Twinj OS: It Was Always You.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi everyone.
How are you all?
This update is for priya. Sorry priya this os went off track. Really sorry.
I hope you and everyone will like it.
And yes this update's main highlight is the dream of twinkle which she saw in 4th episode.
I made a mess out of it. Really sorry guys.
Twinj OS: It Was Always You

Twinkle spoke anger rising on her nerves "aap kyu beetch mein bol rahe hai? Main apni maa se baat kar rahi hu aap hote kon hai?"
RT spoke angrily "baap hu tumhara. Papa hu main tera twinkle"
One tear escaped her eyes, twinkle went numb. Within a minute she gathered her self and spoke "mere papa mar chuke hai. So chup ho jaiye."
Leela spoke "nahi twinkle tere papa zinda hai"
Sje continuously tried to console her that the man was lieing but leela broke her bubble.
She unknowingly stepped back, 2-3 steps when she collided with a hard body. She turned and found her kunj, she just hugged him, she kept crying "Kunj. Dekho na yeh kya ho raha hai? Yeh insan mere papa nahi ho sakte"
Kunj hugged her and spoke as if speaking to a baby, because at that he can't be rude or expect her to behave maturely. "Tere papa hi hai twinkle yeh. Us time sabko el misunderstanding hui thi. Bat toh kar unse"
Twinkle didn't respond, her body was there but mind was in all those years when she was alone, she needed her dad but he was not there. She politely broke the hug, when again RT came to her and started his ranting "beta plz mujhe maaf kardo. Beta plz"

Twinkle clutched kunj's shirt in her hand and asked kunj way too politely "kunj inhe boldo ki yeh mujje beta bolna band kare plz"
Rt again spoke "beta talk to me na plz, i need my family back"
Twinkle was crying miserably, she covered her ears to not listen that beta word again and again. She this time shouted "kunj tell him to stop it, please."
Kunj was about to say something when rt again tried. Leela just cried, bebe came to her and was handling her.
Rt spoke "twinkle bache plz"
Twinkle got up and went to her car "fine. You stay here i am leaving."
Kunj can't see twinkle like this, he know he should not but he was hating rt for not giving her space. And seeing her again going from there scared him.

When twinkle was about to go rt again came and tried to stop her but this time kunj stopped him "stop uncle. Aap usko time dijiye. Vo thik ho jaegi"
Rt spoke in anger "just shut up. I am talking to my daughter."
Everyone was shocked seeing this side of twinkle.
Kunj spoke "leave uncle. Agar aaj apki vajah se meri biwi mujhe chod ke gayi toh main bhul jaunga aap kon hai. Maa inhe please yaha se jane ke liye kahiye"
Leela came and ordered him to go "jaiye aap yaha se. Mere liye meri beti sab kuch hai."
Rt spoke "lekin main tumhara pati hu leela."
Leela spoke "to kya? Pati jaisa koi kam nahi kia apne. Meri beti ki khushi meri liye zada mayne rakhti hai or maine toh pehle bhi kaha tha ki agar twinkle apko accept kregi tabhi main karungi. Or abhi ke liye aap jaiye yaha se."
Rt left from there.

Twinkle was standing there listening to everything, she was happy at least for her mother and husband she was there priority but for now she needed some alone time.
She again opened the door of car to be stopped by kunj. "Phir chod ke ja rahi hai?"
Twinkle spoke "ek galti bar bar nahi karti main. Plz kunj mujhe kuch der akela rehne do. Plz"
Leela spoke "nahi puttar tu is halat mein kahi nahi jaegi."
Bebe also spoke "ha putar tu ghar chal. Ghar mein akele rahio."
Kunj ignored everyone and asked "kitni der mein ayegi?"
Twinkle smiled, he understood her "2 hours. Yeh bhi bata deti hu kaha jaungi lekin plz kunj mat aio. Main khud ghar aa jaungi."
Kunj extended his hand 'promise? Dhyan rkhio apna."
Twinkle said "paka. Ha thik hai."
She went from there to a park.

As she went there rain started pouring heavily, as if clouds were also crying with her.
In cold month of January, she wore her suit and one shawl, which was now drenched because of rain.
She was shivering in cold, tears didn't dare to stop.
For a fact she didn't thought of her dad, she was thinking about kunj. His line "phir chod ke ja rahi hai." Bothered her too much.
Its not that she didn't thought of her dad, but her mind didn't cared to think about him. Because he never contacted them, for her he was died she can't let him come in her life. And the way he talked to kunj ignited the anger inside her.
Her heart didn't allowed her to forgive him(RT), as if it was telling that this man is not worth there forgiveness.
Again and again her mind drifted to two things, one to kunj and other to her childhood when she craved for a father's love. When she too wanted to keep her head in his lap and sleep, when she too wanted her each demand to be fulfilled. But all that moments never came.

After about whole 2 hours when tears were finished, and rain to stopped and whem she thought her time limit was over she just took her car and went home.

At home no one was at ease, this time not even usha. She too wanted twinkle to be safe as the things which were happening were so unfair for that poor soul.
Kunj just walked from one corner to other waiting for 2 hours to end.
Bebe and leela were offering prayers to Baba ji to give strength to there twinkle.

After what felt like ages twinkle returned home, all drenched in water, kunj was the first one to spot her. He saw her all drenched in this cold, eyes red and puffy. He ran to her. "Twinkle tu thik hai na?"
Twinkle just nodded. She was weak. Leela ran to her and took her in arms. "Twinkld meri bachi. Kaha chali gayi thi hum sab kitna ghabra gaye the."
Twinkle spoke "main thik hu maa. Maa maine bht socha lekin main is conclusion pe phchi hu ki unko apna lo. Lekin main unhe apni zindagi mein jagah nahi dungi. Sorry maa. Maine khud ko bht samjhaya lekin mera dil unhe maaf karne ko tyar nahi, maa main vo har moment nahi bhul sakti jab mujhe apne papa ki zarurt thi lekin vo nahi the. Or nahi lage mujhe vo thik maa.
Mujhe koi problem nahi hai, aap unko accept karlo."
Leela didn't say anything. As this was not the right time but she understood her point.
She sneezed, which alerted everyone.
Kunj was the first one to speak "twinkle chal, chalke kapde change kar. Kyar yar kabhi toh apna dhyan rakh lia kar."
He took her to room. Leela was about to go after them but bebe stopped her and spoke "kunj sambhal lega use. Aap chinta mat karo."
Leela nodded and they bith stayed there.

Kunj sent twinkle inside bathroom and gave her clothes to her.
After 15 minutes she came out.
Kunj was waiting for her outside he was worried for her. For so long he supported RT but today he was with her twinkle, he knew she needed him and he will do anything to bring her out from that state.
As she came out Kunj went to her, she was still not wearing something warm so kunj removed his jacket and helped her in wearing it.

Twinkle thought he will ask her to forgive RT so before he could speak twinkle spoke "Kunj plz aaj unki bat mat karna, mera mood nahi hai"
Kunj spoke "mere liye tu important hai twinkle vo nahi. Bas tu khush reh."
Twinkle just hugged him, he held his torso so tightly as if like everyone he will also leave her. "Kunj, papa gaye mujhe chodke main sambhal gayi, kyuki maa thi mere paas. Yuvi gaya main sambhal gayi kyuki tum the mere paas. Please ab tum mujhe chod ke mat jana kunj. Main tut jaungi, koi nahi sambhal paega mujhe kunj. Plz mat chodke jaio mjhe."
Kunj was shocked, he got to know his importance in her life today. In that moment he promised to himself that whatever may be the situation noone can seperate them. He hugged her even more tighter and placed a kiss on her forehead.
When he did so he felt her forehead burning. He broke the hug and touched her forehead.
"Twinkle tujhe bht fever hai, tu chal rest kar. Tune bataya bhi nahi." Kunj spoke holding her face in his hands.
Twinkle jerked his hands and spoke "bhad mein gaya fever kunj. Tum batao ki kabhi chod ke toh nahi jaoge na? Plz Kunj mat jana mujhe chod ke kabhi"
Kunj said "pagal hai tu? Tere jaisa 8th wonder ko main kyu chodunga? Itni mushkil se aisi ladki mili hai ab use bhi chod dunga toh mera kya hoga? Or vaise bhi kisi mein itni himat nahi ki itne syape kar sake" he joked to lighten the mood but because of over thinking it had a negative impact on her.
"Main aage se paka koi syapa nahi karungi(she hugged him again like a baby) bas tum mere sath rehna. Main bht achi biwi banungi promise"
Kunj spoke "na. Agar tune syape karna band kar dia toh life mein spice nahi reh jayega or mujhe meri biwi aise hi pasand hai.
Ab agar confirm ho gaya ho toh rest karle. Main khana lata hu"
Bebe listened their whole conversation and thought to her "ab bhi kahoge ki ek dusre se pyar nahi karte? Vo twinkle, kisi se apna dukh nahi banta(share) aaj apne baap ki sachai samne ai or isko dar hai ki kunj ko na kho de. Or kunj hamesha isse ladne vala, ise chedne vala aaj iski dhal banke iske sath khada hai. Bas Sache Badshah mere bacho pe apni meher banaye rakhna inko hamesha apni chaddi kala vich rakhna."

Kunj made her sit on bed and went to bring, food and water and cloth strips. He was tensed seeing her so broken and on top of that she was running high fever.
Kunj asked bebe to give all the things and took medicines also for her.

He came to twinkle and spoke "twinkle khana kha le."
Twinkle wined like a child "mujhe nahi khana kunj mera man nahi hai. Please."
Kunj took one morsel of roti and sabzi and brought near her mouth. "Khana toh padega twinkle after all teri tabiyat kharab hai and tujhe meds bhi khani hai."
Seeing so much love and care she couldn't say no to him, she just opened her mouth and allowed him to feed her. She to fed him.
After that Kunj gave her medicine and asked her to eat it.

Kunj said "chal twinkle ab tu soja main thande pani ki patti(cloth) lagata hu."
Kunj sat with her, all ready to do his job but her next action and statement made her love her and protect her.
Twinkle got up from bed and placed her head on kunj's lap, she made herself comfortable in his lap. And spoke "kunj jab tak tum mere sath ho mujhe nahi chahiye ab vo RT uncle. "
Twinkle closed her eyes and within seconds drifted back to sleep leaving kunj admiring her.
He saw a content smile on her face, he dont know when and how he fell in love with this girl. Who was so strong when it comes to protect her family and can be so weak but only in front of some people like he himself. A sudden urge rose to protect this girl from all evil eyes, love her to the fullest and take care of her.
After few hours when he felt fever was decreasing he too fell in sleep in sitting position.

Twinkle saw the same dream which she is dreaming since she was with yuvi(episode 4 vala dream)
She is standing facing the waves, chilly winds caressing her body. The whole ship was decorated with lights and roses.
She turned when felt a hand on her tummy, she turned. First the face was not visible as usual, but than a light fell on the face and it was Kunj.

Twinkle woke up with a jerk, she saw here and there and saw kunj sleeping in sitting position.
All memories from last night flashed in front of her eyes. She talked to her Baba Ji a bit loudly.
"Baba Ji kya vo ladka hamesha se kunj hi tha? Har bar us ladke ki shakal nahi dekh pai main, mujhe laga ki yuvi hai. But nahi vo kunj tha. Oh My God. It was always you Kunj. Yuvi was never mine. You were destined to be with me.
Kamal hai Baba ji aap toh game planner nikle, hamesha se soch rakha tha ki Kunj hi mera pyar hoga. Thanku Baba Ji kunj ke liye. Thanku"
She than turned to face kunj, he was still sleeping.
Twinkle moved a bit closer to him and caressed his face. "Thanku Kunj for everything. I love you"
She placed a small kiss on his forehead which woke him up.
Kunj saw twinkle so close to him "twinkle tu thik hai na? Itni rat ko kyu uth gayi?"
Twinkle told her everything and spoke "i love you"
Kunj too spoke "i love you too twinkle"
And they hugged.

So how was this?
Love Vish❤️
Edited by MeDHellsAngel - 9 years ago

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priyanvs thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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i just loved dear
it was amazing
it was good dear
and don't say sorry
u showed us kunj care
i really liked how kunj cared for twinkle
and supported her
she is so important for him
it is really a lovely OS dear
thank u for the OS 🤗
love u alot 🤗❤️
Edited by priyanvs - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I love this and obviously you!
You made my day
Smiling like an idiot here
How amazingly cute was this..
Caring and sweet kunj. Hayee
And the dream
Loved this to bits
Thank you for such a wonderful story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing OS Vish
loved it <3
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Awesome OS , beautifully written 👏 .
Loved it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was so lovely and awesome.
I loved it soo much and It was amamzing.
twiNj are love <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's so lovely n awesome 😳😛
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It's so lovely n awesome 😳😛...
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I..sry we all tashanians woukd be seriously happy if dis happens in the show...
u just made my day...dis was totally cute..
loved the way kunj stood up for twinkle...
brilliant...do write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I cannot stress enough how beautiful this story was.
I absolutely loved this to bits and pieces...👏👏👏
Really superb buddy!!!

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