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Posted: 9 years ago
Really superb update ritika😃
so nibir are sharing their worries and secrets to each other..it were cute scenes ..loved it totally..
waiting for next update..plzz give a longer update if possible😳
love
naina
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Posted: 9 years ago
awww ritu it was awesome 👏
y is kabira ka daddy so khadus 😡
nibir are the best
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Posted: 9 years ago
awww ritu it was awesome 👏
y is kabira ka daddy so khadus 😡
nibir are the best
update soonish
thank you for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update ritssy😊

loved nibir convo...❤️ both share der inner feelings...

nishu ne uski ❤️ se taarif ki😊

uske music k talent ko koi nhi samajhta😔he feels so lonely...!!!!

but nisha samajh gyi...
jaldi inko pyaar me padva do🤣🤣

update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Really superb update ritika😃

so nibir are sharing their worries and secrets to each other..it were cute scenes ..loved it totally..
waiting for next update..plzz give a longer update if possible😳
love
naina

thanks naina
glad u liked it
don't worry next one will be longer😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

awww ritu it was awesome 👏
y is kabira ka daddy so khadus 😡
nibir are the best
update soonish
thank you for the pm

thanks vaishu😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: itznimi003

superb update ritssy😊

loved nibir convo...❤️ both share der inner feelings...

nishu ne uski ❤️ se taarif ki😊

uske music k talent ko koi nhi samajhta😔he feels so lonely...!!!!

but nisha samajh gyi...
jaldi inko pyaar me padva do🤣🤣

update soon

thanks nimi
don't worry jaldi padh jaege pyaar mein
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 5

Nisha- mein hamari jewellery shop mein kaam karti hun and dadu ke hisab se mein unki best employ hun(she said with proud)

Kabir smiled- and hobbies

Nisha- mujhe bhi singing pasand hai

Kabir smiled and nodded

Kabir's phone rang, he looked at the caller id and so did Nisha and she wishpered "mr hum" Kabir smiled and picked the call and talked for few mins.

Kabir- Nisha time dekh 2 ghante kaise beet gye pata hi nhi chala all thanks to you

Nisha- na thanks to u,waise tu kitne din rehene wala hai

Kabir- ek do hafte

Nisha - do hafte plz warna mein bore ho jaaungi

Kabir- ok thik hai

Their lunch arrived, all had their lunch and went for a afternoon nap. There was another lady in the compartment with a 1 year old baby. She was assigned middle berth but found it broken when she opened it. She called the TTI and informed him but he said anything can be done till they reach the next station.

Nisha and Kabir witnessed all this

Nisha(to the lady)- suniye aap baby ko leke idhar soo jaiye, she offered her seat to the lady

Lady- aur tum

Kabir-aap uski tension mat lijiye hum meri seat pe manage kar lege

The lady thanked them and soon the entire compartment went for a nap except Kabir and Nisha.

They were hearing songs from kabir's phone. Nisha didn't realize when she started humming the songs. Kabir loved her voice and removed the ear phones from his ears so that the only voice he could hear was her melodious voice, he closed his eyes and dozed to sleep unknowingly. Nisha didn't even realised this as she was busy singing.

Nisha- Kabir yeh song nhi change kar...kar na, she turned only to find him sleeping. She smiled seeing him sleep peacefully.

She stopped the music, removed the ear phones and tried to keep the phone back into his pocket but he stirred a bit and opened his eyes.

Nisha- Kabir woh tera phone

Kabir- haan apne pass kar le waise bhi tu kuan sa bagi jaa rhi hai, and closed his eyes again

Nisha kept the phone with her and tried sleeping keeping her head on the window pane but that was too uncomfortable for her then she lightly kept her head on kabir's shoulder making sure he doesn't wake up and dozed to sleep.

At around 5 pm Kabir woke up and felt come weight on his shoulder and turned to see Nisha sleeping on his shoulder, she had also clutched his arm. He smiled looking at her she looked very cute while sleeping. He patted her cheeks and she slowly opened her eyes and saw him smiling at her she too smiled at him.

Kabir- uth jaa warna raat ko neend nhi aaegi

Just then a tea vendor was passing and Kabir stopped him and asked for two masala tea. He paid the money. Nisha was still in half sleep and her head still on his shoulder.

Kabir(handing her the tea) yeh le iss se teri neend bag jaegi

Nisha- thank you ( she took a sip) hmmm tujhe kaise pata chala ki mujhe masala chai pasand hai

Kabir- mujhe nhi pata tha par mujhe pasand hai iss liye tere liye bhi wahi le liya

Nisha smiled

The train had completed more than half of its journey and by this time Nisha and Kabir had become friends.

The train halted at a station and a mechanic was called to do something about the broken seat but he too raised his hands. The lady got worried but Nisha asked her to take her seat completely and relax. The lady thanked her for her help.

Later Nisha got a call from home and she talked for a good 1 hour. After she hanged the call Nisha looked at Kabir who was giving him a weird look

Nisha- kya hua aise kaun dekh raha hai

Kabir- Nisha tere ghar mein kuan kuan hai

Nisha- maa papa bade tauji mohan tauji vimla taiji ropan taiji dada dadi aur mere cxousins

Kabir- and abhi tune sabse baat ki

Nisha- haan

Kabir- oh tabhi kitna waqt laga lagta ghar mein sabki ladli hai

Nisha- haan woh toh hai ...she said with a cute smile on her face

Kabir smiled

They chatted for some time and then their dinner arrived and now it was time for deciding the sleeping arrangement.

Kabir- Nisha ek kaam kar tu soja mein idhar baithta hun

Nisha- sari raat baitha rahe ga

Kabir- sari raat kaha 4:30 bhej toh hum pachun jaege and dekh abhi toh 10 bhej bhi chuke hain kuch der ki hi baat hai

Nisha- tu sari raat baitha rahega ullu hai kya

Kabir- hain sorry kya kaha tune , mein ullu, tu ullu

Nisha - arre tune hi toh kaha ki sari raat baithega toh ullu hi hua na

Kabir- Nisha dekh ,( looking at her with anger)

Nisha- accha tu sorry yaar, sunn tu aaram se soja waise bhi mujhe dairy likhni hai and mujhe train mein waise bhi neend nhi aati hai iss liye tu soja

Kabir- ok , jaise tu kahe

Kabir slept on the seat while Nisha sat near the window with her dairy.

After completing her dairy she sat for sometime fidgeting with her phone and then she too started feeling sleepy, she looked at the time it was 12 then. She put her head on kabir's stomach , she didn't got much place but managed to sleep with that only.

Kabir woke little later feeling thirsty , and found her sleeping he could clearly see how uncomfortable she was.

Kabir(monologue)- bewakoof ladki utha deti toh kaun sa kha jata

He made her sleep comfortably and himself sat on the seat with her head on his lap. She turned and held his leg, he put his arm around her and rested his head on the seat and slept.

hope you like it

ps- dont think the seat incident to be filmy it happened with me long back and i had to share seat with my sis

Edited by mishrialways - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Awesome👍🏼
NiBir☺️

thanks shibu
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update 😊 sharing the seat in train 😳

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