MadhVini OS : Roothna Manana

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hey guys

me is back with another OS... yes another small tiny miny OS... chalo ab read and let me know k kaisa laga..
this one is especially for @dreamyrose - the person saying dum laga k haisha OS likho 😆



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"Madhav koi Dekh Le ga, choro Mujhe", Manu said trying to wriggle out of his grasp. "Hum Yuvraj hain, hum kisi se nahi darte, You just keep your eyes closed, I am nearly done, Madhav replied. "Jaldi karo Madhav I can't wait anymore", Manu said. "impatient Manu Ye mehndi ka design hai jalebi nahi, he teased her. "I will wash it out agar design Acha nahi hua tou" said Manu. Madhav gets annoyed and says "you are my wife dammit can't I put mehndi on you now, it's done. Open your eyes". Manu opens her eyes and stares in horror of what Madhav had done she screamed out "Yuvraj you insolent brat, why did you imprint your name again and again. Where is the design? "I am your design, Madhav replied sheepishly. "Mujhe nahi chahiye Ye, jao mey app se baat nahi karni", Manu groaned annoyingly. Madhav is hurt but he doesn't say a word and leaves.
Manu stares at him and realizes that in her ignorance she had hurt Madhav the love of her life, the reason of his existence, she had to make up to him.

She spies Madhav at his favorite spot near the window as she enters their room. She wonders what to do to get his attention. She goes to the dressing table and throws down the comb, and them clumsily drops down another thing. Madhav looks at the crashing and banging and realizes that Manu is unable to do anything due to her mehndi. He goes to help her. Manu high fives herself at first victory. Madhav picks up the things lying on the floor and asks Manu what she needed. Manu replies "my hair need to be fixed" Madhav makes her sit in front of the mirror and combs her hair, holding them delicately as if a bit of pulling would break them. Manu is mesmerized seeing him in the mirror, Madhav gets conscious and is about to leave, when she stops him and says, "Yuvraj I am sorry". Madhav returned to his window and looked out at the moon gloomily. Manu came up next to him and says, "Yuvraj". Madhav doesn't reply. Manu says "Madhav kya Tm bachon ki tarha zid kar rahe ho, baat suno meri". Madhav says "mey zid nahi kar raha. Tmhe Pata hai na humey tmhara Yuvraj kehna pasand nahi".. Manu replies imitating "arey mera baby itni si baat par Munh phulaye khara hai". "Jao yahan se Manu", says Madhav irritatingly. "Acha listen na, I am sorry I was angry because you ruined my mehndi, well not technically ruined. But What will I show others Madhav Madhav Madhav on my hand. Tmhara naam tou meri aatma par likha hai. I don't have to wear you as a medal. Badi rani kya soche gi mehndi Dekh kar", Manu pours her heart out to Madhav.
"Par Tum Humari ho Manu, sirf Humari, Aur hum kuch bhi kar sakte hain," Madhav claimed authority over her. "When did I ever deny this, bs hum hum karte rahein app, gale mey mala bana kar dal Lein humein, tab bhi chain nahi agai app ko", Manu says entwining her hands around his neck and rested her head on his heart. Madhav needed no more apologies or excuses his world was on its place. His universe next to his heart.


the end



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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesomee os hope we get a scenes like this in serial too
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow what an os
iss os ke writer ko salaam thoko sab😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome yaar loved it hope to see madhvini romance like this
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Aahhh...This was so good yarr 😳 Thanks for one more story 😛
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Aww that was so sweet and romantic.
Please write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh wow this was the BEST EVER story in this forum till now... It was just fabulous.. Like no words..
Shuruaat mein I was excited ki akhir ye Madhav kar kya the hain...
And then mehendi revelation time...
Dude he actually wrote his name all over her hand again n again...
Sirf Madhav hi Yeh talent rakte hain.. 😆
And last mein Manu ka wo manana... It was sweetness loaded with beauty...
Yeh story itni acchi hai that I am going to read it all over again...!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..radiance...

Oh wow this was the BEST EVER story in this forum till now... It was just fabulous.. Like no words..

Shuruaat mein I was excited ki akhir ye Madhav kar kya the hain...
And then mehendi revelation time...
Dude he actually wrote his name all over her hand again n again...
Sirf Madhav hi Yeh talent rakte hain.. 😆
And last mein Manu ka wo manana... It was sweetness loaded with beauty...
Yeh story itni acchi hai that I am going to read it all over again...!


wow thank you for such a detailed comment.. waise iss forum mey there are maybe only 3 writers including me.. most of the previous stories have been mine😳 ( i am the most vella person here😆)..
yes the starting looked a bit controversial, but that's how intrigue is flamed😉

thank you so much for reading and commenting.. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomee os hope we get a scenes like this in serial too


thank you sweta 😊
we can only hope to get such scenes in the show... till then fan fiction se kam chalao😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: DLSR

wow what an os
iss os ke writer ko salaam thoko sab😆


thank you for such enthusiasm😆

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