Twinj OS: The Jealousy Game

Loved it!!

awww this story was beautifully written!

Omg, this was such a beautiful piece! I enjoyed every line, haye I could practically see Kunj pulling Twinkle's leg. His such a meanie to her 😆 bechari is rightly possessive and jealous and he was poking fun, but I LOVED that his plan was ulta on him lmao. "Biwi hai mere" 😉 ofc our angry Sarna took charge and didn't even let the guy take her hand! Oh and I love how you used Sun Saathiya because it's so special to them! Would love to read more of your works 😃

i loved it! It was beautiful

Originally posted by: Perwinkle

Loved it!!

I love stories where couples make each other jealous.

I hope you write more stories.

Beautiful and Cute OS!

Originally posted by: sammy17

awww this story was beautifully written!

Originally posted by: teddyyy

Omg, this was such a beautiful piece! I enjoyed every line, haye I could practically see Kunj pulling Twinkle's leg. His such a meanie to her 😆 bechari is rightly possessive and jealous and he was poking fun, but I LOVED that his plan was ulta on him lmao. "Biwi hai mere" 😉 ofc our angry Sarna took charge and didn't even let the guy take her hand! Oh and I love how you used Sun Saathiya because it's so special to them! Would love to read more of your works 😃

Originally posted by: 3dancelover

i loved it! It was beautiful

Twinkle bechari had to watch him act the whole time but Kunj bechara fell into his own trap

And Maya and Bebe's characters were perfect

Twinj are so cute, awesome ending too

Amazing OS,Loved jealous twinkle and Jealous kunj!