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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kavita_b_2004

Mridula... u r a superb writer... please write soon... Swara is fine... but seems to have lost her memory or soomething... who is Aditya Singh Raizada... isnt ASR her brother...





thank u so much for ur compliment dear...its means alot...and regarding swara's behavior and aadi ..you have to read next part...😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hasinig89

Mridula Dear...Very nice one yaar...Sanskaar calling Rahini Laado...hahaa...nice update...so new entry...Aadii...So u r Dulquer Fan ?? ...do update soon



thanks u so much dear...and off course i am a dulquer fan...&&& i love him so much... 😊😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Mridul
It was truly phenomenal I mean I was waiting eagerly for the update
It was so emotional
Ragini is back to her sweet innocent nature in serial as well as in the story so am very happy
Sanskar feeling so bad for him
He is suffering so badly
Make Swasan meet soon
Who is this Adhitya ??????
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Hey Mridul

It was truly phenomenal I mean I was waiting eagerly for the update
It was so emotional
Ragini is back to her sweet innocent nature in serial as well as in the story so am very happy
Sanskar feeling so bad for him
He is suffering so badly
Make Swasan meet soon
Who is this Adhitya ??????
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon




hai dear...i am so happy..😊.so happy to read ur comments...thank u so much...i know dear that sanskar is suffering so much...but i am also helpless..😭.he have to go through it...we all know that some time our small mistake will cost a life... sanskar ki saath tho wahi hua hei...but don't worry..that i am not going to separate our swasan... and about aadi i will tell in next part...😉😉😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
wonderful update..
awww good to c sanskaar back..
hmm adi is interesting!!!
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

wonderful update..

awww good to c sanskaar back..
hmm adi is interesting!!!
continue soon


thank u so much dear...😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago



thanks dear...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aamias

why do u update it so less

sorry dear...i will give a long update...next...ok...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Kyaa mujhe yaad karogi


Part 6


Girl: " Aaadiii...mei tume chodungi nahi...tumne mere face khala kardhiya hena...mei ab tume dikhatha hum..." she looked him in anger

Aadi: " sweet heart bura na mano...holi hei..." with that he runes from there for his life...that girl also runes behind him...

Girl: " aadiii...ruko...wahi rukjaavo...warna mei tume chodungi nahi..." she screamed and aadi stopped there by hearing this...that girl hold his hand and turned him to face her...but aadi tickled her...and her grip loosened from his hand...by taking this chance..he escape from there and runed to the living room by showing his tongue to her...

Aadi: " warna...tum kyaa karogi ...sweeet hearttt..."

That girl who irritated with his act said: "aadiii..mei tume chodungi nahi...tum ..mujhe...SWARA...BOSE...ko ullu bana rahi hei...mei tume chodungi nahi aadi...( " guys tum logho ki guess are correct...ha..its our swara...our cute little devil...")..aadi turned and gave flying kiss to her...

swara...who went to the peak of irritation by aadi's naughtiness,, looked around and saw the colored water kept there for holi...she takes one of the bowl and gave a evil smile to aadi...aadi's eyes got widened by her smiling...he know that ...aaj woh gayi...so he make puppy face to her and said

Aadi: " sweet heart...dheko...mujhe office jaana hei...aaj ek important meeting bhi hei... agar late hogaya tho arnav bhai ne mujhe kacha khajaavungi...pls...shonaa...tum tumara revenge evening mei pura kardho...ab mujhe chodo na...pls..pls..pls..." he pleaded


Shonaa smirked to him and said: " yeh tho tume pehele sochna chahiye tha...mere jaane mann...ab tho ball mere court mei hei...mei aise woh jaane nahi dunga...ha..haaa...aadi aaj tum gayi..." she laughed and poured color water on him ...but aadi escaped from there and whole water felled on Akash who comes there for pooja...


by seeing this aadi laughed loudly...and swara's mouth went an O'...she chewed her lips and make cute puppy face to akash...

Swara: " woh...bhai..sorry..mei tho pani aadi pe giraya...par aap beech mei aagayi...sorry bhai..."

Akash looked himself and said : " shonaa...yeh tumne kyaa kiya...mere pure kapade gheela kardhiya...yeh mere new dress hei...woh bhi payal ne gift kiya tha...agar usse pata chala tho... woh bahuth bada hangama karunga...ohh god mei kyaa karu...waise bhi uski moodswings ki wajhese, woh mujhe bahuth pareshan karthe hei..." at that time they heard an angry voice from behind ...whole turned back and saw that...payal standing there with an angry face...but she looks so cute in that mode also with her baby bump...


Payal: " akash...yeh kyaa kiya tumne...apne halath tho dheko...pure kapade gheela hogaya...tum koi chote bache hei kyaa holi ghelne keliye...aur mene tume batha thana ki yeh sirfe pooja keliye peheno...but tume mere gift kharab kardhiya..." she rolled her eyes and weeped slowly...

Akash got panicked by seeing her cry... said

Akash: " payal rovo mat...aur tum neeche kyun aayi...tumara tabhiyath teek nahi hei...maa banne wali hei tum apna khayal rakhna hoga tume...aur yeh kapade mene nahi indhono ne gheela kardhiya hei..." he pointed swara and aadi...

By hearing this swaraadi looked each other and nodded a NO...

Swara: " nahi..babhi...yeh bhai jhoot bolrahi hei...hum dhono ne khuch nahi kiya...hum dhono tho abhi abhi apne kamre se bahar aaya hei...sachii..." she makes a cute puppy face to payal...akash's eyes went wide by seeing her drama

Akash: " jhooot...payal dheko yeh jhoot bolrahi hei..."

Swara: " nahi babhi...aapko mujhpar viswas nahi tho aap aadi se poocho..." she winked to aadi...

Aadi hold his throt and said: " haa..babhi..shonaa..sach kehrahi hei...hum abhi kamre se bahar aaya hei...pata nahi bhai kiske saath holi ghelke aarahi hei..." payal give an angry look to akash...

Aadi: " aur babhi...aapko pata hei...bhai yeha aapki shikayath kar rahi dhi...yeh kehrahi ki aap isko bahuth pareshan karthi hei...har wakth usspar gussa karthi hei...aur raath ko choti choti cheeso keliye zid karthi ...aur bhai ko sone bhi nahi dhethi..." he smirked to akash..

Payal: "AKASH...kyaa yeh dhono sach kehrahi hei...mei tume bhuth pareshan karthi hei..." she weeped loudly... "mujhe pata hei...ab mereliye tumara pyaar kham hothi jaarahi hei...mei ab beautifull nahi hena..bahuth fat hogayi...issliye tum ab mujhe pyaar nahi karthi...haa...ab mujhe pata chala ki...kyun aaj kal tum mujhese distance hothi jaarahi hei..." she cried...and akash looked helplessly to swaraadi..they winked to him..he tried to hold payal...but she pushed him and cried loudly...

Payal: " khushi..."

Aadi wishpered to swara

Aadi: " shonaa...dheko baath bahuth bigadthi jaarhai hei...aur agar arnav bhai ko pata chalgya tho woh hamara band bajayenge..." swara looked aadi


Swara: " haa..aadi...yeh tho bahuth serious hothi jaarahi hei...mene nahi socha ki payal babhi ne aisa react karungi...hum... pregnecy hormones...akash bhai ne sach kaha...yeh pregnency period ek dengorous situation hei...ab hum kyaa kare..." they looked each other nervously...

Akash tried to console payal but she pushed him...and cried continuously...just then a anklet's sound got their attention...and whole know that woh aarahi hei...hamare drama queen...the khushi kumari gupta singh raizada...whole looked there and saw that khushi comes running from kitchen..with a bowl full of jalebi...as usual wearing an anarkali suit...her hair messed with corn flour powder...but har chees complement her cute look perfectly...


Payal: " khushi..." she cried and khushi who got panicked seeing her condition rushed to payal...

Khushi: " jiji...jiji...kyaa hua... aap kyun ro rahi hei... stomach pain horahi hei kyaa...hei devi maiyaaa...Arnavjiii...naniji...maami...jaldi neeche aajavo...jiji ki tabhiyath teek nahi hei..." she screamed...

Khushi then turned to akash and said: " jiju...aap kyun waha gade gade dhek rahi hei...jaavo jaake ghadi nikalo...hume hospital jaana hei..." she pulled akash

Payal: " khushi...mere baath suno..yeh akash ne hume dhoka diya hei...she weeped..yeh kissi aur ke saath..." but she interrupted by khushi's scream...khushi close her ears and screamed...

Khushi: " hei devi maiyya...hum yeh kyaa sun rahi hei...jiju ki kissi aur saath affair chalrahi hei..."

Akash/ Payal/Swaraadi: "..KYAAAA...affair..." they looked each other

Voice: " kyaa horahi hei yeha...??????? "

They turned and saw that whole family standing there with shock...

Kushi: " arnavji...dheko kyaa hogaya...jiju ki affair chal rahi hei..."

Arnav: " what the...khushi tum kyaa kehrahi hei..."


Akash: " khushi ji...bhai...mere baath tho suno...aisa waisa khuch nahi hei...mei tho sirfe payal se pyaar kartha hei..."

Payal: " haa...khushi aisa kuch nahi hei..."

Khushi: " par jiji...apne tho kaha tha ki..jiju kisse aur ke saath..."

Payal: " khushi mei yeh kehraha ki yeh kissi aur ke saath holi ghela aur ..yeh kapde woh mene gift kiya tha inko...woh kharab kardhiya..." she weeped

Khushi: " ohho jiji...ithni si baath hei...iss keliye aap ro rahi dhi..."

Akash: " ohh...yeh tho bas ro rahi dhi mere tho jaan nikalgaya...mene tho arnav bhai mujhpar gholi chalne ki sapna bhi dheka..."

Everyone laughed loudly by seeing his plight...but there...swaaradi looked each other...swara signaled aadi...and both slowly tried to escape from there...but akash caught them...

Akash: " aadiii...shonaa...wahi ruko...bhai...yeh sab indhono ne kiya...innone mujhe fassaya hei...pehele mera kapade kharab kardhiya...then ithne bade hungama create kiya..."

Swara & aadi looked each other and sheepishly smiled to everyone...whole looks them angrily...so they make a cute puppy face ...that will melt any one...but shomi comes to them and caught their ears


Swaradi: " maa/ maami...chodo...hum bas mazak karraha tha..."

Shomi: " bathmashom...yeh koi thareeka hei mazak karne ki...ithne bade hogayi aur abhi thak bachpana nahi choda...aur aadi tum tho ek bahuth bade business man hei...aur tum iss tharah nautanki kar rahi hei..."

But aadi side hugged shomi and said: " ohho maami...bussiness man hei tho saddu hona zaruri hei kyaa... hamare ghar mei ek ASR kaafi nahi hei..." he smiled and kissed shomi's cheek...


Arnav: "AAdiii..."

Aadi: " shh...sorry bro..just slipped from tongue..."

But they interrupted by dida

Dida: " shonaa...yeh tumara face ko kyaa hogaya...yeh kala color kaise..."


then swara remembered about her revenge

Swara: " didaaa...yeh sab iss aadi ne kiya...issne mere face par kala powder lagaya..." she makes a sad face

Dida: " aur uske badle tum...akash ki yeh haalath kardhiya..."

Swara: " woh tho galti se hogayaaa...mei tho woh color isspe giraya ...par bhai beech mei aaya...par didaa...babhi ko tho aadi ne rulaya...issne bhai ke bare mei woh sab kaha...mene tho khuch nahi kiya hei..." she looked all so cutely..

Aadi: "...daadbadlu...dheko yeh kaise party badalgaya...payal bahi mei sach bolrhai hei..yeh sab issne karvaya hei..." he looked swara and she winked at him...he rolled his eyes...and swara pout & make cute face to him..he smiled by her antics...

Naniji: " bas..bas...ab bahuth hogaya...aur sab logh jaavo ..jaake pooja keliye thayar hojavo...aur khushi betiya...payal keliye..ek glass juice laavo..."


Khushi: " ji naani..."

But that time swara slowly comes to aadi and hugged him ...and hide her face in his chest...

Aadi: " shonaa...kyaa hua..tume suddenly kaise mujhpar ithni pyaar aagaya..kyaa hua bolo..."

Swara: " woh tho tume jaldi pata hoga aadi..." she smirked and wiped her face in his coat...then only he got her plan..his eyes went wide and he looked swara then his coat...that's it swara pushed aadi and runed from there showing her tongue...

Swara: " aaadi...revenge abhi bhi baaki heiii..."

Aadi runes behind her by shouting: " shonaa..."

Everyone smiled by seeing them

Shomi looked their running figures and her eyes got moistened

Shomi: " maa...dheko...woh dhono kithne khush hei...yeh baghvan yeh dhono ki khushi mei kissi ki bura saaya na pade..."

Dida: " shomi...aisa mat kaho...khuch nahi hoga..."

Shomi: " par...maa..mujhe tho bahuth dar lagraha hei.. agar usse sab sach pata chala tho..."

Everyone looked her with shock...and screen splited with family's shocking face & aadi running behaind swara...

Precap:

Swara: " hum Kolkata jaarahi hei..."😉😉

Edited by mridulakrishnan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
plz update soon dearie u always eeps me in suspense

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