swasan ss - kyaa mujhe yaad karogi - happy note

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Hai guys..iam here with my 2nd ss..&&& i dedicating this for all crazy swasan fans from kerala...hope u guys like it...i am starting this ff from kavitha sanskar engagement...


Kyaa mujhe yaad karogi




Here swara is standing in MM hall and waiting for her love, who is going to get engaged with his first love...she not even dared to look anyone because she know that they only show pity to her...only pity...she know her sister will be smirking to her...just then shomi held her hand tightly indicating that he is coming..her love ...her sanskar...she looked him and he gave fake smile to her that to show he is fine...but her staring section interrupted by shomi..

Shomi: " shona aavo..hum chale yeha se.."

Swara: " nahi maa..i am fine ...iam..fine.." she smiled

But she know,, she is not giving assurance to shomi ,, but to herself that she is fine...she strong...very strong to bear all these..so she kept chanting her fine manthra...

Here sanskar and kavitha comes to the centre

Sujata: " chore ...submuhurth aagayi hei ..tho ring exchange kare..."

Sanskar: " haa..maa.." and smiled to kavitha

Kavitha takes the ring and slide it to sanskar's finger..and gave big smile to every one ..

Next is sanskar...sanskar slowly take the ring and looked swara,, but she just turned her face from him and saw a smirking ragini...that's it her fine manthra broke...her mind screamed " swara..run ...just run from here...run from these cruel peoples,,who cannot even see your pain...just run...run.." this time swara followed her mind,, so she freed from shomi's grip and runes from there with whole energy..

Shomi called her: " shona..."

That brings sanskar's attention as he turned from kavitha..and saw that his swara...his zindgi is running away from him..

The ring slipped from his hand and felled on the floor as he runes after his life calling her...

Sanaskar: " swara..ruko...swaraaa..."

But,, here swara is not in a situation where she cannot listen any one ...all she could do is running...

Sanskar saw swara is running in the middle of road,, he got panicked and shouted..

Sanskar:" Swaraaa..."

That's entered swara's ears ..so she stopped..and turned to see a smiling sanskar

Sanskar smiled ...smiled by seeing swara finally stopped as he know his life is coming back...but he does not know that,, this smile will erase from his life after some time..because next second... his life ...his swara...hit by a fast running truck...and pushed aside with all bleeding...

Sanskar just fall on his knees as his bad dream comes to eyes ,, that he is losing his life,, but not kavitha..its swara...his swara...after sometime he come to reality and saw peoples surrounded his life to separate them..he just runes there and pushed them aside to reach swara...and finally he reached her to see his swara,, who always smile (even in a bad situation also) is sleeping in a pool of blood.

Sanskar dropped beside swara and kept her head on his lap...his shervaani covered with her thick blood...at that time whole family comes there and shocked to see the view...swara is lying in sanskar's lap lifelessly and sanskar staring her without blinking..

Lakash goes to sanskar and shake him by saying

Laksh: " Sanskar...sanskar udavo swara ko ...hume usse hospital lejaana hei..sanskaaar" but sanskar spoke nothing and continuously stared swara...not getting any response from sanskar ,, laksh tried to lift swara from his lap

That's it sanskar pushed laksh and embraced swara very tightly..

Sanskar: " Don't...don't dare to touch her...she is mine..only mine...i am not going to leave her...i am not leaving her...i am not leaving her.." he hugged her very tightly and tried to hide her in his chest

Hearing this laksh just slapped him hard and said by shaking him

Laksh: " Sankar...hosh mei aavo...hosh mei aavo sanskar...hume usse hospital lejaana hei...nahi tho hum usse khodunga...woh marjaavungi sanskar...woh marjaavungi..." he again tried to pull her..by that time sanskar come to reality..he lifted swara and runes to his car... he settled swara on the back seat and tried to take the car..but laksh hold his hand and said

Laksh: "Sanskar..ghadi mei chalthahum...tum jaake swara ke pass baito..." sanskar shipped to swara and again kept her head on his lap..

Sanskar: " swara...uddo...uddo swara...dekho tumara sanskar agaya...pls mujhe chodkar mat jaavo..pls swara uddo...swara mei khidki nahi...balki sare darvaase tumareliye kholkar rakha hei..pls tum jaldi wappas aajavo..swara i love u swara...swaraaa...

But swara,, who always craved to hear this from sanskar is lying his lap without any emotion..like she is exhausted from all these and want a peaceful sleep

After like ages they finally reached hospital sanskar laid swara on stretcher and rushed inside ..swara immediately taken to OT...sanskar sat on the chair with a thud ...laksh called family and told that they reached hospital,, after some time whole family reached there and saw a worried laksh,, laksh told everything

DP: " laksh..sanskar kaha hei..." laksh pointed sanskar and whole shocked by seeing him,, he is sitting there with a blank face ...his whole shervaani soaked with swara's blood...but sanskar does not notice anyone...he kept staring the thick layer of glass which separating him from his life...

Annapurna rushed to him and shake him...

AP: " sanskar...sanskar dekho swarako khuch nahi haga...khuch nahi hoga usse tum pls apne aapko sambhalo...khuch bolo sanskar.." she cried loudly by holding him...but sanskar does not spoke any word nor move...like its not swara but,, he is the one lying inside lifelessly.

Everyone saw him painfully,, but their trace broked by doctor who come out from the OT ...before anyone proceed sanskar rushed to him and bombarded him with a lot of questions..

Sanskar: " doctor...swara kaise hei..woh teek tho hena...usse khuch hua tho nahi na...she will be fine na...doctor kyaa mei ek baar usse dheksaktha hum...pls doctor ek baar usse milne deejiye...pls doctor..pls ek baar..." he cribbed like a child everyone cried by seeing him like that...

Doctor: " i am sorry beta ..." sanskar looked him with shock " i am not giving you any false hope...her condition is very critical...she lost so much blood & there is severe head injury that causing internal bleeding also...but we can try our best...just pray for her.." he patted sanskar and returned to OT...sanskar sat on chair with a thud...everyone cried.

Just then a nurse come outside with a bond paper and said : " patient ki relatives khon hei...pls sign the bond.." sanskar takes the papers to sign it,, but sharmista comes there and take the paper from him...sanskar, who shocked with her move said.

Sanskar: " maa yeh aap kyaa karrahi hei...mei sign karungi naa..???"

Shomi: "kyun ...tum khon hei uski ...sign karne keliye tumare ristha kya hei uske saath..." sanskar stud there like a statue..because, he doesn't know what to say...uska ristha kya hei swara ke saath...woh khon hei swara ki...

Shomi signed the papers and returned to nurse..and nurse handover swara's ornaments to shomi...shomi hold it cried loudly...then she saw the mangalsutra...she throw it away with anger...everyone shocked to see her this much angry...but ragini hold her and said

Ragini: " maa..yeh aap kya kar rahi hei...maa sambhalo apne aapko..pls.." but shomi pushed her away and said

Shomi: " don't...don't dare to touch me ragini..aur say Mrs. Ragini maheswari

Ragini: " maa..yeh.."

Shomi: " Khabardaar...Khabhardaar mujhe maa bhulane ka...mei tumari maa nahi hei ..meri beti tho sirf meri shona hei samjhi tum..."

Shekar: " misthi..yeh tum kya bholrahi heri...yeh beti hei tumari.."

Shomi: " beti..." she smiled sadly and said " shekar..ek beti ki farz issne kabhi nahi nibhaya..tho kis haq se yeh meri banjaavongi

Shomi turned to ragini and said : " ab tum khush hena ragini...shona hamesha keliye tumari zindgi se jaane wali hei...ab tume saanthi mili hogi..jaavo ..jaake tumari khushi manavo...ab kyun khadi he yeha...aur khuch baaki hei.."

Ragini cried loudly by hearing this

Shekar: " misthi..yeh tum kya bholthi jaarahi hei...swara beti hei mera ..aur iska behan...aur yehh koi thamasha karne ka samay nahi hei.."

Shomi: " wahi tho mei kehrahi hei shekar...yeh koi thamasha karne ka wakth nahi hei issliye tum logh chali jaaavo yeha se...aur jaake sanskar ki engagement pura karo...meri shona keliye mei akeli kaafi hei.."

Sanskar looked shomi painfully

Sanskar: " nahi maa..mei swara ko chodkar..kahi nahi jaavunga..."

Shomi: "kyun...kyun nahi jaavungi..tum tho bahuth pehele usse chod dhiya thana...tho ab kyun nahi..tum jaavo sanskar...jaavo..tumari kavitha waha thumara intezaar kar rahi hogi...tum nahi gayi tho uski dil tootengi...tume tho uski bahuth chintha hena...aur rahi baath shona ki ...woh tho uski mahanatha dhikhane keliye yeh sab kar rahi hena..isliye tume uski chintha karne ki koi avasaktha nahi hei..." by hearing this sanskar just comes to her and hold her shoulder..that's it shomi hugged him very tightly and cried loudly..

Shomi: "kyun sanskar...kyun meri shona ke saath yeh sab horahi hei..kyun sab ko uski khushi bardaash nahi horahi hei...kyunki woh bahuth innocent hei..kya innocent hona uski ithni badi galthi thi...issliye sab logho ne usko use kiya...tum bhi sanskar...agar tum tumara pehele pyaar ko nahi bhulpaya tho ..kyun meri shona ko iss risthe mein jodh dhiya...usne baar baar tumse kaha thana ..thaki usse phir se pyaar karne mei dar laghta hei...par tum nahi maana...tum phirse usse sapne dhikahya...jeena sikhaya...phir tum khud uski saari sapne thoddhiya...kyun sanskar..kyuan..." she held his coller and said " woh tumse baar baar kaha thana ki...woh tumse pyaar karthi hei...phir bhi tum nahi maana...aaj uski yeh halath sirf tumare wajhe se hei sanskar ..sirf tumare wajhe se...isskeliye mei tume kabhi maaf nahi karunga..."

She again turned to ragini and said

Shomi: " ragini kal tumne kyaa kaha shona se..ab usse tumari dard patha chali hogi..hena.." she laughed " dard..kiss dard ki baath kar rahi tum..pyaaar ka dard ..pyaar ka drad samjhne keliye ..kabhi kissi ko pyaar karna hoga...par tum nahi samjhongi...kyunki tum khabhi kissi se pyaar kartha hi nahi...aur tum sabse dhikhava kartha hena ki tum laksh se pyaa kartha ...woh pyaar nahi balki tumari zid hei ragini...sirf zid..."

" Kyaa bigada tha meri shona ne tumari...kyun barbaad kardhiya uski zindgi...kyun ragini..." she cried... " ragini tumari problem kyaa tha..yeh hei ki mei aur shona tum logho ki zindgi mei aagayi..." she wiped her tears and said " tho teek hei mei aaj woh sab khatham karthi hum..." with that she broke her mangalsutra and gave to ragini...ragini looked her with shock

Shekar/dadi: "misthi...sharmista..yeh tum kya karrahi hei..."

Everyone stud there with shock

Shomi: " sahi tho kar rahi hei shekar...yeh tho mujhe bahuth pehele karna chahiye tha ..par mene nahi kiya...uski saza tho ab meri shona ko mila...kithni khush thi hum logh ...hamare choti se duniya mei sirf khushi tha...par jiss din hum tum logho se jude...uss din se hamari zindigi se khushi chala gaya...tho mei Sharmista Bose aaj issi wakth iss risthe ko khatham karthi hei..." with that she turned back to shekar and stud beside OT feeling exhausted...everyone stared her with shock...yeh sab kyaa hogaya...

Shomi remembered her cute moments with shona nad dida...but her trace brocked with her phone buzzing,, she looked the caller ID and saw that dida is calling...she immediately takes the call and cried..

Shomi: " maa..."

Dida: "shomi ...kyaa hua...tum rokyurahi ho...kyaa baath hei bathavo mujhe..."

Shomi: " m..aaa...maa...shona..."

Dida: " shona...shona ko kya hua...phir se ragini ne khuch kiya tho nahi na..."

Shomi: " maa.. shona ka accident hogaya..."

Dida: kyaa...kab...shona teek tho hena..usse khuch hua tho nahi na..."

Shomi: " patha nahi maa...woh OT mei hei.." with that she told everything

Shomi: " maa...maa..aap pls aajavona..mujhe na bahuth dar lagtha hei...pls aajavona.." she cried

Dida: "shomi..tum gabravo mat..humlogh aarahi hei...tum gabravo mat...shona ko khuch nahi hoga...tum sambhalo apne aapko..tum tho mera strong baby hena..."

Shomi: "haa...maa..bas aap jaldi se aajana.." she cut the call...

After 3 hrs

Everyone is waiting for doctor...at last doctor come out from OT and all rushed to him

DP: " doctor..operation successful hene..????"

Doctor: " operation tho successful hei par..."

Sanskar: " par kyaa hei doctor...mera shona teek tho hena...???" he got panicked,, doctor looked him with pain and said

Doctor: " i am sorry beta..par she is slipped to coma..."

Everyone shocked and sanskar felt like earth slipped from his feet..

Shomi whispered " shona " and fainted...shekar and laksh rushed to her...but before that two hands hold her from falling...

Precap:

Swara: " i love u sanskar...i love u...pls roklo mujhe..mujhe nahi jaana hei..pls roklo...mujhe.."



Part 2 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/130502423


Part 3- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/130737150


Part 4 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/130941402

Part 5- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/131292473

Part 6- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/131498703


Part 7 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/132071935

Part 8 -https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/132907259


Impo Note- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/134271013

Happy note-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/137844940

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Posted: 9 years ago
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do pm me for d nxt part.update soon.
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khub bhalo hoyeche. you are an amazing writer. 😊
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That was so heart-touching and painful. 💔 I'm feeling really bad for Swara, Sharmishtha and Sanskar. Thanks for bringing Dida back. I'm missing her on the show. Hope Swara gets well soon.

Awesome update dear! 👏 Do continue soon. And please pm me if possible. 😊


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this was mind blowing
so emotional
loved shomi here
everyone deserves that
update soon
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Nice start...
luved shomi's outburst...
awww hope swara recovers soon..felt bad for sanskaar..
continue soon
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Amazing start!!
Loved it..

Shomi did the right thing by telling Ragini to stay away from her and her Shina's life...

Sanskaar broke down. :(
But hopefully nothin will happen to Swra and she will be back soon form coma..

Did is coming back! Yuppi! Really miss her on the show too, she went to a holiday for such a long time ( I don't quite remember but I think they says thta she went to some of her relatives house, mag be im wrong, I don't remnebr)...
She always used to be the strength of Swara, always used to encourage her, but now she is not there when she need her the most...

Very nicely written..
Continue soon..
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Woow...nyc...plzz continue soon n pm me
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Well portrayed emotions. So wonderful, Please PM me after next update. Shomi's anger perfect. Shekhar and Ragini needed this reality check. Dida coming back. Who else is coming with her
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Fabulous
Please continue soon
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