my sweetie sharmin aka sk-sharmin.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aa ke bhar lo baajuyon mein

Ishita was sitting on the chair keeping a hand on her tummy.she was waiting for Raman.today also he was late.now a days it was a routine that he came late as he is working on his new project but inspite of being busy he never fails to love her ,pamper her.she was thinking about him when her eyes fell on the photo kept on their side table.it was the pic of their first valentine together after he proposed her about eight years back.the pic took her back in the memories when they met .

Flashback

Ishita was in her twelfth. Being the only girl of her parents.she was a pampered child. Her father works in ministry and her mother was a lecturer.they use to love ishita way too much.they use to fulfill her every wish before she demands for it.ishita was also a dutiful daughter. Always came first in class,a great singer and a very chirpy girl.she was very happy in her world but in her dreamland her prince charming was missing.every girl of her class has a boyfriend except her.

There were two reason of it,first she was plum and secondly everyone has a crush on her classmate,shagun arora,the ultimate diva.nobody look at ishita if shagun is around.but ishita wanted a boy who will look at her even if shagun is around.

Its her secret wish to have a boyfriend who will love her beyond her look and figure.

And one day ,her hero took entry in her class and may be in her heart also.Raman Kumar bhalla, a new admission in class twelve.he was smoking hot and extremely dashing,a dream come true for any girl.his papa got transferred to Delhi from Amritsar .so he took admission in this school.it was his first day in school and his friend abhi was showing him the school.

Raman- ur school is too good yaar,but why every girl is looking at me like this.

Abhi- because u r looking so charming,come Raman,let me show u the most beautiful girl of our school.a girl for whom every boy of our school can do anything. I am also behind her for past six months .but she denied my friendship. I think u can win over her.come let me show u.

Raman- let's go.saying so they walk towards the class.

Abhi took him to class and show him shagun,she was wearing a skirt till her knees showing her legs ,her hair was open and so many boys were sitting around her.she was throwing much of attitude on them.

Abhi- she is beautiful naa.

Raman- no she is not just beautiful but very cute also.can I go and meet her.

Abhi- of course go.

Raman entered the room and went towards shagun smiling like an idiot.shagun saw a handsome boy coming towards her ,so she shoo away all other boys and start flaunting her legs some more.but to her disappointment, he walked to ishita ,who was sitting behind shagun,her hair were tied in two braids, she was writing something and tapping her pen on her head thinking something.

He forwarded his hand and said- hi ,I am Raman.and u.

Ishita look at him hearing his voice and was lost in him.he was a very handsome boy wearing a crisp white shirt with blue pant and blazer.she was looking at him blinking her eyes again and again.

Raman smiled seeing her cute action and said flashing his dimples- I asked ur name.

Ishita- r u talking to me.

Raman- of course,I am Raman and u.

Ishita- ishita,ishita iyer.

Raman- nice name,can I sit beside u.

Ishita- u really wanna sit beside me not shagun.

Raman- who shagun.

Shagun-i am shagun,miss shagun arora.every boy wanna sit beside me but if u want u can sir beside me.she said smirking.she don't want him to sit beside ishita coz it will be like an insult to her that some boy will overlook her and sit beside ishita.

Ishita look sadly at him and said- she is shagun,go and sit with her.

Raman- thanks shagun for ur invitation. But I wanna sit beside ishita,if she permits me.can I ishu.I can call u that naa.

Ishita smiled and said- of course u can sit Raman.and u can call me ishu also.

Raman sat beside ishita and start chatting with her.shagun saw them together and fuming in jealousy. She had every boy after her but she couldn't see any boy near ishita,coz she was so jealous of ishita.as she was a very bright student.

Ishita- why u sit beside me.don't u wanna sit beside shagun.

Raman- why I wanna sit beside her.is she queen Victoria.

Ishita- I am also not that.

Raman- I came to u as I want to ask a question to u.

Ishita- ohh, that's the reason.she was sad hearing his answer because everyone wants her only to help in their studies.

Ishita- so what u wanna ask.

Raman- I wanna ask what u eat.

Ishita thinks ,he is making fun of her plum figure.

Ishita- what do u mean by this.

Raman- sorry if I hurt u.but I just wanna ask.what u eat which makes u this much cute and pink.u know u look cute like a pink ,soft teddy bear.

She look at him and look down as her cheek turned red with blush.

Raman- see now ur pink cheeks r turning red.how can u do so.u r just so cute ishu.he said pulling her cheeks.

She smiled and soon they were became good friends.Raman always use to search excuses to be near her,whether its their bus ride to and from school,or their experiments in lab,or their classes.he always be around her,ishita was also start liking his company.but she started feeling embarrassed when everyone in the class start saying he is just too good for her and she is too fat to fit with him.

It was their last week of school.after this week their preparation leave was about to start.Raman was feeling restless coz after their exam their ways will part and on the other hand ishita was sad coz she will loose her only friend who has now became her love also.both don't wanna leave each other.

It was their last day in school and they have a farewell party later in the evening.Raman was determined to propose her today as after today they might not meet.

He was waiting for her in the party wearing a white tux .he has gelled his hair and was looking very handsome .it has been half an hour since he has been waiting but she was nowhere.

He remember her words in the morning,Raman I may not come coz I don't like parties much.

He decided to go and pick her.after half an hour her house door bell rings.amma opened it and saw Raman standing at the door.

Amma-ishu,u will not go to party kanna,raman

Ishita cuts her sentence and said- amma,I don't wanna go there.if Raman calls tell him that I am sick.

Raman- aunty can I go inside.

Amma-go kanna.and take her out.she is too sad don't know why.

Raman went inside and knocked her door but it was ajar.he saw her laying wearing a pink tee and a blue Capri.

Sensing someone she said- I told u naa amma,I don't wanna go.

Raman- ishu.

Ishita turn around only to see him standing on her door.

Ishita- Raman,why u came here .I don't wanna go there.everyone will make fun of me.I am ugly and fat.u go away.

Raman came forward and hugged her tight.

Aa ke bhar lo baajuyon mein
Tumko hai kasam
Jaan meri jaa rahi sanam

She cried in his embrace.

Aa ke bhar lo baajuyon mein
Tumko hai kasam
Jaan meri jaa rahi sanam

Raman wiped her tears and said- do u trust me.

Ishita nodded in yes.

Raman- then come with me.please ishu.see I came only to pick u.and brought papa's white car also just for u.chalogi naa.

She nodded wiping her tears like a kid.he pulled her pink cheeks making them more pink.

Soon they were in the party,he was in white tux and she was wearing a white lacy floor length gown,her hair was tied beautifully in a bun and some strand of hair adorning her beautiful face.today she was looking very beautiful. Every eyes turn towards her today.

Shagun was wearing a black shimmery gown and looking good but ishita was looking extra beautiful today,the blush on her cheeks were adding glow to her already glowing skin.

Everyone was admiring her today and that's make shagun fume in anger.

Raman- see everyone is looking at u only.becoz u r looking breathtaking today ishu.

Ishita look at him and said- I am looking good because u r with me today.thanks for coming to pick me Raman.

Raman hold her palm and kissed it softly saying- thanks for coming in my life ishu.ishita turned pink at his touch.she close her eyes.

Raman- u look too cute when ur cheek turn pink.I just wanna eat them.he said huskily in her ear pulling her closer.

Ishita pushed him a little and was going when he hold her and said- today I will not let u ran away from me ishu.come dance with me.

Ishita- u know I can't dance.

Raman- but today I will make u dance.

Ishita- try it Raman.

Soon everyone were invited on the dance floor.all couple start dancing while ishita was standing in a corner.Raman goes to her and forwarded his hand singing

Aa ke bhar lo baajuyon mein
Tumko hai madam
Jaan meri jaa rahi sanam

She nodded in no but he pulled her to himself and drag her to dance floor. They start dancing.Raman start making her dance ,make her twirl around.she was happy dancing with him.

Kya mohabbat hai
Kya nazara hai
Kal talak yeh dil tha mera
Ab tumhara hai

Kya tamanaa hai
Kya ishaara hai
Humne toh pal pal tadap ke pal guzara hai

Dekho dekho dekho dekho
Ab karo naa mujhpe yun sitam
Jaan meri jaa rahi sanam

Now they start dancing slowly on the beat,she kept her head on his chest and he wounded his arms around her.

Kya ladakpan hai
Kya jawaani hai
Ab tumhare naam saari zindagani hai

Kya haqeeqat hai
Kya kahani hai
Saamne mere ,mere khawabon ki rani hai
Ab saha naa
Ab saha naa jaye mujhse duri ka yeh gham
Jaan meri jaa rahi sanam

Aa ke bhar lo baajuyon mein
Tumko hai kaam
Jaan meri jaa rahi sanam

They were dancing slowly lost in each other,while shagun was fuming in anger wanna teach her a lesson.she think of an idea and stand on her gown and ishita fell down.

Everyone start laughing on her including shagun.

Shagun-i told u naa dancing is not ur cup of tea.moti kahin ki.

Ishita stand up in a while and ran away from there crying bitterly. Raman was going behind her when he heard shagun's friend saying,that's good u make her fall but standing on her long gown.

Raman came back and slapped shagun hard and said- this is for hurting my ishu.

Before shagun can react ,he went away.Raman was searching for ishita when he saw her sitting in a dark corner.going closer he realised she was sobbing.he felt bad,he put his hand on her shoulder.

Ishita turn to look and then said- she is right Raman.I am ugly and fat,u go away from me.u should go to shagun.everyone got attracted to her.

Raman put his finger on her mouth and said- shh,not a word more ishu.I know everyone got attracted to her.u know why,because people always got attracted to cheap thing coz they can afford them.but noone can afford someone so precious as my ishu.so be my good girl and give me a big smile.

Ishita smiled a little.he hugged her and kissed her forehead lovingly.she close her eyes feeling his touch.they remain in same position for sometimes and then she asked-raman,u will forget me after passing twelve.

Raman broke the hug and look at her.her eyes were moist.

Raman- nahi buddhu.I will never forget or leave u.

Ishita- why.

Raman- because I love u ishu.

Ishita look at him in disbelief and said- u really love me.I mean I am not so beautiful and ,

Raman- shh,I told u naa ,not to speak such rubbish.my ishu is world's most beautiful girl.and I love her so much.now can I kiss u.

She look down and nodded in yes blushing hard.Raman smiled and kissed her forehead, she was having goosebumps when he was kissing her,but she was enjoying his touch.she closed her eyes to feel her gentle touch on her face.he kissed her closed eyes,then nose ,then cheeks and at last claimed her lips in a soul searing kiss.

Flashback end

Ishita hugged their pic and said- I love u Raman.come soon naa.we r waiting for u.saying so she closed her eyes.

After an hour ,he entered their room ,only to see her sleeping on the chair hugging their pic tight.he smiled and go to her.took the photo frame and kept it on the table.he picked her in his arms and placed her gently on the bed .he covers her properly with the duvet.

He kissed her forehead and said- sorry ishu,I am late.then kissed her tummy and said- sorry baby,papa is late.

After this,he went to change clothes.after ten minutes ,he came and lays beside her.she came near him and hugged him saying- did u had dinner.

Raman- u r awake.u should sleep ishu.did u take ur medicine.

Ishita- first I asked,did u had ur dinner.

Raman- yes sweetheart,I had my dinner at nine only.I had a meeting.now tell me did u had ur medicine.

Ishita- yes I had. And how's ur day.

Raman- fab as always but I missed my two angels alot.now give me my huggie.

Ishita snuggle closer to him.he wounded his arms around her tummy and said- u have become motu ishu.see u r not coming in my arms.

Ishita- I was always motu but u still love me.

Raman- because that time u were my little teddy and now u have my doll in u.how can I not love u.moreover I don't like when u have became too slim at the time of our marriage.I love my plum ishu only.he said kissing her forehead softly circling his arms around her.she kept her head on his chest closing her eyes.

Aa ke bhar lo baajuyon mein tumko hai kasam.

That's all.will wait for ur responses.

Love
Raksha
Edited by cutieruhi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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resssyyy
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Liked the update?
Nahin
I don't like it.
Kaisa likhti ho aap?
Sach mein I don't like it even a bit.
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SHOCKED?😲
Arrey I loved it
Phir kaise like kar sakti hoon?
KAise likhti ho Diii?
I'm jealous.
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Masti ho gayi
N about Update
it was lovely
I lvd Raman sooo much
He ignored Shagun
He slapped her for Ishu
Wow mera hero
Sorry Ishu ka hero
That was damn cute.
Ishita tumhe toh mil gayi apni prince charming.
Sada khush raho
mataranoi aapki raksha karein.
Seriously not in a mood to give long comment
Sorry
kaan pakadke😊
Edited by Roohachu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful story it proves dat physical attraction is not love and love is to feel d emotions I loved d way Raman approached ishu and their bonding and den I am glad he slapped Shagun after her disgusting act loved d way he proposed her and d way he assured her he loves her
Edited by Sri1091 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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unresss...

firstly sorry for the late comment

amazing os

you have written everything so perfectly

its true that
someone will be born for us
and we may get late in finding them

that's true in this case

i hate that shagun😡
she always hurts ishu

raman is so good
and really prince charming

thanks for pm
please update soon
Edited by detha - 10 years ago
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Awww happy hug day di n such weet n cute story loved it
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Lovely os.
Loved raman in this ,he was very good in it.
He from the very first sight loved ishita .
The most good thing was that he was never interested in shagun.
Loved the party scene .
Loved his confession and cute question that can he kiss her.
Ishu was so sad when he said that he want to ask a question but she turned red at his question as he asked what she eat that she is so pink and cute.
Loved it totally
Edited by Divanru - 10 years ago
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beautiful n cute one...well done...
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Superb OS diii!!!
I luved d way Raman consoled her evrytym she felt she's not beautiful!!!

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lovelllyyy update ...
thanks for pm...

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