~Ek Din Aap Yun Humko Mil Jaayenge~ Final Part of TS Posted on Page 12

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Hello Everyone
how are you all

yes i am back again to bug you all with another torture

this time i have lots of credits to roll before i post the actual write up

but even before that i would like to confess something

i write and people say i write pretty fine but today i realized that it is really really a very big challenge to write if you are given some sort of guidelines. I honestly found this one tough to write as i knew someone had expectations from me and so i really hope and wish i live upto her expectations

this OS is dedicated to my personal doctor Sapna who wanted me to write this one for her...love you loads

Sapna i hope i deliver what you had expected...i am very nervous and so fingers crossed...will wait for your feedback...and just to let you know our deal is still on...this write up will be in two parts...first part being posted below and second part which will be Ishita's POV will be posted in the next part

enough of blabber...now i should hurriedly finish my speech and post the actual write up

Song Suggested By Sapna

Concept By Mannu Di

First Comment By CD

Proof Read By Albeli

Written By Me 😳

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fine here it goes, please check the next post for part 1



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"Koi Mujhko Yun Mila Hai

Jaise Banjaare Ko Ghar"

(I have found someone the way a nomad finds a home)


IshiMaa IshiMaa door kholo na, they both came out of the hug embarrassedly as they heard their daughter knocking at the door.

(IshiMaa IshiMaa open the door, they both came out of the hug embarrassedly as they heard their daughter knocking at the door.)


Romance bigaadne mein na yeh apne khaandaan par hi gayi hai, Raman irately commented before opening the door to his daughter while his wife looked on shyly.

(She has gone completely on her family when it comes to ruining the romance, Raman irately commented before opening the door to his daughter while his wife looked on shyly.)


Ruh beta aap is time yahan kaise...aapne soyi soyi nahi ki abhi, Ishita asked as her daughter ran to her.

(Ruh dear how are you here at this time...why aren't you sleeping already, Ishita asked as her daughter ran to her.)


IshiMaa woh kya hai na...IshiMaa aaj na mujhe aapke paas sona hai...beech mein Ruhi ek side IshiMaa ek side papa, Ruhi innocently declared.

(IshiMaa actually...IshiMaa today I want to sleep with you...Ruhi in the center, IshiMaa on one side and Papa on the other, Ruhi innocently declared.)


Aww mere baby ko aaj mumma papa ke paas sona hai...aa jao, Ishita held her daughter in her arms and made her way to the bed before giving a teasing look to her husband.

(Aww my baby wants to sleep with mumma papa today...come, Ishita held her daughter in her arms and made her way to the bed before giving a teasing look to her husband.)


Haan beta ab aap aa gaye ho toh soyenge hi...aur kya karenge, Raman taunted in his usual double meaning tone earning a chuckle from his wife.

(Yah why not dear as now that you have come we will only sleep...what else will we do, Raman taunted in his usual double meaning tone earning a chuckle from his wife.)


But as soon as he reached the bed and saw his daughter playing with his wife's hair, all his frustration ended as he knew this was the real bliss, the ultimate happiness of his life.



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Ishita utho, Raman slowly whispered in his sleeping wife's ear.

(Ishita get up, Raman slowly whispered in his sleeping wife's ear.)


Kya hai Raman...kyun utha rahe ho mujhe...abhi subah kahan hui hai, she spoke lazily.

(What is it Raman...why are you waking me up...it is not morning yet, she spoke lazily.)


And before she could even realize anything, she was in her husband's arms being carried away from the bed.


Raman kya kar rahe ho kahan le jaa rahe ho aap mujhe, she asked him baffled.

(Raman what are you doing where are you taking me, she asked him baffled.)


Ssshhh, he placed his finger at her lips as he brought his wife to the couch in their room.


Raman, she slightly moaned having an idea of why her husband brought her here.


Kaha na ssshhh...jo kaam adhura reh gaya tha woh pura karne laaya hoon, he brought his complete palm near her lips.

(I told you to be quiet...i am completing what was left incomplete, he brought his complete palm near her lips.)


Raman Ruhi hai room mein kya kar rahe ho aap, she tried to resist.

(Raman Ruhi is in the room what are you trying to do, she tried to resist.)


Don't worry so rahi hai woh...aur waise bhi mujhe bas meri good night dose chahie nothing else, he spoke before sealing her lips with his.

(Don't worry she is sleeping...and anyways I only want my good night dose nothing else, he spoke before sealing her lips with his.)


IshiMaa, she came out of the hug and ran towards the bed leaving her husband craving for more as she heard her daughter waking up from the sleep.


Yes he was longing for more from her but his face automatically lit up with a smile as he saw his wife humming something to their daughter to put her back to sleep.

Yahi toh main chahta tha itne saalon se aur yahi nahi tha mere paas...mere liye meri biwi ka pyaar aur meri bachi ke liye uski maa ki mamta, he confessed as he adored the mother daughter duo.

(This is what I wanted for so many years and I didn't have this only...my wife's love for me and my baby's mother's affinity for my baby, he confessed as he adored the mother daughter duo.)


And with that he unwillingly went down the memory lane which had led to what he had today.


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Dekho madrasan main tumhe bata raha hoon...yeh tumhari kapde ki thaan tumne dobara meri almari mein rakhi toh tumhe aur tumhare kapde ki thaan dono ko bahaar phenk dunga, he angrily spoke as he saw some of her sarees hung in his closet.

(Look madrasan I am telling you...if I ever see your clothes in my closet then I will throw you and your clothes out, he angrily spoke as he saw some of her sarees hung in his closet.)


Kya kaha aapne...aap mujhe bahaar phekenge...haath toh lagake dikhaiye...main bhi dekhti hoon, she too matched his level of anger.

(What did you say...you will throw me out...dare to even touch me...even I shall see, she too matched his level of anger.)


Dekho tum, he stopped in between as he heard someone knock at the door.

(Look you, he stopped in between as he heard someone knock at the door.)


Arre Ruhi beta aap yahan is time, she asked as Ruhi entered their room.

(Ruhi how are you here at this time, she asked as Ruhi entered their room.)


IshiMaa IshiMaa aaj na mujhe aapke aur papa ke saath sona hai...aap dono ke beech mein...mumma papa aur baby, she cutely said.

(IshiMaa IshiMaa today I want to sleep with you and papa...between you both...mumma papa and baby, she cutely said.)


Arre Ruhi beta aap yahan kaise so sakti ho, both said together as they imagined the awkward situation their daughter was trying to put them into.

(Ruhi how can you sleep here, both said together as they imagined the awkward situation their daughter was trying to put them into.)


Sab babies apne mummy papa ke beech mein hi sote hain...main bhi soungi, Ruhi excitedly jumped on the bed.

(All babies sleep with their parents...so I too shall sleep, Ruhi excitedly jumped on the bed.)


And seeing their daughter's excitement, they too gave up to her wish and lied down on the extreme corners of the bed.

Sometime later, he woke up as he felt someone patting him. And as he opened his eyes, he realized that he had shifted much closer to his sleeping daughter and now his wife who was earlier patting only his daughter was now patting him as well.


Ruhi kabki so gayi par iske haath Ruhi ko ab bhi thapak rahe hain...khud bhi neend mein hai par iske haath nahi ruke...shayad yahi hai asli Maa ka pyaar...shayad yahi woh lamha hai jise duniya sabse anmol lamha kehti hai, he smiled seeing a pure form of love and dozed off back into a peaceful slumber.

(Ruhi slept long time back but Ishita's hands are still patting her...she herself is sleeping but her hands didn't stop...probably this is the love of a real mother...probably this is the same moment which is called priceless by the world, he smiled seeing a pure form of love and dozed off back into a peaceful slumber.)

Jise Zindagi Dhund Rahi Hai

Kya Yeh Woh Mukaam Mera Hai

(Is this the destination my life has been looking for)


Tringgg, he lazily stretched as he heard the alarm ring and got up to switch it off. But what he saw froze him.


Ruhi sleeping over Ishita with her head resting on her mother's chest, the sight in front of was him was such that he wished the time stopped at that very moment.


Kaash aaj yeh meeting na hoti...toh main is pal ko dekh kar aur thodi der sukoon paa leta, he cursed his official meeting as he captured the priceless moment in his phone before leaving for the washroom.

(I wish I didn't have this meeting today...then I could have been able to live this soul healer moment for longer, he cursed his official meeting as he captured the priceless moment in his phone before leaving for the washroom.)

Yahan Chain Se Bas Ruk Jaun

Kyun Dil Yeh Mujhe Kehta Hai

(Why my heart tells me to just stay here peacefully and not go anywhere else)


He entered the washroom to start his new day but his mind wasn't fresh. Yes they had gotten married for "Sirf Ruhi Ke Liye" but it was never limited to Ruhi. The care and concern for each other always came out even if it wasn't direct but in the form of taunts or bitten slangs.


Accept it or not but she was one pretty woman and how hard he tried, she always managed to impress him if not with her beauty then with her actions or otherwise.


Yeh is pagal madrasan ke liye kaisi feelings aa rahi hain mere mann mein...toh kya hua agar woh meri beti se beintehaa pyaar karti hai...iska matlab yeh toh nahi ki main bhi us se, he bit his tongue as he realized what he was going to say.

(What sort of feelings am I getting for this mad madrasan in my heart...what if she loves my daughter unconditionally...that does not mean even I will also, he bit his tongue as he realized what he was going to say.)

Jazbaat Naye Se Mile Hain

Jaane Kya Asar Yeh Hua Hai

(What have these newly found feelings done to me)


Par kya pata uske liye bhi main sirf Ruhi ke papa se kuch jyada ban gaya hoon...kya pata use bhi yeh ajeeb se ehsaas ho rahe ho...kya pata woh bhi mujhse, he again halted at the right point.

(What if I have become something more than just Ruhi's father for her...what if she too is getting these weird feelings...what if she too, he again halted at the right point.)

Ek Aas Mili Phir Mujhko

Jo Qubool Kisi Ne Kiya Hai

(I feel a little hopeful about someone accepting me)


Raman beta tu phas raha hai...rok le khud ko...yeh madrasan ke chakkar mein tu chakra jayega warna, he ruffled his hair and proceeded for the long day ahead.

(Raman you are getting stuck...stop yourself...or else you will get badly trapped because of this madrasan, he ruffled his hair and proceeded for the long day ahead.)


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Having done with the long and stressing meeting, he finally sat down on his comfortable chair as he found a moment for himself.


Putting on his headphones, he dialed a number but to his dismay, the call went un-received.


Angrily ending the call, he was about to slam his phone on the table but his face found its smile back as he gazed at the wallpaper of his phone. It was the photo that he had clicked this morning and it was no less than a soul healer.


As he saw once, he continued to see it until someone entered his cabin disturbing his me' time.


Arre bhai woh Khurana ki file, Mihir entered blabbering but stopped as he saw his bhai smiling to himself lost in his phone.

(Bhai that Khurana's file, Mihir entered blabbering but stopped as he saw his bhai smiling to himself lost in his phone.)


Kya bhai koi romantic gazal sun rahe ho kya jo itna muskura rahe ho, he came out of his dreamy thoughts as Mihir teased him.

(Bhai are you listening to some romantic song that you are smiling so much, he came out of his dreamy thoughts as Mihir teased him.)

Kisi Shaayar Ki Gazal

Jo De Rooh Ko Sukoon Ke Pal

(She is like some poet's poetry which soothes the soul)


Nahi koi gazal nahi bas yun hi...tu bata kaise aaya, he made an excuse to hide his lover boy sort of behavior.

(No not any song just like that...you tell me what brought you here, he made an excuse to hide his lover boy sort of behavior.)


Bhai woh Khurana project ki file discuss karni thi aapse, Mihir spoke.

(Bhai I wanted to discuss Khurana's project file with you, Mihir spoke.)


Nahi Mihir yaar abhi nahi...abhi main ghar jaa raha hoon...kal dekhte hain, Raman immediately refused.

(No Mihir not now...I am leaving for home now...let's discuss tomorrow, Raman immediately refused.)


Par bhai abhi toh sirf 6 baje hain...aap toh kabhi 8 baje se pehle ghar nahi jaate, Mihir found Raman's statement unbelievable.

(But bhai it is just 6 right now...you never leave for home before 8, Mihir found Raman's statement unbelievable.)


Haan yaar Mihir...aaj balki abse roz main jaldi jaaya karunga...ab mujhe bhi ghar jo mil gaya hai, he made a confession.

(Yes Mihir...today or rather now onwards daily I will go home early...now even I have found a home, he made a confession.)

Koi Mujhko Yun Mila Hai

Jaise Banjaare Ko Ghar

(I have found someone the way a nomad finds a home)


Bhai aapko ghar mil gaya hai...main kuch samjha nahi...aapka toh shuru se hi khud ka ghar hai na...koi new flat lene ka soch rahe ho kya bhai, Mihir questioned unable to understand anything.

(Bhai you have found a home...I didn't understand anything...you always had a house of your own...are you planning to buy a new flat bhai, Mihir questioned unable to understand anything.)


Nahi pagal...naya flat kyun lunga...ghar purana hi hai par usmein ehsaas naye hain...jaise ghar mein khushiyon ka mausam sa aa gaya hai, he made another confession and left hurriedly before Mihir could throw more questions at him.

(No duffer...why would I buy a new flat...the home is old but it has new feelings now...it feels like there is some new season of happiness in my home, he made another confession and left hurriedly before Mihir could throw more questions at him.)

Naye Mausam Ki Sehar

Ya Sard Mein Dopahar

(She is like a morning of a new season or like a pleasant sunny day in winters)


Yeh bhai kya bol gaye...mujhe toh kuch samajh hi nahi aaya, Mihir hit his head.

(What did just bhai say...I could not understand a single thing, Mihir hit his head.)


Tujhe kaise samjhaun Mihir ki us ghar mein mujhe kya mil gaya hai ab, he settled inside his luxury car while whistling and drove off.

(How do I tell you Mihir what have I found in that home now, he settled inside his luxury car while whistling and drove off.)

Koi Mujhko Yun Mila Hai

Jaise Banjaare Ko Ghar

(I have found someone the way a nomad finds a home)


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Arre mummy ji aap itna saaman kyun leke jaa rahe hain...Neelu ko kehna tha na sabzi laane ke liye...laaiye dijiye mujhe, he saw his wife taking all the weight from his mother as he parked the car in the society compound.

(Mummy Ji why are you carrying so much stuff...Why didn't you ask Neelu to buy vegetables...give everything to me, he saw his wife taking all the weight from his mother as he parked the car in the society compound.)


Kaisi aurat hai yeh...pura din clinic mein kaam karke khud thak ke aayi hai...phir bhi ise meri maa ka itna khayaal hai...apni thakaan ki ise zara chinta nahi hai...kaise meri kismat itni achi ho gayi ki mujhe yeh mil gayi, he smiled wide as he followed his wife and mother walking towards their home.

(What kind of a woman she is...she has come tired after working in the clinic the whole day...and still she is so worried for my mother...she is just not bothered about her own tiredness...how my luck supported me so much that I found her, he smiled wide as he followed his wife and mother walking towards their home.)

Jaise Koi Kinaara

Deta Ho Sahaara

Mujhe Woh Mila Kisi Mod Par

(I found her support all of a sudden how an estranged corner supports random people)

Bhabhi woh maine rajma ubalne rakh diya hai...aap usmein masala milake chaunk dengi...aaj mujhe jaldi jaana hai

(Bhabhi I have put rajma for boiling...please cook them after adding spices...today I need to leave early)


IshiMaa aaj mujhe science project mila hai...aap meri help kar doge na

(IshiMaa I have got a science project...you will help me right)


Ishita puttar main toh badi thak gayi hoon aaj bazaar jaake...jo tere haath ki chai mil jaaye toh maza hi aa jaaye

(Ishita I am really tired after going to the market today...it will be really great if I have a tea made by you)


Ishita puttar saath mein agar pakaude mil jaayenge toh mera bhi park mein tehelke aana safal ho jaega

(Ishita even my walk to the garden will be successful if I get cutlets along with tea)


Thik hai Neelu tu jaa main dekh lungi...Haan Ruhi beta thodi der mein main aapko aapke project mein pakka help karungi...ji mummy ji abhi chai banati hoon...papa ji aap chinta mat kijiye...garma garam pakaude bhi talti hoon, he saw his wife happily catering to all the needs of his family as he entered the house.

(Fine Neelu you go I will manage...Yes Ruhi I will surely help you with your project in sometime...Yes mummy ji I am preparing tea for you...papa ji you don't worry...i will fry some hot cutlets for you, he saw his wife happily catering to all the needs of his family as he entered the house.)

Koi Raat Ka Taara

Karta Ho Ujaala

(Like a star of the night gives shine to everyone)


Is ghar mein jab pehle main office se aata tha toh sab apne apne kamro mein hote the...ek jaanlewa sannatta sa hota tha...par ab dekho...kaise sab saath has khel rahe hain...khushiyon ki hulchul si ho gayi hai is ghar mein Ishita ke aane se, he thanked his stars for finally giving him an angel that made his house a paradise.

(When earlier I used to come back from office, everyone used to be in their rooms...there used to be a killer silence...but see now...everyone is happily enjoying together...Ishita has brought a spree of happiness in this house, he thanked his stars for finally giving him an angel that made his house a paradise.)

Waise Hi Roshan Kare Woh Shehar

(The same way she lights up my house)

Kya ho gaya aise kyun ghoor rahe ho mujhe, he shouted as she pinched him to bring him out of his reverie.

(What happened why are you staring me like this, he shouted as she pinched him to bring him out of his reverie.)


Pagal aurat tumhe kuch kaam nahi hai kya...khud ki tarah mujhe bhi vella samjha hai jo main tujhe ghoorunga...aur kuch bacha nahi hai kya meri life mein...kuch bhi khushfehmi paal leti ho, she made faces as he taunted her.

(You mad woman don't you have any other work...do you think I am also workless just like you that I will stare at you...don't I have better things to do in life...you make such wrong assumptions, she made faces as he taunted her.)


Har time bas kadwi baatein karwa lo aapse...anyways mujhe aapse behas nahi karni...main sabke liye chai bana rahi hoon...aap lenge kya, he nodded in refusal as she offered him tea.

(All you can do is talk bitterly all the time...anyways I don't want to argue with you...i am making tea for everyone...will you have, he nodded in refusal as she offered him tea.)


Ek baat bata madrasan...tere clinic mein aajkal log apne daant tudwane nahi aate kya jo tu clinic se itni fresh aa jaati hai aur aate hi ghar ke kaam mein lag jaati hai, he asked about her tiredness indirectly.

(Tell me one thing madrasan...don't people come to get their teeth treated in your clinic that you come back so fresh and start with household chores immediately, he asked about her tiredness indirectly.)


Ji nahi aisa kuch nahi hai...mere clinic mein kaafi patients aate hain...par main kuch logo ki tarah buddhi nahi hui na ki office mein bas chair pe baithe rehne se bhi kamar dard ho jaaye...main clinic ke baad aaram se apna ghar sambhal sakti hoon, she too indirectly understood his back pain.

(No there is nothing like this...I have lots of patients in my clinic...but I am not old like some people who get back pain even after sitting idle in the office the whole day, she too indirectly understood his back pain.)


Buddha kise kaha madrasan...abhi toh main jawaan hoon...dikhaun, he winked.

(Whom did you call old madrasan...I am still young...should I prove it to you, he winked.)


Chiii...mujhe kuch nahi dekhna...room mein jaiye...laati hoon balm, she instructed him before leaving for the kitchen.

(Chiii...I don't want any proofs...go inside the room...I will bring the balm, she instructed him before leaving for the kitchen.)


Mere bin kahe bhi tumne mera dard samajh liya...kyun tum kuch na kuch aisa kiye jaa rahi ho ki mujhpe asar ho raha hai, he shyly looked at her before retiring to the room.

(You understood my pain without even me saying about it...why are you doing something or the other that it is affecting me so much, he shyly looked at her before retiring to the room.)

Dard Mere Woh Bhula Hi Gaya

Kuch Aisa Asar Hua

(Her affect is such that I have forgotten all my pains)



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Days kept passing and his heart kept making him feel for her even stronger each day. But probably the fear of rejection or the scars of an already failed relationship didn't allow him to take any step ahead.

It was evident that the awkwardness between them was erased long back and now they were walking the journey of friendship whose ultimate destination was love but still everything wasn't perfect. Call it his ego, his fears, his insecurities but something was still holding him back.

Raman Raman Raman suniye na, she shook him as he drowned himself in his laptop.

(Raman Raman Raman listen to me, she shook him as he drowned himself in his laptop.)


Kya hai mathangi...kyun disturb kar rahi ho...dimag toh kharab tha hi ab kya aankh bhi kharaab ho gayi...dikh nahi raha main kaam kar raha hoon, he mocked at her.

(What is it Mathangi...why are you disturbing me...you already had a dysfunctional brain...are your eyes too not working now...can't you see I am working, he mocked at her.)


Dikh raha hai par aapko nahi dikh raha ki bahaar mausam kitna acha hai...chaliye na bahaar jaate hain, she cutely requested ignoring his bitter taunts.

(I can see that but you can't see the good weather outside...come lets go out, she cutely requested ignoring his bitter taunts.)


Mendhak bhi itne khush nahi hue abhi toh jitna tum badal ke garajne pe ho rahi ho...mujhe kaam hai main nahi aa sakta, he resumed his work.

(Even the frogs are not so happy hearing the clouds thunder as much as you are already...I have work I cannot come, he resumed his work.)


Ab kariye kaam, she took his pendrive and ran making him run after her.

(Work now, she took his pendrive and ran making him run after her.)


Dekho Ishita I am telling you...dedo mujhe woh pendrive, he panted because of the running.

(Look Ishita I am telling you...give that pendrive back to me, he panted because of the running.)


Pendrive chahie toh neeche garden mein aa jaana, she declared and ran from there leaving him to calm his heavy breaths first before taking any further action.

(Come to the garden downstairs if you want the pendrive, she declared and ran from there leaving him to calm his heavy breaths first before taking any further action.)

And as she left, he realized how he actually enjoyed this game of run and chase with her. The silly games of life, that he had forgotten long back, she was bringing them all back to him.

Jeena Mujhe Phir Se

Woh Sikha Raha

(She is teaching me to live again)


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Ishita tumse kuch kehna chahta hoon main, he initiated a conversation as they walked in the garden under the thundering clouds.

(Ishita I want to say something to you, he initiated a conversation as they walked in the garden under the thundering clouds.)


Kya baat hai...aaj kadwe karele ko shehad jaisi meethi baatein karni hain, she laughed.

(What's the matter...today bitter gourd wants to talk as sweetly as honey, she laughed.)


Thodi der ke liye hum please yeh ravan kumar aur Jhansi ki rani ka mask utaarke Raman and Ishita ki tarah baat kar sakte hain please, he affirmed in a serious tone.

(Can we remove this mark of ravan kumar and Jhansi ki rani for some time and talk like real Raman and Ishita please, he affirmed in a serious tone.)


Sorry...kahiye na, she assured him that she was all ears to him.

(Sorry...please tell me, she assured him that she was all ears to him.)


Kai din se kehna chah raha tha par keh hi nahi paa raha tha...darr raha tha ki kahin kuch naya paane ke laalach mein jo hai woh kho na dun, he held her hands.

(I was trying to say from many days but was unable to...I was scared of losing what I have in the greed of having something more, he held her hands.)


Kya matlab Raman...main kuch samjhi nahi, she shivered at his sudden touch.

(What do you mean Raman...I didn't understand, she shivered at his sudden touch.)


Woh Ishita main kehna chah raha tha ki, he started but stopped as she pulled him.

(Actually Ishita I wanted to say that, he started but stopped as she pulled him.)


Baarish shuru ho gayi hai Raman...ghar jaake baat karte hain chaliye, she tried to postpone what he was trying to say knowing where this conversation was heeding to.

(Rain has started to pour Raman...lets go home and talk, she tried to postpone what he was trying to say knowing where this conversation was heeding to.)


Nahi baat yahin hogi abhi hogi...waise bhi tumhe baarish pasand hai...aaj mujhe bhi apni pasand apna lene do, he referred to the rain but meant her.

(No we will talk here only and right now...anyways you like the rain...let me also accept your likes, he referred to the rain but meant her.)


Raman, she lowered her eyes.

Pata hai jaise jab zameen par bahut sukha badh jaata hai tab yeh baarish apne mehaz sparsh se use bhiga deti hai aur pal bhar mein sab thik ho jaata hai...waise hi tumhare mere zindagi mein kadam rakhne se mere saare zakhm bhar gaye hain...hum mile Ruhi ke liye...nazdeek aaye Ruhi ki wajah se lekin ab, he almost broke into tears.

(You know the way when the earth becomes dry, the mere touch of rain makes the earth wet and everything is sorted within seconds...same way all my wounds have healed ever since you have stepped into my life...we met for Ruhi...came close because of Ruhi but now, he almost broke into tears.)

Jaise Baarish Karde Tarr

Ya Marham Dard Par

(She is like the rain which wets everyone to give pleasure and she is like ointment on the wound)


Ab kya Raman, she wiped off his tears mixed with raindrops.

(What now Raman, she wiped off his tears mixed with raindrops.)


Woh aurat jo mere liye sirf Ruhi ki maa thi ab meri zindagi hai...meri saansein ab sirf us aurat ke liye chalti hain...us aurat ne meri zindagi mein aake meri zindagi badal di hai...us aurat ne meri beti se pyaar jatake mujhe pyaar karna sikha diya hai... aur...aur ab jab main pyaar karna seekh gaya hoon toh main us aurat se pyaar karne laga hoon...be intehaa pyaar...ab agar woh aurat meri beti ki tarah mujhse bhi thoda sa pyaar jatade toh is banjaare ko bhi ghar mil jaaye, he went onto his knees in the most clich yet endearing way.

(The woman who was only Ruhi's mother for me is now my life...I breathe for that woman now...that woman has changed my life by coming into my life...that woman has taught me to love by loving my daughter...and...and now when I have learnt to love I have started loving that woman...unconditional love...now if she too loves me a little just like she loves my daughter then this nomad too will get a home, he went onto his knees in the most clich yet endearing way.)

Koi Mujhko Yun Mila Hai

Jaise Banjaare Ko Ghar

(I have found someone the way a nomad finds a home)


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He saw her smiling blushingly yet serenely as he carried her in his arms. The smile that had curved on her lips in the garden was still intact as they entered their room and that gave him a sense of satiation.


Tum thik ho na...I mean you know, he asked as he placed his wet wife on the bed.

(You are fine right...I mean you know, he asked as he placed his wet wife on the bed.)


Haan, she smiled wider at his chivalry and her smile took away all his inhibitions that he had for taking their relation ahead.

(Yes, she smiled wider at his chivalry and her smile took away all his inhibitions that he had for taking their relation ahead.)

Muskaata Yeh Chehra

Deta Ho Jaise Pehra

(This smiling face of hers gives me a sense of security)


Agar tum chaho toh hum thoda wait...I mean if it's not ok, he tried to find out if his wife was just giving up to his desires or she was really ready.

(If you want we can wait for some time...I mean if it's not ok, he tried to find out if his wife was just giving up to his desires or she was really ready.)


Main aapki hoon Raman, she uttered very few words hiding everything inside her but assuring him about her acceptance.

(I am yours Raman, she uttered very few words hiding everything inside her but assuring him about her acceptance.)

Jaane Chupata Kya Dil Ka Samandar

(She hides everything inside the sea of her heart)


Pakka, he asked again as he came closer.

(Are you sure, he asked again as he came closer.)


Raman, she sighed as she opened her arms for him.


And seeing so much trust for himself in her eyes, he broke into tears yet again. Because he knew it as a matter of fact that more than her desires, it was her wish to provide him that sense of completeness.


Meri hi tarah tum bhi toh ek dard bhare rishte se guzri ho Ishita...par phir bhi mujhe pyaar ki chaaon dene ke liye tum apne dhoop jaise chubhne wale zakhm bhula chuki ho, he thought to himself.

(You too have been into a painful relationship Ishita just like me...but still to give me the shadow of love you are forgetting all your painful moments which prick like burning sun on a hot day, he thought to himself.)

Auron Ko Toh Hardam Saaya Deta Hai

Woh Dhoop Mein Hai Khada Khud Magar

(She gives shade to everyone but herself stands under the sun)


Tumhe bhi toh utna hi dukh hua hoga jab tumhara Rishta khatam hua hoga...tum bhi toh mere jitna hi tooti hongi...tumhari bhi toh duniya ujad si gayi hogi, he related his own sufferings to hers.

(You too would have felt exactly the same pain when your relationship ended...you too must have broken down like me...your world would have shattered too like me, he related his own sufferings to hers.)

Chot Lagi Hai Use

Phir Kyun Mehsoos Mujhe Hai Ho Raha

(She is hurt but I feel her pain)


Raman kahan kho gaye, he came out of his thoughts as she called him waiting with open arms to embrace him.

(Raman where are you lost, he came out of his thoughts as she called him waiting with open arms to embrace him.)


Nahi kahin nahi...dekh raha hoon ki meri madrasan ko badi jaldi hai...kya iraada hai meri naughty wife ka, he laughed making her giggle as well.

(No nowhere...I can see how desperate my madrasan is...what are my naught wife's plans, he laughed making her giggle as well.)

Dil Tu Bata De Kya Hai Iraada Tera

(My heart you only tell me what plans you have)


Raman kuch bhi bolte ho aap, she shyly turned away and shifted to another corner of the bed.

(Raman you say anything rubbish, she shyly turned away and shifted to another corner of the bed.)


Thik hai toh ab bolta nahi...bas karta hoon, he came closer to her and finally claimed his rights on her.

(Fine then now I won't speak...just do, he came closer to her and finally claimed his rights on her.)

Ro kyun rahe ho, she asked few hours later as she saw trails of tears formed on his cheeks.

(Why are you crying, she asked few hours later as she saw trails of tears formed on his cheeks.)


Soch raha hoon ki tum na hoti toh kya hota...Shayad puri zindagi bina kisi manzil wale raahi ki tarah idhar udhar bhatakta rehta...aur duniya mein kho sa jaata, he pulled her close to himself.

(I am just thinking what it would have been if you weren't with me...maybe I would have wandered here and there like a traveler having no destination to reach all my life...i would have lost myself in this world, he pulled her close to himself.)

Main Parinda Besabar

Tha Uda Jo Darbadar

(I was an unsorted bird flying here and there)


Main kyun na hoti Raman...humen ek hona hi tha, she lovingly pecked his forehead.

(Why would have I not been there Raman...we had to one...we were meant to be tied, she lovingly pecked his forehead.)


Sahi kaha...humen ek hona hi tha...is banjaare ko uska ghar milna hi tha, he hugged her so tight that air too could not dare to pass by as if they were one body and one soul.

(You are right...we had to be one...this nomad had to find his home, he hugged her so tight that air too could not dare to pass by as if they were one body and one soul.)

Koi Mujhko Yun Mila Hai

Jaise Banjaare Ko Ghar

Jaise Banjaare Ko Ghar

(I have found someone the way a nomad finds a home)


Edited by DivanIsh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
Pehle to ek badi wali jhappi aur ek bada
wala Thank U is gaane pe itni pyaari TS
likhne k liye...

U believe it or not par kuch din pehle main
ye gaana sun rahi thi tabhi mera mann
hua ki main aapse is gaane pe ek OS likhne
ko kahun...aur meri khush kismat dekhiye
ki meri ye wish bin bole hi puri hogayi...

Meri chahat ko kisi aur ne zubaan dedi...
Thank you Sapna...tumhare saath meri
wish bhi puri hogayi...


Ab aate hai is update pe ...jiski jitni
tareef karun kam hai...
You penned down Raman's POV really
very well...its too beautiful and perfect...
Perfect to hona hi tha...aap ne jo likha
hai...

Ye Hai Pankhudi Ki Gazal
Jo De Rooh Ko Sukoon Ke Pal

Maine pehle bhi kaha hai aap jo bhi likhte
ho sidhe Dil ko chuleti hai...


Ye lo abhi to romance shuru bhi nahi hua
aur ye aa pahunchi kabab me haddi...par
ye haddi to badi hi cute hai...agar ye na
hoti to aaj Ishra saath kaise hote...


"Haan beta ab aap aa gaye ho toh soyenge
hi...aur kya karenge."
Ale le le le...bade baby ka lolipop to chote
baby ne le liya...hehehee


"Yahi toh main chahta tha itne saalon se
aur yahi nahi tha mere paas...mere liye
meri biwi ka pyaar aur meri bachi ke liye
uski maa ki mamta, he confessed as he
adored the mother daughter duo."
Beautiful and heart touching line...


"Ruhi kabki so gayi par iske haath Ruhi ko
ab bhi thapak rahe hain...khud bhi neend
mein hai par iske haath nahi ruke...
shayad yahi hai asli Maa ka pyaar."
Very true...ise kehte hai Maa aur Maa
ka pyaar...


"Ruhi sleeping over Ishita with her head
resting on her mother's chest, the sight in
front of was him was such that he wished
the time stopped at that very moment."
Most beautiful and soul soothing moment...


"Yeh is pagal madrasan ke liye kaisi
feelings aa rahi hain mere mann mein."
Bilkul sahi feelings aarahi hai Raman babu...


"Haan yaar Mihir...aaj balki abse roz main
jaldi jaaya karunga...ab mujhe bhi ghar jo
mil gaya hai, he made a confession."
Ye bhuddhuram kya samjhega ki Raman ko
pyaar ho gaya hai apni madrasan se...


"Kaisi aurat hai yeh...pura din clinic mein
kaam karke khud thak ke aayi hai...phir
bhi ise meri maa ka itna khayaal hai...apni
thakaan ki ise zara chinta nahi hai...kaise
meri kismat itni achi ho gayi ki mujhe yeh
mil gayi."
Kaash har patiyon ke vichaar aise hojaye
to patniyaan dhannya hojayengi...


"Buddha kise kaha madrasan...abhi toh
main jawaan hoon...dikhaun, he winked."
Kuch to sharam karo Raman babu hum
readers ke saamne hi dikhaoge kya...waise
we don't mind... hum bhi aapki tarha
besharam type hi hain...hehehee...


"Mendhak bhi itne khush nahi hue abhi toh
jitna tum badal ke garajne pe ho rahi ho."
One liners ka to jawab nahi...


"Woh aurat jo mere liye sirf Ruhi ki maa thi
ab meri zindagi hai...meri saansein ab sirf us
aurat ke liye chalti hain...us aurat ne meri
zindagi mein aake meri zindagi badal di hai...
us aurat ne meri beti se pyaar jatake mujhe
pyaar karna sikha diya hai... aur...aur ab jab
main pyaar karna seekh gaya hoon toh main
us aurat se pyaar karne laga hoon...be
intehaa pyaar...ab agar woh aurat meri beti
ki tarah mujhse bhi thoda sa pyaar jatade
toh is banjaare ko bhi ghar mil jaaye, he
went onto his knees in the most clich yet
endearing way."
Aww...So Romantic...aur dialogs to mashaa
allah...

"Thik hai toh ab bolta nahi...bas karta hoon,
he came closer to her and finally claimed
his rights on her."
And finally they became one...

Poora ka poora update hi pyaara tha...and
I loved it to the core...

Thank U and love U...

Now waiting for the next part...

I know ye kuch jyada hi lenghty ho gaya
par kya karun khud ko control nahi
karpayi !!
Edited by riYa09guPta - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
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unres


its beautiful yaar
actually I'm sooo jealous of u

coming to the update
hum aisa kya kahoon Teri tareef mein Jo sunke tum khush ho jaaoon

I've no words to say about this.

mihir is a buddhu ram

n the confession scene it was superb


Maanvir Diii nice concept

Sapna nice song yaar. one of my favourites
Edited by AshmiShahul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
Love it 2 core .. <3..
Its a fabulous wonderful update..
Love it... Love it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Firstly sorry fr being too late
reason is that I forgot to comment 😔

okk now about d update
as usual brilliant

u just write whole ishra journey in one update 👏

starting hi haddi se di
not fair
thora romance karwate phr haddi ki entry bhi ho sakti thii 😭
so plz compensate in next update

But as soon as he reached the bed and
saw his daughter playing with his wife's
hair, all his frustration ended as he knew
this was the real bliss, the ultimate
happiness of his life.
this scene aww 👏

then their journey starts ❤️

Ruhi kabki so gayi par iske haath Ruhi
ko ab bhi thapak rahe hain...khud bhi
neend mein hai par iske haath nahi
ruke...shayad yahi hai asli Maa ka
pyaar...shayad yahi woh lamha hai jise
duniya sabse anmol lamha kehti hai,

Is ghar mein jab pehle main office se aata
tha toh sab apne apne kamro mein hote
the...ek jaanlewa sannatta sa hota
tha...par ab dekho...kaise sab saath has
khel rahe hain...khushiyon ki hulchul si
ho gayi hai is ghar mein Ishita ke aane
se,

then d realisation drawn him
n he started falling gor her goodness
👏

n then d confession
it was heart touching
👏

then they become
ek jism do jaan

all d emotional talk was too gud
pankhu dii aap itna acha likhte ho
so write more often
u r a fab writer


doctor sahib song selection was too gud
waiting fr nxt part
Edited by anisha960 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Bookmark it... (Y)
And tq 4 such a lovely ts...
Plz updt next part asap..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
Wow that was such a wonderful update. Mixture of emotions, but nice
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
lub lub lub lub lub lub it so much!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
I it
I luv it
I luv it
Hats off dear.
So beautiful dis song is
N very beautifully u have used each line
Really mind blowing job.
Luv it...

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