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hola guys am proud to announce thread #3 of this story so happy can't express in words it is all cx of your love and support ...






my fav line from FSOG novel as my Manik is based on him so this line deserves to be here ... and same goes for you all that i love you all so much it is all cx of you we have reached here





for being there and supporting me through out keep doing so as i move with the story





keep smiling and enjoying the mysteries update will be up soon

PS: i have made the index of all my stories so it can give you an easy access to them link is down in my signature :)






THREAD #1

THREAD #2

CHAPTER 22

CHAPTER 23

CHAPTER 24

CHAPTER 25

CHAPTER 26

CHAPTER 27

CHAPTER 28
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Congratulations many more ahead and please update bhyiii !
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Cngrtss fr new thread

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hola my friends am back with the update ...i hope you like this one i want to know and i am really excited to read your comments as this update was quite fun for me to write it i want to see your reactions on it so i want lots of comments and likes waiting for them


Mr Malhotra will see you now Part 22

I left them alone and walked outside my heart was beating fast as i saw Aryaman standing there he opened the door for me to get in and i did but my mind had so many questions and my top one was who is Manik Malhotra? Everything is so tough to understand as i thought i understood him well his father their relationship a new angle comes in making me all startled now what is manik and harshad's connection as i know harshad is not from London he is an American he is business man like manik but not as rich as manik is and i have never seen any pictures of them together in any event it's like they are in different parts of the world then how manik knows him and the way they were talking it didn't seem like they only knew each other randomly they were quite close with a past which was sealed and i was unaware of it. My life is so messy now. As I was thinking i saw Manik walking towards the car he still had that angry face on. He sat and without looking at me he told Aryaman to drive towards my apartment i looked at him "my apartment we are not going to yours?"

I ask him he didn't answer nor looked at me "manik i asked something" still no answer well here goes we are back to shutting me out "manik you can't just shut me out like this you need to tell me" i said with a higher pitch making manik look at me and he placed the slider up "you are not going to work with that Harshad" wow what...what did he just say "Excuse me?" I asked in anger "you heard me end off" his end off clearly mean that now this topic is off from discussion well for me it's not "no end off i need to know why?" "There is no reason only i said you have to do it" he said without even looking at me "look at me and then talk also i will not do as you say i am not your private property tell me what is your and his deal?" I asked still he didn't look at me my blood was boiling in anger now "for your kind information you are my property and i like to keep it that way and i want you safe so do as i say pass the project to someone else" he said staring at me finally i look into his eyes there was something in them something which was unexplainable "what is his deal manik?" "Nandini will you for once stop asking questions i said it's nothing now do as i say"

he said shouting at me how dare he "low your tone mr malhotra i love you doesn't mean you make my life as the way you want till the time you answer me i won't agree on anything " I said he sighed and said "don't you trust me" well here comes the trust card "don't play this card on me manik you know i do trust you or else i wouldn't be here you need to tell me you said no secrets and here i see alot which I don't even know is there any more surprise for me tell me so i can be ready... also you can't interfere in my work its my job my clients" i said staring at him he was doing the same "go home nandini rest and i know you will do as i say we will talk tomorrow" he is so full of himself i can't stand this man right now "we will see" i said and stepped out without looking at him.

Manik's POV

I sat in the car as i saw her going towards her apartment i can see she is upset she has every right to be but what can i do i can't tell her this is so messed up firstly she is getting involved in my father's issue all the connections linked with that are coming out my past is back to back to haunt me and i fear this is just the start "where to sir?" asked Aryaman "Mr Cabir Dhawan's place" he nods and drove towards the destination. All this while i need someone to talk to and that someone is cabir he knows everything. As we reach at his place i move out when Aryaman stops me "sorry to intrude manik can i say something?" "I know what you will say that i should tell her everything" he nods "u know Aryaman i can't she is to good away from all the mess" i sigh "i know manik but she should know from you before someone else walks in and you very well know about whom i am talking" i nod and walk in. My problems are starting what will i do now? I walk towards the elevator and moved towards cabir's apartment as i enter i heard him "I am amazed such big people at my place so finally you got the time for me" i turned to see him standing at the door, he looks at me "first you left for states without informing i heard everything from Dhruv how could you manik you left her like this?" "cabir let's not go back there already I have talked to her everything was fine until.." as I say this cabir laughs sarcastically "so now everything is not fine what did you do now you know we all are so done with this issues of you manik one girl who truly loves you and you do the same and you are bound on screwing it up" "will you for one listen to me" I shout "fine speak up".

We sat and I look at him he is staring at me "well I am waiting talk manik?" I take a deep breath and start talking "he is back?" his eyes pops out "who uncle?" I glare at him "fine then who? OMG is it Harshad" I nod "crap, shit, now hell way" were the words he said "this is not it bro he is client of nandini's" cabir stood up "how do you know that?" he asks "I saw her with him she forgot her phone in my car I went to give it back to her and there I saw them laughing and discussing I was startled I know how I handled myself" he sighs and take the seat back "she knows about him" I nod in a no "no she doesn't she was asking so many questions and I have no answers to give her man she was so angry when I told her she will not work with him "you did what?" asked cabir in anger "manik are you crazy he is ruining again aren't he the second he comes back, you are back on ruining your life letting him affect you" "what shall I do cabir he had the audacity to hold her hand stop her tell her am not right for her" "he did what?" asked cabir in anger "he did it cabir he is back to ruin me all over again and I don't know how to stop it he can reach her and he did" I hold me head in pain "she was asking me again and again I saw her eyes the pain of not getting to know was hurting her and she was throwing it out on me in anger finally I thought all is getting okay between us she told me she loved me so did I and here my past comes back in our lives first my dad now harshad and" "and if they are back so will she" I nod as cabir cuts me off and speaks "manik you need to tell aunty about all this" "you know I can't cabir this will ruin her too as it is on me she will be more hurt also she is upset with me and knowing all this she will be more" he nods

"so what are you thinking to do will you tell nandini about her about harshad" "no way cabir I told her about my father.." "Wait a minute you did what" he stood up and looked at me "you heard me I told her about my father but not everything just bits and pieces of how he was with me and he left me and mom" he is lost in his thoughts when I tell him that "manik if she comes back you can't stop anything nandini will know and now that harshad knows about you and nandini he will not stop" "that is what I am worried about" he nods "you know I shouldn't ask and it is none of my business but did she I mean nandini ever asked you about your tattoo on you back" I look at him "no she didn't" Is all I said and look down "I don't want to remember those days cabir I don't" "I know manik but you can't stop anything from happening but yes you can prevent it keep her safe manik that is if you want her in your life" this is the thought which scares me more here I wanted her to be with me help me fight my demons but turns out I will be the one protecting her now from my past.

"by the way I never asked what did you and harshad talked about" I am quite at his question "manik tell me" he says again

Flashback

After nandini left harshad and I stood there facing each other "so manik Malhotra as always after those things which are not supposed to be his" he says "don't instigate me harshad" I say glaring at him "oh really does she knows who you are? Who we are? Who she is?" I stare at him "she is not part of this harshad and she won't be, she doesn't need to know anything" I said "oh she does then only she will leave you and come to me because she is mine" I walk myself towards him and hold his collar "mind your tongue harshad" I shout "my cute little baby bro you still the same doesn't know where to speak and how that is why always in a mess" "harshad..harshad...harshad keep your mouth shut I was quite before because I didn't have anything to lose now I have so you have no idea what I can do" "oh I am sure I have perfectly clear idea keep her safe till you can because once she finds out you will be in deep trouble and as always I will win" he said removing my hands from his collar "and don't ruin my suit" he smirks and winks "say bye to her for me will you also tell her will meet her soon" he laughs and walks out from there

Flashback ends

"manik you are out of your mind you showed him that she is your weakness perfect" I just sat there "you are letting him effect you manik don't do this" what can I do when all is slipping away she is angry he is back my past is laughing at me and I can't do anything about it I just can't

Nandini's POV

I am so pissed at him as I walk towards my door I heard the car walks passed me I turn and see he left? Just like that he left? Without even telling me anything he left I am standing here alone not knowing any answers to my questions what shall I do. I walk towards my door when I hear a women's voice which made me turn a woman holding a bunch of flowers "Nandini Oberio?" she asks. I look at her she is not the florist who usually gets me flowers and Manik just left so he will not send me then who has "That's me" I sound cautious which is fine because I am. I've just noticed the flowers are not calla lilies and they are far from fresh. In fact, they're dead she places the flowers in my arms and thrust the clipboard towards me. She wants a signature for dead flowers? I shift my full arms and manage a rough scribble across the paper. "Thanks" she says casually as she turns to walk away. I look down at the flowers a little puzzled. "They're dead" I call to her back. "I know" she replies not in the least bit troubled by that. "You think it's okay to deliver dead flowers?" She turns and laughs. "I've had stranger requests" I flinch. Like what? She carries on her way, not bothering to enlighten me, so I find the card and scramble between my full hands to remove it from the tiny envelope.

HE SAYS HE NEEDS YOU. HE DOESN'T. YOU

THINK YOU KNOW HIM. YOU DON'T.

I DO. LEAVE HIM.

That's all for now

Edited by sehrmemon - 9 years ago
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Congratulations for the New Thread !
Manik has a tattoo and Nandini doesn't know
Who is She in Manik's Life
Super - Duper Awesome
Amazing Update
Post Next Part Super Soon
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow awesome update...
Nandu was soo angry with manik...
Manbir were soo stressed with tht harshad...
And who is "she" can't wait to know...
Nandu was soo shocked tht she got dead flowers...
Jst hope she tells this to manik...
And manik tell her abt all his past as if will get to know from somewhere else she would be really hurt..
And pls revel the suspense soon...
Luved it...
Thnx for pm...
Update soon..
Edited by Pari_mananholic - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is turning into a dark story!
Well im curious!
Update soon ^_^
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sehr di its beyond osm.. U jst nailed it.. I m new here bt i read dis story of urs in jst 2 or more hours nd trust me its osm.. So continue soon nd thanx for pm..nd i think u don't mind me calling u di
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Well back wid a bang..
Awesome chap ..
U r jst making d story hell lotta interesting..
The curiosity is killing me man..
Wats d new angle..
Who is 'she' ??
N wats wid the secret of tattoo..
I loved d convo btw manan..
I like angry n possessive manik.. bt I lov fierce n strong nandu..
D way she said " dnt play this card wid me"
N d way he said " I knw u 'll do d same"
Loved it

Waiting fr nxt (plz dnt tak long)
Ty fr pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome

who send those flowers
is it harshad???????

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