TwiNj One-Shot || You're Crazy

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You're Crazy

"How long have you been waiting here for?" Twinkle panted as she ran up to Kunj.

"About two hours." Kunj answered calmly.

"Two hours!" Twinkle exclaimed, her eyes popping out of her sockets. "In this pouring rain!" To add emphasis to her words, a loud thunder rumbled across the sky.

Kunj shrugged with a smile, his hands deep in his pockets, his eyes gazing intently at her.

"Why didn't you leave? Or at the very least find a dry place to wait?" Twinkle blinked rapidly as water dropped heavily from her eyelashes.

"You said you would meet me here." Kunj answered in a nonchalant manner which was beginning to slightly infuriate Twinkle.

"I forgot Kunj!" Twinkle clipped. "What if I hadn't come at all? Would you have stayed here for the rest of your life?" Her face crumpled as the heavy guilt began to build up on her.

"Yes."

Twinkle remained silent for a few minutes, choosing to look at the wet cement rather than at the man before her.

"You're crazy." She said softly, a frown dawning her face.

"Twinkle, there isn't anything that I wouldn't do for you." Kunj stated seriously. "Ask me to walk across burning coals and I'll do that." He took a step towards her. "Ask me to starve myself, stand out in the rain all day, whatever. You name it and I will do it for you."

With clenched teeth, Twinkle answered, "Then I want you to stop." She swallowed. "I want you to stop doing everything that I say and grow some self-respect Kunj Sarna. I can't allow myself to appreciate, let alone love you when all you're doing is hurting yourself. I cannot accept a love that will go to the extent of inflicting pain upon themselves or others just to please me." She paused for a few moments to let her words sink in. "Now, until you don't learn how to respect yourself, I don't ever want to see you again."

With those final words, she walked away, leaving him in the pouring rain.
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Sherni_Jerry thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was really intense and i really want to know wht happens next. its interesting. aww Kunj
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Too good... Do write more..love it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Feel bad for Kunj.
Very intense update please give a part 2.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry

It was really intense and i really want to know wht happens next. its interesting. aww Kunj


Thanks Sherni! 🤗

So in other words, another TS? 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: hailly

Nice os , loved it.


Thank you. 😳
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Originally posted by: .Ragini.

Too good... Do write more..love it


Thank you. :)
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Thank you. :D
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nice os
what will happen next
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Originally posted by: Duumps

Feel bad for Kunj.

Very intense update please give a part 2.


Thanks!

Well.. to be honest, Kunj kinda deserved. He had no right to hurt himself and then make Twinkle feel so guilty about it. It was a really shitty thing for him to do.

I have a vague idea about a possible second part. Let's see how it develops. :)

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