~Yeh Teri Aur Meri Mohabbat Hayaat hai ~ Edited

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As I could not find correct words to write down a suitable introduction for the much awaited confession scene of Rizreet, I am taking help from the writings of my favourite poet.😳
"I love you without knowing how, or when, or from where.
I love you straightforwardly, without complexities or pride;




so I love you because I know no other way
than this: where I does not exist, nor you,
so close that your hand on my chest is my hand,
so close that your eyes close as I fall asleep."
~Pablo Neruda~
Rizwan and Preet's story find its new chapter yesterday as the hidden emotions within the hearts found the much needed voice forgetting all the gag forced upon it. The troubled souls found the much needed solace in each other's embrace so that they can hold onto each other forever like there is no tomorrow. Rizwan's words which he always gulped back screamed that in this entire mortal world his soul belongs to one and that is his Preet. The woman who felt insignificant in his life haunted by ghosts from his past, who felt defeated thinking her existence does not make any difference in the life of his beloved due to presence of a dead , who always felt a deep, dark vaccum after giving all she had could not take those spoken words as mere words, it was needed to be felt, to be absorbed , so in reciprocation she hid herself in that embrace which means the ultimate destination for her, the last stop of her journey.
Aakhri Baar tumse Keh raha Hun ke agar Mere Zindagi Par ksis ka Haq hai toh who Sirf Tumhara hai
Meri ROOH par kisi ka Haq hai... Toh who Sirf tumhara hai...
In those two lines Rizwan lived all the lost moments of love which he always craved for but deprived himself knowing his circumstances. I have never seen any fictional hero confessing his love saying his Soul was all hers, thus it was novel, breath takingly beautiful and made me say Bravo writers. 👏⭐️
A man who defines duplicity, struggles so much within to find a moment of peace finally gathered the strength to confess that it was Preet who has all rights over him. Finally it was moment of respite, moment of attaining blissful peace for Rizwan. In the prior confrontation she so bluntly talked about the emptiness between them, the void between them which she fails to fill after years of marriage, she stepped back few inches while expressing her hurt, he pain. Thus to soothe her, to negate the gap, he came closet to her , only gasping breath as the only space between them to tell her what She meant to him, by leaning towards her, touching the forehead. That gesture and the use of the word ROOH was piece of treatment given to this important scene. The emptiness got erased as Love found its rightful place in those beating hearts and finally succumbing to its demands.❤️❤️❤️❤️
Rizwan Ahemd Khan always asked his Almighty to show him the path where Love Resides. God gave him innumerable signals but he ignored and I guess he will continue to do despite the confession. He just fails to let go of his demons.🥺 But even those demons living within him at times cant ignore the overwhelming presence of Preet in his heart and mind. As he himself pointed out his soul is owned by Preet. And that got reflected in his restlessness, anger, insecurity,jealousy when Ishan?Rizwan became non existent , only one entity spoke like a wounded , injured egoistic man- PreetKaur Bhullar's husband who does not like intrusion of another man, to feel he is being doubted by his wife. He himself expressed what was bothering him for so many days thanks to Shergill and Naina's accusations.I love that staright forward confrontation between the two. Lot of uncomfortable questions were raised , lot of unpleasant words were said but finally it acted like the catalyst which led to the confession, the catharsis of these vulnerable souls. 💔
In contrast to Rizwan's raging anger, Preet's hurt filled the air with an uneasy agaony. The woman who devoted herself in this relationship complained about not knowing the man she lives with as He kept all the doors locked leading to his heart. Her words screamed her helplessness making the husband more awkward than ever. Superlative writing and acting. Herwords keep ringing in my head with that voice of hers-
Tumhare Dil Me kya hai? Mere Liye Kya Sochte Ho? Mere Liye Sochte Bhi Ho ya Nahi?
Tumhare dar, Tumhare nightmares kya hai? Mujhe kuch bhi pata nahi!
She touched his chest and repeatedly asked - Tumhare yahan kya hai? 💔
Does he himself even know what his heart behold? what it wants?
Tum kaun Ho? Tum Kya Ho? 🥺🥺🥺
All comes back to this very question again in between these two? Who are you?
Rizwan remained flabbergasted till she decided to leave. He made her stay back saying he can never let her go... As if his heart saying-
Tujhe yaad kar liya hai
Aayat ki tarah
Kaayam tu ho gayi hai
Rivayat ki tarah
Marne talak rahegi
Tu aadat ki tarah
Mere dil ki raahaton ka tu
Zariya ban gayi hai
Teri ishq ki mere dil mein
Kayi Eid mann gayi hai
Tera zikr ho raha hai
Tera zikr ho raha hai
Ibaadat ki tarah
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Can these two get more beautiful than this? I really dont know. The spiritual connect between the two makes it poignant, purest of pure , soul enriching kind depiction of overused concept of romantic love. Their love for each other breathes Life into them thus dedicated the title. 😳
P.S- The actors have surprised us each day, Superlative, Brilliant, Bravo, Marvellous- All adjectives combined should be dedicated to these two talented people. Hope they shine this always. ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinkeye



In those two lines Rizwan lived all the lost moments of love which he always craved for but deprived himself knowing his circumstances. I have never seen any fictional hero confessing his love saying his Soul was all .

That gesture and the use of the word ROOH was piece of treatment given to this important scene. The emptiness got erased as Love found its rightful place in those beating hearts and finally succumbing to its demands.❤️
Rizwan Ahemd Khan always asked his Almighty to show him the path where Love Resides. God gave him innumerable signals but he ignored and I guess he will continue to do despite the confession. He just fails to let go of his demons.🥺 But even those demons living within him at times cant ignore the overwhelming presence of Preet in his heart and mind. As he himself pointed out his soul is owned by Preet. And that got reflected in his restlessness, anger, insecurity,jealousy when Ishan?Rizwan became non existent , only one entity spoke like a wounded , injured egoistic man- PreetKaur Bhullar's husband who does not like intrusion of another man, to feel he is being doubted by his wife. He himself expressed what was bothering him for so many days thanks to Shergill and Naina's accusations.I love that staright forward confrontation between the two. Lot of uncomfortable questions were raised , lot of unpleasant words were said but finally it acted like the catalyst which led to the confession, the catharsis of these vulnerable souls. 💔
In contrast to Rizwan's raging anger, Preet's hurt filled the air with an uneasy agaony. The woman who devoted herself in this relationship complained about not knowing the man she lives with as He kept all the doors locked leading to his heart. Her words screamed her helplessness making the husband more awkward than ever. Superlative writing and acting. Herwords keep ringing in my head with that voice of hers-
Tumhare Dil Me kya hai? Mere Liye Kya Sochte Ho? Mere Liye Sochte Bhi Ho ya Nahi?
Tumhare dar, Tumhare nightmares kya hai? Mujhe kuch bhi pata nahi!
Tum kaun Ho? Tum Kya Ho? 🥺🥺🥺
All comes back to this very question again in between these two? Who are you?
Rizwan remained flabbergasted till she decided to leave.



P a y a l!!! This is mind blowing!! This words you have written... Sach sach sach!! ❤️Nothing to add to it!! Superb write up with caps and the quote!! 👏⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Finally edied the entire post, don't know what rubbish I wrote. It was one difficult post to write. 😆 Asmita yeh aapkekehne pe likha hai specially. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Poetry ... lyrical... thehrav ... just peaceful
i can't write anything more than this ...

To writer who create Preet and Rizwan and Payal who made this post ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Loveforlife



P a y a l!!! This is mind blowing!! This words you have written... Sach sach sach!! ❤️Nothing to add to it!! Superb write up with caps and the quote!! 👏⭐️

thank you Raveena. Ab ekbaar last part bhi padh lena.😛
But the scenes were such poetic ones that I found it difficult to describe. 😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: blushing

Poetry ... lyrical... thehrav ... just peaceful

i can't write anything more than this ...

To writer who create Preet and Rizwan and Payal who made this post ⭐️

Oh Baap re Aditi, You are very kind. thanks. 🤗
But I so agree with you that the original writer just took my breath away by giving emphasis on the ROOH part and My soul Belongs to you kind confession. Never seen before, atleast to me. All along we talked about his soul and how it should realise the genuine feelings, its true self. One step was taken yesterday. Poetry in motion. ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nothing as such, the song lyrics I added reflecting Rizwan's dil ka haal. 😆
We all wanted more from him to give comfort to our ears. Toh maine gaane se lekar who add kar diya hai. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinkeye

Finally edied the entire post, don't know what rubbish I wrote. It was one difficult post to write. 😆 Asmita yeh aapkekehne pe likha hai specially. 😳



Agree with you its is truly difficult... Such a complex situation!! Mast likha hai tumne... Asmita aap pe khush hogi !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is Beautiful Payal...
And SEE..this is the Reason...Why I asked a Better Writer would do justice to it ..then Lame Me...

You are a Star...




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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinkeye

Oh Baap re Aditi, You are very kind. thanks. 🤗

But I so agree with you that the original writer just took my breath away by giving emphasis on the ROOH part and My soul Belongs to you kind confession. Never seen before, atleast to me. All along we talked about his soul and how it should realise the genuine feelings, its true self. One step was taken yesterday. Poetry in motion. ❤️


you deserve it...yes me neither seen Rooh part being in confession

Rooh ⭐️ word truly made for Preet Rizwan the real soulmate 😳

its not not about physical intimacy but realizing who has right over your soul ...that's pure love ❤️

to be frank after that word ...nothing matters ...even if they would not shown what happen after this I would be still 😳 not just happy but content peaceful...😳

obvious for further drama and of course Rizwan's inner battle need this guilt trip and imp to come out off it he needed this...

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