THE REKINDLING FIRE - RAGSAN & SWASAN FF PART 4 PAGE 15

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Disclaimer : This Story is Adaption Of A Telugu Hit Film , One of My Favorites. I was desperate to write this story on our Swasan, so i'm here with a new story.
I know , i know that i'm very late at giving updates but still i want to start a new story.

This story is completely different from actual concept of Swaragini , but the characters are used here as per MY CONVENIENCE. I hope you all like this...

TITLE CREDITS TO : PUBALI (Sampriti)
Pubi ...🤗 You r such a sweet heart , Thank you so much for your support ...Luv u Loads.

PART 1

CHARACTERS :

Durga Prasad Gadodia - Annapurna Gadodia
Ram Prasad Gadodia - Sujatha Gadodia
Shekhar Prasad Gadodia - Sharmista Gadodia

Three brothers , Durga prasad was elder & head of the family . He is a man of Orthodox values, His younger brothers were always obedient to him .But Shekhar Gadodia had gone against to his brother & married A Bengali girl Sharmista , however Durga Prasad Opposed it , but along with time he accepted his Brother & his wife making sure that Sharmista must follow all their traditions without any fail.

The three brothers were blessed with three beautiful daughters :
Ragini Gadodia - Duaghter of Durga Prasad & Annapurna

Kavitha Gadodia - Daughther Of Ram Prasad & Sujata

Swara Gadodia - Daughter of Shekar & Sharmista

As they don't have any male child in their family , Swara ,Being the youngest was always pampered very much by all & she always disguises her self as tomboy.

Ragini , the elder daughter , innocent & sensitive . She never does anything against her father's wish. She was completely like her father with full of traditional values .

Kavitha , always ends up getting beaten by swara & runs to hide behind Ragini for support.

The Gadodia Mansion was full of happiness & joy with the laughter of three beautiful girls .

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Happiness , Joy , Laughter were now completely taken away from the house . Everyone was habituated to live without happiness . Its been 3 years since the demise of their elder daughter Ragini. Ragini , who was very obedient to her father married a guy 5 years ago, against her father's wish. The whole family was against this , the only one who supported was , Swara her younger sister. Durga prasad passed orders to the whole family not to keep any way of contact with Ragini , not having any option the total family followed the order of family Head.But Unfortunately after 2 years they received news about Ragini's Death in a car accident , Even that couldn't melt Durga Prasad's heart to meet her for last time.But after that he turned his anger & hatred towards the guy , who separated his daughter from him .

The days passed , now the house is decorated to witness a happy moment after a long time . Gadodia's second Daughter Kavitha's marriage fixed with a reputed company holder of the city . The family is very happy after many years .Shekar , who has been observing his brother wanted to bring his happiness back.He vowed to himself that at any cost he will bring Ragini's husband & Her son to India , so that they can attend the marriage & also his elder brother can accept his grand son which was the last memory Of Ragini. So with help of Ram prasad , Sharmista he sent invitation to London , where their Son-in-law with his son is living .But they didn't get any confirmation or reply from him , shekar was desperately waiting for the positive reply from him.


LONDON

A man in his Late Twenties was in deep thoughts , holding the Invitation in his hand . He stared into the invitation , it was golden colour invitation with maroon colour Font saying " Durga Prasad Gadodia & Family Invites YOU " , this one line caught him tight , rushing to the memories back in the past.

He still remember the horrible situation ,3 years back , she on the stretcher of ICU breathing heavily ...
" No ...No Don't do this to me " he whispered in her ears with tears rolling from his eyes.
"I...I'm going ...Please Promise me ,...ki thum hamare bete ko meri parivaar se milavoge...jo pyaar maine ko dhiya ...wo mere beta ko milnaa chahiye...please unhe bathav ki mujhe maaf kare...karoge na..." broken words came from her.

"Aisa kuch nahi hogaaa...hum chalenge India ko wapis...bas...thu mujhe chod ke math jaa...do u hear that?"He shouted at her...

"Promise Me...pllee..pleasee " She trembled with her words.

"Yeah...haa..promise...teek hai "he pacified her making promise to her holding hand , which was dropped at the very moment without life.

"RAGINIII..." he shouted his heart out .

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"Papa...Papa..." came a little boy running to him.He wiped his tears & lifted the little boy in his arms

"Hey Champ...wassup?? kuch shararathi ki thumne aaj? phirse badi maa ko sathayaa thune?"he asked the little cute boy...

" No..No...i didn't trouble badi maa today..."said the boy with his cute voice.

"Very good...then yeh rahaa thumharaa gift " he handed over a dark chocolate to him

"wow..." the little boy grabbed the chocolate with joy in his eyes"thank you Papa"he kissed his father...

"muaahhh" he too kissed the kid

the boy struggled to free himself from him & landed on the ground ,rubbed his cheeks where his father kissed him.This reminded him of his dear wife ,Ragini,too used to rub her cheeks in the same way.He smiled to himself.

"papa...mujhe aap se ek bath bathani hai : said the boy...

"achaa...kya hai...bathaav jaldhi " he said kneeling down on the floor...

"wo...aaj...maine badimaa ko nahi sathayaa...par ..par "he paused

"par..kya? bolo..."he asked the kid

"par...main badepapa ko bahutha sathayaa...unki files par ink giradhiyaaa"he admitted his crime & ran away from their with his chocolate...

He smiled seeing his son ran away , then went to meet his brother Adarsh
" hey ...thum agayii" asked adarsh seeing his brother.

"i need to speak with you "repled his brother...

"i know...about the invitation...well...mujhe lagtha hai hume janaa chahiye...akhir ithne saal ke baadh hume kuch positive reply mila unse...kam se kam ragini ke liye tho hume janaa chahiye ..." explained his brother.

"ha...hume bhi yehi lagtha hai...hum sab shaadi mein janaa chahiye " came Pari's voice ,Adarsh's wife.

"actually main bhi janaa chahtha hoon...yeh Ragini ki akhiri wish thi...jab wo zindhaa thi wo hamesha koshish karthi rahi ki use wapis uski parivaar ki pyaar mil jaay..par..."he paused .."Khair...main hamare jaane ki arrangements kartha hoon" he left the room saying this.

Adrash & Pari looked at each other & smiled , They too were partners with Shekar ,Sharmista & Ramprasad .


To Be Continued...

Thanks for Reading ,

Suhasini




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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yaayye I'm first on this ff...

Fantabulous start... Suhasini... But who is Ragini husband its a suspense.. Awww very curious to know...
My prediction is Sanskaar... May be I'm wrong... Tooo..

Swara was boy girl... Lovely... Waiting to know who it was...

Love yaaa 🤗
Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very unique concept.
i think that man is Sanskar right?
thanks for the PM dear...update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey suhasini...
nice intro...sounds interesting.. 😊
who is this guy ..laksh or sanskar ...!!!!
well plz update soon
love
simi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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woww!!!
lovely start suhu🤗
plz continue soon
Kavitha is swara's sisters...hmmm
lovely concept
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Suhasini dear you are such a talented writer 🤗
I like the way you presented all the characters , very unique plot I must say...👏
I know who is the father of little boy but not revealing it as I would like you to show it later in your own amazing way 😳
Love you sweetheart 😳
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice concept
Ragini, Kavita and swara are sisters.
I really loved the story.
Waiting for your update
Edited by Sakkiyah - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hasi dear tumne Ragini ko mar diya?

Its a good beginning. And I'm happy that you chose one of my fav movies as the base for your story.
Would love to see how the story develops.

Jaldi update kardena. I'm waiting.
Edited by Sree8410 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Suhu ragini died?????anywys starting kamal ki he. do pm me for updates.soulmate bhi update kar na pls.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Santhosham in SR style... Awww...!is varun nagarajuna...😳 suhu muuuhhh...!dear if ur infornt of me I might have ur real wala kiss love you for this FF continue...😉 when u said 3brothers i got another ready movie in mind...when I read ragini died in cat accident I got it santhosham movie and jumped...
Edited by Tapathi - 9 years ago

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