Abhigya FF: WOH HUMSAFAR THA last ch pg 76dt 9.4.16

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Posted: 10 years ago

#431

After a month back am reading the conti of last 6parts, but 1thing by reading each everywhere only by baby's 1st kick gave me a smile in this story other than al parts were emotional attached but today while only tears were flowing not a drop but lot.. I had no any of any characters here really more I love shalini a lot what wrong she is done r going through I dnt but she lost martial life for sure & I like to look a view like laxmi.. Abhi & shalini wat bridge made them both to b quite of sharing thr feeling... Abhi I dnt know to understand him he is right r wrong, he is under pain, guilt, lonely, etc..y he washed his feeling for shalini, I liked the care for pragya but that doesn't mean to ignore the shalini... Really he his unjusties to both the women's. Pragya by standing at door & looking to god asking about her normal life of wish & questioning wat he was given his more emotional I had words only tears blocked my view.. Very complicated life of destiny to three them.. Rose ur each & every words speak about everyone heart, extraordinary ur describing & still upto how long u going to take this story, i dnt no but sure whatever ending will not keep me happy coz here someone surely going to b hurt coz I love 3 of them also.. madly waiting for next update..

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shrutigaur37

@shrutigaur37

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Posted: 10 years ago

#432

awsum
beautifully written
even shalini's emotions were portrayed so beautifuly by u
u r really an inncredible writer
made me to ponder over shalini as a gud human being

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anamika.viji

@anamika.viji

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Posted: 10 years ago

#433

Emotional chapter,rose ...abhi , pragya & shalini all emotional... I feel for shalini ...can understand her longingness for a child...but she failed in understanding abhi& his feelings in all...clearly there is no love between them now ..

Finally pragya opening up ...

Waiting for the next ...

Thanx for the pm :)

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Ayesha

@NasreenAyesha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#434

Hey rose.
It is absolutely perfect to see all members emotion keenly and exactly.
Love it

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sudanindia2014

@sudanindia2014

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Posted: 10 years ago

#435

Alone at last ..can we hope for some romantic moments ?
great update loved it

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Kutty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#436

Story is very nice, pragya going speak her inner feelings to abhi... Yes I'm waiting for that , thank u for the wonder ful chapter waiting for the next... Update soon

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Kutty

@princy5050

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Posted: 10 years ago

#437

Hi dear waiting for the update

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Rose

@stranger2rose

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Posted: 10 years ago

#438

Teaser

He watched her intently as she sat on the long couch nibbling on her food. For the first time he saw her struggling with her dinner plate. She was trying hard to swallow but nothing was going inside instead she was intending to throw up something that was rotten within her for a long time. Lost in her thoughts she gazed at the flames, the power had still not resumed however he'd managed to make some fire with whatever kindle that was available. The hall was warm and cozy but she could hardly feel the warmth within her.

" how long were you married ?" his husky voice startled her thoughts. As far as he could understand, there was a lot that she had silently suffered and buried inside her but tonight she wished to free herself from that burden.

She glanced at him and paused for a moment before answering," around six months ." The exact number of days she spent as a married woman, she couldn't recall as all the days were the same, though married for six months but to her it seemed more than a life time.

" I was never a wife for him..just a commodity that he used and abused every night ." Her face creased in disgust as she thought back that they were a married couple, he didn't have to force himself on her every night. Closing her eyes she could see blood everywhere, her hair disheveled, her lips split and swollen, her cheeks bruised and her head pounding after being smashed by him against the wall. A chill ran down her spine as those moments replayed in her mind.

His face scrunched in fury, she had suffered far more than him and tonight in this dim light he could see the scars in her eyes, they were clearly visible. Silent tears ran down her cheeks and he had a strong urge to go up to her and wipe them like before but he felt that now was not the right time, there was still something more that was troubling her.