THE REKINDLING FIRE - RAGSAN & SWASAN FF PART 4 PAGE 15 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Suhu baby pehle toh sorry 4 coming late but Koi nhi m just loving it 🤗 feet tunne kya likha hai maan no firse Apna dil harne pe majboor kar fits hayye!!! Loved d story n love u more BR 😉 mwuah... tc baby keep posting love ya 😳
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awesome update dear
u r an terrific writer i dont have much words dear i am so glad that i met u dear.
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Suhu u made me speechless. U r so talented this is perfect.. I mean this is out of the box thinking its incredible. I really liked the chapter 1.
Relations twisted hehew!! Mujhpe gai h tu .. But it was Fantastic yrrr. But sanky and ragini I can't imagine. But u still u framed it so well ..
Update asap .

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: manisha.8148

suhu thanks for early update 🤗 awesome yaar. 👏 kya baat,kya baat,kya baat to banta h🤗🤗🤗


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Originally posted by: Niyatiswaragini

Suhu u made me speechless. U r so talented this is perfect.. I mean this is out of the box thinking its incredible. I really liked the chapter 1.
Relations twisted hehew!! Mujhpe gai h tu .. But it was Fantastic yrrr. But sanky and ragini I can't imagine. But u still u framed it so well ..
Update asap .

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Niyati


Jaanu...your comment means alot for me dear ...hahaaa can't imagine Ragsan?? what would have happened if i made it Kav----Kar 😆😆😆

Thank youuu ..Love u too Jaanu 🤗


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aamias

awesome update dear

u r an terrific writer i dont have much words dear i am so glad that i met u dear.

Asmi...I'm so glad that u liked it...🤗
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PART 3

"Aandhe ho kya aap? Agar driving karna nahi athaa tho chalathe kyun aap?" she started to scold him.

But he was lost in her , he knew that she was speaking but don't know what she was saying him , seeing him smiling at her , she left with disgust & reached a Taxi.

He realised that she left , came out of his car & searched for her on all sides ...but she left ...he stood in the rain completely drenched.

That night he couldn't sleep ,he was rolling on the bed, the visuals of her disturbed him , her innocent face , her eyes , her lips.He sat on bed & smiled to him "kya hua mujhe?? koun hai wo ladki?"

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Next Day he again saw her talking to a group of girls & laughing like a kid at someone's joke ."Oh God...wat a beautiful smile " he thought to him self.He thought to speak with her , but he don't know how to initiate it.He stalked her the complete day , following her everywhere she went , observed her every action , when she laughed he too laughed with her without knowing any reason for laughing,While she was climbing down the stairs her leg was twisted which made her about to fall but he gave the reaction.He desperately wanted to speak to her, but how,he didn't even know her name.The day came to end.

Then again next day he was waiting for her at the seminar hall , but he didn't see her .After few minutes he saw her going towards the elevator Alone, he cooked something in his mind & smiled .then he too rushed after her. She went into the elevator & punched the number ,the doors were about to close but he made unexpected entry into the elevator ,she was shocked to see a man covering his face with a piece of cloth , probably kerchief ,only his eyes were visible.She was about to shout ,but the elevator doors closed & he caught hold of her arm & twisted her to other side & said in a sturn voice
"Don't shout ...hum thumhe kidnap kar rahe hai "

"Kya...Kidnap ..mujhe kyun?? "she asked trembling

"hamari netha ko police ne arrest ki hai ...aur hume patha hai ki thum home minister ki beti ho...thume kidnap karke hum apni netha ko jail se chudvadhengaa" he replied her...

"Nahi...Nahi...main kisi home minister ki beti nahi hoon...aap ko kuch galath faimi hui hai...chodiye mujhe plzz" she pleaded..

"Chup...hume sab patha hai thumhari baare mein " he said

"nahi...sach mein ...main sach batha rahi hoon " she pleaded once again

"tho thumhara naam kya hai? kaha se ho ? apni details bathaa hume " he demanded

"mera naam Ragini ...Ragini Gadodia , D/o Durga prasad Gadodia , hamare papa jeweller hai , hum Kolkata se hai ..." she replied innocently..

"achaa...tho kuch pyaar vyaar ka chakkar hai ?" he asked

"nahi ...nahi ..." she replied instantly

"engagement aisa kuch hua kya ?" he demanded..

"nahi tho ...par aap ye sab kyun pooch rahe ?" she asked doubtfully

"wo..wo..thaki future mein kuch problem na ho isliye..." he replied her & the elevator doors opened , he quickly came out of the elevator & ran to hide from her.

After he left , she too came out & searched around but she couldn't see anyone , she breathed & relaxed , rushed to meet her friends..

NEXT DAY

He was with his friends , explaining the whole scenario to them
"Guys...aap log ko dekhna tha use..arey mujhe kuch nahi idea mila isliye maine 70's ka idea use kiya..wo ladki tho bahuth boli hai ...she revealed all her details..." he said laughing hard & all were enjoying . He stopped seeing her walking with her friend , she too saw him & made a doubtful face trying to remember.

He sensed her feelings & made an escape from his friends. She too followed him 7 blocked his way

"hey...you...kal lift mein wo kidnapper thum hi tha na? " she questioned him

" bahhh bahhh bahhh " he acted

"nataak math karooo ...i know u speak ..." she ratarded him

"nahi nahi ...i don't know to speak " he bit his tongue

"kithne jhoote ho thum...aur kyun kiya mere sath aisa?" she vented her anger

"acha ...kyun kiya ? maine aisa ?" he questioned back

"mujhe kya patha...thumne kyun kiya aisa?" she demanded him

"haa...yahaa ithne saare ladkiyan hai..par maine aap ke sath hi aisa kyun kiya? " he asked with a mile

"haa kyun kiya ?" she again questioned...

"wahi..tho kyun kiya maine ? " he repeated

"kyu... " she realized before completing her sentence.

"Haa...ab samajh mein aay aapko ...well i'm Sharath , working as architect ,now came here to represent my company as a project leader... & u ..Ms.Ragini Gadodia..Nice to meet u " he extended his hand.

But she gave disgusting looks to him & left . He smiled seeing her leaving.

NEXT DAY

He saw her speaking to one of the organizer ,she too gave him angry glares

"very well ...Ragini ...u have done a great job " said Mr.malhotra

"Good Morning ...Mr.Malhotra " he wished him & raised his eye brows seeing her

"bathameez ladka " she whispered to herself...

"Good Morning ...come let me introduce you to Ms.Ragini Gadodia , Ragini This is Mr.Sanskaar Maheswari , Project leader , working with L&T " completed Mr.Malhotra

Ragini was confused , as far as she remember he introduced himself as Sharath , she looked at him , He nodded his head in disagreement for Mr.malhotra's statement & winked at her.She was shocked at his action & literally dragged Mr.Malhotra to a side & whispered to him

" sir u r mistaken , he is not Mr.Sanksaar Maheswari , his name is sharath , he is cheating you "

But he listened to them & said "yek kya Mr.Malhotra , is ladki mujh par shak kar rahi hai ...dekhne mein teek taak lag rahi hai ..par pagal ki tarah bath kar rahi hai ? " he said

"Haaa...kya main pgala hoon ..achaa tho aap Mr.sanskaar maheswari hai? chalo ap apni ID card dhikayiye " she demanded

"Mr.Malhotra , she is insulting me...what's this ?" he asked him & about to leave

Mr.Malhotra was riffed between these two , he didn't whom to convince , he just turned his head to both their sides.

"Arey ja kaha rahe ho aap , the great Mr.sanskaar maheswari please show the card " saying that she dragged his card from his pocket & was shocked to see his name "Sanskaar Maheswari "

"Hahaa...maine kahaa na Ragini " saying this Mr.Malhotra left attending a call

Sanskaar stood infront of her smiling , she was still holding the card confused & shocked .He winked once again to her & took the card from her .She turned to leave ,but he blocked her way.

"okay...i'm sorry ...maine mazaak kiya tha aapse apni name chupako..now let me introduce my self to you ...Hi , Myself Sanskaar Maheswari , remaming you know about me ...if u don't mind kya aap coffee pe chalenge aap mere saath " he kept his proposal infront of her .

She ,without replying turned & left from there.

AFTER AN HOUR.

everyone were rushing to Seminar Hall , he again blocked her way & asked
'Yek Kya Ragini , aap ne jawab dhiye bhina chale gayii"

"just leave my way ...main kahi nahi jaane wali hoon "she replied him trying to leave

But he was blocking her way "arey aise kaise nahi chalenge? " he asked

"thumse mathlab ?" she asked him folding her hands across her chest

"agar thum nahi chaloge tho..." he continued to say

"tho...tho kya karenge aap? " she asked with wide eyes

"tho...main ye seminar nahi attend karoongi " he blurted out

"Alright ...math kijiye...mujhe kya lena dhena... " she replied him

"arey agar main yeh seminar nahi dhoonga tho mera job chala jayegaaa " he said to her

"I don't care ..." she said & left to seminar hall

He made a face & took off his blazer , sat on the sofa thinking .

The Seminar started , various companies project leaders were giving seminars, she was noting down the main points of the seminar , suddenly she realized that his name was being announced.

"Now... Mr.Sanskaar Maheswari of L&T " announced

everyone was looking for him , she too searched around the hall,but he was no where . She closed her eyes & hit her head with palm, then she made her way to exit.She searched for him here & there , he was leaning on the sofa playing game in his mobile.She stood in front of him & said

"Aap ko andhar bula rahe hai..."

"Bulane dhijiye ..aap ko kya u don't care ...even i don't" he replied without shifting his gaze from mobile.

"yeh kya hai?? plzz jayiye andharr ..."she requested him

"Teek hai...tho aap coffee pe chal rahe hai na?" he asked for confirmation standing

"No...i didn't say that " she answered

Hearing her reply ,he again leaned on to the sofa & continued to Play "tho mujhe seminar nahi dhena hai "he said

"ur wish...i just thought to inform you that's it "she turned to move

The announcement was audible now to the "Mr.Sanskaar Maheswari Of L&T "

she stopped & said to her self " Maa ne kaha tha humse ..kyun ye computer vamputer ,ghar mein raho aur khana banana seekho...lekin hum chali ayii ..ab tho ye mujhe ithanaa pareshan kar rahaa hai ". She again turned to him & continued "Don't you have any responsibility towards your work ?"

"aap ko kyun? maine kaha naa ...agar main ye seminar nahi dhoonga tho mera job chala jayega ,kyun ki mere company ne bahuth invest kiya hai ek project par ,jise main lead kar raha hoon aur usi ke baare mein mujhe seminar dhena hai...par aap tho mere sath coffee pe nahi chal rahe ...tho main kaise dhoon?" he spoke without break

"dhono ka connection kya hai ?" she asked confused.

"connection yeh hai ki...bas mujhe aap ke saath coffe pe jaana hai...par aap nahi a rahe ,isliye main seminar nahi dhoonga ,tho mere company ko loss hoga aur mera job chala jayegaa...ye sab ki jimmedar honge aap..sirf aap "he said pointing to her.

she was dumbstruck with his words , he examined her for few seconds &went near her & whispered in her ear "kya jalenge aap ?"

she moved with a jerk & again heard the announcement , turned to him "teek hai..jalenge ..please jayiyee..."she requested him

He smiled ,collected his blazer & rushed to seminar Hall , before entering the hall he turned back to her & said "Sharp 5PM i'll be at your Hostel "

She was relaxed & went into seminar hall.He was explaining his project ,she watched him with unknown smile on her face , may be she too was falling for him.He completed his seminar,the hall was full of claps & she too clapped jumping .He observed her & smiled at her.She realized what she was doing & composed herself & left the hall.He too followed her

"Hey...Thank you " he said

"For? "she asked him

"For agreeing to come for a coffee "he said smiling

Seeing him , she laughed ...He didn't understand y she was laughing

"Aap ko kya lagaa...aap balckmail karenge aur hum maan jayenge ?" she said clearing his confusion

"mathlab ?" his smile was gone

"Hum nahi a rahe hai...please aap apna time waste math kijiye hamare peeche..aap ko seminar ke liye manana tha aur humne kiya..hamara kaam hogayaa hai..so please " she left sayiing this.He stood their with folded hands seeing her

EVENING 05:00 PM
HOSTEL

Ragini was entering the hostel & stopped seeing sanskaar waiting for her.she went near him & said

"AAp...yahaa kya kar rahe hai? maine kahaa naa aapse " she didn't complete her sentence , he interrupted her

"Mujhe aap ke saath coffe pe janaa hai...aaj subah aap ne dekha na meri zidd..ab bhi jab thak ab nahi ayenge main yehi par aapka wait kartha rahoonga "

"teek hai..i don't care "she turned to leave & again she said to him "dekhiye ..main apni kamare jakaar kuch dher ke baadh cinema heroine ki tarah kidiki se aapko dekhke, aap par taras khake nahi aneali hoon..."she left saying this

she went straight to her room , got freshen up ,her roommate shilpa still didn't come , she watched TV for some time .Then it started to rain heavily , she thought of him , went near the window to see him ,but changed her mind remembering her words & came back , went to sleep.

09:00 PM
She woke up at the knock sound of the door , she opened the door , her room mate shilpa came completely drenched

"Ragini ...thume yaad hai wo Sanskaar ...wahi re ...L&T ladka abhi thak bahaar tamasha kar raha thaa " said shilpa

"Kya hua ?? " asked Ragini

" patha nahi uski kisi friend ne uske saath coffee pe jaane ke liye kaha tha..par ab wo nahi ayi tho wo usi ka wait kar rahaa tha...warden jithni baar poochi par usne us ladki ka naam nahi bathayaa...ab thak yehi tha..abhi abhi warden ki kehane se chalaa gayaa " said shilpa coming from washroom after changing her clothes.

That night she couldn't sleep peacefully , she decided what to do the next day

NEXT DAY
09:00 AM

Ragini saw sanskaar at a cafe reading newspaper , she went to him & took paper from his hand

"arey Ragini thum...agar paper chahiye tho pooch sakthe the naa " he said full of sarcasam

"stop it...kyun kar rahe ho aap aisaa? " maine kahaa na wait math kijiye ...aap samajhthe kyun nahi hai? hamare ghar mein ye sab nahi chalegaa...agar unhe patha chalega tho meri career khatham ho jayegi..kyun ap mere liye problem create kar rahe ho ? she asked sanskaar

Sasnkaar felt very bad for her , he composed himself & said

"I'm sorry Ragini , maine nahi socha ki main thume problem create kar raha hai..aaj se main apni shakal thak thume nahi dhikavoonga , thume disturb nahi karoonga " he said & left from there.

He stood by his words , he ignored her , he didn't dusturb her but appeared to be very sad for next two days.She observed him many times , but when ever she see him he was alone , not with anyone's company.

AFTER 2 DAYS

Sanskaar was walking on the road , just then Ragini came out of a shop he saw her & went near her "Main bahuth koshishi ki Ragini ,but nahi ho raha hai mujhse...main kisi old movie hero ki tarah akele baitna ,akele rehana , koya koya rehanaa aur thum cinema heroine ki tarah mujhe tras ke saath dekhna..kya hai yeh sab? i can't do this...so i'm telling u now..dekho thum mujhe bahuth pasand ho ..main pyaar kartha hoon thumse..thumse shaadi karna chahtha hoon...thum bhi ache se scohke apni parivaar se baath karke...ek ghnate mein HAA kehadho mujhe " saying this he laughed & ran from theri "Ek ghante mein Ragini ..."he shouted

She was very happy to see him again laughing after 2 days & then she remembered some important work & hurried.


RAILWAY STATION

A young girl in her early early twenties stepped out of train .She was wearing Jeans & white colour TEE. She was searching for someone ,then she saw him with a flower bouquet.He was coming towards , finally he reached her & said
"Hi ...welcome to Darjeeling " he handed over the bouquet

"Maine socha ki apni MD ki sister koi middle age aunty types hogi ,...par aap tho very young & beautifulhai "he said smiling to her

she was mesmerized at him & stood looking lost at him

"Sanskaar ...come fast ,mam is here " shouted one of his colleagues poiting towards a old lady in her fifties

"Oh god...aunty vahaa hai " sanskaar hold his head & ran from her ,then again he turned towards her & took the bouquet from her "I'm sorry ...main sirf bouquet leke ja raha hoon..apna compliment nahi...sach mein u r beautiful ..once again welcome to Darjeeling "saying this he gave her a red rose from the bouquet & left.

She didn't speak ,just listened to him & saw him go .After few minutes a hand tapped her shoulder , she turned to see

"Sorry Swara...late ho gayii " said Ragini making excuse

Seeing Ragini ,swara shouted in happiness "Hey Sissy Ragz...good news...I'm In LOVE ...I'm in Love...Love at First sight "

"Kya...koun hai ? pagal ho gayi kyaa? " asked Ragini

"nahi...abhi dekha tha use...naam bhi nahi pathaa " said swara searching for him

"Offoo...chalo pehale yahaa se..." said ragini to swara

Swara & Ragini both walked towards the Taxi.



To Be Continued...


Thanks For Reading

Suhasini

Edited by hasinig89 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sanskaar Maheshwari of L&T hahahaha...kartikeya of L&T...😉WOW...!swara enterd...ab aayega mazza...!pakah,confident lock kardey...😉
Edited by Tapathi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome suhasini 👏
Loved it
Sanskar stalker 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Suhu aisa mt kr yrr bechari swara sanskar loving ragini, n swara loves him aww gawwd 😭
Becharri swara she would be heartbroken ,, but its fb na to koi nai .. But RagSan mere lie hazam krna mushkil ho ra h 😆😆

Tujhe iske lie I'll give navel price🤣 really well framed .. Sanky ka stalking attitude 😳
Ber sweet update asap

Love u

Niyati🤗

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