swasan ss - kyaa mujhe yaad karogi - happy note - Page 5

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hi Mridula,

Very emotional chapter. You have portrayed the agony of Swara, Sanskaar and Shomi so well. Glad that Shomi lashed out at Ragini and even at Shekar and Dadi. Time they realized how negative Ragini has been behaving. And its a nice touch that you are bringing Dida back, I loved that character.

BTW I'm Viji, from Kerala (I'm a Palghat Tamilian so a keralite as well) 😊. And I'm a huge SwaSanian. 😊 So thanks for your dedication to all of us.

Looking forward eagerly to the next chapter. Do PM me if possible.

Cheers

Viji

Originally posted by: avihothi

Very emotional story.

Loved it.

Update soon.

Do pm me.

Originally posted by: rajeeviansonai

Nice update dear

Originally posted by: rajpvt2486

awesome update

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Awesome..

The anger of Swara, Sanskaar and Shomi was so justified.

Shomi comforting sasnkar dadi and ragini was awesome..

Her outburst was so true and emotional.

Who is the one who hold shomi??

any new entry??

Continue soon..

Do pm me

Originally posted by: rajpvt2486

waiting update

Kyaa mujhe yaad karogi

Part 2

Recap:

Doctor: " i am sorry beta..par she is slipped to coma..."

Everyone shocked and sanskar felt like earth slipped from his feet..

Shomi whispered " shona " and fainted...shekar and laksh rushed to her...but before that two hands hold her from falling...

Everyone shocked to see a handsome young man holding shomi very tightly,, shekar gets angry by this and tried to hold shomi...but that man blocked him and looked one of his bodyguard..Within seconds guard gave him a bottle of water...he sprinkled some water on shomi without caring anyone...he patted her cheek and said

Man: " mami ...anke kholo...dheko aapka chote aagaya hei...pls open your eyes...pls..."

After some time shomi regain her conscious ...she slowly opened her eyes...and saw that man...tears rolled from her eyes...seeing this he just hugged her tightly...and hide her in his chest...

Shomi hugged him even more and cried loudly...

Shomi: "chote...dheko kya hogaya...sab barbad hogayi...shona ...she cried...mei usse nahi rokpaayi chote...woh humse kahi dhoor chali gayi...kahi dhoor chali gayi..." suddenly she got panicked and held his coat... " chote ...mujhe woh wapas chahiye...mujhe mere shona chahiye...mere shona ko wapas lavo chote...wapas lavo ..pls...tum kyaa karogi aur kaise karogi,, woh mujhe nahi pata...bas mujhe mera shona chahiye..."

she sreamed and goes out of control...but that man cupped her face and said looking in to her eyes

Man: "mami...khuch nahi hoga shone ko...hum usse khuch nahi hone doonga..mei usse wapas lavunga...jaldi wapas lavnga...yeh waada hei mera...Arnav Singh Raizada ki waada hei apse...apko mujhpar vishwas hena..." shomi slowly nodded and hugged him tightly...Arnav smiled slightly,, but tears rolled from his eyes...and he kept patting shomi's back...after sometime shomi's cry faded as she slept in his embrace due to exhaustion. Arnav called one of his bodyguard and instructed something,, within seconds OT's nearest room arranged for them...arnav slowly lifted shomi and went to room...laid her there..and told a nurse to take good care of shomi...come back to OT...while coming back,, he saw that everyone staring him like,, he was an alien or something else.

Arnav: "what the...why are you guys staring me like that...am i look like an alien...???"

Sujatha: " nahi tho..."

AP: " sujatha... chup hojavo..."

But shekar comes to arnav and said

Shekar: " tum khon hei..??? aur tume misthi ke saath kyaa ristha hei...???"

He asked with anger

Arnav: " misthi...umm..." he smirked " so you are Mr. Shekar gadodia...mere mami ki pathi...well Mr. Gadodia ..i am ASR...Arnav Singh Raizada...sharmistaji ki brother's son and shona ki brother...aur yeha unn dhono ko lene keliye aagayi hei...that's it...or anything else that you guys want to know about me..."

DP: " so, you are Mr.ASR,, AR fashion house ki owner ...india ki top business man se ek..."

Arnav: "yup..." he smirked

But their conversation interrupted by a voice

Voice: "Chote..."

Everyone turned to see a worried dida,, who come along with a young man and pretty lady...arnav glared that man and said

Arnav: " what is this Arjun,, tum logh yeha kyun aayi...mei hoona yeha...aur iss wakth dida ko yeha lana teek nahi hei...aur Anjali di ...app bhi...app tho samajdhar hena..."

Arjun: " but bro..mei kaya karthi...dida bahuth zid kiya..." but he cut by arnav

Arnav: "shut up...just shut up..." and arjun went silent

Dida comes to them and dadi called her

Dadi: " hei bangalan..." but dida ignored her and went to arnav

Dida: " chote...shona kaise hei...usse hosh aagaya...aur doctor ne kya kaha ...khuch serious tho nahi na...??" she asked curiously

Arnav: " dida...woh ..shona..."

Dida: "kya hua chote...aur shomi kaha hei...???"

Arnav: " woh dida...shona...shona...coma mei chali gayi..."

Dida shoked and about to fall,, but arnav hold her and settled her on a chair...and before anyone spoke further shomi sreamed from her room,, arnav rushed to her by saying

Arnav: "arjunnn...dida ko sambhalo..."

Arjun comes to dida and knelt in front of her...and hold her hands

Arjun: "dida...dheko shona ko khuch nahi hoga...woh tho bas humse naraaz hei...kyunki hum yeha aane mei kuch dher kardhi hena...isliye woh naatak kar rahi hei...aur kab uski narrazi kam hojayengi...tab woh udjayengi...aur dida...ab tho hum logh aagayi na..tho sab teek hojavungi...aap chinta mat keejiye..."

With that he wiped her tears,, dida looked anjali and said

Dida: " anjali bte...tum jaake shomi ke paas baito...uski tumari zarurat hei..."

Anjali: " ji dida..." and she went to shomi

Just then dida remembered something and searched someone...and see that...he is standing near OT with a blank face...dida slowly went to him and put hand on his shoulder...sanskar turned and saw dida...tears rolled from his eyes...

Sanskar: "di..da...shona..."

Dida: " sanskar ...yeh sab kaise...tumne waada kiya thana...tum hameshameri shone ke saath doonga...phir yeh kaise..." but she interrupted by sanskar as he hugged her tightly and cried

Sanskar: " dida...mei har gayi...mei har gayi...mei phir se zindgi mei har gayi...mei mere shona ko nahi bachpaaya..." he pulled from her hug and felled and his knees by shouting

Sanskar: " sab meri galti hei...meri galti...yeh sab mere wajhe se hua...sab mere wajhe se hua hei..."

Annapurna cried seeing her son like this...she just rushed to sanskar...and knelt beside him

AP: " sanskar...pls saanth hojavo...ismei tumara koi galti nahi hei sanskar..."

Sanskar: " nahi maa...yeh sab meri wajhe se hua hei...agar mei uss dhin shona ko jaane se rokdhethi tho ...aaj yeh sab nahi hoga...usne mujhse baar baar kaha hei ki... she loves me...she loves me a lot...par uski ek choti se galti ke karan mei woh sab nahi mana...kyunnn..." he punched on the floor angrily " kyun...mei uski batho par vishwas nahi kiya...kyun..." he cried,, AP shocked and hold his hand ..and saw that its bleeding

AP: " sanskar...dheko khun aarahi hei...yeh kya kiya tumne..." everyone looked him painfully

But sanskar freed from her hold and said: " yeh tho khuch nahi maa.." he smiled sadly... " khun tho mera swarane bhagaya hei...pehele khun ki ansu...aur ab..." he cried...and hide his face by hands... " mujhe patha tha...patha tha ki woh bahuth emotional hei...phir bhi mei uski emotions ke saath ghela ...maa...mene bas yeh socha ki,, agar mene sach bola tho kavitha ka kya hoga...uski dil toota tho...in sab mei mene...swara ko meri zindgi se ithni push kiya ki...woh seethe jaake moth ki dharvaasa kholdhiya..." he suddenly hugged AP and said

Sanskar: " maa...mujhe meri shona wapas chahiye maa...mei usko nahi khosaktha...mei ..mei uske bina nahi jee saktha...mujhe woh wapas chahiye.." he looked AP... " par maa...mei kyaa karunga...kaise usse wapas lavunga..."

Voice: " chod dho usse..." everyone turned and shocked to see a angry arnav...his honey brown eyes turned red with anger...but arnav does not care anyone...he looked sanskar angrily and said

Arnav: " tho chod dho usse sanskar...tum usse wapas lana chathi hona...tho chod dho usse,, iss risthe se...aur tum logho ki zindgi se..."

Hearing this sanskar angrily comes to arnav and held his collar

Sanskar: " thumara himmath kaise hui arnav...yeh bolne keliye...ki mei mere shona ko chodho...nahi...kabhi nahi...mei woh galti dhobara nahi karunga...mei usse nahi chodunga...she is mine ...only mine...only mine..." he sreamed

Seeing this arnav's body gurds comes to them,, but arnav blocked them by showing his hands.

Laksh and aadharsh hold sanskar

Laksh: " bhai...sambahlo apne aapko...swara...kayi nahi jaavunga...hum usse kayi nahi jaane dhoonga...aap pls saanth hojavo..."

Shomi: " par hum logh usse lekar jaavungi..." everyone turned and saw that she is standing there with anjali...arnav rushed to her and hold her

Arnav: " mami...aap kyun udgayi...aapki tabhiyath teek nahi hei.."

But shomi turned to whole of them and said : " hum shona ko leke yeha se jaarahi hei..."

Shekar: " misthi...yeh kyaa bakwas hei..."

Shomi: " yeh bakwas nahi hei Mr. Gadodia ...bas mera decision hei...haa..mei jaarahihei uske leke...yeha se kayi dhoor..."

Sanskar lloked shomi helplessly and said

Sanskar: " maa..pls..."

Shomi comes to sanskar and folded her hands in front of him and said

Shomi: " samajhne ki khoshish karo sanskar ..hume jaana hoga...aur yehi teek rahega..." sanskar hold her hand ann said : " maa..."

But shomi interrupted him and said : " sansakar...meri baath suno... sanskar pehele tumne kavitha ke saath shaadi karne ka decision leliya uswakth woh tume teek laga ...phir shona...woh bhi uski man ki baath sunli...aur ab meri baari hei sanskar...woh mujhe karne dho..." she pleaded

Sanskar just hugged shomi tightly and cried his heart out...everyone feel sorry for him

After sometime he pulled from her and wiped her tears while saying: " maa..mere swara ko aap ki yeh ansu pasand nahi hei..tho mat rohiye..." shomi looked his eyes.. but he closed his eyes and said: " teeke maa...ab aap swara ko lejavo...woh teek hone keliye yehi ek rastha hei tho...mei khushi khushi usse chodunga...par maa...mei kavitha se shaadi nahi karunga...mei yeha mera swara ki intezaar karungi...mera aagri saas tak uski intezaar karungi..."

Shomi looked him sometime and turned to go,, but sanskar hold her hand and said : " maa..mei swara ko chodunga...par mujhe aapse ek waada chahiye...maa...mujhe nahi patha hei ki kab swara ko hosh aavunga...par jiss din usko hosh aagayi..aur ussne yeh kaha ki usko..uski sanskar chahiye...tho aapko usse yeha lana hoga...aur usse mujhe wapas dhena hoga.." shomi looked his face and see a strong determination in his eyes...tears rolled from her eyes..but a small smile appeared on her lips...she slightly nodded and kissed his forehead...

Precap:

Swara: " i love u sanskar...i love u...pls roklo mujhe..mujhe nahi jaana hei..pls roklo...mujhe.."

charater sketch

swara

Sanskar

Shomi

Shekar

Laksh

Ragini

Arnav

Arjun

Anjali

baki sab waise hi hei...😉