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miniworld

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Posted: 9 years ago

#241

Superb. ...
Saza part was too gud... .
Very interesting. ..
Update soon. ..waiting for next part. ..

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Shreyashi Chakraborty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#242

wow just brilliant n wonderful update

really love it

eagerly waiting 4 next part

update soon

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Mariaakanksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#243

Special punishment for Riya...??? Hmm.. whats cooking in ur mind ACP... 😉

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Kuki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#244

awesome update... now waiting for ArIya's moment.. thanks for the pm.

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jeharshu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: SATRISHI
nice update but wiating to read more and for ariya scenes..

same to same meri b yahi comment hai didu
ab jaldi se nxt updt dijiyeh
nd thnx 4r d pm

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manasvi..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#246

Nice update ..plzz continue soon

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Alka

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Posted: 9 years ago

#247

Awesome update
Kya saja di he Sam ne sab ko band baj gai sab ki
Ab Riya ke liye kya special saza hogi?
Pta nhi kya socha he Arjun ne
Feeling bad for Arjun
Cont soon
Thanx for pm

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shaheen82

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Posted: 9 years ago

#248

awesome 😊 😊 😊
cont soon
thanx for pm...

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wordsofwisdom

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Posted: 9 years ago

#249

di read both prt 8 & 9 together

AND they were damn good & funny

prt 8 mein toh samjun moments mein me has has kr pagal ho gyi

and then the team was super tensed

specially rii

akhir arjun ne sam ka darwaza to hi diya

haha sam bhai kanjoos

prt 9

team's punishment was so funny yrr

but ri ko special punishment

yeeh chakkr kya hai

humare arjun bhai k deemag mein kya chal rha hai

samajh mein nhi aa rha hai

unhe hi samjhana prega

update soon dii

thanks for pm

and sorry for late comments

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#250

Part 10:-

After 2-3 days of riya's departure..

Somewhere in Mumbai..

Altaf is sitting surrounded by his few men..

One man:-altaf bhai..ye jagah bahot safe he..police aur etf yaha tak nahi pahoch payege..

Altaf:-hmm..

Another man:-bhai etf ne hamara Sara dhanda barbaad kar diya he..hamara Sara maal hirasat me le liya he..hamare bahot sare aadmi made gaye he..aur kayiyo ko police ne pakad liya he..

Another man:-sikandar bhai ne khada kiya hua business sab mitti me mila diya he..ab hame firse naye sirese suru karna hoga..

Altaf:-woh toh ham karege hi..lekin usse pehale muze usse barbaad karna he kisane mere bhai ki jaan li..ye sab kisane kiya he usse choduga nahi mein..

One man:-ye sab toh etf aur uss Arjun rawte ka kiya dhara he..

Altaf:-Arjun rawte aur etf team ko toh mein nahi choduga..lekin usse pehale hame ye pata karna he ke hamare bich gaddar kyon he..kyo ki koi toh he kisane hamare business ki har ek choti badi detail police ko di..sikandar he iss baat ka proof etf ke pass se kaise aaya..?pata lagao..

One man:-ji bhai..

After more 2-3 days..

A man cone to altaf..

Altaf:-bolo..kuch pata chala..

Man:-police ke raid me hamare Jo aadmi made gaye unki ye list..(he forward one paper to altaf)aur Jo log pakde gaye unki ye list..(he forward another paper to altaf .)

Altaf(reading the papers carefully):-woh Jo koi bhi he marnewalo ki lost me usaka naam nahi hoga. Kyo ki police unke hi khabari ko nahi maregi..aur usaka naam arrested logo ki list me bhi nahi hoga kyo ki police apne hi aadmi ko kyo arrest karegi..aur woh aadmi iss waqt hamare sath bhi nahi hoga kyo ki woh gaddar he..

Man:-par aisa he kyon bhai..??

Altaf again read papers for sometime..

Altaf:-dono bhi list me uss ladki fiza ka naam nahi he..aur nahi iss waqt woh hamare sath he..

Man:-bhai ho sakhta he ke fiza kahi chupke baithi ho..mera matlab he ke hamare kuch aadmi Jo Bach gaye he..woh police ke dar se chup kar baithe he..aur woh hamse bhi contact nahi kar pa rahe..

Altaf:-hamare aise aadmiyo ko firse jama karo..unse contact karo..aur iss ladki fiza ke bare me alag se pata karo..

Man:-ji bhai..

Saying this his man left..

After more 5-6 days..

Man come to altaf..

Man:-bhai ..aapne jaise kaha tha waise kiya he hamne..hamare chupe hue aadmiyo ko firse hamare sath kar liya he..

Altaf(smile evily):-bahot acche..

Man:-aur bhai..woh ladki fiza..woh toh jaise gayab hi ho gayi he..usaka koi parivar toh nahi tha..aur jaha rehati thi waha pe kisi ko kuch pata nahi..

Altaf:-usake bare me pata karo..muze uss ladki ke bare me sari information chahiye..

Man:-ji bhai..

Altaf;-aur hamara agla target Arjun rawte he..muze usake pal pal ki khabar chahiye..tum khud usape nazar rakho..

Man:-ji bhai..

Saying this the man started his work..

After more 4-5 days..

Sam n jun are heading towards office in their SUV..

Sam:-aaj Riya office join karne wali he..woh Kolkata se wapas aa gayi he..

Jun:-hmm..

Sam(smriking):-waise usaki special punishment bhi ab tak baki he..

Jun(raised eyebrow):-umm..hmm..

Sam:-waise tumne usake liye kya special punishment Sochi he..?

Jun:-meine..??

Sam:-ha tumne..(smriking)tumne hi toh kaha tha na..special logo ke liye special punishment..

Saying this Sam give him teasing look..

Jun:-ye look dene ki zarurat nahi he..mein toh bas chahta tha ke usse punishment na mile..

Sam(shocked):-aisa kyo..??

Jun:-kyo ki..usake wajah se hi mein sikandar tak pahoch paya tha..

Sam:-this is not fare.. Riya ko uss mission ke liye meine bheja tha..sikandar ko pakdne ke liye meine bhi tumhara sath diya..n u r giving full credit to Riya..muze ek thank u bhi nahi bola .

Jun(with fake smile):-thank u..

Sam:-u r welcome..

At the same time their SUV reaches in etf premises..

After parking SUV..both heading to their respective cabin,Sam stop on his track n look back to Arjun..

Sam:-waise..Riya Also deserve a thank u..par ha..Zara acchese bolna..

Saying this Sam left to his cabin..

Arjun shook his head in disbelief way n goes to his cabin..

After sometime.. In conference room..

Riya is back ..n all are having chit chat with her asking her about her holidays..

Shree:-ri..waise ghar pe sab kaise he..??tuze dekh ke sab shocked aur khush ho gaye honge na..

Riya(happily):-ha..

Shree:-muze aur chotu ko toh lag raha tha ke kahi tu apni leave extend na kar le..itne dino baad Jo mil rahi thi family se..

Riya:-ha..leave extension ke bare me meine socha tha..lekin..

Shree:-lekin kya..

Riya:-Jane de woh sab..yaha sab kaisa he..??

Chotu:-hamesha ki tarah..ham sab kaam kar rahe hote he..aur hamare khadoos bosses hame daat laga rahe hote..

All laugh..at the same time Sam jun entered.. All get silent n started doing work..

A puon come with envelope.. Sam took it n read the papers..

Aayesha:-kya baat he sir..??

Sam(with happiness):-Arjun n Riya dono ko iss 26 January ko bravery award diya jayega sikandar ke case ke liye..

Everyone get happy n congratulate them..

Sam:-aur hamari team ko bhi best crime investigation team ka award milega..

All:-wow..

Choree, aayesha,Liza,Sakshi,Riya have group hug..

Sam jun smiles little..

Sam:-I m really proud of u guys..

All:-thank u sir..

Sam hug Arjun n congratulate him..

Sam hug Riya too n also congratulate her..

Sam:-aur inn papers me ye bhi likha gaya he ke isse pehale tumhe Jo exora2 virus ke liye diya gaya tha na award usaki new copy tumhe bhej di jayegi..kyo ki isse pehale woh award "late" Riya mukherji ke naam ka tha na..usane changes liye jayege..n award will again give to u..

Riya smiles..

Aayesha looking this with poping out eyes .

After more 4-5 days..

Man come to altaf..

Altaf:-bolo..kya khabar .??

Man:-bhai ek shocking khabar he..

Altaf:-kya..??

Man:-ye dekhiye bhai..

Man shows one photo to altaf..its photo of Arjun n Riya when they were going for crime investigation..

Altaf(shocked):-fiza..iss..rawte ke sath kya kar rahi he..??

Man:-ye etf team member he..senior inspector Riya mukherji..

Altaf:-kya..??

Man:-ha..sab log samaz rahe the ke ye exora 2 virus khane mar gayi he..lekin ye hamare hi gang me hamare khilaf kaam kar rahi thi..undercover agent thi woh..issinne sab kiya he..

Altaf yell in frustration..

Man:-bhai..aap bas hukum karo kya karna he..

Altaf:-khatam kar do..kal ki headline me iss ladki ki maut ki khabar hone chahiye..

Man:-ji bhai..

Man nodded n left from there..

In late night..

Riya back to her room in hotel..she get freshed..eat some food..n about to sleep..

But her phone buzz..she received it..its from her mom..

Riya:-ha mom..

But she couldn't hear her mom properly..

Riya:-mom..aap kya bol rahe ho..??kuch sunayi nahi de raha..hello..

Line went dead..

Riya:-shit..range hi nahi mil rahi phone ko..poolside Jake mom ko call karti hu..

She come out of room..n goes to poolside of hotel..n started talking to her mom..

After almost 15 minutes when she back in her room..she found her room is devasted.. All thing..stuff lying here n there..

Riya:-what the hell..ye sab kya he..??

She immigiately call hotel staff..n then call shree..choree,n samjun reach there within 20 minutes..

Sam:-ye sab kaise hua Riya.?

Riya:-mom ka phone aaya..room me range nahi thi toh mein poolside Jake waha pe mom se baat kar rahi thi..wapas aayi toh dekha ke Sara saman Bikhara pada tha..

Arjun:-shree..hotel staff se enquiry karo iss room me kyon aaya tha..??

Riya:-meine enquiry ki thi sir..hotel staff me se koi nahi aaya..even I checked CCTV footage in corridor also..usame bhi koi nahi dikh raha mere room me jate hue ya bahar nikalate hue..

Chotu:-ye kaise ho sakhta he room me koi aaya nahi toh fir ye kisane kiya..??

Arjun(looking to opened window):-woh window se aaya tha..

Sam:-ya fir aaye the..

All nodded..

Arjun:-Riya..check first ke kya koi cheeze missing he..

Riya nodded n started checking her stuff..

After sometime..

Arjun:-nahi sir..sab cheeze he..

Sam:-matlab..ye koi chor nahi tha..

Arjun(in thinking):-ye cheeze aise nahi feki ke woh kuch doond raha tha..ye toh frustration me feki gayi he..matlab woh kuch aur karne aaye the..jab woh kaam nahi hua toh ye cheeze gusses me fekna suru kiya hoga..

Samjun look each other meaningfully..

Sam:-Riya.. U take rest..kal milate he..shree..chotu tum dono Riya ke sath hi ruko..aur ha hotel ke security in charge se pata karo ke room me koi khidaki se ghus jata he fir bhi unhe kaise kuch pata nahi chala..

Choree nodded ..samjun left..

Riya arrange her stuff again..n she too lost in thinking who can do this..

Here somewhere else in the same city..

Altaf slap his man..

Altaf:-nikame ho tum log..ek kaam nahi kar sakhe..

Man:-maaf kardo bhai..par hamne toh dekha tha woh ladki hotel ke andar gayi ..hotel ki security ko chakma deke ham log usake room me window se andar gaye..toh waha koi nahi tha..

Altaf:-bevkoof ho tum log..huh..ab toh woh ladki aur etf bhi savdhan ho gaye honge..

Altaf(looking to riya's photo):-Riya mukherji..ya fir fiza.. Jo bhi ho..apne aakhri dino ki ginati suru kar do..

Next morning..

In conference room,commissioner also present there..

Sam told commissioner n all others (girls) last night incident..

Commissioner:-inn sabka matlab he koi Riya ko nuksan pahochana chahta he..

Arjun:-n I m dam sure woh altaf ke sivay koi aur nahi ho sakhta..

Riya:-Arjun sir is right..sab dekh ke toh aisa hi lagta he ke ye altaf ka hi kaam ho sakta he..shayad usse mere bare me sab pata chal gaya ho..

Comm:-hame jaldi se jaldi altaf ko pakdna he I want him dead or alive..

All:-yes sir..

Riya:-sir..muze lagta he ke altaf ko dundane ki zarurat nahi he..kyo ki kal raat ke incident se prove hota he ke usaka target mein hu..woh firse muzpe hamla karega..aur tab ham usse pakad lenge..

Comm:-u r right Riya..lekin tab tak tumhe bahot hi alert rehana hoga..

Riya ji sir..

Comm:-aur Jab tak altaf hamari giraft me nahi hoga tab tak riya ko hi nahi aap sabko bhi alert rehana hoga..

All nodded..comm left from their..

All take their sit n lost in thoughts..

Aayesha:-sir..hame pehale riya ki security ka intzaam karna hoga..waise toh din bhar woh hamare sath rehati he..office se ghar Jane ke baad hi jyada khatara ho sakhta he..hame Riya ke ghar ko security deni hogi..

Riya:-lekin mein toh hotel me reh rahi hu..

Sakshi:-Riya tumhe sabse pehale ghar ka intzaam karna hoga..

Riya:-kolkata se wapas aane ke baad se hi meine ghar dundana suru kiya he..lekin ab tak mila nahi..I think mein hostel me shift ho jati hu..working women's hostel me ..

Sam:-nahi Riya..waha pe security rakhne ke liye problem ho jayegi..

Riya nodded..

Riya:-mein jaldi hi apne liye koi flat dund leti hu..but seriously muze nahi lagta ke itne security ki zarurat he..mein apni surksha khud kar sakhti..

But her words trail off when she realize all others are nothing but glaring her ..

Shree:-Mumbai me flat itne jaldi milana..woh bhi jaise tuze chahiye ..clean..fresh..n all ur conditions.. Its very time consuming..

Sakshi:-I have one idea..

Riya:-no..plz Sakshi..idea tum deti ho..fas mein jati hu..Arjun sir aur rathod sir ko ek room me band karne ka idea bhi tumhara hi tha..

Sakshi(make puppy face):-lekin..meri idea toh sun lo..

Sam:-bolo..

Sakshi:-kyo na Riya ham me se kisi ke sath rahe ..matlab ham me sevkoi usake sath hoga toh accha hi hoga na..(happily)means I would love if Riya stay with me..

Arjun:-pehale khud ki protection karna sikhlo..fir dusaro ki karna..

Sakshi made sad face..

Riya:-par mein khud ki protection kar sakhti hu..

But everyone acts as if they don't hear her..

Aayesha:-mein aur Liza toh apne parents ke sath rehte he..

Chotu:-yah..tu mere sath reh sakhti he..meri aai gaon gayi he..so no problem..

Riya(making face):-par tumhare sath ruby rehati he na..

All others(except shree)looking chotu suspeciously..

Chotu:-ruby ..is my pet..

All smile..

Chotu:-lekin ri..tuze ruby se kya problem he..?

Riya:-muze usse problem nahi..lekin muze usse allergy hoti he..

Shree:-tu..mere sath aaram se reh sakhti he ri..

Chotu:-lekin tera landlord bada khadoos he..

Shree:-toh fir kya kare..?

Sam:-Riya tum mere sath mere ghar pe reh sakhti ho..

Riya:-kya..??

Sam:-ha..mein,tum aur Arjun..isse perfect security tumhe kaha milegi..

Riya looking with wide eyes..

Riya:-lekin..

Arjun:-don't worry Riya..rathod tumhe kha nahi jayega usaki guaranty mein leta hu..

All smrik..

Sam(glaring Arjun):-right..mein tumhe nahi khauga Riya..but..Arjun ki guaranty mein nahi le sakhta..

All others again smiles..

Riya:-lekin..mein. Kaise..no..no..

Arjun:-riya mukherji.. Tumhari punishment abhi baki he right..??toh tumhari punishment yahi he ke tum apna saman rathod ke ghar shift kar rahi ho..

Riya:-kya..??

Arjun n Sam look each other n smrik..n left to their respective cabins..

Riya:-isse accha toh mein sakshi ke saath reh leti..aayesha ya Liza ke family ke sath adjust kar leti.. Ruby ki allergy bhi seh leti..Shree ke landlord ko bhi dekh leti..par inn dono ke sath rehana matlab..oh..god..

All others give her poor girl look..

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