Arshi / Sandhir FF Necessary to be alive to love Chapter 35 on Pg 50! - Page 25

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Posted: 9 years ago

Okay guys!
I am hugely disappointed by the response I am getting on the ff!
(Of course by saying this, I exclude my sweet reviewers! Guys u encourage me! Love u!)
Now coming to the point, I was a newbie when I started this, my first ff on IF, that time I had thought that the response would increase day by day, gradually!
But nothing like that is happening!
Instead, the response seems dropping down to a drastic level!
The people who are interested seem dropping!

Guys I cannot understand what is making u all refrain from the ff - the non hyperlinked PMs, the tag Arshi on the title or the plot?

If the first one is the reason, sorry guys inuoloadmfrom a tablet where I do not know hiwntp hyperlink!
If the 2nd one is the reason, guys I am equally fan of Sandhir and Arshi! Both are my love! I cannot differentiate between them! N there are as many Sandhir scenes in this as there are Arshi's, in fact I think more!
This was just a clarification to the misunderstanding mid u have any!

N if the reason is the third then plz tell me if u don't like it and if I should stop!!!

Of course it is upto u, to choose the ff u read, but I need to know actually how many people are interested! Coz I am frustrated!
Frustrated that after giving so much time and brains on this ff despite my busy exams schedules, I do not get so much a response that fills at least a page!
So I have decided to halt the story if u are not interested!
Considering the response on the upcoming update, I will decide whether to hold it on or keep it on hold!

Plz kindly tell me if I should stop or whatever u think I should do with this ff!!

PS : Sorry if I sounded rude, I am actually frustrated, not angry! N I don't mean to offend anyone! Neither I intend to be rude!

Love,
Erina!!!😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey please please please update nah yaar !!
I love this story !!...
Please dont stop !!...
Pretty please
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Posted: 9 years ago
I believe non hyperlinks is the only problem so for that see below

Click on that icon then paste ur link

Don't worry ur story rocks don't be disheartened my friend
😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Erina
don't be disappointed with the response baby
we love the FF
and the loyal readers always read what you wrote
continue the story after your exams are over

stay happy and be positive

Love u
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: crabysorus

I believe non hyperlinks is the only problem so for that see below

Click on that icon then paste ur link

Don't worry ur story rocks don't be disheartened my friend
😉


Thnxxx for the suggestion dear! It actually works!
I now wonder why didn't I ask this before! Thnxx my friend I owe u this one!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Heya guys,

The end of prefinals made me so happy that I am up with an update!
Obviously, I stick to my words, this will be a deciding chappy for me!
The response will decide this ff's fate!

Dedicated to Ridssi, Vrindu and Pranu di! Q? Q k darakar chhoti so bacchi se post karwaya inhone!!!😆

Special thanks to Vicky aka crabysorus who has finally taught me how to hyperlink! Thnx dearie!!!

This is gonna go hell long coz I have too much to fit in a chappy!

CHAPTER 31 :- THE BLACK NIGHT!!!

Recap :- Sanyukta talks to some Jaan and Rd overhears!
Somebody has mixed sleeping pills in Ranshi's water!

Get going,

The snow poured at entire Simla on the darkest night!
It was so dark that it seemed that the goddess Selene was angry with the human kind and has ordered the moon to hide!
The mercury levels dropped down to a drastic level!
Looking at the pale face adorned with saline pearls, her nose turning red as she shivered due to sobs and cold, he wasn't able to conclude whether he should disturb her privacy or walk back!
She was crying, leaning on the railing of the college terrace since 15 mins!
Reluctantly deciding to let go, he turned, only to run to her the very next moment, listening to her shriek as she sat down on her knees with a thud!

Khushi screamed with pain overtaking her senses as she held her head!
Arnav ran to her and embraced her in a hug, kneeling down to her level!

"Aaah... it... it hurts!", she cried as her head hurt like hammers were aimed at it!

"Ssshhh... be strong! Just the matter of a day!", Arnav spoke sweet nothings!
He began soothing her by rubbing her back!
Her salty tears were now wetting his shirt!

All of a sudden, a hollow feeling took over him!
He was feeling helpless!
Compulsion was at its peak!
More than he had ever had before!
He had never felt this, not even when he had lived 2000 years as a living corpse!
Khushi held his shirt in fists and screamed whilst Arnav's eyes shed tears as he hugged her more tightly!

**********

~~ The hero hugged the heroine as she accepted his proposal! ~~

Lavanya snuggled into Parth as he wound his hand around her shoulder!
They smiled looking at each other!!
Leaning on his shoulder removing the handle of the theatre seat, she whispered,

"I had never thought that I will fall for someone in so less time! I love u Parth!"

"I love u too!", Parth confessed!

And amidst the flakes of snow pouring at the world outside, the two lovers in the theatre felt fortunate to have found each other!!!

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"Aaah! Aah!", the room was filled with groggy cries of pain!
Randhir was sound asleep in the room but the pain was still giving him hard time!

Suddenly his cries started subsiding!
This was not out of blue!
It was because of a soft pair of hands that started massaging his forehead!
The soft touch was a remedy!
His lips began curving in a smile... and the person in the hoodie, the owner of those hands, smiled looking at him!

*********

"Khushi ssshh! Be strong! Please be strong!", he crushed their frames and pleaded!

It was as if his life depended on her welfare!
Khushi snuggled her head in the crook of his neck!
He felt relieved as her sobs began subsiding!

But suddenly... his eyes started turning blue, his head started hurting more than one could ever imagine!
Oh no! What was happening to him!
His nails began growing long!
His teeth transformed into dangerous fangs!
His eyes turned instant shades of greenish blue, then bluish and finally settling to blood red!
He has transformed into a complete vampire now!
Crushing Khushi more into himself, he began keeping Khushi firm in her place!
One look on him and the truth was exposed!
He feared the worst now!

"Oh no! Ab kya karun! I am transfiguring! Khushi ko kab tak rokun mujhe dekhne se! Kuch toh karna hoga warna is ladki ka shikar Siddharth se pehle mai rahunga... ya fir mai hi iska shikar na karlun...", Arnav thought nervously!

Khushi was shocked by the way he was holding her!
She was feeling something fishy!
She started struggling in his embrace to turn!

"Oh Shit! Why does she have to be so restless?! What should I do now?!"
Fortunately, a cunning plan occurred to him!

He slowly lifted his hand from her back and pressed her nape with his forefinger!
Khushi gasped, but the next second she was lying unconscious on his shoulder!
Arnav breathed a sigh of relief!

Lifting her head, he looked at that tear stained angelic face!
Oh how innocent she looks!
Her eyes rolled occasionally due to the pain and she began groaning slowly!
Cupping her cheeks with his hands, before he knew what he was doing, he lifted her head and placed a lingering kiss on her forehead!
She relaxed against his lips!
Now he slowly arched his lips towards her cheeks and kissed them one by one!
Oh what was happening to him!
He began staring at her smiling!
Had been in his senses, he wouldn't even have thought of doing anything like this, but now he was spell bound!
Spellbound by her beauty, her innocence, her... everything!

Suddenly a trickle on his head by the sudden pain brought him back to senses!
He blinked way too many times to understand what he was doing!
Guilt overtaking his senses, he kept her head on his lap n dialled a number!

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The smiling lips did not know how they landed on the sleeping form's forehead!
She kissed his forehead for a good 2 mins before pulling back, her face inches away from his!
Sitting in front of him, his angelic face was a spell for her and she was definitely bound!
A very handsome, beardless young man with a s**y stubble and an ideal physique.
As the embodiment of perfectionism, he could be cruel and destructive too!
No doubt he was as divine as Apollo!
A perfect example of fine craftsmanship!

She examined the work of the Almighty with her gently slanting hazel eyes, running her slender fingers over his smooth carvings, perhaps blushing at his sweet smile and pleasuring moans and groans!
The sleeping Randhir was way too handsome than the arrogant awoke form... so innocent!
Venus and Cupid worked their charm on her. Sweetness flowed in her veins for the man who played there with his eyes closed!
She was tipped with love, and now Passion for Randhir flowed deep in her breast!

She did not know how her lips landed on his cheeks, feeling them the most soothing thing!
And just as she pulled back, he smiled his best, for her lips were no less a sweet torture to him!
And oh... her eyes landed on those forbidden hard petals!
She reminisced the first touch of theirs on hers!
It was divine!
No doubt she was struggling then, but saying she did not enjoy it, was definitely a white lie!
Oblivious to her own actions, she forwarded her lips towards his, closing her eyes in anticipation of the coming pleasure, and touched them slightly with his!

He groaned in pleasure!
Taking all this as a dream, he wanted this slumber to last long!
Little did he know that this was not his dream!
With closed eyes still, he groaned in pleasure as she slowly held his lips in hers and sucked them gently, spellbound!

~~~ We were both young when I first saw u, I close my eyes and~~~

Taylor Swift's melodious voice echoed the room and brought the lady back from her Randhir land!
No this wasn't music from the skies, it was her mobile indicating an incoming call!

She left his lips and got up, staring at him in horror!
What the...! What was she doing?
She was repeating history!
His serene smile broke her heart!
It was as if she was ditching his innocence!
Giving him false hopes by falling for him!
She held her forehead, tracing her fingers in her hair in nervousness!
No she did not do this!
How can she? After all she was...
But she had! And she knew it!
Her tears found their way to the valleys of her face!
She wished she hadn't done this!

~~~ So I sneak out in the garden to see u, we keep quiet coz we're dead if they knew, so close your eyes~~~

The melodious song again reached her hearing organ!
She realised her mobile was continuosly ringing from almost 5 mins!
Wiping her tears, she picked the call, knowing already who the caller would be!

**Phone Convo**

Sanyukta :- "Hello Devil!"

Arnav :- "Angel! Mai terrace par hun! Plz come here, quick! Please!"

Sanyukta :- "Terrace par? Tum forest nhi gaye? Aur kya hua? Tumhari voice itni changed q hai?"

Arnav :- "Sab batata hun! U come soon!"

Sanyukta :- "Alright! I am coming!"

**End of Convo**

Putting her hoodie on, she rushed to the terrace!
Arnav stood there, his hands on the railing and back facing her!
Khushi was lying down with the jacket under her head!

"Devil kya...", her eyes landed on Khushi lying unconscious on the floor and she was afraid!
Arnav turned back listening to her!

"Angel actually...", his voice was completely changed with the fangs accompanying his teeth now!

Looking at him, she gasped!
For a second, she was scared by his true form!
Yes it was scary... he was scary... with his eyes red, his skin glowing, his nails long and his fangs erupting from his mouth!
It wasn't that she hasn't seen a vampire earlier, but he was scarier! May be because of this night!
She looked at him, then turned to Khushi and then again looked at him!
Then she realised the situation, rather mistook it!
The sleeping form of Khushi, Arnav's changed form! May be he had... oh no!

"What have u done to her? Have u killed her?", she asked in horror, approaching him, looking at Khushi all the while!

"U think I can do that?", Arnav asked!

"No... then what has happened to her?", she asked recollecting her composure and looking at him!
No doubt how much scary he looks in his vampiric form, she knew he was gold at heart!

"I made her unconscious!"

"What?! Why?"

"She was crying here... out of pain and just as we hugged, I changed into this! And I had to..."

"But couldn't u just change into a human again? Why this??"

"No I can't come into the human form until I feed myself, because today, my human form has gone! And until I feed myself from the sacred hunt, I ain't going to become a human again!"

"Oh god! Then u must rush to the forest!"

"I will! We need to take Khushi to the room and I need the hoodie for that! I can't take her like this u see!"

"Yeah!"

She removed her hoodie and gave it to him!
Taking Khushi back to the room and making her lie on the bed, Arnav bid adieu to Sanyukta and left for the forest!

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A huge tent with a large roof was made in the centre of the jungle!
Entering in, he could see a small wooden plank arranged at the corner of the tent, for the hunted animal!
Muggle vamps, in number of 20 - 30, gathered together, absorbing the power that they were slowing receiving!
Daylight glow could be seen in the tent despite the charcoal dark night outside, the result being the glowing skins of the paranormal forms!

"Who is the hunter today?", Arnav asked his family!

"You!", Ananya declared!

"What? Why?", he was shocked!

"Don't u think, an off from hunting since almost a month was too much?", Vardhan cocked his brow!

"Ohk! Fine!", Arnav agreed reluctantly, "but what's the hunt?"

"The neighboring village, Dhalli, is facing a lot of terror these days! Being the gateway for the thickest forest in Asia, the Hasan valley, they are facing threat by a dreadful lion! It is attacking not only animals, but people. You have to hunt the lion for today!", Arjun declared!

Arnav nodded his head in acceptance!
Alright, it wasn't hard for him to hunt, being from a royal family!

"Get going soon then! Shyam and Aliena will come with u!", Ananya ordered!

"Alright!", the trio chirped in unison and set off to hunt the most dreadful beast, the lion!!!

Precap :- The lion hunt!!! New twists and new entries!!! SANYUKTA'S PAST FINALLY REVEALED!!!

I am soo sorry Pranu Di that I couldn't reveal Sanyu's past in this part but their were too many events to fit in and the chappy grew hell long so had to split it!
Next part me pakka!
Plzz plzz aap love intensified and 2s post karing! Itni badi saza mat dena! Aakhir mai apki chotu shi sissy hun na!!! **pouting**

Guys, as u had already told, that this will be a deciding chappy!
I will continue considering the response!
So plz review if u liked it or tell me if I should stop!
If u like it, as in like button wala like it n also LIKE it, soo plz do review too! It means a lot!!!

I repeat, the response will decide this ff's fate!

Love ya all loads,
JOLLY ANGELS!!!🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update loved it awww arshi together arnaav trying to subside khushi pain her pain is killing him he cnt see her like this lavanya and parth so much in love they r so hppy together sanyu soothing rd they love each other so much bt cruel destiny keeping them away sanyu feeling guilty excited to know her past update soon wtng keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
res

Unres 😛
Pehle moi unres nahi karne wali thi... 😡
But fir socha ki jaane do...choti sissy hai...
Eri this was gud yaar...but Sandhir ka kittu sa part tha...that also Sanyu regret karing 😭
Arnav vampire ban gaya 😕
Aur Khushi bichaari 🥱
Do update soon now...phir hi tujhe tere updates milenge 😡
Love you loads 😃 (still)
Edited by natureloverr - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
oops...
i see this ff for the first time and that too u pm me thats y...
A big sry...
i will first read all the chapters and then will comment...
It will take time dear sorry...
bt thanxs, actually i was looking for story...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
interesting one

Khushi is crying
Arnav wanted to console her
his transformation came, he has to use the trick on Khushi

Sanyu is taking care of Randhir in his pain
her touch brought much needed solace to Randhir
she kissed him

Sanyuka is lost in Randhir, but our backluck phone call disturbed her
she came to her senses
questioning herself what she is doing, she is making a mistake

Arnav called Sanyu, together they take Khushi to her room

Arnav's hunt is began

still no flashback of Sanyu
waiting for next
please reveal her past

Thanks for PM

Love u


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