TS:Dil tho pagal hai:updated part 6 page 11 on 1st-June-2016

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Hi All,
Response i got for my first OS made me confident, so writing second one...
Let me know your thoughts about this...
Thanks
Pari


Character sketch:
Raman Balla: Panjabi boy, very hot, handsome, dashing, social, stylish guy , continuing his fathers well known business, very rich...
Ishita Iyer: Tamil girl, verytalkative, chirpy girl, very good looking, moderate(traditional+some style) girl doing her MD in cardiology in college,orphan...
Some one is helping her wrt financial matters like fees etc... but she does not know who it is...secret well wisher, for her that person is god..
Shagun: have crush on raman, does different plans to go near raman
Raman is not the one who roams with girls here...
Mihika, Vandu, abhi: Ishitas frinds
Mihir: Ramans Friend
Mr & Mrs balla: Ramans parents
Ashok: ramns business enemy, womanizer


Story reveals slowly about ishitas parents, how they dies, who is the well wisher, how raman fell for ishita, how ashok try to manipulate their relation etc...
Let me know if I should continue this...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Absolutely brilliant!
Please continue soon!
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nice cs
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Very interesting
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Looks interesting...

Want to read more ...

Update soon!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hello,
thx for all your comments.. here goes first part:

Raman's office:
Raman was busy studying some files...
Shagun entered his cabin wearing short skirt & transparent deep cut to...
She just entered ramans chamber without knocking & intentionally bend little in front of ramas table just to seduce him which would gave generic view of her bossom...
Raman didnt even noticed her...shagun got irritated & said Sir?
Raman came out of his files & saw that Shagun was standing in front of him...
He got angry as he dont like girls who shows skin show too much!!!
Raman: What the hell? Why are you here? I didnt call you? Dot you have the mannerse to knock on the door before coming?
Shagun got really furious...there are so many guys who are ready to listen to her tunes because of her beuty & here Raman does not even look at her properly!!!
She stammered as she actually didnt have the proper reason to enter the cabin,...
Raman: first deside why you came here & then come , please do not disturb me without reason... Now please get out & send Mihir...
Shagun left his cabin & just thinks how to make this stone to fell on me??/
Mihir entered ramans cabin& they discussed about something...

At medical college:
As ishita entered every one started staring at her...
of course it was the high fi college & there are many beuty dolls who are too stylish...
But ishta is different...
She comes simply wearing chudidars rarely wearing sarees...she does not do make up...she is a natural beuty doll...such a nice complexion...almond shaped eyes, plumpy lips, straight nose, long silky hair...Nobody can match her with her simplicity& natural beuty...
She is so beutiful from out & in,& everybody is aware of that..
Lot of guys try to get friendship with her...But for her only study matters...
that does not mean that she does not have friend...
Once she entered she was searching for her friends...Vandu,mihika & abhi!!!
Finally she found them & went to them...
every one greeted her & abhi just hugged her...He is a decent guy but have crush on ishita dont have courage to tell her...as he does not want to loose her friendship as well...everyone entered their class...

At ramans house: Mr & mrs balla was thinking about Ramans marriage...
They know that he is well settled in business & wanted him to settle down in personal life as well...
But whenever they talk about marriage he is not at all interested...iether he changes the topic or he says I didnt see any girl who touched my heart!!!
They showed him many girls, but raman didnt like single girl!!!
They were worried for him...at the same time Raman enters...
he saw that his parents are upset& he knew the reason, but he was helpless...he was not getting his dream girl:(
He wished his parents & asked what happened though he knew the reason!!
Thoshiji asked him: puttar I wantyou to get marry soon & you are not liking any girl...let us know if you love someone? we are least bothered about state/culture/family background...we just want nice girl for you..
Raman: No ma, as of now I dont have any girl who impressed me, what should I do?
Mr balla: We cannot wait for you life long puttar, we will give you 2 months time, try to get your dream girl else you have to agree for the girl whom we choose, please dont disappoint us!!
Raman does not wanted to agree, but seeing his parents face he changed his decision & said Ok...
Both Mr& Mrs balla got happy..
Raman was thinking where to search for my dream girl? Weather she is actually will be there or not?Thinking that he went to his room to change...he didnt get proper sleep that night ..

At college:
Ishita finished her class & bid buy to friends , went to hostel for study...

Next day morning Ishita wore white anarkali suit& left her hair open, put small silver earrings,chain..she wanted to go to temple. she wore the sandals& left the hostel...
at the same time Raman started from home to office...Ishita was about to cross the road, then raman car came with full speed & water on the road spilled over her dress...
Ishita just screamed: Ayyo amma, & closed the face...
Raman scolded driver for his carelessness& asked him to come back.Then Raman got down & went to Ishita & said I am sorry!! She immediately opened her hands& Raman was lost in her!!!Never in his dream he saw such a beutiful innocent angelic girl...he stopped abruptly talking & went silent he kept on staring her...At the other side ishitas case is also not different..she was lost in Raman, she never saw such an handsome person...though he looks like rich she liked that he got down to say sorry to her!!!She also kept staring at him...


To be ctd...
Please do let me know how was this update...
Regards,
Pari
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its amazing start pari
I love it totally
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Awesome update plz continue soon
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Very nice...liked ishra first meeting..cont soon!
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A good story. Please update soon.

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