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Posted: 9 years ago

hola guys the update is here hope you like and enjoy it ...i want alot of comments and likes as it felt there were not much on the precious one or you didn't like it ... enjoy the update


IMPORTANT NOTE: one more news i have written a new story a short one "losing your memory" it is about vampires, manik nandini with alot of twists it is a different one from the stories around here and ont based on any show or movie will post the prologue soon if you are willing to read it so do tell me ...


Mr Malhotra will see you now Part 24

"Stepbrother what..how.." I saw her confused face but before I could tell her in detail my phone started to ring I took out to see who it was and it was mom calling me "yes mom" I asked "Manik Harshad is back when were you going to tell me about it" OMG mom knows "who told you..Cabir?" "whoever told me that is not the point I want to meet you right now at home so get here fast and if Nandini is with you don't bring her come alone" "but mom listen.." I try to justify my self "manik it's better you come home right away" mom was really angry I knew why so it was not an option to leave and not go I saw nandini looking at me trying to figure out by reading my face what I was thinking "Aryaman nandini's apartment please" I told aryaman and saw her expressions change she moved away from me and set aside "why are we going to my house again" she asked me "nandini I will explain later right now I need to go it's important" "everything is important manik expect me I think so" she says looking away from me "nandini please try an understand just trust me for once I will explain it to you I promise" I really want her to understand me but the way she is behaving it is really not easy and she is right at her place how can I make her understand when my heart doesn't know how to tell her my story "nandini please trust me" I say again she doesn't reply nor looks at me the car stops near her apartment and she gets out before even answering me but before closing the door she looks back in "when you are ready then only we will talk" she says and leaves me startled I take a deep breath "let's go to Malhotra house aryaman" he starts driving and am lost in thoughts

2 months passed and it seem likes yesterday when my life had no hope it was like I am living just like a dummy and since nandini walked in everything changed but how can I forget my past that haunts me how can I just deny that when she finds out she will leave me. My heart shouts at me you love her, you f**king, worthless bas***d! Of all the people to fall in love, you fall in love with an angel and drag her right into your personal hell! Now Harshad is back so in no time she will be back too then what, what I will do how I will handle everything all the things I have built will come tumbling down and I won't be able to stop it. All these thoughts were in my mind when car stopped bring me out of my war zone and saw that we have reached. I got out of the car and walked towards the house another battle to fight.

As I walk inside i see mom, yash, mukti, Dhruv and cabir all sitting and waiting for me I knew long big interrogation is up. "hello guys what is the party about?" "manik get serious and sit down" said my mom and I took a seat I saw everyone was staring at me I looked at cabir "why did you tell mom when I clearly said this was not the right time" I said in anger "don't get angry on him manik he didn't tell me anything I saw Harshad myself in the mall today and I was shocked then when I was about to go and talk to Harshad cabir came in between and stopped me an told be everything I can't believe manik you were planning to hide all this from me" "mom it is not what you think it all happened so fast that it was really tough for me to tell you anything" I said helplessly mom looked at me and walked towards me and sat beside me "manik this is really not an easy thing it took you years to get back and be this way I can't lose my son again be strong and don't go weak in front of them" "neyonika is right manik I know I don't have any right to say anything to you about your life but you know what they will do to harm you, you know what they are capable of" I know everyone is worried about me but what I am worried about is nandini how should I handle her "manik be careful is all I can say and this time don't hide anything from me it is a request" said my mom holding my hand I just nodded what else I could say because my mind is too worried about all the mess I look at cabir he was eying me he knew what I am thinking "btw I was thinking let's have a dinner tonight all of us and manik bring nandini too and Dhruv you bring alya it will be great and refreshing for all of us what do you say?" said mukti in excitement "mukti in this situation also you are planning a dinner?" I said looking at my kiddo sister "come on bro we don't know what will happen better enjoy the moment and release the stress and you really need it also nandini does because seeing your face I know she is not doing good so are you" I look at her she knows me to well "what stop looking I know you how closed off person you are go and talk to her manik and don't mess it up otherwise you know my warning" I laugh at her words "of course.. I will see you guys later" I stood up and closed my coat buttons "arrange the dinner and inform me mukti" I smile and she smiles back I see the whole family is smiling GOD everyone sees that how nandini has changed me I take a deep breath and walk out I have another battle to fight.

Nandini's POV

Slamming the fridge door, I steam out of the kitchen and up the stairs. I can't even think about him at the moment. As I enter the bedroom and slam yet another door, I stand and wonder...what now? Tears starts to wheel again from my eyes I need a break it will give us both some space to calm down. This is too intense, too quickly. It's Poisonous, crippling. I selfishly think that no one else could be as troubled as me. I'm head over heels in love with a man who has the most extreme temper and challenging ways. At the other end of the spectrum, though, he's the most loving, sensitive, protective man in the universe. It's just been months and am finding new things about him first Harshad who is he what does he want and then those dead flowers why is this happening with me why... and manik and Harshad are brothers how he is a saxena and manik is a Malhotra how is this linked GOD why is all this so confusing...I need answers I really do otherwise I have to decide on something...my mind is dominating my heart and I agree he is right because I deserve the right to know about what is going on in the life of the man that I love...

I sigh wearily, putting my head in my hands in desolation, feeling the tears brimming and a lump in my throat forming. I thought I was beginning to find out what I needed to know but as time goes on, it's becoming obvious that I haven't, and with Manik keeping his lips firmly shut, evading again, it doesn't look like I'm going to find out anytime soon unless I ask Harshad...but then manik will definitely get hell angry... I was lost in my thoughts when I heard the doorbell thinking it must be Alya I open it but saw manik standing and looking at me "you okay?" he asks as he enters I look at his face a large amount of tension is on it as like something happened again I keep staring at him "nandini stop staring" he sits down and offers me to sit with him but I avoid I need to be sane around him and that is better when I am away from him I take the other sofa and sits there "so tell me?" he looks up like he is not getting me "How do you know Harshad n how is he your step brother?" "What?" he snaps. "You heard me" I can tell by the disappearance of his bottom lip between his teeth that he's thinking hard about this. "he is my father's illegitimate son" I look at him "so what it has to do with me" right now I really don't care who he is why is he interested in me I want to know that "nandini please understand I can't tell you everything right now just trust me please he is my father's son his favorite and he hates me always wants what's mine" I try to digest the fact "so what else has he taken away from you that is yours?" he looks up our eyes meet I sense pain in them "nothing else" he say avoiding my eyes I know something is up he is just not telling me

"He thought it was very interesting when I told him that we had been seeing each other for a month-ish. Why would he?" His head whips around. "Why the f*** are you talking to him about us?" "I wasn't he asked the question and I answered why would he think it's interesting, Manik?" I can feel myself losing control. I look away from him trying to take some calming breaths. "That man wants you that's it" "WHY?" I shout, throwing my face in his direction again, but he refuses to look at me. "He wants to take you away from me" "But why?" "HE JUST DOES!" he roars. I jump back in my seat, shocked and unsatisfied by his vague, furious answer. This conversation will get us nowhere. He needs to calm down and so do I. I'll ask my questions when he's not looking like he may put his fist through the window. "manik this is going nowhere you are not telling me anything I feel the pain I feel what is going on I want to be there to support you but I just can't when I don't know anything" I try hard to stop my tears but they still come out he pulls me on his lap

"shh ...shh please nandini trust me please when I say I want to tell you but.." I sense his helplessness "but what" "nandini I know if I tell you..you will leave me" this guy again the same fear "manik please I said I will not leave you" I try to make him understand "nandini He had nothing on me, nothing he could hurt me with because I didn't care about anything. But now I have you" He looks up at me. "Now, he knows where to stick the knife in" My eyes start to prickle, and I watch as his face falls, his own eyes glazing over. That's as much as I can take being this far away from him. I hug him tight letting him swamp me in his arms and invade all of my senses. His touch and his smell settle me immediately, and the inevitable happens, as it always does when we unite with each other like this all of the issues causing us turmoil seem inconsequential and of no importance. It's just us in our own little sphere of contentment, soothing each other, settling each other. The rest of the world is getting in our way. Or, more to the point, Manik's history is getting in our way. "I will die loving you" he says with all of the emotion I know he truly feels. I am just submitting to him now.

"I know but Manik what am I going to do? Harshad is an important client" I suddenly have a horribly unpleasant thought. "Did he re-hire me just because of you?" I ask he smiles "No Nandini He didn't, he hired you because you are a talented designer. The fact that you are also stunningly beautiful was an additional benefit. And the fact that I happened to fall in love with you was an even bigger bonus for him" he nuzzled in my ear and peck making me moan "I really do have a big effect on you don't I" I just smile "nandini just trust me I will tell you everything one day just be with me on this please" what can I say I don't yet know why Harshad wants me? What else is manik hiding? What is manik's father had to do in all this? Why I got that letter? OMG the letter should I tell him I look at manik "what?" he asks seeing me like this "nothing I trust you manik" seeing his expressions I know this is not the time to tell him anything he needs time...he needs me I have to be quite till I understand. He smiles and hugs me and pecks on my forehead "just try and solve it with Clare that you won't work with him anymore okay?" I just nod.

"Now can I have some me time" I look up at him "me time" I sense humor with passion in his eyes "we haven't yet mark your room with our love" I look up at him with big eyes "manik...i...me" I try to say something but my heart was beating so fast before I say he took me up in his arms and walk towards the room our eyes were looking at each other only he places me on the bed I kept my eyes lock on him he unbutton his shirt and throws it in the corner of the room and comes on top of me and within no time our lips meet and get lost into each other the kiss was desperate we were dominating each other our tongues meet and does a full roller coaster ride he sucks and bits my lips making me cluck his shoulders hard I was losing my sensing he all of a sudden left my mouth leaving me wanting more and moved towards my neck dropping wet kisses all along I was moaning again and again whenever he sucked my skin with his teeth and left it a long sensation was throbbing in my body he unbuttoned my shirt and threw it away next came my other clothes leaving me all naked and wanting more he slowing moved towards me chest dropping his wet kisses I clutched his hairs as he moved down "manik please" he looks up at me "what do you want baby" he was teasing me "Make love to me Manik" he smiles "I am nandini" he murmurs gently "No I want you inside me" he smiles again he is thoroughly enjoying this he keeps kissing and nibbling as he went down and then suddenly he stops I open my eyes to look at him he was gazing at me and without wasting anything he with a thug moves inside me and started going on with slow pace making me sink in with the sensation. I close my eyes letting the exquisite feeling relish me, groaning loudly. He eases back and very slowly fills me again. My fingers find their way into his hair and he slowly moves in and out again making me moan again and again.

That's all for now...

Edited by sehrmemon - 9 years ago
7APK thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Super - Duper Amazing
Fabulous Update
Loved It
Post Next Super Soon
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
Manik is full of secrets man!
And you have like multiple brains!
How do u think of such stuff man?
Srsly hats off! You're an amazing amazing writer ^_*
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow. Mysterious update. .
What is manik hiding. .
Why will nandini leave him...
Really curious
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow what an update man..so much mystery..you have an amazing talent of keeping your readers at the edge of their seats and wanting more... thanks for the pm..love
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Posted: 9 years ago
again an awesome thrilling update

manik s family is with him

he just loves nandini so much

waiting for next as thr is somuch to unfold 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Just want to see how Nandu s gonna face up when all the secrets come out
Thanks for pm
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting manik keeps saying he can't reveal everything and she needs to be with him and Nandini is not telling things that happened to avoid stressing him more..these two are complicating things more by not talking and revealing things the lovable idiots don't know what's instore for them in the future..please continue soon and thanku for the pm :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update really nice so mysteries unfolding Manan crossing each hurdle after a lot of emotional upheaval ...pls pls update soon...cant wait to know who's "her"
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update!😃
More mysteries added😆
But i loved it! 👏
The fact that though Nandini is angry with Manik for not sharing, yet she is with him is such a sweet gesture!😳
I love the way you have potrayed each n every character!
From Nyonika to Manik to Nandini! So beautiful
Superbly penned!👏
Eagerly waiting for next!
Thanks for the pm!
Continue soon..
Take care😃

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