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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks...dear😊
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Originally posted by: Goldie93

Omg such an awsum part..loved it...too emotional...i love.ASR in real bt felt angry on this ASR...hw dare he says Sanskaar to Leave Swara...anywyz plzz jaldi milao SwaSan ko n Continue soon plz n pm me wen u update it

thank u so much dear...i am very happy that u liked it...&&&& don't be angry with Arnav ...he is just trying to protect his sister...aur...we all know that ASR is how much pocessive..when its comes to his sisters...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sruthi007

Amazing update

Continue soon

thank u so much...dear...&& I am trying to update ASAP
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thanks dear...😊😊😊
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sorry dear...ill with fever ...but I will try to update ASAP...😊
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wow lovely ff!!
enjoyed my reading..
please update next part soon..
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Originally posted by: Shikha022

wow lovely ff!!
enjoyed my reading..
please update next part soon..

thank u so much dear...i will try to update ASAP...😊
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Nice update..😊
waiting for the next update..
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Originally posted by: Sohbana

Nice update..😊

waiting for the next update..
plz pm me..


thank u so much for ur comments... i will pm u the next chapter...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kyaa mujhe yaad karogi




Part 3

Shomi looked sanskar sometime and turned to go,, but sanskar hold her hand and said : " maa..mei swara ko chodunga...par mujhe aapse ek waada chahiye...maa...mujhe nahi patha hei ki kab swara ko hosh aavunga...par jiss din usko hosh aagayi..aur usne yeh kaha ki usko..uski sanskar chahiye...tho aapko usse yeha lana hoga...aur usse mujhe wapas dhena hoga...hamesha keliye..." shomi looked his face and see a strong determination in his eyes...tears rolled from her eyes..but a small smile appeared on her lips...she slightly nodded and kissed his forehead...

Then she freed from him and went to arnav,, he side hugged her and said

Arnav: " mami chalo hame doctor se baath karna chahiye..." he then truned to arjun .. " Aju (Arjun) .. tum jaake discharge ki formalities pura karo...hum doctor se milkar aathi hei.."

Arjun: " ok..bro.."

Arjun looked anjali

Arjun: " di...aap.."

Anjali: " tum javo..aju...mei dida ke pass rukthi hum..."

Arjun nodded and went from there...anjali sat beside dida...

Here all maheswari's and gadodia's shocked with sanskar's decision

Laksh: " sanskar...tum yeh kya kiya...kyun usse lejane keliye haa kardhi..."

Sanskar looked down and said: " kyunki..yeh sahi hei lucky..."

Laksh gets angry by hearing this and hold sanskar: " sanskar..yaha dheko...mere anko mein dhekar baath karo...kyaa swara jaane se tume koi takleef nahi hei...????"

Sanskar: " takleef..nahi bahuth takleef hothi hei lucky...uske bina mujhe saas lene se bhi dard hothi hei...par usse jaane dho lucky..." he smiled sadly.. " kyunki...yeha tho usse sirf dard aur takleef milega..."

Laksh: "par sanskar..." but sanskar cut him

Sanskar: " nahi lucky...hum logh sirf usse dard dhethi hei...maa ne sach kaha...jiss din woh hum logho se takraya...uss din uski zindgi badalgayi...uski kisnath se khushi chali gayi..."

Sanskar freed from laksh's hold and said : " pehele tum dhi laksh...tum pehele uski zindgi mei aayi..." sanskar smiled sadly " lucky mujhe nahi patha ki woh tumareliye kyaa feel karthi...pyaar...dhosthi...mujhe aaj bhi nahi patha..." he sighed " par tum khuch special tha uskeliye...but woh sab tho tumne thod dhiya...shaadi wala din..woh tume nahi balki tum ussko dhoka diya lucky..." laksh looked him with shock... " usski baath sunne keliye bhi tum thayar nahi di...tume nahi patha laksh...woh kithi din rogayi...hum..tume kaise patha hoga...uski behen.." he turned to ragini.. " usse bhi nahi patha hoga..."

Ragini weeped loudly..but sanskar turned from her,,

Sanskar: " lucky..phir mei uski zindgi mei aayi ..pehele uski villain bangaya..phir dheere dheere uski dhosth bana...jhooti hausband bana..." he hold laksh... " tume patha hei lucky..uss mushkil situations mei bhi hum logh kithne khushi dhi..."

Sanskar closed his eyes and remember their sweet moments...unknowingly a smile appeared on his lips... " aur dheere dheere anjane mei mujhe swara se pyaar hogaya..mujhe nahi patha mei kab usse pyaar karne laga ...par ussne saaf saaf mujhse kaha ki woh ab iss risthe keliye thayar nahi hei...par mene uski baatho ko nahi samjhi...usse mujhe pyaar karne keliye force kiya...jhan bhuchkar nahi ,, phir bhi mene usse iss risthe mei sabardhasthi jod dhiya...aur jab woh mujhe pyaar karne laga...mei khud usse uski pyaar cheenliya..." he smiled sadly and looked everyone

Sanskar: " hum dhono nahi...balki tum sab ne ussko dhoka dhiya.. baba,, bade papa,, badi maa,, mom,, dadi...tum logh bhi...sabne uski pyaar aur innocents ko isthmal kiya,,," everyone hanged their head with guilt...sanskar then turned to ragini...

Sanskar: " ragini..."

ragini looked him with moist eyes

sanskar: " ragini... woh tum hei..jisse swara sabse jyaada pyaar kiya...par woh tumi hei..jisne usse sabse jyaada dard dhedhiya..."

ragini cried loudly...sanskar comes to her and hold her shoulder..

Sanskar: " ragini..woh tume bahuth pyaar kartha hei...bahuth pyaar..woh tho sabse pehele tumare bare mei socha tha..ragini..." ragini hanged her head with shame,, but sanskar turned her to him and said

Sanskar: "kyun ragini...kyun uskeliye ithini nafrat...woh tumse khuch nahi cheena hei...laksh... laksh tho tumara hei ragini...sirf tumara...ab tho mere swara ko chod dho...woh bahuth khuch sehna hei ragini..." sanskar folded his hands in front of her... " ab usse chod dho...i beg you...pls ragini..." he cried

Tears rolled from ragini's eyes and she felled on his feet...

Ragini: " humse bahuth badi galti hogayi sanskar...hum usse nahi pehchan paya...bahuth badi galti kiya mene...galti nahi gunah kiya mene..woh bhi apne behen ki saath...hume saza dho sanskar..hume saza dho...hum maafi ki layak nahi hei...hume saza dho.." she cried loudly...but sanskar hold her and said

Sanskar: " uddo..ragini..." he straightened her and wiped her tears

Sanskar: " tume saza chahiye hena ragini...tho yehlo tumari saza..." ragini looked him

Sanskar: " tumari saza yeh hei ki tume purani ragini...nahi nahi..hamari ragini banna hoga...woh ragini...woh sabse bahuth pyaar katha tha...bahuth mazoom tha...woh ragini ...usse kahi na kahi mene sabse cheena...tume swara ki ragini banna hoga...swaragini banna hoga..." he looked ragini and said "kyaa tume iss saza manzoor hei.."

Ragini slightly smiled to him and sanskar hugged her..that's it ragini cried loudly by hugging him tightly...

Ragini: " haa..sanskar...mujhe manzoor hei...mei woh ragini banunga...woh ragini..woh swara ki thi..." she pulled from his embrace and looked sanskar... " par bhai,,,uskeliye mujhe mere swara chahiye...usse jaane se roklo...pls...usse roklo..." she cried

Sanskar: " nahi ragini...usse jaane dho...par tum chintha mat karo...woh wapas aavungi...zaroor wapas aavungi..."

Ragini: " par bhai...aap usse..." but sanskar interrupted her

Sanskar: " nahi ragini..khuch aur mat kaho...mei bahuth mushkil se apne aapko sambhala hei..." he smiled slightly and said... " par tumare mouth se bhai sabdh bahuth ache lagthe hei..." he smiled and caressed her face...everyone saw them lovingly...but tears rolled from their eyes...laksh also smiled by seeing their bond...but its too late...too late to realize everything...jiss insane sabko iss tharah khush dhekna chatha tha,,woh ab..sab feeling se dhur chali gayi hei...but his trace brocked by doctor's words,, who comes there with shomi and arnav...

Doctor: " Mr.ASR,, yeh risk ki baath nahi hei..but hospital ki tharah fecilities..woh bhi ghar mei..." but he interrupted by arnav

Arnav: "doctor..you don't have to worry about that...i will arrange a mini hospital for her...samjhe aap...usskeliye mei khuch bhi karunga...bas mujhe woh kissi bhi tharah wapas chahiye..."

Doctor: " tho teeke aap logh jaane ki thayari keejiye...mei discharge dhoonga...aur Mr.ASR ..aap mere saath aayiye...i will give u the details of treatments.." with that he turned to go...but sanskar called him

Sanskar: " doctor..."

Doctor: " kya hei beta"

Sanskar: " doctor...kyaa mei ek baar swara ko dheksaktha hum..pls..." he begged

Doctor looked to his longing eyes and said

Doctor: " jaavo beta ...jaake usse milo..."

Sanskar smiled widely but his eyes shined with tears...

Sanskar: "thank u doctor ...thank u so much..." with that he runes to OT,, everyone saw him painfully.

Sanskar entered to OT and closed the door...he turned to swara...and there she is...lying lifelessly in the bed...he saw her...she look beautiful...very beautiful...her face is glowing like anything & lips were dangerously red...koi hospital bed par ithni beautiful lagtha hei kya...but woh karthi hei... bahut beautiful...

Sanskar slowly comes to her and saw that she is sleeping like a cute baby...there was not even a slightest tinge of pain in her face... She was as calm as the ocean... as white as snow...and so beautiful...but her smooth silky skin was pierced with so many needles and wires..that pinched sanskar...

He slowly sat beside her and held her hands...

Sanskar: " swaraa...swaraa...anke kholo..." he kissed her hands " mujhe patha hei swara...ki tum natak..kar rahi hei...mujhe patha hei ki tum mujhse naraz hei...tho gussa karona mujhse...galiya dhedho...aur mardho...par iss tharah natak mat karo..." he kept her hand above his heart " mujhe yeha bahuth dard horahi hei swara...pls aisa dard mat dhedho...mei apne aapko sambhal nahi pavungi..." he cupped her face " swaraa...tumne tho kaha thana,, mei khudh tume MM mein wapas lekar aavungi...dheko mei thayar hei...tum bas apne anke kholo...mei tume apne ghodh mei udakar lechalunga...pls swara anke kholona...anke kholo swara.." but she does not responded to anything and laid there with no emotion...by seeing this he gets angry and shakes her by shouting..

Sanskar: " SWARAA...anke kholo...tumne suna nahi mene kyaa kaha...anke kholo..swaraaa..." he again cupped her face ...kept his forehead on her and said " swara mei sirf tumara hei swara..." he kissed her eyes " tume mujhe vishwas nahi na swara...tho sunlo...swara..mei kavitha se shaadi nahi karunga...kyunki mei usse kabhi khush nahi rak pavunga...kyunki..mei...mei usse nahi...tumse pyaar kartha hum damit...mei apni pure zindgi tumare saath rehna chatha hum... I Love U swara...I LOVE U..." tears rolled down from his eyes and felled on her cheek...after sometime he controlled himself and looked her...saw that she is still sleeping peacefully..he sighed...caressed her face and kissed her eyes one by one...

Sanskar : " tum sona chathi hena swara...tho teeke.." he laid beside her and pulled her into his embrace..and kept her head on his chest..

Sanskar: "shona..tum mera avash tho nahi suna..par mere dil ki dadkan tho sun rahi hogi...hena.." he looked her,, but still no response she laid there like a doll

Sanskar: " sojavo swara..sojavo..tum bahuth takgayi hogi na..tho sojavo baby..." he caressed her head... " tume patha hei swara..shomi maa ne tume yeha se lekar jaarahi hei..humse kahi dhoor..thaki tume koi takleef na paunjavo...tho ab tum javo...mei tume jaane dhungi..par tum tho mera hona...isliye tume jaldi se iss dream se udna hoga...aur mere pass wapas aana hoga...woh bhi hamesha keliye...waise bhi tum kabhi bhi mere paas hei..kyunki tum tho mera dill ki dadkan hena..phir bhi tume jaldi wapas aana hoga swara...mujhe bahuth dhin intezar mat karvavo...teeke..." he kissed her forehead and hugged her tightly..after some time he too closed his eyes in to a peaceful slumber... because usse patha hei ki yeh uska angry peaceful sleep hei...woh yeh khona nahi chatha...so he hided swara more into him and slipped into a dream...

Precap:

Swara: " i love u sanskar...i love u...pls roklo mujhe..mujhe nahi jaana hei..pls roklo...mujhe.."

Edited by mridulakrishnan - 9 years ago

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