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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Loved it...wow what a difference in sanskaar attitude...

Looking forward to read more...

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mayasingh

@mayasingh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: angelpureness
OS complete.
I am sorry guys, I shall not be able to send out pms.
Hope you enjoyed the read.

Goodnight.

I liked it... liked the Sujata reaction when Sanskar teased his mother :)

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sarra0

@sarra0

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

I am really enjoying the series...swara is hurting but is trying to hide it...sanskaar already adjusting to swara thou he doesnt want to...he has no idea the ride he is in for 😆😆liked how he did the pleats not once but twice...the phone convo delaying the meeting at the shake of her head 😆...nice to c sujata here actually care about her son and want him to b the person he once was, the son he once was even if that means giving leeway to swara...

looking forward to reading more...

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-Ros-

@-Ros-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Loooved this part! ⭐️

Sanskaar doing Swara's saree pleats. ☺️ What a lovely sight.

Swara has already made a mess out of his bedroom and she's going to throw water on his well-thought out and meticulously planned out revenge game. Sanskaar has obviously noticed this & makes a note to pull himself out of the trap he's gotten himself into, but ends up prioritising her. I can't wait to see him doing little things for her unintentionally and getting himself worked up about it later.😆

I really like the fact that Swara doesn't sit around moping & instead makes the best out of the shit she's in. She doesn't try to hide her hurt either... she's so transparent.

Sujata. I feel bad for the poor lady. This one is much better than the show one- accepting anything/anyone that helps bring out her old Sanskaar, she's a mother afterall.

Keep going!